(RagLak) Storm of love- part 4

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Storm of love 4

With the sound of train Ragini and Laksh breaks their hug. They look at each other. Both of them feel that they might have any relation before.

Laksh: vo, I’m sorry, you were about to fall because of me…

Ragini: no, I have to say thanks. You have saved me..!

Just then Swara comes in search of Ragini. She looks at them both.

Laksh: I feel like, I have seen you somewhere.

Swara thinks: flirting suru hogaya..!

Ragini: even, I feel the same..!

Now, Swara amazes.

Laksh laughs:: that means, we were related somewhere something…
He says looking at Ragini and he changes his face expressions with her serious look.

Laksh: I mean…

Ragini smiles: maybe that’s true..??

Now Laksh smiles. He forwards his hand.

Laksh: I’m Nami… Namish..!! may I know your good name..?

Ragini also forwards her hand hesitatingly. They have shake hand. Swara amazes.

While they are giving shake hand, they both feel their touch as familiar. And, they related more than they know now.

Ragini smiles: I’m Teju. Just Teju.

Laksh is about to talk something with her again, but Swara comes.

Swara: nami, enough for now. teju, come let’s go. Mamma is calling.
Teju(Ragini) nods her head and goes with Swara.

Nami(Laksh) keeps looking at Ragini who is going away. She turns back and looks at him. He smiles and says bye with his hand. Rag too smiles.

Ragini sits with Swara and Janaki. Sujatha is talking with trio. Sanskar and Ram are busy in talking something. Laksh just comes and sits in side berth seat, he was looking at Ragini as if he is going to swallow her.

Ragini keeps talking with everyone and looks at Laksh in middle who was looking at her. She feels uneasy with his looks. She keeps setting her chunni, and Laksh smirks while she is doing that.

Sanskar observes what he is doing. He sits before Laksh.

Sanskar: nami…nami…!!

Laksh looking at Ragini: hmm..?

Sanskar: look at me..!!

Laksh still looking at her: tell me bro..!

Sanskar: abey, stop your flirting program here..! she is swara’s sister. If anything goes wrong, my marriage will be stopped..!!

Laksh: let it be..! you will be named as one who sacrificed marriage for his brother..!!

Sanskar grabs his neck and shouts playfully, “Nami…!!”
But, Laksh was still looking at her.

All turns to them.

Sujatha: arey, what’s happening..?

Sanskar: maa, this nami naa..!!

Laksh imitating sanky: maa, this sanky naa..!!

Sujatha: stop your mess at least now..! all are looking at us. Hey Ramachandra, give some buddi to these boys..!!

Laksh was still busy looking at Ragini, and Ragini who looks at him once and turns away her eyes setting her hair. Her other hand is twisting the chain in her neck showing that she is feeling nervous.

Sanskar grabs Laksh’s shirt and takes him from there. They are talking near the door.

Sanskar is requesting Laksh holding his chin.

Sanky: my boy know, my brother know, my chotu know, don’t look at that girl please..
Laksh: bhayya, bhayya, I want that girl..!!
Sanskar beats his head with hand. Just swara enters.

Swara: Nami..! it’s better if you forget her now itself.
Laksh: why..??

Sanskar: because she is going to…
Swara gestures Sanskar not to say anything.

Swara: because, she is not like all girls. She is different..!

Laksh: but, she is still a girl and I’m a boy. Anyone day she has to marry someone and that will be me..!!

Swa san shocks: marriage..??

Laksh: yes marriage..! I want to marry Teju..!!

Laksh turns back and shocked to see Ragini(teju) is already standing there.
She comes forward of him.

Ragini: I know, you are flirting me. But, it’s better if you stop this here. I’m not interested in marriage..!
Swasan looks on.

Laksh: but, someday you have to marry right…!

Ragini: why we should get marry..?

Laksh scratches his head:: I don’t know exact reason. But, everyone gets married.

Ragini: so, you don’t have any reason to marry me?

Laksh: haha, if you ask like that.. then, I love you…

Ragini: what is love..?

Now Sanskar scratches his head.

Laksh turns face up down left and right and he keeps moving his hand in different ways…

Laksh: love means..?
He looks at sanky with blank expression.

Laksh: love means..?
He looks at swara in blank expressions.

Laksh: love means..!!
He looks at Ragini deeply and moves his head forward towards her…

Laksh: love means, love..!

Swara and sanky controls their laugh. Ragini turns away her eyes.

Ragini: so, you don’t know what is love..?
Laksh looks on…

Ragini: love means a divine feeling.
Swasan opens their eyes wide. Laksh opens his mouth.

Ragini: love means a selfless commitment. Love means sacrifice, love means the heart full feeling. Love means the complete happiness.

The trio’s expressions are same.

Ragini continues: love means pain, love means breath, love means…

Laksh interrupts: banana, cabbage..!
All looks at Laksh.

Laksh: teju whatever you said divine, happiness, pain, breath I felt all of them when I saw you..

Ragini: it was just your attraction. So, I will tell you difference between attraction and love..

Sanskar comes forward and salutes to Ragini…

Sanky: teju dear, plz stop your philosophy here..!

Ragini: let him understand what I say jiju..

Laksh: you need not say anything teju..!
All looks at Laksh again.

Laksh: my brother Sanskar marriage is in one week. Till then, I will prove mine is love not attraction..! If in case I can’t prove, I will never show my face again to you..!

Teju looks on…

Laksh: deal accepted..??

Teju: but, you shouldn’t disturb me or shouldn’t make me uneasy..!!

