(RagLak) Storm of love- part 5

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/* this will be big episode guys..!*/
Storm of love 5

The train reaches the village they have to get down. Ragini is struggling to lift the bag.
Laksh: arey teju ji, mein hu naa..! I will get the luggage, you please go down..
Ragini: no. I can take them.
Laksh: how can I see when my girl…

Ragini glares at him, ‘ahh..?’

Laksh: I mean, when a girl is taking heavy luggage, it’s not good. according to our culture we have to respect woman..!

Ragini holds her hands and listens to him, ‘ahan..! ok then..!!’ she removes back pack from her shoulder and gives it to Laksh.
Ragini: bring that big suitcase also Mr. Namish..!

Ragini goes away laughing. Laksh looks at all the heavy luggage in fear.

Sujatha: where is this Nami..??

Then they see Laksh coming with two bags in his two shoulders, two suitcases in his two hands.

Ram: nami, why are you bringing them all..? we talked a porter right..! Teju beta, didn’t you tell him..?

Laksh looks at Ragini in confusion, Ragini shows her tongue to him. Laksh narrows his eyes.
Later they all reach to their guest houses.
Teju(Ragini gets a separate room). Ragini comes to her room holding her luggage. She opens the door and shocks..!!

Laksh is sitting in a rotating chair.

Ragini: what are you doing here..? this is my room..?

Laksh: is miss. Teju is a princess..? why she need a separate room..? even, I need to share my room with my snoring brother..!

Ragini: for peaceful ness..!

Laksh with question mark face says:: peacefulness..??

Ragini looks at window:: yes..!! Do you know what happens when you are alone..??

Laksh naughtily:: yes, what happens..?

Ragini glares at him. He turns his face.

Ragini: when you are alone, the thoughts awake, the mind gets relaxed…
She opens the window, cool wind comes and that even touches Laksh. He keeps looking Ragini mesmerized. Ragini breaths that air deeply closing her eyes.

Ragini continues: then series of poetry comes… it leads us to keep pen on the book… then..then…
Laksh is moving his head up and down to listen what she will say next. She stops telling and looks at him.

Ragini: so, I have to write my poetry, you go out..!!

Laksh: for poetry a separate room..!! this is too much..!

Ragini: what..??

Laksh: actually Teju ji, I don’t like to stay with my snoring brother… so, can i…

Ragini: can you..?

Laksh: can i..?

Ragini: what..??

Laksh: share your room..?

Ragini shouts closing her eyes:: get out..!!!

She opens her eyes and Laksh is nowhere. She looks around. Suddenly she hears, ‘I didn’t go away..!’
Ragini trembles and falls in chair. Laksh bends towards her.

Laksh: I will not leave you in dreams also. I will come as Dracula..!! hahaha…

Ragini opens her eyes after few seconds, he is nowhere. She sighs.

After sometime,

Ram: let’s go to the function hall and see all arrangements. Janaki, Sujatha, swara and Teju will stay here. Nami will come with us.

Sanskar: yes dad.

Laksh: no.. I’m not coming.

Ram: why..?

Laksh: my tummy is paining..ah..ah…(holding stomach)

Sanskar: ok, stay back. Teju, come let’s go.

Ragini gets up happily.

Laksh shocks: but, she is staying back right.

Ragini: Jiju has called me. What’s your problem..? let’s go jiju..!

Laksh: I will also come then..!

Ram: tummy hurts right..!!

Sanskar, Ram and Ragini goes away. Ragini winks her eye. Laksh looks on.

Later Sujatha, Janaki and Swara with Laksh goes to a temple. Many girls come to that temple. They all are beautiful.

Janaki laughs: sujatha bhabhi, I don’t know how our Nami will feel looking at so many girls here..!!

Sujatha laughs and looks for him. He was sitting on a small wall and looking somewhere ignoring all the girls. Sujatha goes near him.

Sujatha: what are you thinking beta..! it’s really amazing if you aren’t looking at any girls..!
Laksh: maa, I don’t want to look at anyone..!

Suja: why..??

Laksh: maa, after seeing my chadvi ka chand. I can’t look at anyone. Nah..nah..!!

Sujatha: who is she..??

Laksh: she is..
Suja: haa..?

Laksh: she is…
Suja: tell know..!!

Janaki exclaims from far:: ‘Teju…!!’

Laksh and Sujatha looks in that way. Ragini is coming there in pink and blue lehenga.
Laksh keeps looking at her mesmerized.

Janaki: didn’t you go with them..?

Ragini: I went, but came back knowing that you went to temple. See, how’s my half saree..?

Sujatha goes near her.

Sujatha: you always look beautiful Teju dear. The one who marries you na, the lucky fellow.

Teju(Ragini) smiles, but Janaki expressions changes to sad remembering fact that she is going to die soon.

Laksh coming near them:: it’s me..!!

Ragini glares at him.

Laksh: I mean, the lucky fellow is me..!

Janaki: nami..??

