Rahul : Papa… Lavanya : Mama… (RagLak) Episode 32

Hello everyone your Dafsi is here with another pisode of my ff πŸ™‚ First of all I have to ask so many sorries. First one to make you cry or sad πŸ™ then the next one for not replying to your comments truest me just checked my comments and found it was more than 30 and I was on cloud 18 and the next sorry is for nah only that much sorries…ok ok here we go

Rahul : Papa… Lavanya : Mama… (RagLak) Episode 32

Flashback 17 years ago (No is thinking or narrating)

Ragini was sitting on the bed folding her leg crossed. She was wearing yellow t shirt with a short and hair tied in a messy bun and was closing her eyes and doing breathing exercise.
Swara : Ragini…
Ragini doesn’t respond.
Swara : Ragini…Ra…gi…ni
Ragini openes her eyes and gives a death glare to Swara.
Ragini : How many times have I told you not to disturb me while I’m excersing?
Swara makes a pout face and then laughs.
Swara : You look so cute when you laugh to be Mrs. Maheshwari.
Ragini suddenly get the though of Sanskaar.
Ragini : To be Mrs. Laksh Maheshwari. When you call me Mrs.Maheshwari Shona there is immense pain in my heart. (Swara looks at Ragini with a confuaed look) Don’t give me that look. I mean Swara when you say Mrs. Maheshwari it is so uncomfortable it reminds me of Sanskaar jeth.
Swara : Jeth?
Ragini : Haa Laksh’s older brother is jeth.
Swara : He is your fiance.
Ragini starts tearing.
Ragini : Shut up Swara, you are scaring me. I’m already fearing the fact that Laksh is going away from me and you are here scaring me.
Swara climbs up to the bed and hugs Ragini.
Swara : I was just joking baaba.
Ragini : I don’t know how will I live without Laksh.
Swara : Both of you will get together an it is a promise made by your best friend.

Scene shifts to MM, Sanskaar was sitting on the couch in Laksh’s room and Lalsh was busy writing the notes which he missed while went to Australia. He remembers him promising Ragini about telling their relationship.
Laksh : Sanskaar.
Sanskaar : Haa Lucky bolo
Just then Simran enters with a mug of coffee and a cup of tea. Laksh looks at Simran while Simran raises her eye brow asking ‘What’.
Laksh POV
I will somehow get the truth out of her mouth by asking cross questions.
Laksh’s POV ends
Laksh : Simran don’t you have any idea of getting married?
Laksh calls Ragini so that Ragini can hear it by herself.
Scene shifts to BM.
Ragini was sleeping on Swara’s lap.
Swara : How much do you love Laksh?
Ragini smiles.
Ragini : I love him so much that I can’t live without him. He is now my life Swara.
Swara : What made you love him so much Laado?
Ragini : ‘LAKSH’. Laksh in whole made me fall in love with him deep down. No particular reason, he has all the qualities of a good husband.
Swara : I’m so happy for you. You never even look at a guy but now…
Just then Ragini’s phone ring and a million dollar smile appear.
Ragini : Laksh.
She answers itand jumps out of the bed. Swara smiles looking at her.
Swara : Let her be happy forever. Go please don’t take away her happiness.

Ragini sits on the swing which out in Swara’s balcony.
Ragini : Hello.
Laksh doesn’t answer reply.
Simran : Marraige? Why should I marry now?
Ragini understands what is Laksh upti and signals Swara to come and she switches on the speakers.
Laksh : Why not? Ragini (Sanskar looks at Laksh as he took his bhabhi’s name so casually and Laksh motices it) I mean bhabhi.
Ragini grits her teeth stamps her feet.
Ragini murmmers : This idiot.
Simran : You don’t have to worry Laksh I’m staying single to give you company on your marraige.
Just then Ap enters.
Ap : Achcha Simran beta then we will have to find a boy for you.
Swara and Ragini looks at each other confusingly while Laksh and Sanskaar also looks at each other confusingly.
Simran : What do you mean?
Ap :Are Simran beta we have fixed our Laksh’s marriage too.
Laksh is shell shell shell shocked not because he got to know it but his life, his love heard and thinking of her he dropped his jaw to the ground. He caressed the bed to find the phone so that she won’t hear anything futher on the other hand Ragini and Swara just stood up in shock she just stepped back twice and again landed on the swing. Swara took the phone to her hand and tried to cut it but unfortunately phone gets stucked. Laksh couldn’t find the phone as he hid it in aplace where Simran coupdn’t find and he hid it in a hurry.(Actually guys these things are happening in split seconds)
Ap : Harini my friends doctor who is doing her medicine in Kolkata College. We had her in our mind for years to get her married to one of you two but her parents told let her finish studying. Two weeks ago both of the died in an accident and she is living alone.We have already spoke about the marraige with her relatives and even they accepted as it is not safe to keep a girl alone.
Laksh at last finds the phone and switches it off.

