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Raglak Few Shots by Bela: Cocktail (Shot 8)

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Main aa gayi, Cocktail leke. ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ๐Ÿ˜ฑ

Anyways, just to let you know, Cocktail ki kundli mein dosh ke kaaran, this is going to end in a few more shots. Just kidding, it is reaching its fruitful end. I may give an epilogue to show their married life too, to give a glimpse of how they deal with each other, but yes, COCKTAIL IS ENDING SOON.

Enjoy this part๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

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I smilingly skipped down the stairs as I recalled last night’s impromptu date with the one and only FFL. That had been rather sweet and later…….stinky. I grimaced as I recalled the number of times I had to soap myself and shampoo my hair to take off the smell.

Only Sanskaar and Swara were sitting at the breakfast table, talking between themselves. Seeing them, my mood darkened and I silently went inside the kitchen to fix a sandwich for myself, not even bothering with the morning pleasantries.

I took my plate and was about to head back to my room when Swara called out behind me, โ€œYou think you have done a great thing, haven’t you?โ€

I frowned and turned back. She was sitting on the table, face clear, except for a few rashes here and there. I raised an eyebrow at her.

โ€œYou must be celebrating your win right now, right? Stooping so low to replace me?โ€ Swara sneered.

โ€œYou think I did that to you? Do you?โ€ I asked her incredulously. She raised her nose up in the air and nodded. I looked at Sanskaar who was sitting there, uncomfortably silent.

โ€œWell, sorry to burst your bubble, but I have no hand in what happened to you. I am no rival of yours and nor am I cheap. I have class, okay?โ€ I replied snootily as I clutched my plate tighter.

โ€œClass? Yeah sure, I mean, we can see your โ€˜classโ€™ when you go and cling to that Lakshya Maheshwari!โ€ Sanskaar said sarcastically. I fumed at him.

โ€œListen Sanskaar, just because you were my best friend, doesn’t mean you give me shit. Lakshya and I have known each other far longer than you and I. And he is definitely more of a gentleman than you, and my best friend. I don’t โ€˜clingโ€™ to him, I hangout with him. So kindly shut up your crap and let me live in peace!โ€ I said coldly as I stalked off to my room.

As I grumpily ate my sandwich, giving Sanskaar and Swara the worst of all my gaalis, my phone beeped. It was, as usual, FFL.

FFL: Are you awake?๐Ÿ˜ฎ

I snorted and replied.

Me: No. I am still in a deep slumber.๐Ÿ˜‘

FFL: Rise and Shine sleepyhead, half the town is already dead!๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

Me: I just died laughing ๐Ÿ˜ซ๐Ÿ˜ซ๐Ÿ˜ซ

FFL: Will there be French Fries in your funeral?๐Ÿ˜œ

Me: Shut up! What did you message me for?๐ŸŠ๐ŸŠ๐ŸŠ

FFL: ๐Ÿ‘™๐Ÿ‘™๐Ÿ’‡๐Ÿ‘“๐Ÿ•ถ๐Ÿ‘•๐Ÿ‘–๐Ÿ‘—๐Ÿ‘œ๐Ÿ›๐Ÿ›๐Ÿ‘ ๐Ÿ‘ข

Me: You want all these?๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’. Bikini? Seriously?

FFL: I meant shopping and a beach outing actually๐Ÿ˜Œ๐Ÿ˜Œ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

Me: Oh!๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚. Yeah sure. At what time?

FFL: How about an hour from now?

Me: Done. Sharp.

FFL: See you, my non-best friend๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰

Me: ๐Ÿ™„๐Ÿค”๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜

I smiled as I quickly finished off my sandwich and went to the washroom.

Half an hour later, I was ready in a pair of denim shorts, white tank top and a purple, white and black checkered overshirt, wearing black and white converse shoes. I tied my hair in a French braid, sat down and started applying my nail polish. I heard a knock on my door. It was Sanskaar.

โ€œGoing somewhere? The others have gone for a movie.โ€ he said as he leaned against my doorframe.

I looked at him cautiously as I blew air on my nails. โ€œI have some plans for the day with Lakshya.โ€ I replied.

Sanskaar sighed. โ€œRags, are you seriously that dumb?โ€ he asked me. I raised my eyebrows.

โ€œCome on, you think you can be his best friend? His? Lakshya Maheshwari’s? Do you know who he is? He is one of the richest men of the country. I agree, you and I also belong to rich and powerful families, but we aren’t on the same level as him. He is damn powerful and knows it. You think he would want to be best friends with you when he can have so many better connections?โ€

โ€œWhat are you trying to say?โ€ I asked him rudely.

