The Rain,The Spring,The Autumn (Autumn-Part 07)

HEY GUYS! So I AM here with all your double dhamaka! Read it and you will get your shamaka!! So excited about it?? ๐Ÿ˜›
Swara opened that letter with her heart pounding. It was written.
Dear Tanya,
I cannot live even a second without you. I will marry only you. You say this to your daddy and mummy. We donโ€™t need to wait till our studies to get over. We can marry after reaching America but we have to wait till me attain the eligible age for marriage. I will say all these to daddy before leaving for America. I donโ€™t need my momโ€™s opinion. I will go there after two days. You say all these to your mom. I think that a lovable,caring and broad minded lady like her will not object our relationship. Love you and always will forever.
Swara shaked like a powerful earthquake. Someone pulled the rug beneath her legs. Her body was drenched in sweat. Now she cannot keep Tanya’s past in darkness. She have to disclose all these to Yuvraaj. But what will be Tanya’s state after that? Swara was confused what to do. She then decided that she will show the letter to Sanskar and seek his help. But no! What will Sanskar say? He will mock her. He will say that Tanya is her daughter and is walking on her path.
No! She will solve this alone. She doesnโ€™t need anyone’s help. She don’t have anyone to pick up the stones from her path. She have to pick it up on her own or else she will be injured.
Swara was sitting alone these 2 days. Faking her illnesses she asked everyone to leave her alone. She was thinking what she will do next.
She heard a car’s horn from outside. Swara came outside with trembling legs. She saw Yuvraaj getting off the car. His face was shining. Swara’s blood was boiling. Son is more dangerous than father. After all fooling innocent girls in his blood. Yuvraj was walking just like Laksh. He was going directly into Tanya’s room.
Swara: Stop there.
Yuvraj stood there. Swara went to her room and brought the letter. She handed the letter to him.
Swara: Have you written this?
Yuvraj: Yes
Swara: What is your age?
Yuvraj: Running sixteen.
Swara: Don’t you feel shame?
Yuvraj: There is no reason to feel shame.
Swara became angrier. How shameless is this boy!
Swara:I am warning you. Stay away from Tanya. She is like your sister. Don’t keep any bad intentions.
Yuvraj: Bad intentions? You don’t know anything about us. She is my sweetheart. I love her. Yes! I will marry her. Nobody in the whole world can stop it.
Swara: Get out from my house. You are saying to marry my daughter in front of me? Besharam.
Swara’s eyes were red in anger. Yuvraaj’s eyes were even more red. His eyes were like burning balls.
Yuvraj: Aunty I am also warning you as you are Tanya’s mom but you will repent for this.
Swara:Get out.
Swara was screaming. Yuvraj went out without looking back even once. Tanya and Sanskar came out listening to Swara’s scream. Tanya was screaming and running behind Yuvraj.
Tanya: Listen Yuvraj. Have faith on me. I will not care anybody. I am yours.
Yuvraj started his car and waved his hands bidding bye to Tanya.
Yuvraj: We will talk in America, not here.
Yuvraj increased the sped of his car. Tanya sat at the entance of the house crying. Then she got up and went near Swara.
Tanya: Mumma!What you did? You don’t know Yuvraj is very sentimental and emotional. I can’t live without him.
Tanya said in between her sobs. Swara had not expected this from her. She became angrier. She slapped her furiously and continuously. (Remember once Sumi had slapped Ragu after ahe kidnapped her and forced swasan to marry)
Swara: Shameless girl. You should die. Yes I will kill you before marrying Yuvraj.
Sanskar pushed Swara and hugged Tanya. Swara’s hand marks were on Tanya’s face. Blood was oozing out from her lips.
Swara:Leave her. Today I will kill her.
Sanskar: Tanya will only marry Yuvraj. Who are you to touch her?
Swara: I am her mother. I have given her birth. I can kill her,slap her. I can do anything thatbI want. And if u will support you I will give poison to you.
Sanskar: You are not Tanya’s mother. You don’t have any right to touch her. She is my daughter. Ragini died after giving birth to Tanya. This is the truth.
Sanskar took Tanya and went inside. Swara cooled down like a ice. Few seconds ago she was crushing herself to have given birth to Tanya and now this have turned into the truth. She have been cheated her whole life. Adarsh bhai,Laksh and Sanskar-everyone have cheated her. The feelings which she had developed for Sanskar faded away. She saw Sanskar was applying ointments on Tanya’s wound.