Laksh’s POV
Laksh what have you done? What might she go through? No I can’t let her shatter. Now what are you going to do? Think Laksh think.
Laksh’s POV ends.
Simran : Maami do you have her picture?
Ap turns.
Ap : Harini beta.
Harini enters with a grey kurti and black jean.
Simran : Good choice maamin (She then remembers Ragini) but Laksh (She stops realizing that no one knows about Ragini and Laksh other than her and even Laksh doesn’t know that she knows his realtionship)
Ap : I have promised her family and now she is my bahu. (She caresses Laksh’s hair) Sanskaar aur Simran both of you leave. Let Harini and Laksh speak and get to know each other.
Sanskaar : But ma you didn’t even ask his opinion.
Dp enters.
Dp : This marraige will hapoen at anycost Sanskaar. We didn’t ask your permission too.
Sanskaar and Simran leaves along with Ap and Dp.

Ragini goes in to the room like a dead body and sits on the bed.
Ragini : Did I hear it correctly?
Swara : Laado…
Ragini interrupts: I know Laksh will never go against his mother.
Swara : Ragini…
Ragini shows her hand and asks her to stop.
Ragini : I will speak with him first. I’m not ready to assume or shatter without asking him. I know he won’t go against his mother more than that I know my Laksh wil not leave me even if I ask him to.
Ragini didn’t shatter even a drop of tear suddenly she faints.
Swara shouts : Ragini

Scene shifts to SM.
Aditya : What are you telling?
Simran : Haa Adi I felt very bad for Laksh.
Aditya : Simran my intension is not to hurt anyone but to save. We love each other and know the pain of seperation. We have to join hands to unite Ragini and Laksh.
Simran : I’m always there with you Adi. I will speak with Laksh regarding this.
Aditya : You tell him but not everything, you know what I mean.
Simran : I know and I promise that I won’t utter it out.
Aditya smiles.
Aditya : Love you.
Simran : Love you too.

Scene shifts to MM, Harini is standing and Laksh is very uncomfortable he suddenly feels an immense pain in his heart. The thought of Ragini and her face was flashing ove and over. He gave a painful smile and gestured Harini to sit. Harini sits and she smiles.
Laksh : Harini I hope I can be honset with you. I am in love with another girl. (Harini is shell shocked) And I have promised that I will be with her forever.
Harini : I understand, I will tell aunty that I don’t like you.
She gives an assuring smile and Laksh sighs in relief.
Laksh : Thank you so much hope we can be friends.
Harini nods and forwards her hand Laksh forwards his hand. Both of them shake hands. Harini gets up and leaves.

Laksh takes out his phone and starts dialing Ragini’s phone and it says switched off. This makes Laksh panick.

Scene shifts to BM. Doctor check Ragini.
Doctor : Nothing to worry I think she is shocked seeing something or hearing something. Let her just rest and yeah it is better to let hear cry.
Doctor leaves while Sumi follows her. Swara sits beside Ragini amd caresses Ragini’s hair. Ragini gains consious and murmmers “Laksh”.
Swara : Relax Ragini, we will speak with him.
Just then Swara’s phone rings and the name displays as ‘Laksh’. Swara doesn’t answer but switches off the phone and makes Ragini sleep.