Laksh: I’m telling I’m the lucky fellow. To get great mom like Sujatha(he hugs Sujatha) and great aunt like you(hugs Janaki) and great bhabhi like swara(he hugs swara) and great friend like Teju..(he is about to hug Teju. She goes back)

Ragini: Mr.Namish…! be in your limits.

Laksh: Teju ji, I’m just hugging you. Friendly hug..!!

Ragini: I know what kind of hug it is..!

Laksh smirks: what kind..??

Ragini turns away her face in disgust. Laksh holds his heart painfully.
Laksh: her disgust also downloading feelings in heart..!!

Next morning, while Teju(Ragini) is sleeping, someone knocks the door. It was early morning 5’O clock. She wakes and opens the door.

Ragini: you..??

Laksh smiling with coffee cup:: yes.. me..!!

Ragini: what..?

Laksh: here..take this bed coffee..!

Ragini: I don’t want to drink. I want to sleep. Go away.

Laksh: you shouldn’t sleep. That’s why, I came with coffee.

Ragini: hey, what’s your problem..?

Laksh: drink coffee…

Ragini takes the cup:: ok..! go now.

Laksh drags her out:: no..! you come out..!!

Ragini: nami..!!

Laksh: shh…!!

She looks at him.

Laksh: come with me silently.
Ragini: where..??

Laksh carries her in arms.
Ragini: what are you doing Namish..! leave me..! mummy… swara… aunty… uncle… jiju…!!!

Laksh takes her out and makes her stand in front of green fields, she could see hills.

Ragini: what..

Laksh: shh, see the sun rise now…

Ragini looks at the hills. The sun comes out from the hills…that light is falling on the green fields and they are shining. Ragini smiles. She smells the scent coming from the air touching those fields…

Laksh: how is this view Teju..? Are you not liking it..? can we find this kind of view in cities..? that smoky dust polluted air…but see this the fresh air..and new sun rise.. is it not like our lives re started again..?

Ragini emotionally looks at Laksh.

Laksh laughing slowly: I remembered nothing in my life. I remembered only opening my eyes in hospital and then Sujatha maa saying herself as my mother. Sanskar my brother. Still, I feel something near to my heart is missing. I don’t know when you are beside I feel completed.

Ragini looks at him amazingly.

Laksh coming into world:: haha, what am I taking to you. I need not tell this to you. I just wanted to show you this scene. Bye…..

Laksh will be going away. Ragini turns back and looks at him.

Laksh: Teju, I’m not that bad as you think…
He goes away, Teju(Ragini) smiles.

Looking at them swara and Sanskar talks.

Swara: what’s going on..? Namish doesn’t know that Teju will die in some days..? why is he growing feelings on her. I thought he is just flirting with her.

Sanskar: even Teju is loving him, I think.

Swara: she leaves world happily with memories, but Nami will be left behind alone without her. we have to do something, before it’s going to get intense..!

Sanskar looks on.

Teju(Ragini) runs back to her room happily. She locks the door and falls on bed remembering Laksh’s words. she closes her eyes and soon a dream follows….

This is that dream….

‘Ragini is walking alone in the forest. It is a night time. Suddenly something jumps behind her. she turns back and find nothing. Ragini is wearing a 3/4th skirt. And a white top. She starts going… then she hears a fox sound… ‘oww..!’ she scares and holds her hand tightly.

Then, suddenly a group of monsters surround her. she is looking them all in fear. Then a man appears in and kills all those monsters. His face is shown as Laksh. He looks at evilly at Ragini. He goes near her and bites her neck. She falls unconscious.

Later she wakes and finds herself on a big bed. She shocks and looks around.
She looks at Dracula laksh and starts running away, but there is no way…!

He starts singing,

‘where can you escape my parrot..
This is my den..!!’

A group of vamps start dancing with him. Laksh shows his big teeth and nails..

‘You have fallen in my love web..
Now you can’t escape..!!’

He comes near Ragini, she closes her eyes. He moves his big nails on her face…

‘Escaping is your dream…
Silently fall in my heart..!!’ he sings.

‘who are you..?’ she asks trembling. He pushes her on bed.

He dances and sings,
‘I’m Dracula..!
The lovely Dovey vampire..!!

Dracula…the one who drinks your love..!!’

Ragini runs and reaches a hall like place, where it seemed to be like haunted, and covered with spider webs and different potions are being prepared…

Suddenly, Laksh hugs her from behind….

‘I will follow you as a shadow…
I will jump in your dreams as nightmare..!’ he sings.

She pushes him. He dances with other vamps.

‘I’m your only destiny… you must emerge in me…
The waves of storm will not separate you from me..!!’ he sings and jumps near her.

Ragini scares and sticks to a wall behind. He locks her with his devilish hands.

The other vamps will be singing,
‘Dracula..! he is lovely dovey magician…
Dracula… he is the smartest of the vamps..!!’

Laksh smirking looks at her. She closes her eyes as he was approaching near her. He bends to her neck and opens his scary teeth to bite her.

‘Ahhhhhh’ Ragini shouts and wakes. She realizes that it was just her dream and she wipes her sweat.
‘Idiot, he is scaring me in dreams also..!’ she thinks.

