I really love you (a Twinj story) – CHAPTER 4

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Heyya everyone….
I m back again wid my 4th chapter…
Hope u all are liking the track….
And thank you soo much too everyone those who commented on previous one..
And the silent readers too…
So here is the 4th episode…
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It was morning…..and today was mr. Patel’s daughter’s wedding…
All were getting ready…
Twinkle was wearing a grey-black n purple gown…
Mahi was wearing a cream nd bottle green fusion dress…
Chinki was wearing a orange and pink deess….

All were looking pretty…
All the girls were ready and they went down in the hall….
Twinkle when walking down the stairs was just looking here and there for kunj…
They all reached in the hall and the girls went to usha and leela…
Twinkle ws searching for kunj…when suddenly he came from back and shocked chinki by shouting”bhooo”…

All were laughing….but twinkle was jus admiring him….he was wearing a dark blue shirt and white jeans looking hot..(yaar ye kapde yaad hi nahi aa rahe the ki uss waqt mere kunj ne konse pehne the….fir usko hi puchha to mujhe kaha ki aaj kal tum ye puraani baate kyu pu6 rahi ho…usne to fir us shaadi wali pics me dekh kar bataya ki usne ye pehna tha…sach me bohot maza aaya i mean i really wasted half n hour in asking him about these clothes?????)ok back to epi…
All were enjoying the marriage and the rituals got over and den all had food and then bidaai was done…and finally all left to their rooms…

In girls room…

Twinkle: yaar mahi will u come to stay at our house in vacations dis time??
Mahi: yeah i think so…yy u r nt going to come???
Twinkle: nah jus like dat….we ll see in d vacations….
Mahi: yah ok…
Chinki: mahi di dis tym r we gonna go on a trip??

Mahi: yeah shaayad…i dun know…
Twinkle: yah i think we r going coz i listened to dad’s nd manohar uncle’s talk….dey were telling abt some trip in april……isnt it awesome i m sooo excited….(she was behaving soo desperate dat mahi nd chinki were confused by her acts..)
Chinki: dii y r u sounding soo excited nd desperate….u were telling na dat dis tym u wud not go if der is any trip….
Twinkle:(was cursing herself under her breath as she said chinki at home abt these but now she wanted to go as kunj was der…)nooo who said…i ll not come…
I will surely come…

Mahi: ohho leave it na…abhi time hai….dekhenge…
Twinkle: yah lev..come we will decide clothes for evening party…
Nd all 3 of dem decided their clothes…
In the evening..
All were ready nd standing in the hall..
Twinkle was wearing…a reddish green gown..
Mahi was wearing a dark blue and white gown..
And chinki was wearing pearl white and pink gown…

Kunj was standing wid some boys…
He was wearing…maroon shirt wid a grey waist coat and grey pant…looking handsome..(yaar bada hot lag raha tha???????)
Soon the party started and all were dancing….everyone enjoyed….in the party…der was also couple dance..twinkle didnt go as her heels were aching..soo mahi nd chinki were dancing as a couple..dey both were looking really cute..
The boys dragged kunj wid dem nd some girls too joined them as it ws couple dance..soo kunj ws also dancing wid a girl…seeing dat twinkle was hell jealous she was cursing her heels for aching????…(yaar bohot gussa aya tha uss time par…me aaj bhi apne kunj ko bohot sunati hoon uss dance k liye…haha)..

Soon the dance ws over…and all went to have food…twinkle was jus angrily watching kunj….and bechara kunj was not understanding anything…..hehe..
Soon the party was over and all went to rooms and dozed off as it was quite late….

Next morning….
Today was mr. Patel’s son’s wedding and sadly last day of marriage…
Twinkle was sad thinking dat today she will return home nd wud not b able to see kunj….

Twinkle’s pov..
Ohh god today is last day….now how will i see kunj….but wait y is it affecting me…is this called love….if this feeling is love dan its d best feeling ever….babaji do i really love kunj???….(she closed her eyes for few seconds and den opened again)….yeah i m in love…i m in love wid kunj….
Yes i love u kunj…i really love u….
End of p.o.v..

She ws very happy about tge thought dat she loves kunj…but ws cnfused dat wat does kunj think about her….as she had still not talked to him once….???
Later brushing her thoughts she went to get ready….
All girls go ready in beautiful outfits..