โ€œThat he is just passing his time with you. People like him need someone with name, which you have, but they aim for better. He was dating that Kavya Kapoor, who is daughter of Kewal Kapoor. Kewal may be in ruins now, but he still has influence. Lakshya reeks of power and influence too. He is a billionaire! Why would he want to be with YOU? Even Swara thinks that maybe he isn’t genuine. Please Rags, stop being so stupid about this!โ€

I gaped at him as goosebumps crawled on my skin. How in the world can he and his stupid girlfriend come up with such random shit? He….how can he be so…….mean? I ordered him to get the hell out of my room and not show me his ugly face for the rest of the day, unless he wants a painful death. Seeing me genuinely angry, he quickly retreated. But I was far from calm.

He…..he couldn’t be serious right? Like, he was correct when he said that Lakshya was far more powerful than we were. He had more wealth, more name, more fame and more power than us. He belonged to a hereditary rich family while I was the daughter of a self-made man. But, but he is my friend. He himself says so. Has said that on a number of occasions. I am overthinking, damn this Sanskaar!

The sound of a loud horn made me come out of my thoughts as I grabbed my bag and set out. On the way, I met Sanskaar and Swara whom I gave the deadliest glare to. Banging the door behind me, I walked towards Lakshya who was sitting in his swanky car, waving to me.

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โ€œHow about this?โ€ I asked her as I showed her a T-shirt with the words โ€˜Main Toh Paida Hi Hot Hui Thiโ€™ printed on it. She smiled slightly and took it. Slyly, I gave her another one which read โ€˜Main Pagal Nahi Hoon, Mera Dimaag Kharab Haiโ€™. She threw it at me as I chuckled.

โ€œBad mood, aye PSL?โ€ I asked her as I placed the T-shirt back. She rolled her eyes and nodded. โ€œWhat happened?โ€ I asked her.

โ€œSanskaar.โ€

The smile on my face vanished as I saw her sullen face. Sanskaar, that asshole! What did he do NOW?

โ€œDid he say something to you?โ€ I asked her as I followed her towards the trial room.

โ€œYes. He was being a git, as usual.โ€

โ€œCare to share?โ€

โ€œNo. I don’t want to spoil my mood even further by discussing him.โ€

โ€œBut how are you planning to lift up your mood right now?โ€

โ€œIf these clothes fit me and you treat me to a pizza, my mood may automatically lift up!โ€

โ€œSounds like you! Okay, done. Check them out quick and then we will go to Dominos here.โ€

She smiled as she entered the trial room. I sat outside, checking my Insta updates.

โ€œThis one?โ€ a voice came. I looked up and saw her in a beige jumpsuit. I nodded and showed her a thumbs up. She smiled happily and went inside.

Within a few minutes, she came out wearing a printed kurta with solid palazzo pants. I looked at her from all angles and then gave my nod of approval. Once again, PSL went back satisfied.

Her third dress was a modern sari which had a white shirt as a blouse and gold harem pants as the lower with a cloth of the same material as the harem pants to act as the pallu. It was fashionable like hell and I instantly nodded. As Ragini was about to go back inside, I called out to her. โ€œPSL? Give me the clothes you have already tried.โ€

โ€œWhy? So that you can try them yourself?โ€ she winked back.

โ€œEeewwww! No way! I wanted to bill them up quickly and save time, you silly woman!โ€

She laughed full heartedly as I watched in admiration how her smile literally lit up the room. She threw the heap of clothes at me and went in the last time to try out her last piece.

I gave the clothes to a woman who stood there. She smiled as she took the clothes. โ€œBoyfriend?โ€ she asked. I shook my head in reply. โ€œBest friend.โ€ I replied. She smiled in a rather suspicious way. โ€œEveryone says that. But best friends exist only to remind you that you look like a hideous troll!โ€. With that , she went towards the billing counter, leaving me wondering what she was smiling about.

โ€œPssshht……pssssss. Oye? FFL?โ€

I looked up and saw Ragini’s head poking out of the door. I raised an eyebrow.

โ€œI am unable to zip it up from behind. Help me!โ€

I looked around for female staff but there seemed to be none here at the moment. I looked at Ragini in despair while she narrowed her eyes at me.

โ€œCome inside and zip it up you fool!โ€ Ragini whispered dangerously. I widened my eyes in shock. โ€œM…m…me?” I asked her, unbelievingly. She rolled her eyes.