Precap: Laksh(nami) going to propose Ragini(Teju)… Ragini comes to know about her..!

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52 Comments
  1. Sindhura

    Dream was,lol

    1. Astra

      hehe..thanks dear…

  2. Mindblowing dear

    1. Astra

      thank you gayu

  3. Dharani

    awesome dracula laksh is just awesome waiting for next episode ragini knowing about her

    1. Astra

      thank you dear..

  4. Asra

    fabulous astu…..omg ragu what a dream….dracula dream….loved it….waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear….

    1. Astra

      thank you dear…

  5. Asw

    Nice keep going

    1. Astra

      thank you dear

  6. Lovely7

    Awesome but crazy dream

    1. Astra

      thank you dear

  7. Astra…I think you should become a director too…!!! The way you write this story…I feel like I watching some movie…with popcorn in my hand…!!! Those songs…dialogues…everything was excellent…!!

    1. Astra

      thanku..thanku…thanku…thanku…so much chandu…. I’m veryyyyyyy verryyyyyy happy with this comment…. thanks a lott….

  8. aww lakshya is so cute next part soon don’t

    1. Astra

      thank you nikky…

  9. Interesting episode and loved Raglak scenes specially Ragini’s dream

    1. Astra

      thank you ammu…

  10. aww so much frustated seeing so many swasan ff and very few raglak actually it feel me bad that even now raglak fan didnt support them and yaa and helly fan till now bashing tejesswi. over ang laga de song see in raglak page plzz try to write more and be regular the main difference of swaragini popularity is tejesswi acting and then when ragini get his love than CVS did injustice with jabardasti Ka swasan track in raglak track like raglak unite so sudden and faltu swara memory loss lost the charm of swaragini
    raglak didnt get fan support what happened to raglak writer and their love bcoz now swasan ff is increaseing and raglak ff is one or two in no plzzzzzzz try to give more ff plzzzzz now its so less in number plzz try to write more bcoz now days raglak ff is decreasing as compare to swasan bcoz raglak ff os ss ts plzz give more and don’t stop in bcoz many writer are stop in middle and some end sudden plzzz guys prove that raglak fandom is not less plzz guys give some new one try to regular plzz give some new raglak ff and yaa plzz write more at least 100 episode bcoz many swasan ff reached 100 but none raglak ff reach plzz write more guys for raglak its a request by raglak fan

  11. Superb.. Bt feeling bad for ragz.. Laksh is cool wid his naughtiness

    1. Astra

      thank you mintu

  12. Shrilatha

    Nice …cure rags

    1. Astra

      thank you dear.. laksh will save her yar..

  13. Shrilatha

    I don’t want her to die cure her na

  14. Awesome… haha ragini’s dream was funny

    1. Astra

      thank you priya…

  15. Fairy

    Soooo awesomeeee.e,….. I lovely lovely lovelyyy uodate dr…..superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb …bt feelng bad for rags yr.. ???? how cn she die…no plzzz,i jst cant even think of it!!!!laksh is sooo fab. Waitng eagerly for nxt part…keeep rockng n stay blesssed sweety..lotz of love?????n from where u get such interestng ideas dr???u r reallly a talent ki Queen??????

    1. Astra

      thanks a lot dear… our lucky will save her yar… thank u so much dear…

  16. amazing yar

    1. Astra

      thank you neina…

  17. Akshata

    And this is called one in million update, OMG!!!!! no words, i am dumbstruck to say anything. after reading Dracula, his witches , vamps and his weird song. I have imagined everything….. everything means everything was dancing infront of my eyes . Laksh as a dracula with his long fangs and wearing long black and blood red rob, his witches with brooms and poor ragini.
    i think laksh is looking breathtaking, handsome dracula, who wants to drink love instead of blood…..
    only you can think this kind of dream and song….. loved it.

    1. Astra

      hahaha… I’m glad that u have imagined everything just as movie… thank u dear..

  18. Awesome

    1. Astra

      thank you saranya..

  19. Mindblowing

    1. Astra

      thank you megha..

    1. Astra

      thank you malu

  20. awesome

    1. Astra

      thank you sherin

  21. Fabulous dear, what an imagination yaar namish dracula

    1. Astra

      Thank you rehna..

  22. Aasthu

    dream was very funny…..but the bg song’s lyrics was even more hilarious….haha….lovely dovey vampire???????? haha….you’ve got a good sense of humour……

    1. Astra

      thank you aasthu…

  23. Jazzy

    omg astra kaha se aate ha itne aache ideas itne chiotu dimag me yaar aur woh dream.omgggg amazinggg yaar plzzz koi film produce karlo tum

    1. Astra

      haha…thank you so much dear… mein film..?? haha, let’s try…?

  24. IQRA222

    awesome the episode was funny
    loved the song and raglak were as usual superb

    1. Astra

      thanks a lot dear…

  25. Wowww suprrrbbbb

    1. Astra

      thank you pooja…

  26. A.xx

    Fab and loved her dram,,I love u Astra xx

    1. Astra

      thanks a lot dear… lv u too….

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