Raglak: Sakhi Saiyaan (Chapter: 2)

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Bela is back once again! I know, I know. It has been too long and half the population was wondering whether I was alive or not. I am. I was just busy in……………. Something. Very personal and a top secret. Okay? Very sorry if someone is really angry, I will try my best to update Cocktail within this week.

Anyways, coming to this episode, the dynamics have started changing now. Fast paced story, you see ????. Sorry if you find it short.?

So, let us begin…………….

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“Where is it……….DAMN IT, where is it?” I muttered as I shuffled through my drawers. No seriously, WHERE WAS IT? I always keep it here, never do I shift my things………………..

Ragini. That woman legit loves to touch my belongings. She loves picking up my things and keeping them in a different place altogether. Huh.

“Are you looking for something?” The devil asked me. I closed my eyes, counted to five to control my rising anger and then turned to her. Madam was wearing a pretty chiffon parrot green sari today, with pink rose buds sewn on the pallu, smiling in her usual irritatingly sweet way. Her hair was wet and the room was smelling of her signature floral shampoo. It was nice, that smell. She wasn’t.

Ragini clicked her fingers in front of me, bringing me back to Earth. I looked at her and narrowed my eyes. I pointed to my drawers and asked, “You have been touching my things lately?”

Ragini’s gaze followed my fingers and she frowned in confusion. She looks rather cute with that expression. However, she herself isn’t cute!

“No, I have not been touching anything of yours since…………..That morning.” Ragini replied. She turned around to go but I pulled her back towards me. She fell on me and we both fell on the bed, her on top. The water droplets from her hair fell on my face as I looked at her. Her huge brown eyes bore into my black ones as I saw a faint rush of pink creep on her full cheeks. She definitely looked cute now. But I know she isn’t cute. Period. But she was seriously blushing now and even I felt warm in my face. My hand was on her smooth milky toffee waist while hers was on my chest. Her peony pink lips were wet and looked rather inviting……….

TOING TOING TOING TOING TOING.

Ragini’s phone rang. I furrowed my eyebrows as I listened to her ringtone. It was a sitar tune. It was a FRIGGIN sitar tune! I looked at the crazy owner who now realised our position and quickly scrambled off me. She picked up her phone and smiled. “Yes Swara? Shopping? Why? Achha, Haan. Sanskaar’s birthday. You didn’t buy something yet? Achha you were confused. Okay. Ya. Ten minutes? Why? You are putting eye liner? Okay. I will be there. Okay.”

Swara? She was talking to her? This Swara I tell you, nonsense lady! As if the trauma of losing her to my brother was not enough, now I would have to deal with her highly tuned Swaragini nonsense again. How come she forgives Ragini so easily? What is so special in Ragini? She isn’t cute, she just looks cute. Nor is she beautiful, she just looks beautiful. What is this mess?

I saw her about to leave again, when I cleared my throat. She turned around again and raised an eyebrow at me. How does she do that? I have tried a lot but I always end up raising both of my eyebrows. Never have I successfully raised a single one. I tried to do it again, but again, I raised both of my eyebrows. Ragini again assumed her ‘cute’ expression. I pointed to my drawers again and said, “Answer me, where is it? The blue one?”

She looked at me as if I told her that I was a woman. “How would I know? I have never touched them in my life.” She replied.

“Listen Ragini, I don’t have much time now, I am getting late. I have to go to office and before that I have to go to the lawyer…………..”

“So if you are getting late, find another one. Why blue?”

“Because it is my lucky one. And I need all the luck today, for I am to obtain a divorce from you!”

Ragini stiffened. Her face clouded. She looked at me and then took a deep breath. “I. Did. Not. Touch. Your. Things. Get. It. Straight.” She said slowly, emphasizing on each word as if I was a kid.

Anger bubbled up inside me. She must be lying. She always does. I trusted her so much, above even Swara and turns out, she was lying through her teeth. She doesn’t want this divorce to proceed. Maybe that is why she must have hidden it.

“Listen Ragini! I always keep it in this drawer. And now it is not there. You are the only one who is fond of misplacing my things, so that I have to come to you to ask. You are such an attention seeker…………..”

“WHAT DID YOU SAY?” Ragini yelled at me. I stopped speaking and looked as she glared at me with an expression similar to her Dadi’s. She looked scary. I gulped as I saw her advance on me.

