Rahul : Papa… Lavanya : Mama… (RagLak) Episode 25

Hello everyone Dafsi here I’m sorry for not able to upload yesterday as I was busy with the other ff. To be hones I don’t get much comments for my other three ff I dont know why. But the fault is totaly mine as I started at least to that one person who is interested in it I have to upload as I started it πŸ™‚ Can’t help..Kk and here we go

Rahul : Papa… Lavanya : Mama… (RagLak) Episode 25

The episode starts with the judge giving the judgement. Laksh has crossed his fingers
Judge : It clearly shows that the child doesn’t want leave her forester parents. Also we can tell that it was probably because she was staying without her parents. As her biological father Aditya has his right to take the child and the court decides to give the biological father a chance to prove that he can handle the child’s both physical and mental fitness for six months.
Laksh and Lavanya are shell shocked.
Laksh : Six months?
Judge : As the child would psycologically crash down I ask her forester parents to explain her situation and make her realize her right also if she needs your support to accept her biological parent you have to cooperate with them. If in this six months if the child gets any kind of harm or if she is insecure before the due time she will be sent back to her forester parents.After the six month if the child accepts her biological parent and her cusdody will be given to her biological father. It is the court’s order.

The court gets dismissed. Lavanya comes running to Laksh and Laksh forwards his hands. Before Lavanya could reach Aditya carries her and walks out Laksh runs behind him and stops Aditya.
Laksh : You can’t take away my child. I know this six months are not going to change anything.
Aditya : Laksh hope you heard what the court has ordered.
Sanskaar comes and holds Laksh’s shoulder while Aditya takes Lavanya walks to his car. Lavanya keeps hitting Aditya. Laksh runs and holds Aditya’s legs.
Laksh : Six months are too much I don’t how will she manage without me after all I don’t know how will I be without her. Think about Ragini for once, she won’t bear this. You can’t take her.
Aditya stops.
Aditya : Okay I will let her be with you only until Ragini’s delivery as I don’t want my child to be blamed for any reason.
Aditya leaves Lavanya down and Lavanya hugs Laksh really tight.
Aditya gets in the car and goes. He sees them hugging through the side mirror

Aditya’s POV.
I have to somehow do this for her betterment.
Aditya’s POV ends

Ragini and Lavanya reach MM. Ragini and Swara were sitting on the couch along with the other kids. Lavanya rushes to Ragini and hugs her.
Swara : What happened?
Swara and Ragini along with the kids look on. Laksh has tears in his eyes and is unable utter anything. He turns and hugs Sanskaar. As a father it was very hard for him to accept the truth. All of them understands that something has really not gone well.
Ragini : Tell me what happened.
Laksh breaks the hug and runs upstairs as he was feeling dizzy and doesn’t want anyone to get worried anymore for him. Sanskaar explains everything what happened in the court. Ragini wipes Lavanya’s tears. She sits and makes Lavanya sit beside her.
Ragini : Beta who’s daughter are you? Laksh Maheshwari’s. Can you be weak? Don’t worry just six months and then you will come back. I promise that I and your papa will meet you everyday and speak with you every night. Don’t shatter my doll you have to be strong.
She hugs Lavanya and Lavanya hugs her back. Ragini breaks down. They cry rememberig their memories. Laksh reaches Sanskaar’s room and searches for the medicine. He finds it out and drinks it. He sits on the couch and all the words spoke by the judge echoes. He throws the vase and grits his teeth. By that time Sanskaar reaches his room and control Laksh. He vaccinates Laksh and makes him asleep. He caresses Laksh’s hair.

Flashback 17 years ago (No one is narrating or thinking)