โ€œNo. Ask that man standing behind you to come and do it for me please! He seems nice enough.โ€ she replied. I looked behind me and saw a tall and good looking guy standing near a rack, sifting through clothes. My eyes narrowed at PSL who smirked in reply.

I stood up angrily as I marched my way up to her and inconspicuously entered the trial room. Ragini was in a LBD and looking really scorching. Her entire back was exposed due to the open zip, showing her smooth milky back. My hands trembled as I placed my fingers on the chain and looked at her through the mirror. She was looking at me too, gently encouraging me. I breathed a sigh and saw goosebumps crawl on her back. Clutching the material around the base of the zip with my other hand, I slowly pulled up the zip, watching in reluctant fascination as the zip moved upwards, clothing her smooth and clear skin with it.

Perspiring badly, I looked at PSL who seemed to have her head bowed. As much as I quickly wanted to zip it up, something stopped me from doing so. My fingers had a mind of their own, making this simple task into a complex one, slowly and steadily doing the otherwise mundane job. When finally the zip was closed, I tried to remove my shaking fingers away from her and saw her looking at me through the mirror with a weird expression on her face.

We both stood still, watching each other with inscrutable expressions, my hands still clutching her back and neck while hers were clasped tightly in front of her. The moment seemed to last long enough for both of us to figure out what exactly was going on.

A sharp ring broke our eyelock and I quickly stepped back, away from her strangely attractive aura. I pulled out the source of the ring, i.e my mobile phone and picked up the call.

โ€œHello?โ€

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As Lakshya talked to the person on his phone, I used the time to calm my erratic heartbeat and bring my breathing back in order. I had been fine, until he blew air on my back when he sighed. His warm breath had made me tingle down there as my stomach dropped in a strange way. I could feel the goosebumps on my back and I knew he could see them too. Why was he having that effect on me? Why he, of all people? He had been excruciatingly slow in zipping up the dress, further deepening my nervousness. And then, in the end, when our eyes met, it seemed as if I never wanted the moment to end. It was too……..personal and intimate. Despite the trial room being air conditioned, I was feeling really warm.

โ€œWHAT?! WHO THE HELL DID THIS?โ€ Lakshya roared in anger. I looked back at him in alarm and he was looking at me with disbelief evident in his face. I shrugged to ask him what the matter was and he gestured to wait.

โ€œFix a meeting in thirty minutes. Sharp. I will be on video conference.โ€ he ordered in a business-like tone. I widened my eyes in shock. Was my pizza treat cancelled?

Lakshya disconnected the call and massages his now-pulsing temples. I gently kept my hand on his shoulder and asked him what had happened.

โ€œMark happened.โ€

My eyes narrowed automatically when I heard Mark’s name. He is a disease, a parasite who has no shame in trying to malign anyone’s image to boost his paper’s ratings. What had he done this time?

โ€œMy publicist called me up to tell me that he has run a story in his Delhi edition that you and I are having a fling!โ€

โ€œDafuq?โ€ was my natural reply. He looked up and smiled at me. โ€œExactly. In his article, he has claimed that you and I have been seeing each other for months and that we have decided to formally announce our relationship with the magazine photoshoot we did yesterday. Some sources claim that they have often seen us hanging out together, laughing and smiling. These sources also claim that you are the reason I broke up with Kavya. And I know exactly who this source is.โ€

โ€œWho?โ€

โ€œKavya.โ€

โ€œBut how would she know about our photoshoot?โ€

โ€œShe is definitely being quoted here as the one who claims that my relationship failed because of my interest in you. Because only she could come up with something as ridiculous as this. This photoshoot angle, however, as been added by someone else. Lots of people are behind this sham of an article and I would make sure that they fall at my feet beg for forgiveness. I won’t spare them. No one can mess with Lakshya Maheshwari and live to tell the tale of their glory!โ€ he said menacingly.

For a moment there, I was again reminded of Sanskaar’s words on Lakshya’s influence and power. I felt mild fear rise in my chest. Suddenly, I was cold. I rubbed my arms in order to warm myself.

โ€œAre you feeling cold?โ€ Lakshya asked me. I looked up at him and shook my head. Then, I nodded. He smiled softly. โ€œI am going out. You change quickly and come out. I will get the billing done.โ€

I nodded and when he left, I quickly locked the door and took a deep breath. As I removed the dress, I tried reasoning with myself that I was thinking too much. Sanskaar is anyways rude and he was being a jerk when he said that. I shouldn’t be taking HIM seriously. Nor FFL. Who takes their best friends seriously, I wonder?

