Re LOVING the KIDNAPPER- EPISODE 1

Hello darlings… NILASH back with her favourite story. BUT BEFORE I START I WANNA SHARE THAT—

This story will turn darker gradually with opening of different shades of person and revelations.

And this story includes many realistic incidents though I would try hard to make them dramatic, and of course dramatic parts will be there. More of drama will get included although.

I don’t know how will this story end because the length that is in my head for this story is really very long according to me so just hope for the best. FINGERS CROSSED

To everyone please do give the first chapter a read. HAPPY READINGΒ 

EPISODE- 1

“You don’t love her man…” Om shouted at the top of his voice.

“Yeah… so what?? Marriage is a deal dude” Shivay answered in his ever so calmed voice.

“You know what?? You should stop this right here right now or else…” Rudra said without fear in front of his bhaiyaa for the first time.

“Ohh Mr. Lady killer… just stay away from this” Shivay answered in a stern voice. And got busy checking himself out in mirror.

“It’s not been even a year man you broke up with the girl with whom you were madly in love” Om now spoke the main fact he was going through all the time.

“Ohhhhhh stop it Om… if she doesn’t care then why should I?? I mean she married dude” Shivay answered. His voice lacked it’s boldness but he equally managed to stay calm.

“And who the hell said you she has married?” Rudra asked and turned Shivay towards him with a great force.

“I… I met her the last week… and she was with a man… moreover wearing CHURAS and VERMILION was shining on the top of her forehead so what would have I thought??” Shivay said and huffed after completing.

“Rudra there is no point talking to him now… let’s just go from here… let him get married to a girl whom he can never love” Om said and turned to go but Shivay stopped him.

“Om… I agree I love her and I also don’t want to get married but what to do yaar?? I need to prove it to her that I also can move on. If she can move on in just four months then why can’t I? And if her love her then also I need to forget her… I cannot stand a girl who…” his voice cracked at the end.

“Shivay there are many things which you don’t know… but believe me… she is not that type of girl you are thinking. Please think again… you can’t get married” Om patted Shivay’s back twice after completing.

“If I want to back out from this then too I can’t do that now… think about our family reputation” Shivay said and sat with a thud on the bed.

“If you allow can we talk to…” Rudra got cut in middle by Shivay “…no Rudra… don’t you dare share this conversation with anyone of our family. Yeah I am just marrying her because I want to prove I also can move on but I will adjust” Shivay answered holding his head.

“Rudra let’s go let’s see what we can do for you” Om said with a sad face to Rudra.

….Time passed….

“Call the groom” said pandit ji enchanting the mantras.

“Shivay… Shivay beta??…. Shivay…” Pinky went to his room calling him. “Shivay open the door” Pinky banged on the door. But no response came from inside.

She ran in Rajdhani speed and reached to the mandap breathing heavily.

“Puttar… what happened?” Daadi asked.

“Shivay is not opening the door. He is not opening the door” Pinky said and broke down fearing everything is fine or not.

“He didn’t commit suicide right??” Om’s eyes bulged out as he completed.

Everyone ran towards Shivay’s room After banging for few minutes at last they decided to break the door.

“1…2…3…” OmRu counted together and BOOM!!!

The door did not open. After trying for three more times the door opened at the fourth time. The entire family ran inside but Shivay wasn’t there.

“Shivvvaayyeeeee” Pinky cried aloud looking at the ceiling. Jhanvi and Prinku ran to console her. Tej dialed Police’s number.

Police came to their house in am hour. Tej and Shakthi together explained the matter to the police team. The team promised to find Shivay out soon and went away.

“Waise… in one way kidnapper has helped bhaiyaa getting saved from this stupid marriage” Rudra said in a very normal voice shocking everyone.

“Shut up Rudra… Shivay got kidnapped and you are still thinking all these” Om sounded tensed.

“Mumma…. meri shaadi” the bride complained to her mum who was equally tensed thinking about the passing away mahurat.

Soon all the guest went away consoling the bride and Oberoi Family. Tej again called the police to know whether they have traced Shivay’s number or not. The answer came no. He cut down the phone and hit the table near him in disappointment.