Scene shifts to MM. Harini gets downstairs and Ap comes out of the kitchen.
Ap : Beta did you finish speaking?
Harini : Nahi ma woh I think Laksh and I don’t get along well.
Ap : What do you mean beta it is the first day? You have to get friendly and then decide.
Harini : It is fine Ma
Harini starts tearing
Ap : Why are you crying beta? Don’t worry Laksh is the correct match for you. You are his wife, the perfect girl for him.
Harini : But Ma Laksh…
Ap interrupts : He would never go against me. I promise you beta.
Harini smiles in between her tears.
Harini : Maa I have an important work but I wilk surely come tomorrow.
She turns and smirks.
Flashback ends.

Present is shown.
Harini is smirking while going on phereses.

Screen freezes on Harini’s past and present smirking face.

TO BE CONTINUED…

There are so many unanswered questions in your comments and yeah my facebook name is Amy Zain (Dafsi) yeah if you are on Facebook and willing to chat with me personaly do messege me I mean send a request if you want πŸ™‚

Im feeling bad for not replyinhg to your comments and yeah most of you all have pleased me please dont plead me I got yelled from my friend for making you people sad and giving sad ff (actually she yelled at me I mean she is my live friend not online) she told that I made her cry Im sorry for making you cry and broke and here the replies for the comment πŸ™‚ as you are bored read this too πŸ˜‰

Halima di thank you so much for the comment and yeah you will get your answer in my next chappy for sure keep reading and supporting πŸ™‚ love you and take care

Asmitha you will know what happened in my next few chapters πŸ™‚ Keep reading and supporting

Hahah Riya Laksh loves Ragini so much or else I would have surely get you married to Laksh as you are my senior :p love you too buddy Im so happy to get a friend like you and yeah do keep supporting and reading πŸ™‚ πŸ˜‰

Thanks alot Ani and yeah everything will be answered on my next chapter keep reading and supporting and yeah it was my friends idea πŸ™‚

Lovely I see you commenting on other ffs and yeah but I rarely see you pleading trust me dear your comment really means alot to me cuz I always find itvlengthy on my ff which makes me happy keep reading and yeah do keep supporting πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

Nikky thanks for the comment and yeah you will get to know everything on my next chap and yeah keep reading and supporting πŸ™‚

Thank you thank you Ananya and yeah keep reading amd supporting πŸ™‚ you will know what happened on my next chap

OMG princess such long please?? Please dont plead as it is kinda uncomfy and yeah do keep reading and you will find what has happened : keep supporting

Neha dear so much of pleases thanks for commenting but please dont plead dear I will surely not disappoint you and yeah do keep reading and supporting πŸ™‚

Here the chap is Ammu and yeah you will have to wait for another to know what exactly happen do keep reading and supporting πŸ™‚

NITU (dunno whether you are reading or not) Im really really really sorry for making you angry Im sorry for making you worried and sad amd yeah dear it is very very hard to see Laksh with another girl and even I have no idea how Im managing to write this stupid ff and Im not at all worried or shocked for telling me you wont read my ff anymore And you have given me a mission (Mission making Nitu read) which simply means I have united RagLak very soon to make you read. And yeah for you I will surely do it keep reading and supporting love you so much Nitu my dear best buddy

J thnak you for commenting dear keep reading and supporting πŸ™‚

I know Sindhu di but this stupid people have no brain (Im basically scolding me lol) Di thanks for the comment keep reading and supporting me

Vavachi thwnk you so much for commenting πŸ™‚

And yeah anonymous the writers have gone crazy that they are playing the fool (I know Im crazy ) hehehe yeah thanks alot for the comment and yeah keep reading and supporting πŸ™‚

Yashu whyvso much of pleases πŸ™ you are making you di sad by pleading πŸ™ everything eill be okay and yeah you will.know what will happen on my next chap keep reading and supporting dear πŸ™‚ again no please and no thank you understood?