I came out and saw Lakshya standing with all my bags. I smiled slightly as he peeked into a bag curiously, unaware that I was watching him. This bag had been my secret addition to the other bags and no wonder the fool was curious about its contents. My smile turned into full blown laughter as he blushed hard after he realised that it contained……… lingerie.

โ€œTch, tch, FFL! Weren’t you taught to never look in a woman’s bag?โ€ I said as I walked in front of him. He groaned and I turned to look back at him.

โ€œYou don’t expect me to carry these bags, do you?โ€

I raised an eyebrow questioningly. His shoulders slumped as he nodded.

โ€œUnderstood PSL. After you!โ€

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I looked at Ragini who was sitting on the passenger side comfortably, eating her slice of pizza. I felt a bit guilty, planning the outing myself and then opting out of it suddenly. Damn that Mark Singh!

โ€œGhhoorna band kar Maheshwari!โ€ Ragini said as she sprinkled more oregano on her slice.

โ€œI am just wondering how you became so mature PSL. I mean, come on, you didn’t complain even ONCE. Just took us to Dominos, got a large pizza packed with garlic bread and cold drinks and came with me. When did you become so……….โ€

โ€œUndqhehajag?โ€

โ€œYeah. Understanding. When did you become so understanding?โ€

โ€œImsmaatโ€

โ€œI know you are smart. But this change is a bit creepy.โ€

โ€œIt isn’t. I understand the problem we both are in and frankly, I hate Mark too. I just wanna see how you bang his snooping ass!โ€

I smirked in reply as she went back to drinking her Coke……..but wait. Didn’t she already finish hers? And where’s mine?โ€

โ€œI hope you don’t mind. I was feeling thirsty.โ€

I will show you later baby. Lemme drive now. Wait, did I just call her baby?

โ€œI am still thirsty.โ€

โ€œIsn’t your tummy full by drinking my blood?โ€

โ€œWhat?!โ€

โ€œPani ki bottle peeche hai.โ€

โ€œOkay.โ€

We reached the hotel and I drove towards the service guesthouses. Mine was the last, the biggest of the fourteen and also the most stylish. Beside me, Ragini opened her mouth wide as she looked at the stone building in front of her.

โ€œYou live here?โ€

โ€œWhenever I am in Goa, yes.โ€

I entered inside where as instructed, my laptop and other necessary requirements for the video conference were already ready in my study. Mira, my housekeeper, welcomed us in.

โ€œMira, this is Gadodia Uncle’s daughter and my friend Ragini. Please give her something to drink while I do my meeting.โ€ I instructed to her as Ragini looked at me.

โ€œBut I also wanna come in the meeting.โ€

โ€œNot this one, please? I have some other things to do as well.โ€

โ€œPweese?โ€

Damn. This sly chick knows how to get her way done. She was currently making her best puppy face, eyes pleadingly wide, lips in a cute pout and looking like the most innocent angel in this world. I tried hard to control myself but who can escape the power of Ragini Gadodia?

โ€œOkay. First you go and drink something, get fresh and then join me in my study. Done?โ€

She nodded enthusiastically and gave me a proper teddy hug before stalking off behind a clearly amused Mira. I took a deep sigh. She will ruin my reputation amongst my staff! What will they all think, the powerful, arrogant and strict boss Lakshya Maheshwari turns into a soft wimp in front of her?

Sighing to myself, I went towards my study, ready to kick some serious ass.

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I laughed as I recollected the events of the previous few hours. While Lakshya had been calm and composed, his public relations manager made it seem like he had fallen into a pit of raging crisis. He spoke in a manner reminiscing of those highly dramatic TV reporters who speak as if the world has ended. Throughout the meeting, FFL and I eyed each other now and then. Finally, he gathered his wits around him and told his PR manager to โ€œkindly shut the f**k up and ACT!โ€

We spent some time talking before I got a call from Kunj that we had planned to go and do bowling. Lakshya wasn’t available, he still had some work to do, so I was forced to leave that loner alone.

Sitting on my bed now, several hours later, I sniggered as I recalled the entire meeting. Lakshya sure knows his staff well, he was well prepared with his sassiest comebacks for each word that came out of their mouths.

My phone beeped and I saw another message from FFL.

FFL: PSL? You there?

Me: Yep. Wassup?

FFL: Ceiling with a fan.๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

Me: Your answer just gave me cancer๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’๐Ÿ˜’

FFL: ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚. I just tagged you in 18 lit memes. Reply to them ASAP.

Me: Okay. Is that it? Message kyu Kiya?