Sanskar: Tanya have patience. You get well and then we will go to Yuvraj.
Tanya: Daddy you don’t know but he will never come here.
Sanskar: But after knowing that Swara is not your mother,he will definitely come here.
Tanya: Daddy don’t say like that. Mummy is now angry but later she will agree.
Sanskar: Tanya this is the truth. I married Swara after 1 month of your birth.
Tanya was crying while Swara came to her
Swara: Tanya, I am sorry. If I would have known that you are not my daughter, I would never have slapped you.
Swara ran to her room and cried lying on her bed.
Where is her child? Who will say her? From where will she get her child? She wants to hug her child just once.
Sanskar felt restless after listening Swara’s cry. Sanskar had kept her in darkness and she did not ask him why he did like this?
If she would have asked him,Sanskar would have said the real reason. But Swara had no complaint for Sanskar. Sanskar went near Swara. Swara got off from the bed seeing him.
Swara: Sanskar I am sorry to slap your daughter.
Sanskar: Swara,let me explain why I have done this.
Swara: No need to think about the past. I have no complaints against you. You go to your hospital, itโ€™s very late. Even I am going to “Bachpan”. I have not gone there since 2 days.
Without waiting for Sanskar’s answer Swara went out. The next day Sanskar took Tanya and went to Uttaraโ€™s house. There they meet Yuvraaj. Sanskar decided to bring Uttara to their room so that she can explain everything to Swara. Uttara came to their house but Swara was not there so she decided to drop a letter for her. Swara opened that letter after returning and read it.
Now it is very important to say you everything. After returning from you Yuvraaj is very sad. He is saying that if he will not marry Tanya he will not return from America. I thought after bringing the child away from you, you will live happily. I thought after marrying Sanskar you will get back your lost love. After all one day he was your dream man. Tanya is not your daughter. Now do you have any problem? Will you spoil Yuvrajโ€™s life just to take revenge from Laksh bhai? Yuvraj is your son. I didnโ€™t feel like giving him to orphanage. I kept him in my house. After 5 years of marriage medical reports said that bhabi can never become a mother. After that I said everything to Laksh bhai and handed him Yuvraj. But Yuvraj donโ€™t know anything. He thinks that his mother left him with me and went. I also want to say something to Sanskar. I know you must never have said him that he is your Mr. Sweet.
Swara closed the letter.She hated herself for slapping her own son. She desired to hug him but now she can never do that.
She looked at her reflection in the mirror. She wiped her tears. She packed her own bags and went out. This world is very big. There are many children who are fighting for their life. There are many more unfortunate people than her. She will also live. But not for her. for others. For helpless children.
Today she aims to build the life of thousands illegitimate children. With this aim she was walking on Delhiโ€™s highway all alone. The sun rays was falling on her. The autumn season was bidding bye to her. She shadow led her way- but where is the end?

So guys how was the end? Hope I have proved that this is a pure Swara ff! ๏Š
How was the double dhamaka? The first dhamaka is that Yuvraj is swalakโ€™s son and the second dhamaka is that this chappy is the end.
Silent readers I want to make me feel your existence! Thank you everyone for your unflinching love and support. You all mean the world to me. I am nothing without you! ๐Ÿ˜‰
A new ff is coming soon!!! ๐Ÿ˜€
Love you all forever! ๐Ÿ˜‰

Credit to: JYOTII


  1. Dhara

    Sorry to say but didn’t like the end ๐Ÿ™ Swara still didn’t got her real happinness…

  2. anu

    Good.but i expected that ine whole life swara face so many problems.sanskar love wara.both are love each other but cannot but cannot express thier feelings.i hope there live together.

  3. ria

    i was literally crying how can anyone be so cruel to her. they all cheated her made her life miserable ๐Ÿ™

  4. Priya

    I was a silent reader but seeing ur end I got furious….I don’t like ur ending sorry to say but that’s the truth…this is not the appropriate ending for ur ff…maybe u can think its a correct end but not everyone… Pls. If u can give one more epi with good appropriate ending..let yuvaraj know about the truth..yuvi’s reaction..swara With all this come up with one more epi….

