The Rain,The Spring,The Autumn (Rain-Part 02)


Hey guys! Back with another part of this ff.

Adarsh bhai comes home late. So Swara sleeps with Parineeta bhabi.When Adarsh bhai comes back,he lifts her back to her room. Sometimes Adarsh bhai comes home very late,Swara by that time have slept. After coming, Adarsh bhai directly sleeps on the bed. He pulls Parineeta bhabi closer. Swara wakes up due to the sound. Parineeta bhabi being on Adarsh bhai’s chest says- What are you doing? Let me wake up Swara and send her to her room.
Adarsh bhai- Let her sleep,afterall she is a child.
Parineeta bhabi:She is no more child. If she wakes up and see us like this?
Adarsh bhai: she will not think anything.
Adarsh bhai then give a peck of Parineeta bhabi’s cheek. Seeing this Swara’s heart start to beat fastly. A sudden spine runs through her body. She feels like running away from that room. Only because of the fear of facing Adarsh bhai,makes her lie like that. Adarsh bhai then get up and switch off the lights.
Parineeta bhabi: Swara? Let me wake her?
Adarsh bhai: She is sleeping,let her sleep.
Parineeta: If she wakes up in the middle?
Adarsh bhai:So what? She is child,what will she understand? Nothing.

Lying there Swara listens Adarsh bhai and Parineeta bhabi’s talk and the sound of Parineeta bhabi’s bangles.
What so laughter in the midnight? Swara cannot understands anything. Her body under her dress start sweating and the body feels like cramp. When Adarsh bhai and Parineeta bhabi had slept,she is unaware. She wakes up to the sound of alarm. She then sees Parineeta bhai sleeping in the arms of Adarsh bhai. Parineeta bhabi looks more beautiful.
‘Issh’,Parineeta bhabhi is so big and she don’t feel shy to sleep in Adare bhai’s embrace.
Swara wakes up silently,opens the door and come out. She recalls the incident of previous night. She only understands that Adarsh bhai and Parineeta bhabi shares a very strong bond. Both love each other blindly and both are husband and wife.
Swara thinks that if she had a husband who would hug her the whole night,love her-she would not fear the darkness anymore. Swara fears darkness very much. At home ahe used to hug her mother and sleep,but here she hugs the pillow. If she had a husband,she would hug him ,and sleep peacefully.
She laughs at her own thoughts. Her cheeks become red. But then she suddenly remembers that her father had said her that she have to study hard. Then she realises that she is a child and she dont have to marry. Shaking her head she says-No! I should not think about this. Baba had said I have to read hard to secure the first position in class. I am a good girl. Adarsh bhai too says this.
Adarsh loves Swara very much. He becomes worried whenever she is ill. Parineeta bhabi leave all household chores and sit besides her. Adarsh bhai often press her head during headache to give a healing touch. He peels off the fruits and feed her. He forcefully make her drink milk.

Swara loves Adarsh bhai as her own brother. Respects him also. One day Parineeta bhabhi had gone to her friend’s house. Swara and Adarsh bhai were sitting in the courtyard.
Adarsh bhai: Swara,now you are growing up,you will study in college,will you still remember me and Parineeta?
Swara: What are you saying Adarsh bhai? You are greater that my own brother. I can never forget you and your love.
Adarsh: Everyone say like this. But it get lost in the time wave.
Swara: Okay! Adarsh bhai you will see Swara,weather she will forget her brother or not.
Adarsh bhai: May be during studies you would come here once,or twice but after that?
Swara: What after that?
Swara asked like a feather brained.
Adarsh bhai: After that you will be the wife of some official. And that time inspite of your wish you cannot cross your limit and come here. Adarsh bhai will stare you from distance and bring back his eyes. You will take off your eyes for your husband’s pride. I am saying the truth Swara. I cannot tolerate that. The sound of your wedding trumpet will tear my heart apart.
Despite of no tears Adarsh bhai’s face idicated agonize’s shadow.
Swara was shocked. What is she listening now? What is this type of language from Adarsh bhai today? What is this pain in his eyes today.

