RagLak- unnamed story

On our favourite bridge of SwaRagini…

They both are standing.

“Ragini, I love you truly. I can’t be far from you. accept me plz..”

Laksh says holding her soft hands.

But Ragini is looking at him expressionless. she is not smiling or crying.

Her eyes don’t have tears or courage.

But stubbornness.

“Ragini.. speak something..” Laksh raises his hand and touches her shoulder.

Now, Ragini closes her eyes. “Ragini..” Laksh jerks her gently again.

Now, Ragini opens her eyes which are red which may be symbolic to hurt, hatred or anything.
Laksh amazes.

Ragini places her hand on his chest and uses all her force and pushes Laksh.

“aaaa…Ragini..” shouts Laksh.

Laksh falls in river, Ragini turns back and start walking away.

Screen freezes on the expressionless Ragini’s face.

To be continued….

^Hi friends, This is just random idea i got. I will continue all my ffs after this month ending. Just i was excited to share this new part.^

suggest me any titles.

46 comments

  1. Ammu

    OMG it’s interesting start dear and Ragini push Laksh into river. Eagerly waiting for next episode

  2. Bela

    Bela

    |Registered Member

    The first line actually cracked me up.
    ‘On our favorite bridge of SwaRagini’ πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚πŸ˜‚

    But I am now totally curious. Is it related to the serial? Or is it a new story altogether?

  3. IME

    IME

    |Registered Member

    Awesome dii
    post nxt soon
    And titles i am very bad in suggesting title!!
    so i wont
    sorry for that

  4. Akshata

    Akshata

    |Registered Member

    you killed your favorite laksh????? while using my favourite ragini????? and our favorite raglak got separated????? becoz of you?????? how could you????? how dare you????? have you forgot that they are our raglak?????
    ja kattiiiiii….. you made me cry….. i wont talk to you…. why??? astra why??? tell me this is just our nightmare nothing else. tell me fast…….

    • Astra

      Astra

      |Author

      oh my drama queen.. cool down cool down… even i don’t know why ragu haspushed lucky.. hmm, i have to ask her… till then…
      wait..
      sabar ka phal meetha hota hei… hehe
      😜

  5. Asra

    Asra

    |Registered Member

    awesome astu dear…Our favourite swaragini bridge…that make me soo curious to read thz dear….it’s related to serial or not dear….waiting for ur updates….tkcr dear…

  6. AimRagLak

    AimRagLak

    |Registered Member

    Astru are you finally fulfilling my wish?writing a raglak story from Ragini’s POV which is based on the main story??😭😭😭

    • Astra

      Astra

      |Author

      hhmmmm, you know. i just wrote my random idea. even i don’t know what to do next.. but, i will satisfy your wish dear..

  7. Darshini

    Darshini

    |Registered Member

    Sry asthu for being late..omg Ragu pushed laksh…
    Y dear bcz u r missing d bridge u can’t kill our lucky na…nt fair…i knw u can’t harm our raglak…so waiting for the next updte..hehe!!tc…

Before submitting a comment, please be sure it meets our comment guidelines.

Before submitting a comment, please be sure it meets our comment guidelines.