Thank you so much Nami for the comment and yeah even I felt sorry for hime but cant help he has to suffer because of me and yeah you will know what will happen in my next chap keep reading and supporting. πŸ™‚

Sueno (Im sorru for spelling it wrong) and you are my other pill trust me your comment really boosrs me as you told you read only my ff as raglak and yeah I know no one can love like Laksh do keep reading and supporting. πŸ™‚

Keep reading dear you will know what will happen Amy thanks for the comment

NITU again you πŸ™‚ amd yeah baaaba I promise that in mext chap I will surely unite them (let it be our secret) and yeah actualpy I have no idea how Im writing its just because of you guys Im writing like this your encouragement is my strength(i know it sounded dramatic but its the truth)

Eba I wont do that not even in my dreams so dont worry keep reading and supporting πŸ™‚

Thanks for the comment Piya and yeah I know u are still in a high point as it is still unanswered what happened so please keep reading amd supporting πŸ™‚

Hahahaah me myself is jealouse of Ragini lol I know thanks for rating and loving my ff it really means alot to mean and yeah Im continuing it and will talk about it on my next chap and a sorry for testing you patiemce but I love making others curious so please have patience until tomorrow πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

At last found one who understands me very well hats off for you for understanding this complicated Dafsi (That was told by my bestie) and thank alot Zuha for commenting and supporting I mean really supporting dear keep reading πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

Thank you thank you so much Sofia for you apreaciation it really means alot for me than you keep reading and supporting πŸ™‚ thank you

Thank you thank you so much S Priya for you comment it realky means alot to me do keep reading and supporting πŸ™‚

And Rino you already got my reply :p shona at last your pleading is over (she asked me to send the story personally so she can read πŸ˜‰ actually she is my bestei guys I mean I and she are friends I mean we meet)love you so much shona my bff πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

Im sorry for making you cry and yeah you wikl know what happened exactly on my next chapptly keep reading and supporting πŸ™‚

Rabia yeah Im on fb and have already give you my name on top please do check and yeah thank you much for your lengthy comment. Your cimment really meant alot to me and yeah thanks alot and as a RagLakian it is just a small treat for you guys hehehe thanks keep reading and supporting πŸ˜‰ πŸ™‚ I will tell you my writing secrets once we starts chatting on fb :p lol and thanks again

I will surely not do it and yeah keep reading and supporting thanks alot for the comment πŸ™‚ @Maha

thank you thank you so much for the comment and yeah do keep reading and supporting you will have to wait to know what exactly happen on my next chappy πŸ™‚ πŸ˜‰ sowwy for making you cry πŸ™ @spp

Ughhh at last over commenting Im realky tired commenting than writing my epsidoe thanks alot guys for the comment if I have missed anyone sorry and Im sorry fir the typos and yeah thank you silent reader and yeah do keep reaidng and supporting

Link for my previous episode
http://www.tellyupdates.com/rahul-papa-lavanya-mama-raglak-episode-31/

47 comments

    • Dafsi

      |Author

      Thank you so much for the comment and yeah do keep ryeah you are right πŸ™‚ :)eading and supporting πŸ™‚

  1. SPP

    |Registered Member

    It’s OK DEAR
    So what to going to happen next
    Really excited for the next one
    Waiting for the next one………
    And yeah don’t forget u said u will upload next part of She Is The One

    • Dafsi

      |Author

      Bthank you so muchf or the comment and yeah Im sorry for not uploading she is the one but was really busy with this ff and other stuffs and yeah do keep reading and supporting πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

  2. lovely

    hahah nice observation dear, my comment length is limited to 2-3 words but when it’s come to your ff I’m completely in different world

    your story is a amazing like suspense thriller!! I want to read more and more, excited to know the reason for lavanya shocking face, post next part asap( we need long part)

    • Dafsi

      |Author

      Hahaha yeah Im a good observer. And yeah Im so happy that you really like my ff πŸ™‚ do keep reading and suppoeting dear and yeah thank you so much for the comment πŸ™‚ πŸ˜€

  3. princess

    hi dafsi i have all your ff’s i.e rahul-papa-lavanya-mama and i love it .i am eagerely waiting for your next update.i m not that princess whom u r thinking.i think this dr.harini is a -ve character .By the way my name is jahnavi.first time i have given to u r ff i.e ep;31.