Sun was waving bye to the world welcoming the moon. Suddenly Adarsh bhai took Swara’s hand in his grip and looked at her. Adarsh bhai’s eye became red as blood. His warm breath fell in Swara. Swara was scared of seeing Adarsh bhai’s face.
“Leave my hand Adarsh bhai,its hurting”, Swara said in between her sobs.
Adarsh bhai: Swara! I love you.
Swara: Adarsh bhai,I love you too.
Adarsh bhai: No,your love is different from mine.
Swara: why? How?
Swaea released her hand from Adarsh bhai’s grip.
Adarsh bhai: You cannot understand. You are not so old enough.
Swara: why Adarsh bhai, I have inly two months ti complete my 10th class and I stand 1st in the class.
Adarsh bhai: This ia not in studies Swara,this is in mind,age.
Swara: Is my mind so small?
Adarsh bhai: Yes. Your mind is very small. Therefore you cannot understand my pain.
Swara: Pain? What pain do you have?
Adarsh bhai: If yoy can understand my pain….
Adarsh bhai got up and sat on the sofa with hia eyes closed and hands on his heart.

SO how was this? New readers I would recommend you to read the intro.
Love you all forever!

Credit to: JYOTII

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  1. Wooww. Nyc. Keep updating. Waiting for Swara’s reaction.

    1. Thank you very much!!

  2. Good update. Post next quickly.

    1. Ya dearo!!!!

  3. its was just amazing dear….

    1. Thank you very much! 🙂

  4. You swara fan what problem do you have with Ragini. Why this page is fulled with Swara’s ff? Where is Ragini. Swara is disgusting and cheap.

    1. Miss ragini fan don’t bash swara ok its very hard to write 1 ch n u r saying it bad hats of u

      1. Ek hello how dare u insult my jyotii di!!! 1st of all, swara is swara thats y we all love her…bashers like u create scenes…n my dear jyoyii di..this hater…I would hav slapped her..if I was in front of her…u dont worry..I love u n ur ff sooo much so keep writing…

      2. N swara is disgusting n cheap…I think u r blind….ragini doesnt even have self respect…so u r jealous…whats our mistake…teja is a vry good person bt I dont justify ragini’s character.

    2. Hi dear even i am ragini fan but in this ff swara was not cheap i think adarsh was cheap
      Swara was small to understand and ragini
      Idont knew whether she their in this ff or not.
      If she there she will come soon wait for it

      1. Swara’s character is very bad. I m sure Ragini is not in this ff. Hate this ff.

      2. No dear Ragini is not in this ff! Thanks dear for your support.

    3. Didi I am also a ragini fan but i like swara too bad there are also ragini off and guyzzzzzz remember both swara and ragini r equal plzzzzz don’t bash each other

    4. Just go to hell. Who d hell r you to bash my Jyotii. She is a great writer. If you dont like it,dont read it. No one is pleading you to read.

    5. Even if Swara is cheap. This is my story and I can write it anyway I want. If you dont like dont read! I m happy! 🙂

    6. then Go and read Ragini fanfictions why the hell are you reading it at the first place. And don’t bash Swara ok. If you like Ragini then only read Ragini fanfiction nobody had forced you to read Swara’s fanfiction

  5. hey Dr…ragini fan…if u want ragini ff u cn write it…none vl mind…

    1. Thanks jasmine for a great support.

  6. nice…waiting for next……

    1. Next part is on d way!

  7. Thamiazh Magan

    Plz post soon

    1. I ll upload soon!

  8. Nice. Thanks for such a beautiful update.

    1. Thank you so much dear!! I ll update d next soon! 🙂

  9. Hai jyothi, just today I have gone through the intro of the story and I just loved the intro so much. I don’t know whether I have read all your ffs jyothi. I don’t want to miss a single ff of yours. The way you write is just mind blowing. Really you were blessed dear with such words. So I don’t want to miss your ffs and I want all the names of your ffs till now. Please can you tell me the names of the ff

    1. 1. SWARASANSKAR! A journey from revenge to love!(completed)
      2.Swasan-An incomplete love story(1 epi is left)

      1. Thank you jyothi

  10. I just read prologue and 2 chapters. Seems to be different as ur othet ff.

    1. Ya this is different! N thanks!!! 🙂

  11. Woow yaar nice. Post quickly d next. N yes just dont care about bashers. 🙂

    1. Thank you! N yes I ll not care about bashers!!

  12. Thank God you posted it. I was eagerly waiting for it. Very nice.

    1. Thank you Karishma

  13. Hey! Ragini fan why u r bashing d writer u have no rights to hurt her feelings for not writing ff on ragini she have right to choose her fav one

    1. Sammie,thank you for such a wonderful comment in favor of me!

  14. Yes yes it is very good. Stop worrying about some mad dogs. You will get them at every stage of ur life. They know only to bark. You need to avoid them.