“Attention seeker? Are you delusional Mr. Lakshya Maheshwari? Like, seriously? I misplace YOUR things to gain your attention? Hello, reality check! I have done FAR worse things to gain your attention. I don’t need to do these silly little things that people like you and Swara are fond of doing. I play my game my way, heart and soul! If I am saying I didn’t touch your drawers, I DID NOT TOUCH YOUR DRAWERS! Why would I even want to touch them, that disorganised cabinet of stinking clothes…………..”

“Excuse me! Stinking clothes?”

“Yes! Don’t even try to deny in front of me that you don’t bath daily! And then, that God forsaken deodorant of yours! I keep sneezing non stop, when I smell it. Your cupboards are a mess, your drawers are a chaos and don’t even get me started on your study, it is a DISASTER!”

I looked at the panting woman in front of me with wide eyes. Was she really Ragini? Never had she talked to me like that. Leave me, never had she talked to ANYONE like that. She was always polite, diplomatic, sweet and all good things. What had happened to her?

It seemed that she understood my confusion because she huffed in indignation and crossed her arms over her remarkable chest. She tilted her pelvis to her left and I swear, I was fascinated by this pose. Like, she looked a lot like my Chemistry teacher with whom I had wanted a little chemistry when I was her student back then…………………….

“You know what is your problem Lakshya? You are seriously very disorganised. Both you and Swara. What a perfect match you both would have made, I was a fool to even interfere!” Ragini screamed at me. I stood gaping at her. Ragini never raises her voice. Never. Is something wrong with her? Maybe her time of the month is going on……………….I have heard women often have mood swings during “those days”.

“Look, I am sorry for shouting on you like this but trust me on this one. I didn’t touch your belongings. My self respect hasn’t DIED you know?” Ragini whispered gently.

Somehow, her tone reeked of sincerity. I looked wistfully at my drawer again. Suddenly, I remembered that she called me disorganised. What! How dare she?

“I am not disorganised, okay? My clothes are always in the cupboard, not on the dressing table. And my shoes are in the shoe rack, not sofa. How can you call me disorganised, you patient of OCD?” I asked her angrily.

And then, right before my eyes, I saw a phenomenon. Have you ever seen a bull? When a red colour cloth is waved at it, its nostrils flare in anger and then it charges. Something very similar happened. Ragini turned red, her nostrils flared and then she charged. Not physically. Verbally.

“Your clothes are in the cupboard, done. HOW they are is my question. Instead of being stacked on top of each other, they are strewn all over the place, just like on the carts at the local Sunday market, where those bhaiyas shout “100 ke 2 Lelo”! Some of your clothes still have their tags on them. You throw your sweaty shirts back there instead of keeping them in the laundry basket. Your nightshirt smells of your eww deodorant while your brand new shirt smells of the mosquito repellent I spray at night. And for God’s sake, tell me, why don’t you scrub clean the back of your neck? Your collars have a line as black as the colour of my kajal! You can’t imagine the horror I face………..”

“Hey shut up! My deo isn’t eww. It costs me 2500 rupees…….”

“My one costs only 150 rupees and I smell like roses! What is the use of your expensive deodorant then?”

I stood silently. Her deo costs just 150 rupees? Where does she buy them from?

“Have you seen your study table? Hey maara Khatu Shyam Ji, that place is similar to that table that features in games in which you have to clear up the mess! I once saw your stained coffee mug next to your charger and on top of a bunch of papers which I later identified as your new project’s legal formalities. Not to forget, your fountain pen was on the chair. This is ridiculous. You know, even Swara is more organised than you. At least she knows that we don’t keep eatable items next to hardware and important papers.”

“Why are you comparing me to Swara?”

“Because you are too similar. You are the male version of Swara, just more vicious, stupid and more disorganised. I feel that your messy habits is one of the reasons why you both always make such fattu plans!”

I looked at her in shock. She called me male version of Swara? How? Do I eat fish? Am I Bengali? Do I love Sanskaar? Well I do, but not THAT way! And………………

“You both are so disorganised that it reflects in your plans. You made a plan to kidnap and kill me but it went for a toss. Swara makes plans which are useless but better than yours. Look at Sanskaar. He is such a neat freak and his plans are as methodical as him. All his plans have been successful, whether it was the craziness drama, the drama to malign Swara’s image with my help, my manipulation, the idea to marry Swara to expose me, the plan of actually exposing me. All his plans have substance and organisation. So they are foolproof and always successful. Even mine. All the plans, evil as they were, were actually successful because I am systematic and efficient. Learn from this. Your personality traits are reflected in your actions and trust me, people notice. If you get even 10% more orderly than before, you would automatically find your work easy to manage.”

