I really love you (a Twinj story) – CHAPTER 5

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Hello everyone….
I m here wid my fifth episode…..
Thank you soo much those who all commented on my previous one….
And silent readers too…
So here is the episode…
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It had been 2 days after the marriage and twinkle was restless….she was missing kunj very much….it was a very new feeling for her….she was not getting that what should be done…..but she knew dat she has to stay strong coz now it was not possible to meet kunj till any trip or vacations..as they lived in different cities and kunj house was 14 km away from twinkle’s house….

As now exams were arriving coz it was february ending and exams were in march…so twinkle got mingled in studies…and finally after 1 month her exams were over….
Now it was march end…..and then one day after lunch….rt and leela said that they all were going on a trip…as exams were over and it was vacations….
Twinkle was hell excited but she ws a bit worried coz last time kunj didnt came for the trip…soo she thought that this time also he may not come…
So indirectly she asked rt that who all are going….

Rt said that from their family…
Leela rt twinkle and chinki….this time also yuvi wud not b going coz in absence of rt anyone has to stay at office and yuvi cud only b trusted…(really guyz mere dad ka buisness aisa hai na ki unki absence me bhai ko rehna hi padta hai…dats y bechara my bhai always reh jata hai…)
And then rt said that from sarna family all are coming…

By listening to this twinkle ws very happy as kunj was coming…
Finally a week had passed and today it was was 9th april and today all were heading for the trip to udaipur, jaipur, agra,….and all..
Taneja’s went to sarna mansion….and all were there waiting for them…
Twinkle went and met manohar and usha first and then she went to mahi….dis time mahi and kunj’s cousin payal was also coming…(yeah guyz payal is my kunj’s cousin …yaar she is really very sweet and she always helps me..??)..
Twinkle and chinki me them…
And just then chinki saw kunj nd called him..

Chinki: heyy kunj bhai..
Kunj: hii chinki..kaisi hai yaar..
Chinki: i m gud.. n u..
Kunj: yeah me too..
Just then twinkle turned nd saw him…she was really ver happy to see him after so many days…
Kunj came and said a hello to her and she replied in a hii..
Then all sat in the cars and headed for udaipur…

Meanwhile in the journey….
All were gossiping and mahi made a group on watsapp…
She added twinkle payal..kunj ….and sometime later…twinkle added yuvi….
Mahi was happy as she got yuvi’s no…
She pinged him and was chatting wid yuvi…(yaar guyzz uss wakt na ye mahi mere bhai k sath chat kar rahi thi…mujhe doubt bhi hua q ki voh dikha hi nahi rahi thi mujhe apna phone…par phir jaane diya..and mera bhai to fevicol ki tarah phone se chipka hua tha..hehe me jab bhi uska watsapp no kholti thi apne phone pe to online hi dikhta tha..??????)

Sometime later kunj pinged twinkle… ..
She was happy cum nervous…
CHAT..
Kunj: heyy..
Twinkle:hii
Kunj: whatsup..
Twinkle: nthing was jus chatting wid frnds..n uh..
Kunj: umm i was listening to songs…
Twinkle:okk..

Kunj: ek baat puchhu.
Twinkle: yeah ask..
Kunj: y r u always so silent…(yaar ye msg dekhke itna hasi thi q ki me n silent not possible…pata nahi usko uss time par q aisa laga tha….and u know guyzz ab mera kunj mujhse kehta hai dat pehle to tum itni silent aur calm rehti thi..but now i got to know dat u r totally opposite to dat.. hehe…)
Twinkle: nah who said..
Kunj: no one said but i thoughr..coz u never talk…to me i guess..

Twinkle: nahi aisa kuch nahi…jus i didnt knew you before…sooo…
Kunj: yah dats okay…so frndzzz…
Twinkle: yeah frndzzz…
Kunj: so what else..
Twinkle: umm nthing…can i ask u a question.
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Kunj: yeah sure..
Twinkle: do u have a girlfriend..(yaar i was so stupid…mera sabse pehla sawal usse yahi tha..nd voh aja bhi mujhe tease karta hai iske liye…)
Kunj: no i dont hav one …but y r u asking..do u have a bf
Twinkle: no just like dat…n i also dnt have one…
Kunj: ohh mujhe laga u might b having a boyfriend..
Twinkle: n y did u think dat..
Kunj: just like dat i thought..
Twinkle: noo plzz tell q aisa laga..
Kunj: aree nahi i was just teasing u…leave it..

Twinkle: okk..
Kunj: acha ttyl…my phone is gonna get dead…no battery??
Twinkle: yah dats ok..bye..
Kunj: yah byee..
CHAT OVER..

Dis way all were getting mingled with each other…payal mahi twinkle and chinki used to pull kunj’s leg on watsapp group…
Kunj nd yuvi had also become gud frnds…
The journey to udaipur was over nd all were really tired after long journey…
They reached the hotel..and they got 3 rooms..one for rt and leela..one for usha and manohar..and last for all children..
(Guyzz i was so happy q ki kunj bhi hamare sath ek hi room me tha…)
Everyone went and took rest for sometime as they were tired…at night…all they were going out to have dinner….