PRECAP –Β OMRU… YOU TWO HAVE KIDNAPPED ME???….Β Β bit different story I am trying again. Please do support friends. I hope I will get equally good response. Please please please soon drop all your comments down. Dying to read them. Please stay tuned to know what happens next…

LOVE LOVE- NILANJANA

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  1. Pushpa

    Wht the hell…..omRu kidnapoed shivaye….but i must say the story is so interesting….i luv u shicaye….cmon…….anika is not married….

    1. Nilash

      Ha ha ha… Push baby it is just a mystery that is revealed in the next part. πŸ™‚
      Yes yes super blooper interesting I promise. Ohhh yaar I thought you are saying I love you to me… I will not leave this Shivay for taking away my share of I love you. Naahhh Anika isn’t married baby. But why Shivay thinks that will get revealed later. πŸ™‚

  2. OMG…..omru kidneped shivay.AWESOME update

    1. Nilash

      Thanks a lot Sadia. Well another head along with them πŸ˜‰

  3. MANAV SABIKHI

    Awsome like always,

    1. Nilash

      Thanks a lot Manav

  4. Post soon the next update

    1. Nilash

      Next part posted dear πŸ™‚

  5. Banita

    If I m not wrong then tuesday nd thrusday mein different hota hain… Isn’t????????? was waiting , but……..
    Good starting…
    Interesting concept…
    Dark hain , I dont mind…
    Baada hoga… Accha hain… Jo hona hain ho ending happy hona chahiye for me…. Sochna vi maat ki main tujhe request karungi… Jaldi post kr…

    1. Nilash

      πŸ˜› Sach bataun mujhe laga tu bhul gayi hogi isiliye I posponed the date. πŸ˜› Okay kaan pakarti hu maaf kar de. DEVI MAIYAA DHANYAVAAD aapke madhur shabdon ke liye. Ending hi to happy nai aa raha na dimaag me but I promise ki happy ending hi hoga. Mat kar tu mujhe order kar… waise Chimpanzee ka order manna bhi parega warna uska weight and mera weight… ahem ahem… πŸ˜› πŸ˜› πŸ˜›
      Love you aur tujhe maine ISHRH ka 31st episode bhi send kar diya hai

  6. UF3355

    AWESOME EXCELLENT INTERESTING PERFECT SUPERB??????
    T C A S S ?

    1. Nilash

      Thank You so much UF πŸ™‚

  7. Luvd d plot….its something different n unique…lets see hw d stry turns out n it dosent matter waht d length is….in d end shivika mst be together …..dt only matters……waiting fr d nxt update….

    1. Nilash

      Thanks a lot dear. Donno Shivika will be together or not but I promise to make and frame the story like that which includes happy ending. Yup it will be most unique plot I have ever thought. Hope not to disappoint you. And next part posted dear

  8. Woah!!! This was great??
    The plot is intriguing……..
    Shivaay’s break up?- Marriage – Now he being kidnapped……… Omg?? Omru kidnappers?????
    What might have happened in the past????
    What’s gonna be shivaay’s future??? – eager to know about it
    So post the next? soon

    1. Nilash

      Thanks a lot Pakhi
      In past nothing much has happened but in future loads are going to happen. Shivay’s and Anika’s future will take turns in dramatic way. Just stay tuned darling and next part is posted πŸ™‚

  9. Niriha

    Awesome fabulous start dear…interesting concept update next part soon

    1. Nilash

      Thank You so much Niriha.
      Next part posted darling πŸ™‚

  10. Nikita_jai29

    It is amazing and funny dear… I love you my rocking girl

    1. Nilash

      Ha ha ha… okay then will try to include funny angle though the story I thought was entirely different πŸ˜‰
      Love you too Niki

  11. Alekhika20

    Superb update

    1. Nilash

      Thank You so much Alekhika πŸ™‚

  12. Ashwinee

    You know what ash??? I am seriously laughing…dramaqueennn… loving it

    1. Nilash

      Ha ha ha… laugh laugh laugh… Thank You so much Winee baby. πŸ™‚

  13. ItsmePrabha

    hello darling..you are back with another khidkithod story..i started reading it in watty par u know watty doesn’t work properly so going to read it here ..and this epi is amazing..will be waiting for the next..

    1. Nilash

      Hello Prabha. Yes a story khidkitod to tum sab padhke banaoge. Haan yaar iss watty maiyaa ka kuch karna parega. Par abhi theek hai. Wahan par to bahut aage hai story. Thank You so much and next episode posted darling πŸ™‚

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