I reflected on her words. She was kind of right. All those lecturers at college used to say that we need to be neat, tidy and methodical in order to achieve success. And Ragini’s points were absolutely valid, if harsh. But the question was, how to become methodical?

“Ragini, should I use Google to find out how to become more organised?” I asked her. She sighed and replied, “No. Start by decluttering. Throw away everything which you do not use and which you haven’t used for more than six months. Separate things which you use only once in a while. Then clean your drawers, your cupboards and your desk. You will feel lighter. Then, make a list. Of the places where it could be. What you are looking for. Spot for it there and you will find it. And make a resolution to ALWAYS keep things in their right place.”

Sounds cool. I nodded to her. She nodded back and was going away when I turned to her. “Ragini?” I called out. She turned back and raised an eyebrow. “Thanks. And ask Swara to buy Sanskaar a watch. God knows why, but he gets turned on when a woman buys him watches!”

She smiled softly and mouthed a thanks. She was about to leave when she stopped again. I looked up expectantly. Ragini opened her mouth and closed it again. I raised my eyebrows and that prompted her to start speaking.

“I……..I am sorry Lakshya. For whatever I have done till now. I really am. It is just that……I was genuinely naive enough to think that I could get you. I REALLY thought that we would be happy together. I have always dreamt of a husband who would love and care for me and I would also love him. I fell in love with you but made the mistake of thinking that I could make you Love me too. I thought I would do it. I have understood now that it cannot happen. And that I have ruined many lives in my foolishness. Some have brought themselves and their lives back on track but people like you and I, we are yet to find our footing in life. We are yet to make out something of this mess. Your position is similar to mine in that way. I am sorry for ruining everything for you. Trust me, I understand what you are going through. You and I have much in common in that respect. You and I, both have lost our loves. We both have had our dreams destroyed. I cannot claim to be a good friend but I can surely lend a sympathetic ear if you ever need one. At least I will get some relief thinking that I was able to do some good for you.” She said in a hesitant manner.

I felt for her at that point. Somewhere, after the night I saw her burn those things, I realised that she had put a lot at stake and lost her all. And it was her own fault but I feel bad that we cannot help her. We couldn’t then, and we cannot now. I could forgive her, more for my own peace of mind than anything else.

“Ragini, I forgive you for everything. But please, don’t expect anything from me. I CANNOT love you, come what may. You know, there are some things you don’t have control over. Love is the biggest of them. You can’t fall in or out of love by will. I cannot fall for you. You are just too…………” I faltered, unable to form words.

“Different?” She supplied. I nodded. She smiled softly at my gesture. “I agree. We are too different. Opposites can attract but COMPLETELY opposite people just don’t click. I understood it now, the hard way. Anyways, thanks a lot. I promise, I would not come in between you and your life. I will complete all my wifely duties till the divorce is finalised. And don’t worry, I won’t trouble you after that. We can’t be friends after what all has happened.” I nodded in assent and she smiled and nodded to me.

After she left, I scratched my head in confusion. Ragini told me so many things, where should ​I start from? Yes, list! Let me find it first. I took out a pen and a paper and wrote in a neat handwriting boldly on top of the paper:

WHERE I CAN FIND MY LUCKY BLUE UNDERWEAR

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“Why watches?”

“It is a very decent and graceful gift. Plus Sanskaar loves watches, doesn’t he?”

“Yes, but he owns many pieces. I think I should buy him a pair of jeans.”

“No. Watch. I am telling you, he will love it. Even Lakshya thinks that he would like it if he gets gifted a new watch.”

“Ohho……..So it is Lakshya! I was wondering why you were being so insistent.”

I froze. Swara had no idea that Lakshya and I were divorcing. How would she react? Knowing her, she would definitely poke her nose in between and make some plan to work it out between us. I can’t let this happen.