FFL: I am sorry we had to cut our plans short today. Shall we go for breakfast tomorrow morning? I will make it up to you๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰

A smile graced my lips as I read the message. Sending my confirmation to him at the drop of a hat, I smiled happily, lying down on my bed with a hump. Tomorrow would be interesting.

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โ€œWHAT IS THIS? HAAN? SHEKHAR?โ€ Janki shouted at me as she poked me, shoving the newspaper at my face. I cringed as I looked at her, plucking her hair in frustration. The news on Ragini and Lakshya had been a shock to her. And me. The phones had been ringing nonstop- relatives, friends and reporters had been pestering us, forcing us to switch off our phones.

โ€œCalm down Jaan.โ€

โ€œCalm down? HOW? MY DAUGHTER’S NAME HAS BEEN MALIGNED. Ridiculous, this is. Ragini is my daughter, she has been grossly used by that ugly hairy toad Mark for his disgusting paper. Don’t you know how society perceives women? Who will marry my daughter………โ€

โ€œYou are overreacting, please. Stop talking like she is an abla naari and this is some old time.โ€

โ€œOkay fine. Ragini will come out of it, but what about her reputation? She has been toiling hard to make an image in the society, as R-Bazaar’s next owner. This single piece of news will splash water on all her efforts, she will be remembered more for this โ€˜flingโ€™ than anything else. Shall I let this ruin my daughter’s hardwork?โ€

She had a point. Ragini had worked her way up to be considered fit enough to step into my shoes. This unnecessary gossip has now become a dark cloud.

Janki closed her fists and opened them again. Damn. She is going to plan something now. Damn. No. Please God.

โ€œShekhar, call your PA Sambhav and tell him to book a ticket for London. I think it is high time Ragini learns the overseas part of your business now!โ€

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Standing in front of my vanity, dressed in a breezy noodle-strapped knee-length white dress, I set my high ponytail for the hundredth time, pursing my light red lips. My long earrings dangled from my ears as I took a deep breath. It’s just a breakfast. I need to chill. Period.

Half an hour later, I was seated at my reserved place in the outdoor cafe. The weather was pleasant, and the menu, even more. I ordered waffles, pancakes, peanut butter and maple syrup for myself and multigrain toast with scrambled eggs and orange juice for FFL. He had been moaning these days about how he had been gaining weight and had decided to go on a โ€œdietโ€.

Lakshya joined me as soon as the waiter left after serving the order, dressed up immaculately in his white shirt and trousers with a baby pink blazer. He groaned as he looked at his plate.

โ€œI wasn’t serious about the diet man!โ€ he exclaimed as he picked up a waffle from my plate and placed it in his mouth. Before he could reach out for another one, I stuffed a piece of the toast in his mouth. He choked on it while I smirked in reply.

After eating our respective stuff, we went on to order bread pizza, choco muffins and croissants for ourselves. Lakshya was telling me all about his new project, his new partners and their quirky habits, thus making great conversation.

โ€œPSL, you know what? Kavya called.โ€

I froze as I heard him. Raising my eyebrows at him, I asked him what work she had now.

โ€œShe is coming to Delhi next week and was asking if I want to โ€˜catch up or somethingโ€™. I told her I would think about it and reply.โ€

โ€œBut….do you want to meet her?โ€

โ€œI won’t mind anything. It’s better though if we don’t. I am still not clear about the Mark story and if she turns out to be involved in some way or the other, I don’t want to have anything to do with her.โ€

โ€œBetter. Her arrival may bring negativity too. I don’t know, I am not getting the right vibes at all.โ€

Lakshya looked up at me, surprise evident in his eyes. โ€œSince when did you start believing in this vibes and all?โ€ he asked.

I opened my mouth then closed it shut. I had no answer. I admit, it is not something I am known for. This was way out of character for me. What induced this?

Swallowing uncomfortably, I replied in a nonchalant manner, โ€œI just said what I felt. I don’t know, she is sort of trouble.โ€

โ€œThat she is. Now that I think if it, she has been trouble. But she was my girlfriend and I cannot disregard my feelings for her. Or the good moments we spent together. And till when will I keep ignoring her? We move in the same circles, we are bound to meet again and I don’t want it to be a public and awkward meeting. I think I need to meet her. I have decided to hang out with her. See if it brings anything. If I still feel weird, maybe it would be the end to our association. But if it isn’t, I don’t want to cut contact like that. As I said before, I am not accustomed to moving on easily.โ€ Lakshya said.