    • Dafsi

      |Author

      Ohh hi Jhanvi and yeah maybe you are right maybe your gussing wrong so keep reading and supoorting dear and yeah thanks alof for the comment πŸ™‚

  4. Yashasvi

    |Registered Member

    hey dii understood…………..no thxx n srry in frdship , ohhhhh harini is villian, i hope lavanya n adi will stop the marriage
    bt actually 1 ques is in my mind that is lavanya adi n ragini’s daughter or adi n simran’s daughter
    actually as adi is shown i think he’s positive!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  5. Ananya

    Shit no!! This harini i will kill her.. Like literally.. She is uhhhh.. Cant even say what do i feel about her right now.. Btw.. Great and emotional episode!! Keep the great work up as you always do

    • Dafsi

      |Author

      Thank you so much for the comment and yeah it was really hard for me to write the chap but I hardly wrote it and yeah keep reading and supporting πŸ™‚ thank you

  6. Rafeee

    |Registered Member

    u r makng me emotional n cry dats why only i didnt read ur last 2 parts… during ramzan tym also i always thnk abt ur ff….plz plz unite raglak… or tell me the chap wen wil u unite them …. then i ll continue ur ff…. plz plz i beg u

    • Dafsi

      |Author

      Next chap is the chap which I will be uniting them and yeah Im really really really sorry for making you so much worried πŸ™ Im realy a ery bad writer Im sorry

  7. Akshata

    |Registered Member

    so harini is doing all this intentionally….. this ff is becoming interesting day by day. i am so curious to know, the reason behind lavanya’s shocked face. Dafsi ur an amazing writer……:)

    • Dafsi

      |Author

      Yup she did everything intentionly πŸ™ yeah you wil get to.know what happened once raglak is united πŸ™‚ πŸ˜‰ keep reading and supporting πŸ™‚ thanks alot for calling me an amazing writer it realky means alot πŸ™‚

    • Dafsi

      |Author

      Thanks alot for the comment and yeah next part will uploaded as soon as possible thank you so much keep reading and supporting πŸ™‚

  8. roshni

    hi ……….I know I didn’t commented I guess only in 2 epi I commented………..I couldn’t read after 18………so I read all epi…….trust me its out of the world………….I usually don’t comment will be silently reading………..but today after reading all missed epi couldn’t control ur really blessed with talent of writing…………..I loved the way u described each things……..each character the way u portray is mind blowing…………here on wards I will try my level best to comment ……………but trust me I will read it for sure…………..its my one of the best ff……..love u lots………….

    • Dafsi

      |Author

      Thank you so much Roshini Im so happy that you commented hahaah even you are not less dear even you have the talent of writing stries in avgood flow and yeah thanks alof for the comment πŸ™‚ keep reading and supporting πŸ™‚ πŸ˜€

  9. Neha

    Hai dafsi..another great update by a great writer..i think in feauture, you will be the female version of chethan bhagath..honestly dear,you have great writing skills…you perfectly potered all characters,there relationship and emotions…everything is there..pure,unconditional love btwn raglak,love nd care of raglak with there children, friendship btwn swaragini, brother’s love btwn sanlak…a perfect family story..may the spark in you lead u to a great writer..may god bles u and next part jaldy post karna..iam waiting 4 it

    • Dafsi

      |Author

      Hello Neha trust me you comment made my day trust me Im a big big a very big fan of Chetan Bhagath actually he has a speacial place in my heart cuz I always love his stories and very much impressed with his writing and story skills and when I saw youvtelling me Im gonna be hisbmale version no and never Im not even sure of being his minor version and male version I can’t even believe anywas thank you so kuch for comparing me with such a great writer I usually go on clouds for readers comparing me with telly update writers and you have done something which I never ever expected and I dont know whether I deserve it anyways keep reading and supporting love you πŸ™‚ πŸ˜€

  10. Nami

    |Registered Member

    Again u ended it with a lot of suspense. But it was awesome. Harini is doing it intentionally. She wants to get married to laksh. Poor raglak

    • Dafsi

      |Author

      Im sorry for ending it again on a suspense and yeah all the suspenses will be answered later on once RagLak is united. πŸ™‚ until then keep reading and supporting πŸ˜€

  11. SueΓ±o

    OMG!!!!! Y do I hv ths feeling tht ths hating s a villain n she s dng n hs been dng during hr pregnancy smethng to ragini so tht she vl nt b alive o jus b coma…….. oooo ……. lets see. …. hope our ragini wakes up soon……. ???? I jus love laksh in ths.. ah!!!! In serial toh thy don’t giv much imp to his n rag character bt in ths ff toh wow!!!!! Awemse yaar……..
    Love ya….. tke care??

