I really love you (a Twinj story) – CHAPTER 1

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Heyya everyone….
I m here wid my first episode….
Thank you soo much everyone those who commented and silent readers too…
And yeah i m gonna write dis as a fanfiction…
Soo here guyzzz i start my real life love story

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A beautiful morning is shown with birds chirping around…sun brightly shining….and golden city of amritsar……A big mansion is shown…..which is none other than Taneja mansion……

A lady in her late 40s is pacing to and forth near some luggage…..seems like the people of the house are going for an outing…..the lady is leela…
Leela: Twinkle,chinki how much time more you both r gonna take…..plzzz beta be quick….ur dad will be here in minutes…..
There comes a loud voice of girls….
We are ready mom….
They are twinkle and chinki….

Leela:thank god u both came otherwise ur dad wud b angry…
Twinkle:ohho mamma chill…we r ready na so why r u worrying…
Chinki: yah mamma twinkle di is right…
A voice comes from behind”what going on ladies” its yuvi…
Chinki: nothing bhai…u know na mamma’s panic habbit..
Yuvi:ohho mamma again….cmon now plzz b happy we r going for a trip…so plzz show me ur white teeth….
Leela:haha chal hat badmash…
All laughs and than rt comes and blows horn of the car….everyone goes and sits in the car and heads towrds city park….where already sarna’s are waiting for them….
Taneja reach there and they meet sarna’s…
Manohar usha and mahi are waiting for them….
All meet each other and gets in the car for the trip to Delhi….
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Sok guyzz this was my first episode…hope you all like it…and sorry guyzz for not introducing kunj…actually real me bhi aisa hi hua tha real kunj was nt in the first trip…so twinj meeting hogi but after 1 epi…hope u all understand….
And yes yuvi is my real life bro and mahi is kunj’s real life sister…and chinki too is twinkle’s sister in real life….soo whatever i m writing in d ff is all true…..
Plzz comment karna…
Love u all❤❤❤❤❤

Precap:trip to delhi….yuhi’s attraction and a leap..

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42 Comments
  1. Sohi

    Good going

    1. Fatimaa.

      Thank u soo much sohi….
      Love uh

  2. Paavu

    yrr dear fats main na jab yahhan tu pe new new join kiya tha na tab bhi ek aisa hi same to same ditoooo ff tha kya wo tum thi???? no change aisa hi tha pehli meet mein no kunj den 2 nd meet kunj its going same

    1. Fatimaa.

      Heyy paavu thnks for commenting and yess i u r right i actually started writing the story before by the name twinkle aur kunj bas itni si tamannna hai…..actually i wnted to continue that only but at that time i added some fiction in that story…so in this one i want to show all truth and real happenings dats y i again started from first…hope u liked it ….
      Love uh dear

  3. SidMin

    Interesting… the start looked good …
    can’t wait for Kunj’s entry … he made you wait for so long ? okay well I was joking … Post soon can’t wait …. Love you ❤❤❤

    1. Fatimaa.

      Heyy sidmin thanks for the comment dear….
      And yeah my kunj made me wait soo long….for a year…??????….
      But i ll introduce him soon….
      Plzz keep commenting…
      Love uh..

  4. Baby

    Lovely cute short episode…..
    Nice tuning wid mom 🙂
    Lods of love…♥♡♥♡♥♡♥
    Post soon…. 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

    1. Paavu

      hi jaan

      1. Baby

        Hmm..

    2. Fatimaa.

      Thank u baby….
      Glad dat u liked it….
      Love u dear❤❤❤❤

    3. Paavu

      Are kya hua hmm wats dis baby yrr kya hua u angry frm ne bt why hi bhi nahi boli yrr kya hua

  5. Chiku

    Wohooo!! It’s amazing. Lovely❤️❤️❤️I am waiting for the next episode. So u and ur kunj together now?? Do tell
    Post soon
    Loads if love❤️❤️

    1. Fatimaa.

      Heyy chiku….
      Thank u soo much for the comment….
      And yes about ur question….
      Yah me and my kunj r together and i hope we stay together..always??….pray for me…
      Love uh dear

