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Home»Fan Fiction»(RagLak) Storm of love part 11
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(RagLak) Storm of love part 11

AstraBy AstraMarch 15, 201752 Comments6 Mins Read
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Previous Part 10

Friends, in two more parts this ff gets over…

Part 11

Ragini and Laksh are reading the book Storm of love.. which is none other than their story, which they forgot…

The flash back continues…

Laksh pov(in book)

“She is the spring season… her hair is the beautiful waterfall… her lips are flower garden… her eyes are sun shine… her cheeks are the white clouds…
I never praised a girl like this… I’m presently suffering in her storm of love..!!

I wanted to tell to mom, “maa, I want to marry this girll only this girl.. I don’t know she suits as your bahu or not not… but maa, I’m sure she looks after all of us greatly. She is innocent… she loves everyone…. plz maa.. plz…”

Ragini: hello… Mr. Rockstar… what are you thinking..??

She asked playing with my guitar.

I just smiled.

At the station we both got down and went away in our routes. But, my heart followed her… and I’m hoping, she will come to me one day..!!

And, as I expected… she came as the alliance seen by my parents. I was excited looking her photo. I soon decided for engagement… but I’m not sure, what Ragini is thinking…

I got a phone call from new number.

Me: hello..??

Otherside: laksh…

Me: Ragini..??

(She is almost crying..)

Me: Ragini..what happened..??

Ragini: Laksh… Laksh… I love you..

I was at the top of world… but why is she crying…? We are going to get engaged,…

Laksh: Ragini..,

Ragini: i was loving you since our college days Laksh… i was your secret admirer. I actually got into train for you…!!! To propose u..!!

I was getting amazed with her words.

Ragini: my parents have fixed my engagement with someone,,,

Laksh: didn’t you see his face..??

Ragini:: I don’t want to see any duffer stupid face. I want only you..!!

I was laughing but feeling happy…

Laksh:: Ragini, why don’t you see his face once..? Only once…

Ragini: laksh… leave that photo… but, i want to know ur decision..!!

Laksh:: Ragini, even my parents have fixed engagement with a girl and I like to marry only her..!! You also marry that boy…

No words… only silence. I can only hear her sobbing. I felt sad, i wanted to tell her that I’m the to be groom. Before I say something… she,

“Congrats Laksh..” and phone cut.

I tired calling her again… but… she didn’t lift the call. “Ofo… god plz…!!! Make her see the photo..!!!”

I don’t know what happened later, but next day the engagement started normally. She came on stage with traditional attire. She didn’t even look at me. Does she atleast know, that it’s me only..? She didn’t even give me chance to talk.

But..however, the engagement was over. But I’m still confused, what Ragini is thinking..??

Suddenly that night, my balcony door knocked by someone. What…??? It’s probably a thief who can knock door. How can someone enter into my balcony..?? But, the shadow is shown as lady… I smelled something fishy… I opened the door…

“Lucky….” she shouted and hugged me and suddenly kissed my cheek and took a selfie too.

“Ragini…??!!!” I was shocked rubbing my cheek. She is wearing torn shaded jeans, a pink crop top… as usually her hair is free..

She placed her hand on my shoulder and took me inside the room.

Laksh:: Ragini…what are u..

Ragini sat on bed with thud… “haa…don’t ask me what am i doing here. I came to see my future husband in my future room..!!”

Laksh was about to say something… Ragini sticks Laksh to wall. Laksh closes his eyes tightly.

“Rag..Ragini… what are you doing…??”

Ragini moves closer to him. Laksh shakes in nervousness.

Ragini laughs and gets back.

“You are so coward..!!” She was laughing. I was wiping my sweat.

Laksh: Ragini… today morning…

Ragini: hmm… actually, I don’t know that you are only the groom. After cutting the call, I was accidentally happened to see your photo. I was feeling extremely happy and couldn’t talk to you… and, I wanted to play with you keeping unknown expressions this morning..!!!

Laksh: so, you are fooling me..??

Ragini: uhu.. even u didn’t fool saying… “i will marry girl seen by my parents..!” You can say directly right…!! Ragini, that is you.. it is me..!!!

Laksh:: hmm, then why were you fooling me in train that U don’t know me..?

Ragini scratches her head, “ok, leave it naa…!!”

Etc…..etc….

In 5days gap we are going to get married. Our love story might be a small one.. but we are getting together with the marriage…

She said day before our marriage…

“Laksh, Let’s go to a place where no one can reach us..! So, that no one will disturb us..! There we shall stay alone… and let’s have so many kids… with a biggest family..!!”

She has many dreams which she wanted to fulfill with me… her eyes show how she loves me. The shine in her eyes shows the bright way to our love..! And, start of love is like a storm.. which is very furious and intense. But, it’s even peaceful when our eyes merge with each other…

Laksh: kiss me naa Ragini..!!

Ragini: just one day left for our marriage..!!! Wait these 24 hours to face the first kiss,..!

She said… and I was waiting for this 24 hours…..”

—————————————————-

The book was finished with here. Laksh turns other pages and all empty.

“So, I think later our marriage happened. But soon that terrorist attack happened…!!” Says Laksh.

While Laksh was thinking seriously like that… Ragini was thinking way too silly..

“So, did we kiss or not then..?? So, didn’t we have our first kiss yet..??” She asks innocently.

Laksh looks at her. She looks at him.

(But, they have kissed already in teaser. Just before getting attacked with bullets.)

Laksh holds her hand.