Kunj had a great bond with payal…more than mahi he was attached with payal…(actually na real me bhi kunj aur mahi ki zyada nahi banti…they both fight like cats and dogs..??? seriously inn dono k beech hamesha me fas jaati hoon..haha??)..
All got ready..
Twinkle was wearing a black and green floral tank top..wid black jeans..
Mahi ws wearing a white abd aqua t shirt with denims..
Chinki ws wearing a pink top and white jeans..

Payal was wearing a blue top with black jeans….
And kunj was wearing a dark green t shirt with black jeans( guyzz i was really happy q ki uss time mene aur kunj ne same pehna tha…)
All went out and had a rajasthani dinner…
Everyone enjoyed it and then all went back to the hotel…
At night in the room..

All were sleeping like twinkle mahi chinki and payal on bed…as there were two beds so they joined them and kunj was on couch(bechara..)
As all were going to sleep kunj went to switch off the lights…
Just then twinkle shouted…and everyone went to her…twinkle was shouting lights lights….
Just then chinki said: kunj bhai on the lights di is scared of darkness..
Kunj switched on the lights and then twinkle said that: plzz jus keep a small light on at night..i cant sleep in darkness..

And then they decided to keep a small lamp on…while going to sleep kunj whispered to twinkle: i will switch off the lights at night…
Twinkle: kunj…agar aisa kiya na to dekh lena..
Kunj: i will do it…

Twinkle: huh dnt worry i hav a torch wid me…so its ok u can do it…
Kunj: who sleeps with a torch at night…
Twinkle: whats the problem in that…i always sleep with a torch…
Kunj: great yaar…(yaar actually i always sleep with a torch..i m vry scared of darkness..mera kunj mujhe bohot taunt karta hai..iske liye…hehe..)
All went to sleep….
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Hope you all liked the episode guyzz…
Plzz keep commenting…
Love uh all??????❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

Precap: trip and masti….

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53 Comments
  1. Sohi

    It was really cute di
    Iam eager to know more
    Do continue

    1. Fatimaa.

      Thank u soo much sohi…
      Thats really sweet of u dear..
      Love uh

  2. Awesome epi I loved it ummhh u had a great love story just like flimy life

    1. Fatimaa.

      Heyy arjuman…
      Thank u soo much…
      Love uh

  3. Sameera

    Bassssss soooo much of cuteness pakka diabetes hone wali hai sachi ????I don’t have words to describe it’s cuteness yaar Fatima soooo sooo sooo loved it to the core plzzzz do cont next one soon ???????

    1. Fatimaa.

      Awww sameera…thnks for sweet comment..
      I m really glad u liked it…
      Love uh dear?????❤❤

  4. Hi i m new here lv ur lv story and i want to ask that are you a muslim pls don’t angry if u r not i m just asking by seeing your name by d wy di apna hansome hunk ki koi pic dikhao agar coments main send kar sakti ho to warna cover laga dana main dakh lon gi (i will see)

    1. Fatimaa.

      Heyy lovey…thnks for commenting dear…
      And yah i m muslim….nd yah i ll show u all his pic soon..bas thoda sa wait…
      Love u my dear

  5. tooo,cute..lovly..epi
    post..asap

    1. Fatimaa.

      Thank u maha..
      Love uh

  6. Simiyy

    Hey Fatimaa
    It was sooo cute
    I loved it
    Can’t wait to read more
    Post soon
    Loads of love

    1. Fatimaa.

      Heyy simiyy..
      Thank u soo much dear..
      Love uh

  7. Dii it is cutee and sweettuu SA episodeeeee ?????
    Post next soonn ??

    1. Fatimaa.

      Thank u soo much cp…
      Love uh

  8. Purnima.agrawal30

    Awesome amazing fabulous cute marvelous lovely epi

    1. Fatimaa.

      Thank u soo much purnima…
      Love uh

  9. Paavu

    woww awsum tere kunj ne ping kia tujhe nicoooo and haha gf wala ques haha and sachi wo bechara akela itni ladkion mein haha funny and wow toh tu toh poori raat usse hi dekhti rahi hogi torch se haha haha

    1. Fatimaa.

      Heyy paavu…yàar idea achha hai poori raat usko dekhte rehne ka..yaar uss time dimaag me aya hi nahi tha…???.
      Well thnks for comment…
      Love uh dear

  10. Mia12

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    Oh my god what is this…..???
    Like seriously ur love story jus AMAZING yarr,,,???????…… Jus suparbbbb,,,?????….. Loved it soooo soooo much,,,??????….. its soooo soooo beautiful,,,??????….. I have no words to say yarr,,????….. I read ur every post but never couldn’t cmnt a big sry 4 that,,???…. ( was silent reader but now not,?) and now I m feeling ashamed on myself 4 not cmnting a FABULOUS love story,,???? This is really great yarr,,???….. Ur shooooo CUTE yarr,,?????….. Sry lacking of words to describe anything,,????….. Plzzzz post next soon,,???….. N i msgd u in watsap do reply ok..???
    .
    With lots of love..❤❤
    Priya..??