Mahi was wearing a parrot green and cream dress..
Chinki was wearing a black and green dress wid white designs…
Twinkle was wearing a maroon and golden gown….
All went down and twinkle saw kunj….
He was wearing a white shirt and black jeans….looking hot…
All left in the cars as the baraat was going at another place…

Alll reached the girls place nd the wedding rituals started…
Twinkle was jus noticing kunj…his talking style..his actions…his laughter…she was falling more nd more for him..(yaar sachme uss waqt bada cute lag raha tha)…
Soon the wedding rituals were over…
And now bidaai was also done…
And now all were leaving…

Twinkle ws sad and was having tears in her eyes..but she didnt showed any one…
Mahi was now with manohar usha and kunj in one car as dey were directly going home…nd tanejas in one car…all bid bye to each other…
Mahi hugged twinkle nd chinki…chinki went nad shaked hand wid kunj…
Twinkle wanted to go to kunj bt she didnt go…..
All got into cars…jus den kunj came near taneja’s car and said byee to everyone…twinkle ws happy to see him nd bid him bye…
Atlast all went and reached home after 2 hrs journey….
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Soo guyzz hope u liked the episode…
Plzz comment…it really means a lot…to me…aur paavu and chiku aap ne comment nahi kiya previous one me…really bohot impatiently wait kar rahi thi aapke comment ..really bohot accha lagta hai aap sabke comments padhkar…
Love uh all…❤❤❤❤???????????

Precap:twinkle missing kunj…and another trip on the way…..

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52 Comments
  1. Sameera

    Wow yaar Fatima loved it too cute yaar hayee ????bechara real life kunj pareshan aakhir tumhe hua kya hai spoon cute hope u both stay always together ???????????????

    1. Fatimaa.

      Thank u soo much…sameera…
      Yaar sachme me 3 days se uska dimaag kha rahi hoon…but u know wats the best thing…voh ek baar bhi irritate ya gussa nahi hua….???
      Love uh dear…

  2. cute..lovly..epi

    1. Fatimaa.

      Thanks maha…
      Love uh dear

  3. Sohi

    Awesome di iam getting more interested in your story than twinj
    Do continue

    1. Fatimaa.

      Thank you dear…
      M really glad dat u r liking it…
      Love uh dear

  4. SidMin

    Yaar…… just loved …..
    What is this yaar time Apne Kunj se shadi meh bat bhi nahe kiya…. aur sis waqt global warming ke sab se bade zimidar tu the kitna jal rahe the …????
    Haye tee heels may pehna kar ?
    Loved it can’t wait for the next episode….
    Love you ❤❤❤

    1. Fatimaa.

      Heyya sidmin…
      Thnks for d comment dear…
      Haan yaar shaadi me to baat hi nahi ki thi…
      Aur haha..tumne sach kaha i was responsible for most of global warming…
      Bohot jali thi mein…????
      And sachme…uss time se mene heels pehenna bhi kam kar diya…haha..
      Love u too dear❤❤❤

  5. Paavu

    sach mein tera kunj na boht wait krai na ganda bachha aleee baba solllly maafi pllssss tu toh mujhe kha jayegi yrr srry he s nic bacha ok hehe par sach mein itna wait ladke boht bhaav khate hain but some are okk leave main bhi na chod and ya srry fr nt cmmnting on prev maine dekha nahi mere dhyan se nikal gaya abhi dekhti hun and sach mein tu acha kia apne kunj ko sunati raha kar ki how u felt at dat time apni age toh bata uss wakt kya thi dear

    1. Fatimaa.

      Hehe…paavu nahi tujhe kese kha sakti hoon….tum toh meri sweet sweet sis ho..
      Haa yaar kunj ne bohot wait karaya tha…
      Yaar bhaav khana to ladkiyo ka right hai..fir ladke kyu bhaav khate hai…
      And yeah its ok dear…glad dat u commented…
      And my age was 17

  6. Purnima.agrawal30

    Awesome amazing fabulous marvelous cute epi

    1. Fatimaa.

      Thank uu dear purnima..
      Love uh

  7. Cute episode…

    1. Fatimaa.

      Thank uu sana..
      Love uh

  8. Simiyy

    Fatimaa
    It was really good
    Post soon

    1. Fatimaa.

      Heyy simiyy..
      Thank u dear…
      Love uh

  9. Wohoooooo!!!!!! Kaash meri v luv story aisi hoti!!!!!! Pehla pyaar n all,, par kambaqt mujhe koi pasand kyun nhi aata.. Jo pasand aata h. Wo pehle se pack rehta hso bad of me,… No??