Clutching the napkin in my hand tightly, I smiled in a forced manner. But the turmoil inside me was great. His entire speech was giving me extremely bad vibes, I was feeling things I hadn’t felt before. The incidents yesterday- our close proximity, I had felt fireworks. An inexplicable feeling. And now, with his decision regarding Kavya, I almost felt like I did when Sanskaar hooked up with Swara………………………

OH. MY. GOD. Have I fallen for Lakshya Maheshwari?

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Okay, so who all thought that FFL would fall for her or realise it first? Be honest and tell me in the comments below. ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰

Aliyahillary, I hope I wasn’t too late this time around. I have taken your suggestion, I will try and post shorter updates from now on. Stay blessed๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

Now need I say that to and comment phataphat se??????

104 Comments
  1. Awesome dear

    1. Bela

      Thanks Sherin๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

  2. Simply superb si…..post next soon
    because I can’t wait for next part

    1. Bela

      Thanks a lot Soumya. I will try to๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

  3. AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME

    1. Bela

      THANKS THANKS THANKS
      THANKS THANKS THANKS ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

  4. superb Bela u are awesome writer waiting for your gf hope u can write some more “, plzzz all raglak ff writer plzz write more raglak or ragsan ff bcoz now days most of writer are not writing regularly or they left there ff incomplete plzzz guys write more in TU bcoz u are the people who keeps our raglak alive plZz write regular all those who finished plz comeback with new one and plzzz those left incomplete plzz comeback and complete and keep promoting and watching pehredar piya ki in Sony TV at 8:30pm and repeat 9am and 11:30am trust me there is nothing regressive and yaa may be time slot change but plzz must watch this show

    1. Bela

      Hey Nishu, thanks a lot.

  5. Lovely7

    Ending news is really bad news

    I felt bad when I read about ending but this part is amazing sis, felt relaxed with raglak scenes
    Please write more raglak stories whenever you’re free

    1. Bela

      Thanks a lot Lovely7, for understanding me. I will keep writing๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

  6. Kitkat

    bela you dumbhead…… bich main hi tapak jaati hain a ur link karke phirse gayab making us carve for ur stories….. n ya about this part is just fabulous as always….. I know laksh won’t ever fall for raginis first it will b Ragu who realise…… n felt bad as u saod its ending….. u know as I was missing u I read ur ss KMYMHJBKG almost 10 times this days since season ones 4 parts n season 2’s 2 parts….. I m missing u girl…. n ya next next time don’t make us wait like this….. love you……

    1. Bela

      Baahhhhh, I know, I am always late. Sorry for that.

      Thanks a LOT for all the love that you shower on my stories ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

  7. If u r planning to end this.u have to promise a fabulous epilogue .
    Ant d update i was again smitten with bela’s charm.stay blessed stay happy dr

    1. Bela

      Ragya, pressure mat daalo. Ab toh dhaakad epilogue likhna padega. Thanks a lot for the term and for the love๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

  8. More than awesome

    1. Bela

      Thanks Tani๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

  9. Hi bela this part was awesome as always.i loved all the Raglak scenes. Whenever you are going to update then update cocktail only please sakhi saiyan can wait. how many shots are remaining fir this ff?

    1. Bela

      Thanks raksha. ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

      But the thing is, I have people waiting for Sakhi Saiyaan too. And I have set a sort of schedule. I will try and update quicker, if possible. ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

  10. Even I thought that lakshya will realised his feelings first as kavya was not around them but sanskar was always around thats why u thought lakshya will be the 1st to realise them. Anyway please please please make him realise his feelings for ragini too. Well he was the one who was showing strong symptoms of love I am talking about his reaction when he saw ragu n sanky close during photo shoot. His reaction was so strong. That’s why I thought he will realise his feelings 1st but I think when he will hangout with kavya then he will be more clear about his feelings. Update soon (cocktail).

    1. Bela

      Haan, that’s the thing. But seems like our Ragu is quicker and smarter. Let’s see what happens ๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰

  11. Awesome

    1. Bela

      Thanks aleeza๐Ÿ˜˜

  12. Aasthu

    I thought he loved Ragini..how can he go out with that manipulative Kavya???? I want raglak to realise their feelings together….I want to kill Sanskar for filling Ragu’s mind with worry….the trial room was nice…plzzz update SS…

    1. Aasthu

      Bela is PPK gonna be banned or are they gonna change the slot to 10??? Happy that u took up A’s advice and decided to give shorter and quicker updates…

      1. Bela

        Hey Aasthu, the verdict has been given. BCCC has asked PPK to be shifted to the 10 pm slot and run a disclaimer that it doesn’t promote child marriage. There is also news that the leap may be shown, Ratan will grow up. But the timeslot news is confirmed.