Laksh: so, let’s do it now Teju..(Ragini)

Ragini bends her head. Laksh holds her chin and raises her head. Both have eye lock.

He moves closer to her. She closes her eyes. She moves her slender fingers in his hair and back of neck. He holds her waist and head with his hands. He moves very nearer to her and he too closes his eyes. Both join their lips gently. Soon, Laksh drags her closer which shocks her a little but accepts it with love. Both are having intense lip lock. They both start to feel the same thing they did some where in past… they get flashes of that scene. Suddenly, Ragini gets a flash how bullet shot in her head.

She loses her conscious suddenly which make her fall in Laksh’s lap. He pats her cheeks to wake her up. She won’t get up.

“Ragini…!!” Laksh murmurs.

Precap: Raglak get married again as Teju and Namish.

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    52 Comments

    1. Vk on March 15, 2017 4:25 pm

      Awesome

      • Astra on March 15, 2017 5:54 pm

        thank you vk..

    2. tëìtō kUn on March 15, 2017 4:27 pm

      Amazing…..

      • Astra on March 15, 2017 5:55 pm

        thank you kun….

    3. dharani on March 15, 2017 4:39 pm

      awesome

      • Astra on March 15, 2017 5:55 pm

        thank you

    4. Sayana on March 15, 2017 4:49 pm

      Nice….plz update break up….

      • Astra on March 15, 2017 5:56 pm

        thank you.. 2morow i will..

    5. Sindhura on March 15, 2017 5:00 pm

      Awesome

      • Astra on March 15, 2017 5:56 pm

        thank you…

    6. Tigeress on March 15, 2017 5:14 pm

      nice

      • Astra on March 15, 2017 5:57 pm

        thank you

    7. Asw on March 15, 2017 5:35 pm

      Nice Ragini is bold in their past ?? keep going

      • Astra on March 15, 2017 5:58 pm

        thank you… yeah…haha..

    8. lovely7 on March 15, 2017 5:41 pm

      Amazing

      • Astra on March 15, 2017 5:58 pm

        thank you

    9. jazzy on March 15, 2017 5:43 pm

      superbb

      • Astra on March 15, 2017 5:59 pm

        thank you

    10. Sinni on March 15, 2017 5:53 pm

      Awesome

      • Astra on March 15, 2017 7:27 pm

        thank you

    11. Darshini on March 15, 2017 6:00 pm

      Asthu it’s awesome da..
      Bt y u gonna end it so soon…
      Gonna pinch you…jst kidding…
      Bt I will miss my fav ff??

      • Astra on March 15, 2017 7:29 pm

        thank you darshu… yup dear… in 2epis more…

    12. ??? on March 15, 2017 6:25 pm

      Marvelous…… Suprb

      • Astra on March 15, 2017 7:29 pm

        thank you

    13. Mintu on March 15, 2017 6:30 pm

      Awesome sis .. Its going to end soon ?? So sad.. waiting for ur breakup story dear

      • Astra on March 15, 2017 7:30 pm

        thank you mintu.. 2morow breakup…

    14. aadhya on March 15, 2017 6:36 pm

      Nice story

      • Astra on March 15, 2017 7:30 pm

        thank you

    15. Jaan on March 15, 2017 6:58 pm

      Awesome

      • Astra on March 15, 2017 7:30 pm

        thank you

    16. asra on March 15, 2017 8:23 pm

      awesome dear…loved it alot…..y u r going to end it soon…..waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear…

      • Astra on March 16, 2017 10:02 am

        thank you dear..

    17. Ammu on March 15, 2017 8:45 pm

      Interesting episode dear and loved Raglak storm of love. But why r u going to end it after 2 episodes ??????. It’s a very bad news for me. Raglak kissing scene is beautiful. Eagerly waiting for next

      • Astra on March 16, 2017 10:03 am

        thank you ammu… I’m sorry yar… but, i thought to end this with here..

    18. Akshata on March 15, 2017 8:53 pm

      awesome, loved this carefree ragini, update soon

      • Astra on March 16, 2017 10:03 am

        thank you dear..

    19. IQRA222 on March 15, 2017 9:20 pm

      astra di awesome episode
      raglak kiss was superb
      but what happend to ragu feeling worried for her
      and di why are you ending this ff i love it
      waiting for the next part

      • Astra on March 16, 2017 10:05 am

        thank you dear.. yes dear I’m going to end this.. bcz, i thought story up to here only..

    20. Arjuna on March 15, 2017 9:29 pm

      AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME

      • Astra on March 16, 2017 10:05 am

        thanks a lot…

    21. Malu on March 15, 2017 9:39 pm

      Awesome

      • Astra on March 16, 2017 10:06 am

        thank you malu..

    22. gayu on March 15, 2017 9:53 pm

      Nice

      • Astra on March 16, 2017 10:07 am

        thank you gayu

    23. chandu on March 16, 2017 6:35 am

      Superb!!! Loved it!!! Raglak love story is not even less than nami and teju’s story!! They had really went through a storm of love!!

      • Astra on March 16, 2017 10:07 am

        thank you so much chandu…

    24. saranya on March 16, 2017 5:27 pm

      superb

      • Astra on March 16, 2017 5:30 pm

        thank you

    25. A.xx on March 17, 2017 12:59 am

      nice xx

      • Astra on March 17, 2017 9:34 am

        thank you..

    26. Rehna on March 17, 2017 8:32 pm

      Nice dear

      • Astra on March 18, 2017 9:12 am

        thank you rehna..

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