    Next epi jaldi post kar dio, maza aa rha tha,
    N aapka kunj handsome h,, main line maru to chalega , side case mein?? ??

    1. Fatimaa.

      Heyy lashia..thanks for commenting dear…
      And yeah i will pray ki tumhe jaldi koi mil jaye???…
      And coming to ur question…mera kunj bohot handsome hai…aur cute bhi….
      Tumhe line marna hai…to maaro..i dont have problem coz mera kunj toh mere paas hi hai….??????
      Love uh dera

  10. Presha

    Hey fats just loved it.. Really u asked him abt his dress…. Awesome . lovely update..
    Daily falling more in love with ur story

    1. Fatimaa.

      Heyy presha..thank u dear…
      Haa yaar i asked him abt the dress…hehe it was soo much fun…????..
      Love uh dear

      1. Presha

        What is ur kunjs name yaar …
        Plz reveal it…

      2. Fatimaa.

        Yaar i will surely tell his name….
        Jus some time later…
        Okay i will tell his first letter…its “M”

    1. Fatimaa.

      Thank uu sidmin23…
      Love uh

  11. Amaya Bhardwaj

    Itna taroo the the jiju ko app yrr…MATLAB unko choorkr koi aur hndsm Nazar hi ni aata apkoo.????????????????????
    .. Hehehe..????????..Or ye Kya baat hui yrr Puri saadhi m appne bilkul v baat ni Kia KUNJ se….
    Well jab baate ankhoo SE ho RHI hoo toh bolne ki Kya jarurat h…. Hehehe…I HV perfect dialogue for it ‘ ishq hootoo SE hota ni Bayaan isliye pyaar m ankhee bani jubaan….’
    Well u were jealous of him dancing with others….U were very possesive yrr….Nd ur heels u were cursing it
    … Hahaha??????….Nd omg u were were giving him angry glares becharee hamare jiju… Hehehe unhe PTA v ni tha ki usse gussa kyu h…
    Well Saachi m bahut mazaa aya padhkr.???????…So lovely amazing episode yrr Fatimaa….
    Wats ur real name darling…
    I want to ask you ask you one thing does ur heartbeats skip a bit after seeing him…Do you have goosebumps and butterflies when he is around uu…Btana jarur…??????

    Well Saachi m bahut bhoov khaya Tere KUNJ ne….U do right Saachi m Sunna chahye KUNJ ko he made u wait soo long….. Well u find him hot & cute…
    Offfoooo Kya baat h yrr….
    ???????
    Hope you guys always stay together and happy…Nd the spark in ur love life remain forever….U too be together forever…

    Well do u use FB or whatsup…
    Post next one soon
    Lover uu
    ?????????

    1. Fatimaa.

      Heyy amaya dear…
      Haa yaar mujhe mere kunj k alava koi handsome hi nahi lagta..?????…
      Kya karu yaar..actually me uske alava kisiko dekhti hi nahi….haha…
      Nd yah ur dialouge was perfect…
      And my real name is Fatima only dear…
      And coming to ur questions…
      Jab bhi usko dekhti hoon na to heart bohot fast beat karta hai yaar…and if he touches me i really get goosebumps….
      Yaar only he has such effect on me….
      Thanks again dear…
      Nd i dont use fb..bt i m on wapp..
      If u can…than pm me i ll surely contact u dear…
      Love uh

  12. Ayee hayeee????? so cute and perfect diii ……..mai pehele comment nahi kar payi thi because of examss…..Uske liye?sorry….
    You’re so cute dii and your luv story toh superr se bhi upar hai……Post next soon ??

    1. Fatimaa.

      Ohh cp..thnks dear…
      I m so happy to read ur comment…
      Love uh dear❤❤

  13. Hi Fatima it was nice and post soon

    1. Fatimaa.

      Thank u nisha dear….
      Love u

  14. Hey… Fatimaa superb epi and awesome love story yr i am loving it and i want to ask u some questions what is real name of ur kunj and how much old this story is and whatbis ur age now plzzzz if ur comfortable in answering then must ans my questions and luv u sooooo much and post nxt asap….