Meanwhile, we entered a showroom and there Swara Sanskaar Maheshwari proceeded to start a fair as she ordered everyone around, yaying and naying their collections. I sat beside her, calmly sipping the orange juice I had asked for. After an entertaining ​show which lasted one hour and twenty six minutes, we finally left the store with a classic Rolex silver limited edition watch with us, much to my and evidently, the store staff’s relief. Swara was very satisfied with her purchase and was planning to wrap it and top it with a bar of Dairy Milk Oreo Silk chocolate. I know Sanskaar doesn’t eat chocolates. It is no wonder then, whose stomach this bar would ultimately settle down in. Sly girl!

We reached home and I, to my intense astonishment, found my room CLEAN. Seems like he had actually followed my advice. The clothes were arranged properly, the desk was clean and I could spot only a few things I could term useless. Good going.

I sat on the bed. I hadn’t meant to be so rude with him. But I just couldn’t help it. He acts like a child sometimes, speaks things out of line and in a tone that makes me cringe. I am a human being, someone who has done mistakes and is now repenting for them. There is no reason HE should be talking to me like that, not after what he did with me. I paid for his angst at my actions and the damage he suffered due to me by his own actions. We have become equal now. Just because we are divorcing each other, doesn’t mean he gets the license to be rude. He still doesn’t realise that all that he has done with me was also wrong. I don’t think he ever would.

Speaking of divorce, he must have got it legalised by now. It is possible that I am back to being Ragini Gadodia now. I sighed in pain. Even though I made a promise to myself that I would get over this, it is really hard. I lived this dream for so much time, I expected so much. And it was all going for a toss now, all thanks to my stupid belief that I could make Lakshya love me. I can’t. He can’t. And I have learnt it the hard way.

Sounds of footsteps broke my reverie as I quickly wiped my tears which had strayed from my eyes. I looked around and found Lakshya behind me.

“Everyone has arrived. I am going to announce our decision now.” Lakshya said. I nodded to him.

“I have to pack my things though. Not much, I am not taking back anything I received here. Just my phone, my personal jewellery, a few pairs of clothes and makeup. And yes, my body lotion.” I told him.

“Fine. Pack up quickly and get ready and come downstairs. Sanskaar is going to cut the cake in an hour.” He replied and walked away. I let out a huge sigh. This was it. I had no idea how everyone would react. Maa would be upset, Swara would get sad and Dadi Ma would get angry but apart from them, I don’t think​anyone would really care. And I prefer things to be kept that way.

I opened the cupboard, took out my bag and started packing. Half an hour later, I went to the washroom, freshened up, picked up Sanskaar’s gift which I had bought and went downstairs.

It was Sanskaar’s twenty fifth birthday and while others would prefer a big party to celebrate, Sanskaar being Sanskaar, decided to do it in his style. He just wanted his near and dear ones close to him on this special day. He wanted to be close to his wife, who he was desperately in love with. He was happy that she had decided to give him a chance and so, this day was a very special one for him.

Downstairs, everyone had arrived. Everybody was clicking pictures while Sanskaar was opening all his gifts( he loves gifts, cannot even wait to cut the cake!). He opened the one from Swara and instantly, a huge smile graced his lips. He hugged her tightly and from the corner of my eyes, I saw Lakshya sniggering. I was surprised. I thought he would get jealous. Maybe he really had moved on.

I slowly advanced towards the birthday boy, my once best friend and guru. Everybody stopped talking and looked at me warily as I came in front of him. Sanskaar had stopped smiling but he wasn’t angry too. His face was blank.

“Happy birthday Sanskaar” I said to him as I handed my gift to him. It was not that special. Not amongst the many expensive bottles of perfumes, expensive shirts, a classic limited edition watch and trendy shoes. But it was a bit personalised. I hoped he would like it.

Sanskaar took the gift slowly. Sujata Chachi said, “What did this chhori bring for my son? I hope it doesn’t hurt him or Swara in any way!” She was hushed by her husband but she had managed to do what she aimed for. I was now highly uncomfortable.

Sanskaar opened the wrapper and pulled out the black leather diary, with an ‘S’ embroidered on it. Below, his name was engraved in gold in bold letters. With it was a pen which again had his initials printed on it. Seeing the gift, a soft smile graced his lips and he looked up at me.

He stood up slowly and as everyone watched with bated breaths, he came forward and hugged me lightly. “Thank you so much for them. They are lovely.” He whispered in my ear. I hugged him back and smilingly replied a thanks. He pulled back and smirked.

“I hope the pen has ink in it. I don’t trust you much, you know?” He said playfully. I smirked at him in reply. He chuckled and patted my head in a sign of fond comradeship. It was a beautiful feeling. At least for me.