      • Priya

        I asking for one more epi…with yuvaraj coming to know the truth..his reaction..swara’s reaction hearing that yuvi came to know that she is her son…and many more happenings….pls. I request u to write a epilogue…

  5. Eva

    Jyotii…i think i hardly commented in this ff….but i never missed an episode of this ff….this was one of the best ff i have ever read…i loved all the part…Rain,Spring and Autumn….but everywhere Swara lost..everyone played with her…and her emotions..that’s sad…every story doesn’t have a happy ending…i would love to read some more of this ff….plz plz plz Jyotiii keep writing…and i will read your new ff for sure.. ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€

    • Jyotii

      Eva! Commenting is not a big deal! You are reading this n its enough for me. Thanks a lot for boosting my engery

    • Princess

      Hi Eva!! How are you?? Actually you are really an awesome author… And do read my stuff too and comment SAMJHOTA yah pyaar Swaragini

  6. liz

    Wow. Dis was. A heart touching ff. Painful.. Feeling bad for swara. Unpredictable one.. Nd different from typical ff’s.. Hope that one day YU write a ff like dis on ragini also since m a ragini fan.. It’s a request. ๐Ÿ™‚

  7. Suba

    Everyone deserves happiness in their lifes…. Same with swara you can’t leave the end just like that.. Even the same with sanskar…… Pls we need a happy ending. Like swasan union and they gets Tanya and yuvraj married….

  8. Aami

    i cant belive tht it ended…… really soooo much lve for swara……. evry one she loves just betrayd her……. adarsh bhay for cheap intension ovr her body…. laksh for also same n for a beautiful time pass lvr…. n we cant say tht sanskar betrayd her fully…. he jst covr the truth for her good bu jst hurt at last…..
    yes we can see sanskar lvd her soooo much…… but the swasan nevr united…… really sad for tht…….
    and jyoti i hve a rqst plz update n epilogue or smnthg… bcoz we r eagerly wyting to wht hpn nxt in the lyf of swara, sanskar, yuvraj, tanya n laksh…..

    hope u make it asusual lyk ur wondrful skill ????
    love u lotz….

  9. anshel

    i am always a silent reader nd i agree dat in reality ending mustnt be always happy bt plzzzzzzzzz i want a conclusive end can u just write an epilogue with all loose strings tied up ..plzzzz ….plzzz jyoti

  10. Shine

    Don’t get sad Jyotii. I liked the end. You prooved that this is a pure Swara ff. ๐Ÿ™‚
    But if Yuvraaj would have united wid her,it would have great but still this is good.

  11. Khamoshi

    Different and super ……l am a person reading ffs for stories not pairs ….so luved it …I HV NVR seen original swaragini serial….. Try to give an epilogue…… But life usually s not conclusive….wt next …z always mystery …something always left in complete….

  12. Swasan

    Never had thought this would be the ending. But please write an epilogue with happy ending.

  13. Jwala

    sorry yaar.. i didn’t like the ending.. it was an interesting ff.. but last part something is missing.. it is a swara ff not meant that she can’t live happily or she can’t have a family.. please give her some happiness.. don’t end it like this.. please.. it was my favorite ff.. please don’t destroy it by giving such an unpleasant ending

    • Jyotii

      From the beginning I had decided this end. Sorry to destroy ur interest in dis ff. But I am writing a happy ending.

  14. Jwala

    if you are really ending it please come with another ff with swara as lead please.. it is a request..

  15. Swati

    Jyotii it is very nice. I love this. Real life is like this . You have depicted emotions very well. N i am with you in this end. Love this nd U ๐Ÿ˜‰

    • Jyotii

      You r first one who fully agreed totally wid my end. Thanks a ton for understanding me!!??

  16. Laksh

    I am pissed off with this ending. Please make Swara happy. Write one more epi. Plzzzzz. A request. ๐Ÿ™

  17. Hannah

    The ending is good but you need an epilogue.. You don’t need to show swasan united or anything… But just like Swara is living happily rather than just wandering on the road.. Also unite Tanya and Yuvraj
    If you can write such a ff on Ragini also
    This is purely my opinion.. You can take it if you want ๐Ÿ™‚

    • Jyotii

      Swara had got an aim to build d future of many illegitimate children. Shez not wondering on street.
      I will definitely write one on Ragu!

  18. Priya

    I don’t like the end. But this is fav. ff. Don’t think that m bashing ew. I am just saying that its very sad. Please I want a happy ending.
    Dii don’t get disheartened. I love ew didu. ๐Ÿ˜‰

  19. ooohh dear life may itna struggle kare ke baad end may khushi jarur milti hai……plz yaar yaha end mat karo……swasan ko mila do……really disgusting end

  20. Meher

    Jyo, its too good. I love the end. Cuz from d ending you have said this will be a swara ff. I knew frm d bgng that Swara ll be alone at d end. But at the end Swara got an aim which is too good.
    Waiting for new ff.