    1. Fatimaa.

      Heyy anayaali…
      Thank u dear for commenting…
      And coming to ur questions…
      My kunj’s real name i will tell soon…uska naam “M” se start hota hai…
      And my story is 2 years old…
      And now i m 18 years…
      Love uh dear

  15. Fatima if u r in insta then follow me dear and my ID is nishareddy338 .I want to be ur friend.so plz accept my friend request dear

    1. Fatimaa.

      Heyy nisha dear…
      I also wanna b ur frnd but i m nt on insta….
      If u can than plzz pm me ur number…we can talk on wapp…sweet of u dear

  16. Guys others also can follow

  17. OK dear u send ur number

  18. Fatimaa.

    9904223786 is my watsapp no…
    Anyone who wants can contact..

  19. Aashiya

    Hey fatima di,
    umm ,I’m know im commenting for d 1st time..so sorry for that..Actually I’m hell busy wid mah exams..soo sorry for not commenting. …
    bur yaa I read ur ff regularly,oh god this is soo amazing.ur true love life is soo cute.?????????????????nd ur kunj os also very sweet…I guess he has 2 be sweet afterall he z in love wid my sweet sister????????????

    This epi was ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?
    too cute…u getting jealous was awsm….

    Pls post d next 1 soon as I can’t wait to read it…..
    Love u boht se v boht zyada?????
    keep smiling like this☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺
    – Aashiya ?????

    1. Fatimaa.

      Heyy ashiya thank u soo much my dear…
      Such a lovely comment…
      Love u soo much…muaahh❤❤❤???
      Keep commenting…
      U r really sweet

  20. Chiku

    Awwww!!! Its sooo cute❤️❤️❤️Lovely. Loved it. I am loving ur story.
    Can u plz gove the link of previous episode. Nahi dikah mujhe?????
    Post soon
    Love u❤️❤️

    1. Fatimaa.

      Heyy chiku..dear thanks for commenting…
      And the link…
      http://www.tellyupdates.com/really-love-twinj-story-chapter-3/
      Hope it works…
      Love uh dear

  21. Sry for not commenting but cute love story I think its one sided love, u hve a rocking story and a different one

    1. Fatimaa.

      Heyy arjuman thnks for d comment…
      And nope its not one sided…
      Its two sided only…
      But kunj side will b revealed soon..
      Thnks dear..
      Love uh

  22. Fatima yrrr u rocked sorry for late comment actually today only my exams got finished so ur love story is just so interesting I loved it…..aur han from now I will comment regular….aur I m ur Adeeba only I have loged in…
    Post soon.
    Luv u….
    Bye …

    1. Fatimaa.

      Ohh my darling..
      Thank u soo much for commenting..
      Glad u liked it…
      Love uh dear❤❤❤?

  23. Hey fatima…plzzz check did u write correct nmbr i think u missed one nmbr plzzz do check and tell me i tried my best to add ur nmbr in whatsapp but its not happening so plzzz check once again ….luv u and i wanna talk to u…?

    1. Fatimaa.

      Heyy anayaali..
      My number is 9904223786..
      Do try…i also wana talk to uh dear

  24. Ramya

    Awwwww Fatima dis was sooo cuuuttteeee I loved it
    Twinkle ka gussa aur uska jeoulousy I mean urs ucfff r amazing n I’m falling fr ur ff dear superb
    N kya tumahara kunn ko nahi pata ki u r writing ur love story
    Love u keep smiling

    1. Fatimaa.

      Thank u soo much ramya…
      I m so happy dat u liked it..
      Love uh too

  25. Ramya

    Awwwww Fatima dis was sooo cuuuttteeee I loved it
    Twinkle ka gussa aur uska jeoulousy I mean urs ucfff r amazing n I’m falling fr ur ff dear superb
    N kya tumahara kunn ko nahi pata ki u r writing ur love story ??
    Love u keep smiling

  26. Baby

    Haawwww…..re kitna wait karaya kunj ne…..twinkle ko……
    Sahi mein bt luvd it vry mch abhi tak m b luving ur stry too cute yr cant tell….bt m sooo sriiee lamba cmnt nhi de paungi dear as exams chal rhe hain….bt srsly lods of love very cute n adorable episode. …… 🙂

    1. Fatimaa.

      Heyy baby thank u soo much for commenting dear…
      U know i was waiting all day for ur comment…
      Nd yah i understand about exams..
      Thnkz dear
      Love uh??????❤❤

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