    1. Yes! Meher you changed me! Love you!!!
      Thank you a loads!!!

    1. Thanks

  15. Uff! Again here! Not wasting any time on these trifles i drop into your story. So the first storm is gonna come right? Its an unique one. I love reading . Do post asap. I eagerly want to know the next epi. Adarsh’s character was different and I liked this evil shade in him. He was most of d times a suppressed one. But here! Directly the vamp! You please keep writing come what may. Dil chota na karna kabhi.

    1. Thanks Bisha! I have always found in d comment section of my every ff. Do keep showing uhr love like this!! 🙂 🙂 🙂

  16. In the serial and here to Swara will always remain cheap. Jyotii you should leave writing. Why r u writing such disgusting things? No one is interested to read it. Just stop it.

    1. And when did Lakshya proclaimed his love for her until recently? You look like one of those people who cling to people in the name of love even if the other person don’t love you at al. And you call it love? brilliant I never knew that love is this much selfish

  17. This comment is deleted.

    Msg from Team: We will reveal your true identity if you don’t stop posting comments from multiple names and create controversies.

    1. Miss Ragini Fan, you are hiding your name and insulting Jyoti. YOu shouldnt do this. And get it in, Swaragini are fictional characters girl! And they are portrayed as the story demands them to be. For that why should Jyoti stop writing? And how come you know none is interested to read her stories? Why drag others in your rant? And please, dont read it if you dont like it. But this deamaneour isnt at all good.

      1. This comment is deleted.

        Msg from Team: We will reveal your true identity if you don’t stop posting comments from multiple names and create controversies.

  18. Woww. Yipeeee. Too gooddd. Waiting for next.

    1. I will upload soon

  19. Guys I m busy right now,but will come back n reply to all! 🙂

  20. Wow superb dr pls continue sweety

    1. I will continue!

  21. Amazing dear. Continue it. I am with you.

    1. Thanks!!!

  22. Amazing dear!! As usual superb! Upload soon.

    1. Aashi thanks dear! 🙂

  23. Thanks to everyone who supported me! Glad to have an army like this! 🙂

  24. This comment is deleted.

    Msg from Team: We will reveal your true identity if you don’t stop posting comments from multiple names and create controversies.

    1. Miss Ragini fan I dont give a damn to your comments. And you are certainly none to stop writing or commenting. And obviously you have no rights to tell Jyoti autistic. No need to express your abusive feelings. Keep it within and dont read it simple. Please be polite as I am polite with you. CANT TELLYUPDATES REVIEW THE COMMENTS BEFORE POSTING THEM? WHAT THE blo*dy HELL IS THIS? PLEASE DELETE COMMENTS LIKE AUTISTIC AND ALL BEFORE PUBLISHING. IT HURTS THE INDICATED PERSON LIKE HELL. DONT YOU UNDERSTAND TELLYUPDATES? I HOPE HUMANS ARE WORKING UNDER THIS WEB PORTAL. SO PLEASE SHOW SOME HUMANITY. YOUR ONE GOOD STEP KEEPS EVERY READER AND WRITER RELATION BALANCED. DONT YOU GET THAT?


  25. what a episode yaar superb the truth of society plz plz update next part today plz

    1. Yeah dear Ireena this is the truth of society! But some people are taking it in a negetive way. Thank you so much dear!! 🙂

  26. Wow…jyoti.. …I have no words speechless…. Waiting for next epi..
    I told about ur msg to vini….

    1. Sethooty! Thanks dear!!! 🙂 Vini dii too told about uhr ff! M going to read it today! 🙂

  27. Again here also hatred comments…Eva also a victim of this ..feel sad about her ..thanks telly team for give warning for these bashers..

    1. Ignore her!
      Just dnt care about this basher! 🙂

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