The cake was cut, the songs were sung, the snacks were served and the speeches were made. We were now sitting in the living room and I was waiting for Lakshya to announce the news. He seemed to be trying. I signed him to do it now, as the conversation had ceased. He nodded briskly and cleared his throat audibly.

Everyone looked in his direction. He smiled nervously and started speaking. “I…..We………I mean Ragini and I had something to share with you all.”

Everyone looked at me promptly and I cursed Lakshya under my breath for his obvious lack of grace and tact. He looked at me apologetically and continued. “Ragini and I have filed for divorce.”

There was pin drop silence. Everybody looked at us and then at each other. And then, all hell broke loose.

“Divorce? Talaaq?”

“Kya? What?”

“How, why, when?”

“Ragini is ready to divorce you?”

“What are you saying?”

“Is it necessary? You are husband and wife.”

“Is this a joke? Mazaak hai kya?”

“When did you take this decision? Why wasn’t I told?”

The last question was obviously uttered by my Dadi Ma and she looked in shock, as if it hadn’t been Lakshya but Dada Ji who had said those words. Lakshya was looking at everyone and was sweating profusely. I rubbed my temples, said a silent prayer and then, in a loud and authoritative voice said, “Enough!”

Everyone sat silently as they looked at me. I decided that Lakshya was not capable of handling this. I would have to take the reins of the conversation in my hands.

“Lakshya and I………..We……I mean I have finally realised that I was wrong. I am sorry for all my deeds and I want to correct them. And my repentance would begin with leaving Lakshya. We are not happy with each other and I don’t think we could ever be, we are too different from each other. We want different things in life, our lifestyles are starkly different, our likes, dislikes, thoughts, nothing match. I was living in a bubble when I thought earlier that these things would not prove a hindrance. I was wrong in what I did and we have decided to get divorced, start our lives on a new note and forget this.” I said in one go.

Everyone was looking at us in rapt attention. I smiled hesitantly. Finally, Maa came and patted my head fondly. “I would always wish that the situation had been different. Or your decision. But we cannot force you both and so, I support your decision. God bless you beta. May you walk on the right path from now on.”

Beside me, Lakshya took a deep sigh of relief. I looked at him and he smiled at me. It was ironical to me, how this smile was at the prospect of our separation. But it didn’t matter now. I had already chalked out the rest of my life. A life with no sign of him.

Little did I know that my plan was about to flop in the most crushing way possible as some events would force me to face harsh realities faster than I had imagined.

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Done. Okay guys, Cocktail next. Goa still on.???

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87 Comments
  1. _Angel_

    This was amazing I loved it and I loved ragini’s confession about laksh being messy and then he actually listens to her cleans the room can’t imagine laksh doing that

    Anyway I really miss ruhaan I hope he is well still waiting for ur epilogue for that ff

    Can’t wait till the next part
    Till then
    Take care
    Keep smiling ☺️

    1. Bela

      Epilogue for Tera Mera Rishta Purana? It was posted long back. Here is the link.

      http://www.tellyupdates.com/raglak-ff-tera-mera-rishta-purana-epilogue/

      And thanks a lot for the love on this one????

  2. Fats

    OH MY GOSH! THIS STORY IS AMAZING! Like many others, I’m so glad you decided to write your own version of this track because your stories are the real deal in comparison to the shitty stuff Swaragini use to show. So I thought of giving you some feedback about your first part because TU are no longer accepting comments on that particular update and because it was so good that it deserves all the appreciation that it can get. Everything: from the confrontations to the characterisations was projected so well that it’s set up the perfect pathway for several journeys. The journey of individual characters (Ragini and Laksh) and their journey as a couple. After going through so much, both physically and emotionally, both together and separately, it will definitely be exciting to read these journeys. Also can I just take a moment or two to appreciate your writing skills? Girl they are PHENOMENAL. You capture the emotions of everyone and present them in such a poignant manner. Especially Ragini’s in that particular update. The fire scene was brilliant and it gave a whole extra intensity to Ragini’s emotions. Ragini may have felt she burnt her ‘illusion of perfect love and happiness’ but little does she know she’ll get Laksh back in her life. And I am super excited to read how this will end up occurring given Ragini and Laksh’s current state.

