Its a rainy day (SWASAN) one shot

hii guys im manu..i just wanted to share some of my thoughts..its just a one shot..hope u like it..if so please let me know …not proof read
It was raining heavily outside. swara could hear the rain lashing on her roof. She had closed all the doors and windows of her house. She felt depressed when it rained and wished it would stop raining. The rains always brought back old memories. Memories, she would rather not think about. But, the rains continued in full fury and swara was transferred back into those times when she was 18.

It all happened 5 years earlier when she was 18. swara was studying for her degree in Arts and she simply enjoyed going to college. Attending lectures, roaming around the college campus during free lectures and eating samosas coupled with hot masala tea was her regular routine. Her parents were both working and she was their only daughter. Life was easy for swara. She was doted upon by her parents and was loved by all her relatives. Yet, swara felt something missing. She was not sure what was lacking, but a feeling of incompletion always surrounded her. She was not even sure what the feeling was or what she was seeking. It was only on that rainy day that she found out.

It was raining heavily and her class had a free hour. swara loved the rains unlike her friends who disliked the murky weather it brought about. swara and her friends rushed to the canteen for steaming hot cups of tea. They settled down at the corner seat in the canteen. As swara peeped outside the transparent glass windows, she saw an image. It was of a boy rushing towards the canteen. He didn’t have an umbrella and was soaking wet. She had never seen him before. She knew most of the students in her college and was sure he had taken admission recently. As he entered the canteen, swara’s eyes followed him as he took a seat in the other end of the canteen. He looked a bit older than she had guessed. Maybe he was a final year student. There was something about this boy that fascinated swara. She had many friends, but most of them were girls. Though
she talked with most of the boys, she always kept a distance.

This was because she felt uncomfortable around boys. But this boy was different. He was totally drenched and yet he looked comfortable. swara felt like walking up to him and talking to him. This was quite unlike her nature and she reprimanded herself for thinking such thoughts.
The canteen was not crowded today. swara kept glancing across at that boy from above her tea cup. Her friends were discussing about the latest film released and did not notice her silence. The boy had also ordered for tea and was sipping it silently.The rains had subsided and the boy having finished the tea, walked out of the canteen. It was with great effort that swara held herself to her seat. She had felt like following the boy and finding out which class he was in. What had gotten into her? Why was she behaving in this strange fashion? All these questions popped up in her mind. What kind of attraction was this?

The whole day at college passed in a trance for swara. She was hoping to see that boy again. One more lecture, and she could go out of the class and maybe, just by chance spot the boy somewhere in the campus. As the professor entered the class, the students stopped talking and became silent. swara glanced up from her books as she heard the professor’s voice. She got the shock of her life to see that boy standing across the room, introducing himself as the substitute professor for Psychology. This boy was a professor! He looked so young that she had assumed him to be a student. He had managed to dry his hair and clothes. He introduced himself as professor sanskar. So that was his name! swara hardly heard what Pr. sanskar spoke. As the lecture ended, swara found herself getting up and going across the classroom to speak to sanskar. As she stood in front of the professor, she suddenly felt shy and was dumbfounded..

swara muttered a ‘Thank you’ and rushed out with her friends. This rainy day she would never forget in her life. She was feeling complete and whole as a person. She felt like her body had turned light and she could fly, soar up in the sky and float across clouds. She had fallen in love. Maybe this was the feeling she had been seeking.swara walked home with the hope of seeing sanskar again tomorrow and hoping to speak much more than she had today.
But fate had something else in mind. As she reached home, shekar hugged her and started sobbing incessantly. It was with great difficulty that he was able to convey that sumi had met with an accident and was in the ICU at the hospital. There were very little chances of her survival. swara felt her knees weaken and she fainted. sumi never recovered and expired two days later. It was the worst 48 hours of her life. shekar went about the final rites mechanically. He couldn’t come to terms with his loss. He applied for a voluntary retirement and decided to go back to the village. He informed swara of his decision and asked her to complete her graduation via correspondence from the university. swara was unable to say a single word. She went along with shekar’s decision like a zombie.