Swara and Ragini turns and gets shocked.
Ragini : Laksh you shocked us.
Laksh : Sorry
Laksh grins.
Swara : How did you get in passing all the securities? I’m impressed.
Ragini looks at Swara and Swara winks back.
Ragini : Are you joking Laksh? If you would have got caught I don’t know even whether they will keep you alive.
Laksh : Shshshshshsh, I came here for my life. There is no way I will get caught.
Ragini hugs him.
Ragini : Thank god you came safely. What happened to the dog near my balcony?
Laksh : I gave it some chill pill chicken.
Ragini breaks hug.
Ragini : Chicken? You touched chicken?
Laksh : Yeah and you hugged me.
Ragini jerks away while Laksh laughs.
Laksh : I had to put it in the evening so on the way to home after shopping I put it and went home had a wash and came.
Swara : I’m impressed again.
Both RagLak look at Swara who had her lower lip curled and then both of them look at each other. Ragini raises her left eyebrow while Laksh raises his left, right and then left eyebrow ( Just like the way they did in the serial).
Ragini : Swara…
Swara : I don’t want chill pills, I will go out.
Ragini : I can never put youin trouble stay here. I and Laksh will go to the dressing room. (There is room for Ragini which is like her wadrobe with all the branded clothes, shoes, perfumes, bags etc attached to her room) Okay?
Swara nods with cute smile. Ragini and Laksh goes in. Swara smiles looking at them. Ragini closes the door and Laksh hugs her from the back. Ragini blushes. Laksh makes her turn and makes her look at his eyes. Her face was shining for the moon light. She had worn a pink t shirt and a navy blue three quarter where Laksh had worn a white t shirt and brown three quarter. Both of the share and intense eyelock. Laksh slowly takes her hand and removes the thread he tied.
Ragini : What are you doing? Don’t tell me you came here to tell me that to forget you and move on in my life with your brother Laksh I will surely break your legs.
Laksh gulps and then laughs softly looking at Ragini’s tearing glittering eyes. Laksh puts his hand to his pocket and takes out a velvet box. Kneels down.
Laksh : I know the background is not good, neither you are in a gown nor I am in a suit but I have no option as I have convince my jaan before the day end. So meri jhansi ki rani will you accept this handsome hunk Laksh Maheshwari as your better half and let me bear all your torture and trouble forever with pleasure?
Ragini gets teary. She smiles among her tears and nods her head as she is out of words. Laksh makes her wear a simple ring which RagLak is carved. She awestruck.
Laksh : Do you like it?
Ragini kneels down and holds his cheeks. Happiness could be clearly visible through her eyes. It was clearly showing that she was on cloud 18 or 36. Laksh takes out another velvet box and hands her. Ragini opens and finds the male version of her ring.
Ragini : Laksh…
He forwards his hand and Ragini makes him wear it.
Laksh : Is my princess convinced?
Ragini shakes her head. Laksh looks at her confusingly. She hugs him tightly without leaving a space in between them. Laksh hugs her back really tight.
Ragini : I’m the luckiest girl on the earth. You are a gift from the god Laksh.
Laksh breaks the hug and wipes her tears and pecks her forehead and shakes his head.
Laksh : You are my lucky charm Ragini.
Laksh sits there and rests his back on the wall while Ragini sits beside him and rests her head on his chest. Laksh takes her into a tight embrace and Ragini hugs him back. He kisses on her head and rests his head on hers.
Ragini : I wish the time stops like this forever.
Laksh :I don’t wish.
Ragini : Why?
Laksh : I want live with you, I want explore the world with you. I have alot to acheive with you, I want to fights with you, surprise you, love you mre, care you more, give the happiness you deserve and more, fulfill your dreams, to have an ugly choti Ragini and handsome choti Laksh. If you want another ugly…
Ragini interrupts : Laksh am I ugly?
Laksh : Haven’t you seen your face? (He fumes) Btw let me continue, I want to play with my kids, fight with them, enjoy with them, give them the happiness and love they deserve and more,I want to grow old with you and then want to play with my grand children. If the time stops how am I suppose to do this things
Ragini : Mr. Laksh Maheshwari from when did you start dreaming? I never knew you have these kind of dream.
Laksh : Just now when you told that the time should stop.
Ragini smiles and looks at Laksh and both of them share an intense eyelock. They lean towards each other that they could feel each other’s breath. Ragini closes her while Lalsh comes more closes to her lips. When he was about kiss Ragini sneezes and Laksh moves behind. Ragini keeps sneezing for three or four times.
Laksh : What a timing? Are you okay?
Ragini while scratching her nose nods. Laksh drags her to his embrace and she cuddles up. Both of them speak some random stuff and doze off.
Flashback ends

Lavanya was resting her head on Ragini’s chest. Swara comes with food.
Ragini : Has Sanskaar and Laksh returned?
Just then Laksh enters his room. His eyes are sinked in with a red circle on it, face has gone pale and bones could be clearly vissible. He sits beside Ragini and drags Lavanya and keeps him on the lap and she rests her head on his chest. Sanskaar also enters.
Sanskaar : It seems like they won’t eat without Lavanya.
Swara : At least this Sandya and Sandesh should have brain and manage the other two.
Sanskaar : All four of them are really upset. Come baby let’s have dinner.
Sanskaar carries Lavanya and goes down. Swara follows him. Ragini rests her head on his lap.
Ragini : Another two days only she will be with us right? (She starts sobbing) I can’t live without her Laksh.
Laksh is lost in his own world and doesn’t hear whatever Ragini is speaking. Ragini starts shaking and Laksh comes back to his senses.
Ragini : I think you are tired, go get changed. (Laksh nods and goes to the wadrobe he take out the clothes and turns to leave the room.) Laksh where are you going?
Laksh abit rudely : Washroom.
Ragini shocked.
Ragini : Washroom? But its inside the room why are you leaving out?
Laksh : I know where is the washroom.
He walks to the washroom. He comes out after a little while. Ragini was arranging the bed, Laksh goes out and sits on the cane chare with his hair wet.
Ragini : Laksh you will get sick if you stay out in the cold with your hair wet. Are you okay Laksh? Come in.
Laksh is not able to hear her. Ragini goes and drags him. Laksh gets angry and jerks her away.
Laksh shouts : I’m fine..
Ragini gets shell shocked. Just then Sanskaar and Swara enter their room. Ragini holds her stomach and sits on the bed screams with pain. Laksh comes back to his senses and shouts “Ragini”. He is unable to move everything goes blur and he falls down while Sanskaar holds him. Ragini shouts “Laksh” and she holds her stomach really tight and cries. Ap and Dp enter their room. Ragini faints while Swara holds her.