    Also this update was just as spectacular. Like how do you manage to get us so hooked Bela? Lool I LOVE how Ragini wasn’t taking any shit from Laksh. She was on fire throughout her lecture. But one thing that really caught my attention from that was no matter what Laksh thinks of Ragini or what he tries to make his mind think of her, in the end he decided to change. It goes to show that despite their fragile relation, there’s still a sense of trust and Ragini is still able to impact Laksh. And this is making me love RagLak’s current dynamic. It isn’t one of love nor is it one of hate. It’s just something else; something very unique. Also I like how Ragini is trying to make amends in her relations with so much sincerity: her apology to Laksh, her help to Swara, and her kind gesture to Sanskar were all very heart touching. You’ve dealt with Ragini’s character graph so well and made such a great connection between her and the audience in just TWO updates. And eeeks, the ending!! You end in a way which has a wave of questions floating my mind and I’m always left excited at the prospect of reading the next part. Oh and one last thing, can I just say I LOVE LOVE LOVE how Laksh was confused about whether Ragini was cute/ beautiful. Laksh having confusion as one of his traits is amazing because it just makes your version of Laksh complete. He’s forever been confused since the TKJPM days. Anyways with that being said, can’t wait to read the next part.

    1. Bela

      Me likes the length of your comments very much??

      This story is different from what everyone is perceiving it to be but yes, I am planning to show the dynamics of Raglak’s relationship here full-on. This is a Raglak story and people will get that exactly.?

      And yes, I wanted to show that despite what he thinks of Ragini, there is still a small amount of trust on her, fuelled by his belief that she loves him and ofc, what he doesn’t want to admit which I will reveal later on. Keep watching bae????

      Thanks a lot for the love????

      P.S. Confused Lakshya is our speciality.????

  3. Wow awesome

    1. Bela

      Thanks a lot Mithu???

  4. Akshitha

    Dnt seprt dem dearrrr

    1. Bela

      I won’t even dream of it Akshitha?
      Thanks a lot??

  5. Interesting episode and eagerly waiting for next episode

    1. Bela

      Thanks a lot Ammu???

  6. Naz_Temish

    Underwear?? And that too Lucky?? God he was searching for it??…Loved that chemistry teacher one and perfume…what a matured nok jhok….you nailed it..the way ragini approaching to happenings are amazing…YOU NAILED IT BELA?????????

    1. Bela

      Thanks a lot Naz_Temish???

      Although I am Fangirling after your version of Laksh??

  7. Naz_Temish

    Can’t wait for cocktail

    1. Bela

      I am working on it?

  8. IQRA222

    It was awesome belaa di and yess i am very very angry if you will post cocktail then i eill be cooled so do post it ok
    And waiting for the next part

    1. Bela

      Achha okay iqu…….I will try and post it within the week. ?

      Thanks a lot???

  9. Berdilla

    Awesome dear friend i loved it

    1. Bela

      Thanks a lot Berdilla?????

  10. Amazing dear

    1. Bela

      Thanks a lot Ashnoor??

  11. Lovely7

    Wow
    Ragini I rocks

    Waiting for cocktail next part

    1. Bela

      Thanks a lot Lovely7 ???

  12. It’s one of my favourite track that I wanted to happen in swaragini
    I didn’t get it but
    You make my wish true. Thank u sooo much bela thank u
    Can’t wait for next part post soon

    1. Bela

      Thanks a lot abi. I really hope you like my plot. It is different from the serial but it will have Raglak bonding truly.????

  13. Mintu

    Awesome… Omg its outstanding bela…!!! Waiting for ur cocktail dear.. Post it soon

    1. Bela

      Thanks a lot Mintu???

      I will surely try??

  14. AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME

    1. Bela

      THANKS. THANKS. THANKS.????

    1. Bela

      Thanks Avika??

  15. Ria

    Bela, should I discover some new words? How do you do it? You leave me spellbound and mind me saying, I hate you for that? ?
    Well, about this update; It started at a very funny note. I can’t imagine someone’s​underwear being their lucky charm. High much? ?
    Ragini’s reaction of not taking any bullsh*t into consideration was fantastic. I loved how she stood up for her own self. I can’t get enough of it yet. The conversation was indeed BEAUTIFUL! ?
    I loved the following too:
    • Lakshya’s suggestion for Sanskaar’s gift.
    • Ragini helping Swara and the descriptions she (you) gave of Swara being pretty much confused and late to select the gift. ?
    • Ragini’s gift to Sanskaar.
    • Ragini elaborating the divorce reason and her being guilty for what all she’d done before. ?
    Shall I say, what Ragini didn’t know? Pretty much wary about it, though. ?