The village was a beautiful and peaceful place. Her grandparents were very supportive and loving. Yet swara felt depressed. She felt like she had lost more than just sumi. She had lost sanskar. The special feeling she had felt for him which had made her feel complete as a person was also lost. Would she ever see sanskar again? She could not share with shekar, what she had felt on that rainy day. So, slowly she came out of her stupor and completed graduation as per shekar’s wishes. shekar had started a small business in the village and was quite successful in his venture. shekar then started looking for a good match for her marriage. swara was not interested in marrying and told shekar that she would like to take up a job and make a place in this world for herself like sumi. Luckily, swara got a job in the city and she bade goodbye to shekar and grandparents.

That was all 5 years ago. shekar had constantly tried to get her married off but with no avail. She had made several excuses for not marrying and yesterday shekar had given her an ultimatum. As the rain continued, thoughts of sanskar troubled her. Image of a totally drenched sanskar flashed in her mind. She closed her eyes tightly trying to remove the image from her mind and that was when she heard the door bell. Who could it be at this hour, with these heavy rains ringing her doorbell? She ignored the bell but it went on ringing persistently. Finally, she decided to check who it was. As she opened the door, she saw a drenched person standing in front of her. It was sanskar.He was shocked to see swara and was lost in memories…….

sanskar had seen swara staring at him in the canteen. He was impressed by her looks and was surprised to see her in his class. when she stood in front of him, not speaking a single word, he got a complete close up look of her. She was beautiful. As she looked up to meet his eyes, he felt an attraction that he had never felt before. He longed to listen to her voice.
That was when swara spoke. He hardly heard a word of what she said. he was equally attracted to her. Her eyes said it all.she muttered thank you and rushed out…he longed to see her next day but its after 5 years that he met his love…

With shivering hands, swara opened the door. They both stared at each other. sanskar couldn’t believe his eyes that it was swara standing in front of him. Surely she must be married by now. He spoke to her telling her that he had come to the nearby supermarket and the rain had caught him by surprise. Finally seeing no signs of the rain stopping, he had decided to seek shelter in a nearby house. And that house had turned out to be hers.
swara listened to sanskar all the while wondering if he was married. She had waited for 5 years in the hope of meeting him someday. And here he was standing in front of her. sanskar had not married and had gone to the US after his brief stint at the college. He had returned recently and had landed the post of the principal in the same college. swara felt elated at the information and spoke of all that had happened in the last 5 years. The attraction they had felt had been mutual and permanent. Neither of them could have imagined leading a life with another person. Both had remained single.

So, swara finally saw sanskar after 5 years, totally drenched and soaking wet due to the rains. It was because of the rains that he had made a dash for her house and they had met. She no longer felt that the rains were depressing and went across the room to open the windows. She had found her love due to the rains and the sound of the raindrops felt like heaven now.sanskar came to her and she huggged him tightly……
Her sanskar had come back in her life and this time it was for ever………..

Credit to: manu


  1. Vini

    I loved this one,enjoyed from first to last line,very nicely written,actually under my ff ,a person by name manu(Manoja) used to comment daily ,nowadays I don’t see her name,I don’t know if u r d same person but I enjoyed reading this and liked it a lot,very neatly written,nice language,and above all rain is being felt like a character.. Keep writing.

    • manu

      Hey its me only dear..ive been following your ff regularly…but I’ve no Tim to comment..sorry for that…ull see my comments from now glad that u remembered me…

      • Vini

        Oh,same Manu,I remember your name and this emblem,so glad to see u back and very happy to know that you write so well,actually I had planned rain in the background for a scene in my ff,wen I saw that rainy day word,I read this,I am happy that I didn’t miss it,I don’t think I will be able to describe scene with the backdrop of rain so beautifully like u did,you may read it in my ff, that time ,will understand what I meant,superb dear,I m really happy to c ur name and an excellent one shot ,m not simply praising,I mean it and u deserve more and happy to know that u were following my ff inspite of ur busy schedule,thank u..

  2. Anu

    Superb 🙂 keep writing. You are a great writer. I’m sure after reading this all would love rain

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