    1. Fatimaa.

      Heyy mia…
      Ohh thank u soo much my dear….
      Dats so sweet of u….
      Nd thnks for breaking d silence…
      Nd yah i got ur msg….i replied to it…
      Keep commenting…
      Love uh dear???

  11. Cute episode

    1. Fatimaa.

      Thnks sana..
      Love u

  12. SidMin

    Aww … yaar … just loved it … this trip would have been your best trip na…. friends bhi bangaye … colour coordinate clothes bhi pehen liya… same room hai share kar Liya aur No. Bhi share kar Liya…
    Just loved it … but bechara your bhai… he missed the fun … bechare Mahi…
    Love you post soon … ❤❤❤❤

    1. Fatimaa.

      Thnks sidmin…
      Loved to see ur comment…
      Love uh

  13. Presha

    Hey fats its just soo soooi cute… I mean just cuteness nd sweetness overloaded yaar… I tih just loved it..
    Nd ha tell ur kunj real name na..

    1. Fatimaa.

      Heyy preshu….
      Thnk u dear….
      Nd bas thoda wait karlo…i ll tell u his name soon..
      Love uh

  14. Aashiya

    Awww,fati di,this was shooooo.. cute…I mean what to say….u getting restless for ur kunj…nd ur 1st chat wid jiju was too cute…
    Mahi nd jiju fighting wid each other like tom and jerry??????????
    This was really epic….
    pata h mujhe v andhere se dar lagta h…..bt mai torch leke nai soti….I mean aapke itna extreme wala dar nai lagta??????

    Acha haa nd I hope u remember d promise?????????????????

    Post d next soon,
    Love u boht sare??????????
    -ur chotu baby

    1. Fatimaa.

      Awww aashi….mera chotu baby…
      Thnk u soo much dear…for ur sweet comment…
      Nd yah i remember my promise….
      I ll do it….
      Love u ashi❤❤❤❤

  15. Anshikajainn

    Yrrrrrrrrr it was soon cuteeee
    I hope my love story will be like this only
    Btw it was awesome yrrrrrrrrr just love it :-*:-*

    1. Fatimaa.

      Thnks anshika…
      Glad dat u commented…
      I ll pray dat ur love story may b more amazing den this….
      Love uh dear

  16. Thank you and i am muslim too

  17. Plz soon and main mari jarahi ho un ko dakhna ka liya

    1. Fatimaa.

      Sure lovey…
      Inshallah jaldi dikhaungi

  18. Fatima jaan ur story is just lovely nd trip loved it…
    Post soon..
    Luv u..
    Bye..

    1. Fatimaa.

      Thnks adeeba….
      Love uh dear

  19. Waisa ap ki shadi hoyi (got married)

    1. Fatimaa.

      No lovey dear…abhi me 18 yrs ki hoon
      Thode time baad

  20. Chiku

    Awww!!!! Sooo sweeet. Lovely ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️Loved it. Amazing
    Post soon
    Love u❤️❤️

    1. Fatimaa.

      Thnk u chiku….
      Love u tooo sweetheart…❤❤❤

  21. Ok di plz jaldi pic dikhana

  22. I want ka mara bhi ap jasi love story ho or mara kunj bhi cute dashing handsome caring loving or unique ho

    1. Fatimaa.

      I m sure dear..aisa hi hoga…nd if u want u can contact me…i gave my number in my previous episode’s comments section….
      U can see that and contact me dear…
      Love uh

  23. Di i want to register on tu but it always say please conform you are not a robot plz help me and do something

    1. Fatimaa.

      Ok do one thing give me ur email id…
      I will register u….
      First call me on my number its there in the previous episode…coments section…
      Just see it and call me i will take ur id and register u..ok

  24. Hey Fatima it was awesome dear

    1. Fatimaa.

      Thank u soo much nisha di…
      Love uh

  25. Hey Fatima awesome dear I loved it

  26. Di i am not indian i can’t call you or contact u sorry it’s ok wasa i m don’t wanted and id anymore or register on tu

    1. Fatimaa.

      Ok dear ur wish

  27. Ramya

    Heyy Fatima
    Amazing episode
    U nailed it
    Poor twinkle bechara ko andhera se dare lagta hai
    But still it rocked njoyed a lot
    Amazing awesome superb
    Yeh tho awesome that
    Lovely
    Love u keep smiling

    1. Fatimaa.

      Heyy ramya…
      Thnk u soo much…
      Yah i m scared of darkness..haha..
      Love u dear

  28. Amaya Bhardwaj

    Itna sweet or cutew episode dear…..Iss FF SE pyaar ho gaya h mujhe….
    So Kya feel Kr RHI this tm pheli bar Apne KUNJ se baat krke…..And u both were in same room…. Mtlb sari raat tu usse hi dekhti RHI hogi…Haina….
    Well u r scared of darkness…. Hehehe

  29. Baby

    Hahahaaa osm ohh god kunj ne twinkle ko whisper kiya mein toh lihhts band karunga epic hehee…. 🙂
    Srsly luving it srriee for d late cmnt busy….. 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
    Lods of love ♥♡★☆♥♡★☆too cute love hayeee…… 🙂

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