  6. Paavu

    iski writer ne beech mein chod di thi nw u lll complete it i m glad

    1. Fatimaa.

      Heyy paavu thanks dat u found the links…
      Actually mene socha tha ki apne prolouge me ye sari links de doon but than i didnt becoz…mujhe laga ki pehle wali story me jo fiction hai woh aap padhke confuse ho jaoge….dats why…and yeah actually mera pehla wala ff mene beech me chhod diya tha actually 6 episodes hi likhe the….aur fir mera 12th start ho gaya tha isliye…..if u want u can read all those…usme mene apna naam bhi likha tha dat my real name is fatima….coz i was writing wid the name of mia……i hope dat u wud enjoy my dis story…coz u r really a gud writer….i know me utni achhi to nahi but chotu si to ban paungi ap jaisi….thnx for d comment

      1. Paavu

        U know wat u r fantabulouals writwr maine us wakt site bas silent reader join ki thi likhna toh baad mein start kia and really mujhe sabhi ffs bhul gayi bt yeh wala main kabhi nahi bhuli I wanted ki main na aur padhun bt writer gayab and I was so sad bt wen I read ur prol I was soo happy I was dancing ki its same maybe wrtelris also same I m soo happy maine links dhunde itni mushkil se it took me half hour full cos I started from last page yrr ty fr cont it love u

      2. Fatimaa.

        Glad dat u remembered my story…..actually me us waqt hi continue kar deti par uss time bohot kuch naya nata hua tha life me so i left it half way…..i will tell u d reason…bt pm par q ki yaha cmnts me bol dungi to meri story reveal ho jayegi???…thnks once again my dearie

  7. Purnima.agrawal30

    Amazing awesome

    1. Fatimaa.

      Thank u purnimaa..
      Love uh

  8. Amazing start…. Post soon nxt part….

    1. Fatimaa.

      Thank you sana….
      I ll post soon…
      Love ug

  9. Presha

    Awesome but I m eager to know more.. So plz post soon

    1. Fatimaa.

      Yeah thnks presha…
      I ll surely post soon..
      Love u

  10. Aamna_2690

    Hey Fatima!
    It is superb dear?loved it❤❤sorry for not being able to comment on prologue… but ur story is too interesting ??waiting for the next part eagerly ?

    1. Fatimaa.

      Heyy aamna thank u dear for ur comment…..plzz keep commenting always….
      Love uhh my dear

  11. I luv ur ffs fatimah. Plzzzz post soon

    1. Fatimaa.

      Thnk i shiny…..
      Actually i m here for d first time…..with my ff….actually der r many fatimaa’s in our tu…..but m glad dat u liked it….
      Thanks again dear ..love u

  12. SidMin23

    It was nice

    1. Fatimaa.

      Thnk u sidmin 23
      Keep commenting..
      Loce u

  13. Ramya

    Awesome start Fatima
    Yakin nahi hota hai ki real life mai bhi love stories r exist
    I’m so happy fr u dear

    Love u keep smiling

    1. Fatimaa.

      Thank u soo much ramya…
      Yeah mujhe bhi kabhi kabhi bohot ajeeb lagta hai but ab jo hai yahi hai life me???…
      Love u dear

  14. Heyyyy awesome Fatima ur story sooo cute yaar kunj ne itna wait Karaya ????well from which city u are ??? Do post next one soon can’t wait for kunj entry

    1. Fatimaa.

      Thank u soo much mahi….
      Yeah kunj ne bohot wait karaya ??…
      Yaeh i m from gujarat…bilimora…
      Thnks for commenting dear..
      Love uh

  15. Purvi128

    Hey Fatima!
    Sorry for not commenting on the prologue.. I was a bit busy.
    Your story is really good. Your Kunj made you wait for so long. Well seriously it’s awesome. Looking forward to read the next chapter.
    Post asap.
    Love you!????

    1. Fatimaa.

      Heyya purvi……its alright dat u didnt comment on d last one….but i m glad dat u liked my plot……i hope i wud b able to reach upto ur expectations…
      Thnks for commenting…
      Love uh dear❤❤❤❤??

  16. sorry for late comment but i fell in luv wid ur ff…fatima…plz post nxt part soon….

    1. Fatimaa.

      Thnk u dear adeeba….
      So sweet of u…
      Luv u

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