    2. Bela

      Damn, Lakshya does need to set his priorities straight. But yes, they will realise their feelings soon.

      Thanks a lot ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

      1. Aasthu

        Both can work on their feelings…Laksh was so jealous of Sanskar in the previous chapter and he also had definite feelings which he couldn’t interpret as love for Ragini…so I was kinda surprised that he wanted to work on his relationship with Kavya when he clearly said to Ragini she was only after his money and that she would do anything to get a chance in bollywood….I don’t know about Ragini…only on 3 occasions she expressed feelings for Laksh…1- during the photoshoot 2- in the trial room and 3- when Laksh said about giving his relationship a chance….

        Thanks for sharing about PPK…when will you update Sakhi Saiyan?? You have left the readers at cliffpoint…

      2. Bela

        Actually, I believe that Lakshya is someone who is rather dense in his interpretation of feelings. He doesn’t want to move on, considering that he has never had friends. Ragini, meanwhile, is in a phase where she is clearly off Sanskaar and slowly captivated by Laksh. So it was natural that she would understand her attraction first.

        Sakhi saiyaan? Ab bawaal Hoga๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

      3. Aasthu

        Oh..so since Laksh never had any friends,he thinks his jealousy is because he doesn’t want to share his favourite friend??? hmmm that makes sense….

        “Ab bawaal hoga” means???

      4. Bela

        Ab bawaal Hoga means, now there would be a riot๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

  13. Asw

    Amazing yaar why swara & sanskar is rude to ragini ? In photoshoot she has nothing to do with swara she has skin allergies & ragini just company her best friend & sanskar is he is jealous to laksh ? These two are too much ๐Ÿ˜ก keep going ๐Ÿ˜™

    1. Bela

      Ab Sanskaar aur Swara toh Sanskaar and Swara hi rahenge. Ignore kar. ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

      Thanks a lot Asw๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

  14. Asra

    fantablous bela dear….loved it alot…raglak scenes simply superbbb….omg i want to kill that swasan…swara s blaming ragu for her allergy and Sanky filling ragini mind with worry…my poor ragu but she rock with her answer….love u baby…eagerly waiting for nxt one…
    and ending s bad news for me…but u promise us to give epilogue so it’s okkk….but i want epilogue full of raglak…For honestly i thought laksh vll realise his feeling for ragu…but u change it…tkcr dear

    1. Bela

      Thanks a lot Asra, don’t worry, I will try and make it different ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

  15. Million dollar question is ki kon karega pehle love confession? I hope lakshya at least isme ragini ko piche chod de ekdum super se uper type in a mind blowing way confess kre ragu ko.she deserve all special treatment because lakshya was on off relationship with kavya but for ragu it was always one sided attraction towards sanskar n moreover sanky was always with other girl.

    1. Bela

      Yep. Total ghapla. Let’s see what happens๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰

  16. Awesome e

    1. Bela

      Thanks Aamy๐Ÿ˜˜

  17. Amazing part nd can’t wait for next

    1. Bela

      Thanks a lot Malu๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

  18. Elizabethlovely

    Awesome

    1. Bela

      Thanks Elizabethlovely ๐Ÿ˜˜

  19. Good one, keep going

    1. Bela

      Thanks a lot Vini๐Ÿ˜˜

  20. Excellent dear

    1. Bela

      Thanks Monisha๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

  21. Amazing

    1. Bela

      Thanks Thahseem๐Ÿ˜˜

  22. Awesome episode

    1. Bela

      Thanks Vennila๐Ÿ˜˜

  23. Shilpa-Saraj

    Amazing dear…actually i really thought ffl would fall for psl.. .. pls update soon cant wait to read whats coming up .. And pls update your other ffs tooo

    1. Bela

      Thanks a lot Shilpa-Saraj. I will try and update as soon as I can๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

  24. Awesome superb fantastic mind blowing amazing dear

    1. Bela

      Thanks a lot Ashly๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

  25. Jiyani

    Amazing dear……Loved it

    1. Bela

      Thanks a lot Jiyani ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

  26. Fabulous dear

    1. Bela

      Thanks Raglak_fan๐Ÿ˜˜

  27. Interesting episode

    1. Bela

      Thanks a lot Monu๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

  28. Fats

    Wonderful update Bela. It was totally RagLakicious. The two of them are a riot when together and they are always fun to read. I loved their outing. It had the perfect blend of humour and hotness. Damn was the trial room scene electrifying with all the slow movements and breathing. RagLak no doubt have a deep effect on each other and I’m glad they’re well aware of it. Also loool I love how Laksh gives in to Ragini and his business like attitude doesn’t work on her. She sure has a special place in his life. How cute. And omg Ragini finally got the feels. To me, it makes sense she fell in love first because with Laksh, Ragini was his first proper friend so he’s probably appreciating and loving the friendly vibes in their relation at the moment. But yeah, not for long since he won’t be able to resist Ragini and her charm. And I for one canโ€™t wait for that. Nor can I wait to read the next part. Things are getting very interesting with the love realisations, RagSan’s tensions and all the RagLak gossip. Oh and thanks for writing this fab update xx