Screen freezes on the unconcious faces of Ragini and Laksh.

TO BE CONTINUED…

Gracy Goswami – Lavanya
Shivanash Kotia – Rahul

Faisal Khan – Sandesh
Navika Kotia – Sandya
Ruhana Khanna – Sawitha

Shakti Arora – Aditya
Radhika Madan – Simran
Preetika Rao – Dr. Harini

Thanks alot for your valuable comments and yeah and not to forget the silent readers for sparing there time it would be really helpful if you could comment…And yeah I have reached the episode 25 and it is simply just simply because of all of you and your support thank you so much for appreciating my work and supporting and I dont know how to payback πŸ™‚ I got some personal messeges too and thank you if I have not replied its probably I wouldn’t have seen it and yeah if I see I will reply for sure…Thanks for the concern love and support thank you so much and yeah love you and take care..

Do comment telling how was my promo and spoiler and yeah do comment about how my track is going on? Good, bad, boring or interesting??

Link for my previous episode and promo

http://www.tellyupdates.com/rahul-papa-lavanya-mama-raglak-episode-24/
http://www.tellyupdates.com/rahul-papa-lavanya-mama-raglak-promo-spoiler/

39 comments

  1. ???...

    It was superb and I hope nothing happens to laksh lol the same hope and yh plz update the next part soon willl be waiting ??

    • Dafsi

      |Author

      Thank you so much for the comment and yeah keep reading and hoping πŸ˜‰ yeah Ill upload it as soon as possible (hehehe which means tomorrow)

  2. lovely

    hope they are safe,dafsi you are really doing great job dear, all your stories are awesome

    proud to be raglakian, I’m huge fan of raglak but after reading your stories I’m loving them more

    • Dafsi

      |Author

      Yeah keep reading and supporting like this lovely..Im happy that you loved my ffs and yeah thanks alot for telling my work is a great job it really means alot to me…I know RagLak rocks!!

  3. Spp

    awesome superb emotional one
    Dafsi u just nailed it to day as usual
    hope Laksh gets well
    will be waiting for the next one as usual…………….

    • Dafsi

      |Author

      Thank you thank you so much your comment made my day and yeah I will post it as soon as possible keep reading and supporting πŸ™‚ thanks alot for the continous support

    • Dafsi

      |Author

      Thank you so much for the comment haha its fine ‘great’ is more than enough πŸ™‚ amd yeah keep reading and commenting πŸ™‚

  4. nikky

    plzz next part soon and plzz save lakshya don’t let him die so that he can fight for lavanaya

    • Dafsi

      |Author

      Ill upload it as soon as possible and yeah kep reading to know what is gonna happen thanks alot for the comments πŸ™‚

    • Dafsi

      |Author

      Thank you so much Ammu for your continous support happy that you loved all my ffs πŸ™‚ keep read ling and supporting πŸ™‚

    • Dafsi

      |Author

      Thank you so much for the comment and the continous support and yeah keep reading to know what is gonna happen πŸ™‚ πŸ™‚

  5. Priya15

    |Registered Member

    Di di….first of all sorry cant cmnt n ur 3ff…as busy with studies…but trust me all the three was nyc . but i m bit sad that u said u l ragini n ragvi n 8 epis…hope u l be back with one more raglak and ragsan..

    Di i have written one os..you changed me..pls do read it if u r free…

    • Dafsi

      |Author

      Ohh you dont have to be sorry Priya and thanks for calling me di it really made me feel happy I dont have a younger sister not even younger cousin sisters you calling me di made me feel happy I dont know why btw thanks alot for the comment and yeah I read you OS it was so awesome and yeah I will try my best to come up with another ff πŸ™‚

      • Priya15

        |Registered Member

        Tq di……haha actually i have that much of sisters and brothers……we can make a lorry for them……i mean cousins and here in tu page sisters like u

    • Dafsi

      |Author

      Hahah πŸ™‚ I do have but either they are older or my age…If they are even a year younger they do call me with my name πŸ™‚ heheh yeah there are alots of friends and sisters in this site πŸ™‚ you are so cute just like your story a big bone crushing sissy hug for you Priya

      • Priya15

        |Registered Member

        Ya di i l be cute as i have a cute sis like u………big big teddy bear hugs to u too di……

    • Dafsi

      |Author

      Thank you for the comment Nami and yeah I have already posted it hope telly updates posts it soon and yeah keep reading and commenting πŸ™‚

  6. SueΓ±o

    Uiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!! I don’t hv words damn emotional???
    I jus lovd it tooo…….. nxt chap soon plz??

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  8. hema

    OMG i jus liked it.sooooooooooooo amazing pls update early. i’m waiting for yours nxt update

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