    P.S.: Listen, but in the other FF, the track is kinda similar actually. About this and . . I told you, remember?

    Looking forward to the next one anyway. ?

    1. Bela

      Aww…..But I love you. No hate?

      Arrey, he is Bela’s Lakshya. He can be anything and he can do anything. My Lucky is always high???

      What didn’t Ragini know? I wanna know?

      Thanks a lot and don’t worry, the plot could be the same but the scenes and the description wouldn’t be. And I will be backing you.???

      1. Ria

        Alley!!!! Yahin sab Bata deti hoon, you know. Phir koi padhega hi nahi aapka FF! ??

    2. Asw

      Hey ria when will update ur raglak ff ? It’s been a month ago Dr ?

      1. Ria

        Hey Asw, I’m trying to write it, but right now, I’m not able to pen down a single word. Hopefully, I’ll post that and finish it first, then start updating you guys with Bawara Mann. ?

  16. I have no words to appreciate u. It is more than awesome. Loved it. Waiting for your next episode.
    Post soon.
    Love you ??? and ur ffs too.
    Bye

    1. Bela

      Thanks a lot Lucy???

  17. Awesome dear

    1. Bela

      Thanks a lot aleeza???

  18. Superb part

    1. Bela

      Thanks a lot Malu???

  19. Awesome ?

  20. Dharani

    fantastic… loved ragini giving lecture how laksh keeps his things and advising him

    1. Bela

      Thanks a lot Dharani???

  21. Asra

    bela dear it’s fantablous mindblowinggggggggggg…. first lucky search na…that time I thought he searching something important thing…but…omg laksh u search for underwear…that’s luck for u laksh…hahaha….costly perfume omg….fabulous dear….ragini gift to Sanky….Amazing dear…u rock it….eagerly waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear…

    1. Bela

      Thanks a lot Asra???

      I purposely tried to show it in that way. I am glad you liked it???

  22. awesome

    1. Bela

      Thanks a lot Ammy???

  23. Asw

    Ur rocking Bela? ragini ringtone, male swara, swaragini nuisance ? last part little confused new entries? R raglak separate? Keep going

    1. Bela

      No baba…..No new entries. Just a new life?

      And I won’t seperate Raglak……….Yet.?

      And Thanks a lot???

  24. It’s really wonderful. You are awesome bela.

    1. Bela

      Thanks a lot Mitra???

  25. Anjali30

    This is the first of your stories that I’m reading… Tho I have heard from others that ur an amazing author…

    I have to agree… Just love ur words and grammar and everything….
    Can’t wait for the next chapter… ❤❤

    1. Bela

      I am honoured you chose to read my work, I hardly have any Swasanians as my readers. ???

      People actually think I am Amazing? Aaj toh party!????

      Thanks a lot for your comment????

      1. Ria

        Jab Maine bola toh ignore Kiya. Yaar rakhenge ham aap ki Dosti. ?

      2. Anjali30

        Haha… To tell the truth… Was slightly biased… But then a story is a story… No matter the pairs… And I just love the way you write..<3 <3

      3. Bela

        Ria, I believed you. But since you are yourself such a good one, I was wondering whether you were being sarcastic or not????

      4. Bela

        I agree. A story is a story. I used to read a Swasan ff but it got discontinued. And I read some stories which have both the pairs.

        Thanks a lot ???

      5. Ria

        Surely. ?
        I told you, you’re better.
        Now, no arguments! ?

      6. Bela

        Yes, since Bela is always right, therefore, I win the argument….. Fair and square ???

      7. Ria

        Omg! I told no arguments. ?
        Forget it. Mujhe michmichi mach Rahi hai ab. ??

      8. Bela

        I am not arguing baby. I am establishing my superiority as the always right one above yours?????

      9. Ria

        Yuck, Baby! Tia ka bhoot Chadha hai kya? Any “universe ek saath” type ke lines bhi? ?

      10. Bela

        Lol, no! I found her voice too irritating. God knows how peaceful my days have been since her track ended???

    2. Anjali30

      Lol… Ria… Rona band karo… Now she’ll believee :*

      1. Ria

        Di, finsihed your exams quickly. I’m waiting for SNFM now. ??