    1. Bela

      Thank you SOOOO much Fats๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

      Yes, your understanding of Ragini’s realisation coming first is absolutely in sync with mine. Hope I do justice to your excitement ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

  29. Superb part

    1. Bela

      Thanks a lot Pearly ๐Ÿ˜˜

  30. Laashya

    Wonderful episode and lovely raglak scenes di and I don’t like both swasan and can’t wait for next episode

    1. Bela

      No one likes Swasan, thode tedhe hain yahan๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

      Thanks a lot Laashya๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

  31. Awesome update

    1. Bela

      Thanks Anju๐Ÿ˜˜

  32. Mintu

    Awesome bela..wow raglak moments are lovely๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ I missed this ff lot..u r going to end it???๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ˜”๐Ÿ˜” so sad ..its one of my favorite ff by my favorite author..give more raglak moments dear..post the next part soon ..waiting for it…take care

    1. Bela

      Thanks a lot Mintu, I will try and give more scenes ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

  33. Awesome I’m a silent reader also huge raglakian I loved all ur ffs u nailed it

    1. Bela

      Thanks a lot Zoya ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

  34. Awesome

    1. Bela

      Thanks Naymaz๐Ÿ˜˜

  35. Fantastic Bela

    1. Bela

      Thanks Pinki๐Ÿ˜˜

  36. Dharani

    Awesome

    1. Bela

      Thanks Sharabi๐Ÿ˜˜

      1. Bela

        Eeks, that’s autocorrect ka mistake. Sorry ๐Ÿ˜˜

    2. Bela

      Thanks Dharani๐Ÿ˜˜

  37. WOW finally you posted, it’s really outstanding episode dear and I just loved it a lot. You know what, I’m in love with your stories. Day by day my love for you is increasing dear. You are a fantastic writer. Raglak scenes are really really really interesting. I don’t like the way sankar accusing Laksh to Ragini. Honestly I think first FFL will fall for PSL, But here PSL fall for FFL. Just like Ragini, me too don’t like the way Laksh talking about kavya. Eagerly waiting for more more Raglak scenes. Please please please don’t end soon because Raglak ffs are really less now. Nowadays I really missing many Raglak writers including you. If possible please post next part ASAP. Love you dear and take care

    1. Bela

      Thank you SOOOOOOOOOO much for the love Ammu ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

      This will have to end but the story which won in the poll i.e. Dehleez will come in its place.

  38. Aliyahillary

    i’m so so so sorry i’m probabely the last one commenting here but what to do internet wasn’t working and sorry for my my last comment if it hurted u in any way it wasn’t intentional so sorry…..n comming to story it was just hillarious their chats, their conversation and ragini’s dialogues everything…..so finally ragini realised her love n frankly speaking i too thought lakshya will realise it first but u being bela always come up with unexpected…..now i just hope lakshya n kavya don’t patch up again leaving our PSL alone again……..sad its gonaa end soon but every story has a end so now just exited to know how they’ll end up togather………..love take care ………update soon…..ummmah…..

    1. Bela

      Thank you so much Aliyahillary ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜
      Let’s see how these filmy people come together.

  39. Excellent one

    1. Bela

      Thanks Mitra๐Ÿ˜˜

  40. Please please please make Laksh fall for Ragini soo hard.How dare he think about going back to again?Yeah he can’t move on easily but relationship doesn’t work without having feelings&he still has feelings for her after everything with Ragini?Ufff poor Ragu.
    Anyway Pleaseeeee update Sakhi Saiyaan soon dear.It has been sooo long since you posted it.Though I hate laksh there for doing adultery but hoping you will show Ragini as a strong woman there who will not be ready to his next conquest ๐Ÿ˜Š

    1. Bela

      Hey Riya, I have no idea whether you will laugh or cry at what Ragini does in Sakhi Saiyaan next. ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚

      Meanwhile, here, Lakshya will get a bitter taste of his own medicine soon๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

      Thanks a lot ๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜๐Ÿ˜˜

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