    • Dafsi

      |Author

      Thankvyou so much for the comment keep reading and supporting and yeah dear maybe you are right maybe you are wrong but what you have to do is have patience πŸ™‚ hehehe even I wish to see the same Laksh in serial being a RagLakian and now you would understand what kind of RagLak I want in the serial πŸ˜€

  12. Lol

    |Registered Member

    I didn’t quite understood this chapter . What is wrong with Harini??? I don’t understand this whole chapter . Is it possible for u to explain ??

    • Dafsi

      |Author

      Yeah sure actually this is what happened in the past Harini was proposed to Laksh. And now it shows she is the villain of the drama both in past and the presnt that is what she smirking in both past and present hope you understand πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

  13. rabia

    I am sooo much excited to know what would happen next ☺ this was a complete surprise for all your fans a bit upset as couldn’t get much raglak scenes in this part hahaha as u know it is our doze ?
    I am sooo glad that u replied to my comment and yeah one more thing when you don’t upload new part for us then I become so angry ?? that I start reading the previous chapters again ?? hahaha and now I am on epi 6??
    Love u and your story so much?

    • Dafsi

      |Author

      Ohhh Im sorry for disappointing you dear and yea on my mext update onwards there would be RagLak scenes for sure hahaha I like the way you show you anger πŸ˜‰ unlike some people who bash and yeah love you too and take care keep reading and supporting πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

  14. Zuha Fatima

    |Registered Member

    Firstly a BIG SORRY for being late as to find Swaragini FFs is a thing like IMPOSSIBLE and if really want to search you need a lot of patience and time which I don’t have that also in Ramadan ?? So sorry Dafsi I just found ur FF in Recent comments and hurriendly read it, before it is too late ? Well HARINI??? Leave her, the Episode was awesome??And I wonder why no Present but after reading the FB I was shell-shocked so I wonder that if there was present then I must be sitting holding my heart ??? Nice update!

    And no need to thank me for understanding you, coz actually I am the person who isn’t able to understand herself?????????? Well A big hug to you {I seriously don’t know why but still}

    And Love you dear ??

    Regards,
    Zuha Fatima.

    • Dafsi

      |Author

      Hahahaha lol such a big commentand yeah I understand cuz even I fast and yeah presnt and past will be continued on my next chappy πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚ maybe you are busy baking and doing other stuff πŸ˜‰ or just sitting and typing ffs like whatever lol I know even you are a writer and very busy gald I found the you liked it and yeah do keep reading and supporting hehehe a bg tight hug (Dont imagine me as fat perosn Im really skinny) and yeah live you too πŸ™‚ πŸ˜‰ πŸ˜‰

    • Dafsi

      |Author

      Zuha you scared me was it a yell (actualluly I heard a yelling voice ) I know Ik crazy tho I must tell that you are realky a very goof commenter and Im 101% sure of your writing skills it would be simply superb and yeah I forgot to tell if you are the one who is in the dp you are really pretty masha allah and if its not you whoever it is is pretty πŸ™‚

      • Zuha Fatima

        |Registered Member

        Did I yelled? I don’t know? Well yeah I am in the DP and thanks for both compliments! U are such a cutie pie?
        Love u to the moon and back?

        -Zuha Fatima

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  16. Ammu

    First of all plz update next part sooooon.
    And plz dont get laksh married to harini.,plz stop it.i just can’t see laksh with some body else. Plz, plz, plz…… No body else have rights to be called as MRS LAKSHYA MAHESHWARI.this right is reserved only to RAGINI.plz update soon.plz,plz,plz…………….

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