Ragsan ff – REALITY (intro and episode 1)

Hello friends this is Amna presting you a story which deals with reality which happens with common people. Telling a little about myself , l am student og class 11th from north india(pls do tell me if thier is any north indian here as l have hardly seen any north indian on this site). I like reading books of any type from Shakespearee , byron to indian writer’s like tagore, premchand etc.
in this one I want to show a story of common middle class people.
this story will be sett in a time twenty five to thirty years back from present as the atmosphere which l want in the story could not be imagined in today’s worls. A time when india was going through a great change both socially When people wanted to adopt modern ways but also did not wanted to laeve thier tradional ways. When people wanted educated girls for thier sons but then too taunted her for her studies in house hold works. WAnted to make thier children eductaed but then too didn’t let them to decide for their life.
NOTE -THIS STORY WILL BE TOLD FROM THE HERO ( SANSKAR) PERSPECTIVE.

EPISODE 1

The piercing voice of Tablas and dholaks which are being played without any rhythm and taal by women folks of neighborhood and relatives were reaching people’s ear. Then suddenly their voices stop hearing voices of gays whom have come clapping their hand and shouting “ are lalla apne ladka ka biyah kr diya hme bulaya bhi nahi”. ( this is reality we don’t know who informs them but they always comes to know of such functions and then forces us to give them money.)
I tried to make myself believe but then too couldn’t believe that today is my suhaagraat (wedding night).

It seems that all the world know about this. The boy who always gave slogan that the country needs brave people has got married and destroyed his life. Does anyone believe that the Sanskar who could not be stopped by any hurdles is trying to ignore his friends and relatives because of that marriage. They will ask me stupid questions “did you liked the bride?” “ oh give us sweets of your marriage” “you didn’t took us in your baraat”. Oh god please save me from this world!!
I finally avoiding these people I reached the temple to get some piece. Resting my head on the big pillars of temple , I srated thinking how my family destroyed my whole life in a month. But in their pov they were doing a great thing providing maa a new bahu , bhabhi a new house keeper and Uttara a new companion. But what about me , I never wanted to get married. I wanted to finish my studies first but no their need for a new bahu was much more important then that.

RECAP-CONTINUE WITH HIS THOUGHTS

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Credit to: Amna

17 comments

  1. Amna

    THAK YOU SO MUCH FOR THIS WARM RESPONSE. I HAVE SUBMITTED NEXT ONE NOW IT WILL BE PUBLISHED SOON.

  2. azure

    interesting…..so poor guy feels trapped….one correction for future dear…dont feel bad for me saying this…i think u meant eunuch or transgender or hijra there right? not gays

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