  21. Tanya

    Noddy now I know you must be crying now.?
    Babby chillax!!!! You always say me to chill now its ur duty to say that.
    Baby we expected much from you and we were emotionally connected with this so we want a happy ending. You know Saba was also bashed like this. So please don’t feel bad.
    I love u my noddy?โค

    • Jyotii

      Big ears I knew you will always be with me!! I love uh too my Tani!!??
      N yes it hurts when a reader doesnot understand a writers POV but chill m not crying bcz m not so weak! I understood reader’s Pov n ll definitely try to satisfy dem!!

  22. Manisha

    Swara suffered a lot in her life and she deserves better in her life. If you want to end as Swara alone you can end it but atleast keep Swara happy.

  23. Priyanka

    Woowww. The most emotional ending that I have ever read.
    Jyotii I love this end nd this is my fav ff.
    Waiting for -For You!!!?

  24. I was so attached with this ff that I had never thought it will end like this. I m crying right now. Please do write one more part which ll be happy wala.???

  25. Nive...

    Jo you nailed it… its the real life … yeah you’re right its absolutely swara ff… I’m literally crying now… she didnt get any bliss in her life… till now i never read sad ending stories its my first one…Story will not end until it get happy endings… According to me its not the end, new begining of her life… ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ you justify your title… I loved the whole… ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

    • Nive...

      and yeah if you’re plan to write epilogue… thn dnt pair yuvi and tanya… bcz they e bro-sis… Its just my suggestion… decision is urs… ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

      • Jyotii

        But how are Tanya n Yuvraj bro n sis! Tanya is Ragsan’s daughter n Yuvi is swalak’s son!

  26. Thamiazh Magan

    U killed me. It’s a story of many girls in our society. Really shattered with the end which is not an end?

  27. bisha

    Devastating end! I though I wont comment but had to when I saw the end. ITs realistic and a very special story of many girls n ladies. The way you have described the 3 seasons and with that the journey of Swara’s life… i m out of words. U killed me agaiin

    But I really respect Swara’s final decision. Achha how did this story come to you? The idea is sooo very awesome. This Swara is a totally human character with pros n cons, good n bad parts- very very veryyy realistic story.

    I had guessed Yuvraaj to be SwaLak’s son. My guess came out true. But you know somewhere I found the final story had a lil just lil bit similaritywith the infamous Sheena Bora murder case. Dont mind I just felt. And you nailed. This Swara will surely remain etched in my mind. I will miss it soo soo much. Will miss you too :-* .
    Lotsss of hugs and kisses n chocolates (if u like) for you. I loved the end. It stung my heart. Probably you wanted this. U are successful then. I only wished Swara had understood Sanskar keeping her ego away. Huh!! *sighs* anyways keep it up. Keeep writing. Loadsss of love and waiting for the new story. TC

    • Jyotii

      Thanks for comenting so dat I could know ur reaction!
      Actually this is normally happening now a days! I thought to pin point those things whch r happening in our society butbus avoided by many. Before writing I had thought of d start n end! The middle part came to my mind while writing.
      Yes u had guessed it correct! Sorry but I don’t know about Shhena’s case in details.
      Why ll u miss me? I am coming wid a new ff. No i don’t like chclts cuz I luv it!??
      Again Thanks dear!!

      • bisha

        Tobe frank n true, this is your master piece dear. U totally nailed it.
        When your new story gonna start?

  28. sethooty

    Darling…love u love u….don’t know what to say…tears are rolling from eyes…this is the reality of our society.. Many girls cheated like this…in their marriage life also they didn’t get love, some people didn’t realised their love bz of ego….its a realistic ending…perfect u said she become
    a bold lady…its a bitter truth of life
    everytime we didn’t get roses , thorns are also there…evey character is well portrayed.. Especially Sanskar different shade… ..swara’s decision was absolutely rite…she didn’t ask any explanation.. And sanskar doesn’t deserve her..he give her everything but not love…
    We can’t simply say this is a fan fiction…its a unique piece….
    Thanku for this master piece …Dr…waiting for ur next dhamakka story…

  29. Aashi

    Jyotii….this journey was wonderful!…..
    Your ff was just brilliant…..I mean which kind of life it was??
    First Adarsh bhai lust!
    Then laksh betrayal n pregnancy!
    N how can they hide the truth that yuvraj was her child!…
    I just loved ur…..
    Gonna miss you dear! ?
    Loads of love…
    Do come back soon with a bang!!…

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