      2. Anjali30

        U finished snfm? I thought u just told u didn’t… :* :*

      3. Ria

        Okay, although I wanted to keep this a secret, but you see, I’m not a secretive person. ?
        I started reading SNFM after MMAI ended. ? But I love this, although I’m yet to read the starting few chapters. ?

  26. Amazing….

    1. Bela

      Thanks a lot Lilly???

  27. Rukhiya ruku

    Iam a silent reader thought to break the Silence. Di you are rockingg , amazing epi , loved it , waiting for the next epi ???

    1. Bela

      Thanks a lot for commenting Rukhiya ruku???

  28. Rukhiya ruku

    Iam a silent reader thought to break the Silence. Di you are rockingg , amazing epi , loved it , waiting for the next epi ???
    Keep going…

  29. Nearly missed this, glad I saw it before logging out, awesome Chapter, loved the underwear part and especially the Birthday Gift scene, liked the cute fight between RagLak. . . Post the next part soon, can’t wait. . . But even if I miss to see the next part, I’m sure my friend will inform me ?

    Take care . . . ✨

    1. Bela

      I will PM you whenever I update either Sakhi Saiyaan or Cocktail ?

      Thanks a lot Halima????

  30. A.xx

    amazing Bela loved it and one of my fave ff’s this year …glad u posted it and love how Ragini reacted to Lakshya and loved sanky xx post soon this and cocktail xx

    1. Bela

      Thanks a lot A.xx???

      I will update Cocktail first. Next will be Sakhi Saiyaan’s turn?

  31. i only read swasan stories…but i loved ur description…my first ever raglak ff…loved it?great going☺

    1. Bela

      Thanks a lot Ritu. ???

  32. Aasthu

    Saying it was superb would be understatement….I just loved it….I saved this in my lap and I already read it for about 3/4 times….I loved the way Laksh described Ragini….she looks cute but isn’t cute…and the other one too was a bit funny….I loved the line which says about Ragini charging like a bull….haha……R’s sentence :”I know u don’t bathe daily and rub your neck it looks like my kajal” were so funny…haha….I ws controlling my laugh bcoz dad was there in the house….L’s cupboard reminds me of my cupboard…it is so messed up…but I don’t put dirty clothes in it….raglak fight was so cute and good….I loved her comparison of the smell of L and his clothes and herself…..his list was even more funny…”where is my lucky blue….” seriously Bela you are something……I liked Ragini’s gift for Sanskar…a diary…with S encarved on it….ragsan convo was also nice……finally R-Ap convo….sweet….I didn’t quitte get the last line….what did she mean???? Did L already plan his mrg with K as soon as he divorced R ??? I don’t know much about K-L track…I started watching SR for a time pass towards the end of K-L track….after that I stopped watching….

    1. Bela

      Thanks a lot Aasthu???

      Actually the last line is the indication of the story of this FF, which will unveil with the coming episodes. No K, that much I am assure you.?

      And no, actually, K entered L’s life when he was fooling Ragini by showing fake love to get a divorce and his property back.

      1. Aasthu

        Bela,if K is not there then how is R’s plan of her life going to be disrupted????

      2. Bela

        Wait and watch Aasthu???

  33. Rasha

    am sorry dear I dnt knw to give a long comment like ur long & sweet update… it’s was so amazing no words to found a best for u.. each & everyone pov was awesome which most I loved that u describe about sanskaar same like ragini the best in planning & executing the thing perfectly was extraordinary… this rashmi always shown that sanskar manly & hero, ragini as devil & title for the support, laksh later nothing just a waste & dumped him finally her favourite swara a super women with good ,bold, sweet,loving, strong etc… but when u compared her to laksh na it was like really top of the funniest mattered me.. coming to one more which I really shocked & laughed to core is “WHERE I CAN FIND MY LUCKY BLUE UNDERWEAR ” I thought the blue may b some is favourite suit but u rocked with the laksh lucky thing & I shock ..
    I thought it amazing as always… I think this is some sweet really fiction out of ur mystery fictions..

    1. Bela

      I have always found Ragini and Sanskaar similar in terms of their depth and understanding. They are more layered, shaded and introspective. Swara and Lakshya have had very single dimensioned characters even though they tried to show Lakshya having grey shades. Hence, the comparison.

      This is not a thriller. It just has one big truth which will change Raglak’s lives and consequently their relationship.?

      1. Bela

        And thanks a lot???

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