Swara: I’m feeling as filmy..!!

Laksh: done..!!
Laksh shows thumbs up. Ragini nods her head and goes away.

Swara and Sanskar turns to her.

Swara: what do you think..? your brother can prove..?

Sanskar: I have damn confidence on him. He can do anything..! Not, only Teju he can make all girls fall in love..!

They both hear a laugh and turns back. Laksh is laughing.

Sanky: why are you laughing now..?

Laksh: bhabhi, your sister is really innocent..!

Swara confuses: why..??

Laksh: she has given permission herself that I can prove her for one week..!

Swara: ha, but in case you fail..!!

Laksh glares at Swara: if I fail…..
Swara gulps..

Laksh: I will forget the deal..!

Swasan shocks.

Laksh keeps dancing while walking away. Swasan looks on..

Swara: he is really flirt maha raja…!!

Precap: laksh’s struggles shuru…

/* haha, guys, today I tried to present dialogues in rhyming format. Do tell, howz it.

And coming to my late and small updates, this is exams season at present. That’s why I have observed less comments in all ffs and less ffs also. So, what I’m feeling is some of our readers are missing the updates. That’s why I’m giving gap in updates. And, guys..I won’t disappoint who are following every day. Plz, bear this gap and small updates… up till April. From may, the Summer damaka… I will present you all the chilling packages of Ragini and Raglak ffs. It’s my promise..!! do support me in my decision… love you all…. Forget not to comment on today’s part…

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    1. Astra

      thank you ammy..

  1. Amazing sis…raglak conversation is superb…. Ha ha….And their deal nd swasan expression is amazing… I agree wid u..After the exam session is over.. Plss write more raglak stories..if possible can u plss write any os..??? Take care dr

    1. Astra

      thank you mintu.. sure dear… i will write ..

  2. aww nami teju yiee actually namish and tejesswi become Temish in real life to

    1. Astra

      hehe..even i wish that…but it’s not possible…

  3. what happened to raglak writer and their love bcoz she swasan ff is increaseing and raglak ff is one or two in no plzzzzzzz speach plzzzzz loved it guys what happened to raglak ff writer now its so less in number plzz try to write more bcoz now days raglak ff is decreasing as compare to swasan bcoz raglak ff os ss ts plzz give more and don’t stop in bcoz many writer are stop in middle and some end sudden plzzz guys prove that raglak fandom is not less plzz guys give some new one try to regular plzz give some new raglak ff and yaa plzz write more at least 100 episode bcoz many swasan ff reached 100 but none raglak ff reach plzz write more guys for raglak its a request by raglak fan

    1. Astra

      s nikky… i agree with u..

  4. Amazing

    1. Astra

      thank you..

  5. Asw

    Nice Ragini dialogue is good keep going

    1. Astra

      thank you…

  6. Sindhura


    1. Astra

      thank you..

  7. Amazing epi the dialogues were hilarious

    1. Astra

      thank you aadhya

    1. Astra

      Thank you

  8. Omg
    Really amazing

    1. Astra

      Thank you lovely…

  9. this laksh is jst unbelievable nd ragu is soo inocent..jst loved it

    1. Astra

      Thank you neina

  10. IQRA222


    1. Astra

      Thank you

  11. Darshini

    Astra…it’s awesome da…
    Ur rhyming ? Ragini’s philosophy of love is super and sankar’s dialogue”teju dear…stop ur Philo here”was aww…
    I totally liked it da…
    Waiting for the next post…
    Update soon dear…

    1. Astra

      hahaha…thanks a lot darshu..

  12. Awesome

    1. Astra

      thank you..

  13. Jazzy

    awesome and laksh heheheeh he is sooo cool

    1. Astra

      haha..thanks dear..

  14. Asra

    awesome astu dear….love means blank expression hahaha and if I fail I vll forget the deal…. omg laksh u r impossible…..ohh my cute ragu love u baby….waiting for nxt one….tkcr dear….

    1. Astra

      thank you so much dear…. haha…

  15. Awesome episode and Raglak convo is superb

    1. Astra

      thank you ammu..

  16. Nami rocks teju shocks ???

    1. Astra


  17. Akshata

    i dont know about ragini and their deal, right now i fell in love with stupid, naughty, funny, happy go lucky, cute, ever enthusiastic, energetic and never give attitude wala laksh……
    again i was laughing so hard, he is so funny.

    1. Astra

      hehehehe…. thank u…thanku…thanku so much dear…

  18. Dharani

    awesome teju dear, plz stop your philosophy here i loved this dialogue

    1. Astra

      hehe..thanks dear..

  19. Awesome yaar.. haha laksh is so cool and his dialogues are hilarious..

    1. Astra

      thank you dear..

  20. Osmmmm dialogues suprrrbbb chapy

    1. Astra

      thank you pooja…

  21. Fats

    Fabulous update. Looool, I love Laksh’s character. His dialogues are really funny and it’s also cute how he’s love sick. And eeeeks, RagLak’s deal will be fun. Can’t wait to read the next part ?

    1. Astra

      haha..yup, that deal is gonna be fun… thank you fats…

  22. Loved the episode

    1. Astra

      thank you rehna..

  23. G.Chandu

    Namiiii…you naughty!!!! I don’t know about teju…I fell in love with this character…!!! Clean bowled!!! Superb…!!!

    1. Astra

      hahaha..thank you dear..


    1. Astra

      thank you

  25. A.xx

    fab xx

    1. Astra

      thank you

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