RagLak- Ready to breakup-episode 4

Ready to breakup

Laksh looks at Ragini. She was scared.

Laksh: why are you shouting..?

Ragini: then..! why are you taking me in lonely area..?

Laksh: this is short cut to your college. I said know…

Ragini: then, why did you stop before this haunted house..?

Laksh looks out from window. ‘oh, there is a house here..? ok.. I stopped bcz you shouted. I didn’t see whether there is a house or something.’

He starts car and keeps going. Ragini takes breath and beats her head in herself. She gets even more relieved after reaching road of her college.

She before getting down..

Laksh: did you think, I’m going to do something with you..?

Ragini looks on…

Laksh: yes, I forced u once, but it doesn’t mean I’m a man like that. you can trust me. Don’t get worried around me..!

Ragini: sorry…

She gets down.. Laksh goes away without looking at her.

As soon as Ragini enters, her friends attack her with words.

Kavya: what Ragini…marriage… first night… aaa…aaa. What did you do..??

Ragini: shut up..!

Kavitha: girl feeling shy yar..!!

They give hifi.

Ragini: hey..i said shut up…

Mansi: yes, we will shut up. Now, you like your husband words only… how much he love her..! he came to drop her..!!

Ragini glares at them. They laughs. She chases them to beat.

Later on, Ragini is going to lab with her friends. She then realizes her ID card is missing. She remembers that she forgot her card in the car.

She is about to get upset, then she looks a handsome man is coming from college gate. It’s Laksh. He waves hand to her. She goes near him.

Ragini: why are you here..?
Laksh: why your ID is in my car..?

Ragini takes it…

Ragini: than…
Laksh: don’t tell me thanks. I have to come back bcz of you making my time waste.

Ragini: who asked u to come then…?
Laksh: I hate anything which belongs to you to stay in my car…!! Got it..?

Laksh goes away. Ragini looks at him in anger. Her friends, ‘Ragini, this is college. Don’t do romance with your husband here…!’

Ragini beats her head. ‘these stupid girls..!’

Later…. In evening,

Again Laksh comes to take her back.

Kavitha: your husband loves you a lot ragu..

Kavya: yes..we are jealous.

Mansi: why don’t you introduce him to us..!

Ragini: no way..!

Trio: please..!!

They comes with Ragini…

Ragini: laksh, they are my friends.

Trio: hai..

Laksh: oh..hai..! ragini, even you can have friends..?

Ragini glares at Laksh.

Laksh: how you guys are adjusting with her..? she is just.!

Ragini: mr.Laksh…! don’t tease me before my friends..!

Laksh: I didn’t tease you.. I said truth..!

Ragini: oh.. if I speak truth about you..

Before she completes Laksh drags her in… she happens to fall in her seat.
Her friends trio go away laughing.

Ragini sitting properly: what is need to talk to my friends like that..?

Laksh: then why did you bring them here..?

Ragini: hey..! they wanted to talk to you..

Laksh: hey, you aren’t my leader to decide whatever you want about me..!

Ragini: don’t think yourself as a hero..! they just wanted to talk…

Laksh: so, I will also bring my friends now..!

Ragini: are you mad..??

Both of their fight continues till they reach home.

Laksh stops car. She was panting.

Laksh: actually, I don’t like driving car silently. The deck is not working. So, I kept work for your mouth.

Ragini makes her eyes big in shock.

Laksh: your friends were actually nice. Especially that girl in middle..she was beautiful…!!

Ragini: mr..

Laksh: they are not like you I think..

He silently goes away.

Ragini: stupid..idiot..!

Laksh: same to you 100 times..!!

To be continued…

/*sorry for small update guys*/

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  1. Fairy

    Hahahahhahahahhaha oh god!!!!!dis ff….ahh!!!!m lovng it so so soooo muchhh ….omggg!!!!!!fantastic update….amazng fabulousssss……..laksh is damnnnnn superbb..I love u yaaar heheheh??? ragz baby u know na I love u d most bt still dis tym m wid laksh???????…m enjoyng dis storyyy sooo muchh…u know everything I opened TU, I frstly check for dis ff…..N wen i get it I automatically strted smiling?????…love dis so so sooo muchh..thnx a ton for gvng me such an entertaing story??????lotz of love…keeep rockng n stay blessed my sis??????????????n plz post nxt part as soon as posssible n plz a longer update plz ?????????????????

    1. Astra

      haaaaaa….. I’m falling downn…! plzzz..some one hold me…. I’m dipped in super super great love of my friend…. awww… my dearyyyy…. thank you so muchh…. you are enjoying my ff this much… awwwwwwww I’m so glad to hear this…. for u nxt update will be big one…!!! thanks a lot dear….

      1. Fairy

        Awwwww!!!dats reallly sweet of u…heheheh wl b eagerly waitng for d nxt update?????lotz of love?

  2. Superb dear …both gave attitude…they r proving that they r not less compared with other…waiting for next part.. Post it soon

    1. Astra

      thanks a lot mintu…

  3. Lovely7

    Nice but want to see love angle

    1. Astra

      thank you lovely… yup it is on the way…

  4. Really Tom and Jerry fight it’s good.first step to become friends

    1. Astra

      yes sri… u r right… thank you…

  5. Darshini

    Asthu…it’s really superb yaar…
    U made me laugh throughout…
    Ragini gonna get jealous I thnk bcz laksh said her frnd is beautiful na…ha ha…
    That deck matter…wah waah…their silly fights were awesome…
    Waiting for the next part…
    Take care dear ?

    1. Astra

      thank u so much darshu…

  6. Akshata

    oh my poor baby Ragu, dont worry i am with you, he is teasing you and fooling you, really feeling bad for you, dont worry i will complaint this to Astra, then she will teach lesson to laksh. ok now smile for me…. like a good girl 😀
    awesome update, loved it….. their nok jhok on small issues, teasing each other, showing attitude, waiting for their realisation of love.

    1. Astra

      ok aki..i will teach a nice lesson to himm.. just wait n see… haha, thanks dear

  7. Nice waiting for next part

    1. Astra

      thank you

  8. IQRA222

    ha ha ha what an episode too funny

    1. Astra

      thank you dear

  9. Cute… Tom nd jerry fights….. Devils…. ?
    We love such devils..

    1. Astra

      thank you bubbly

    1. Astra

      thank you

  10. superb funny

    1. Astra

      thank you saranya

  11. Crystal089

    amazing loved it raglak are cute and funny

    1. Astra

      thank you dear

  12. Awesome episode. My cute Crazy Raglak and their fight scenes are superb.

    1. Astra

      thank you ammu

  13. Awesome loved it. Waiting for next part

    1. Astra

      thank you jaan

  14. Wow it was interesting.love to read more

    1. Astra

      thank you ammy

  15. Aasthu

    funny……..Astra plzzz don’t give a jealousy track dear……..y is it that people begin to love each other through jealousy track?????? This is something different from others or so I felt from the first 2 chapters. Plzz don’t make it just another ff with jealousy tracks and lots of eye locks and such stuffs……..hope you’ll consider my suggestion…

    1. Astra

      no dear.. he is just teasing her. to know what she is thinking…yup.. I’m happy to take your suggestion yar.. and thank you so much dear..

  16. Awesome

    1. Astra

      thank you akshara

  17. Dharani

    oh shocks queen it is an awesome update laksh teasing ragini is awesome especially that he dont like driving silently deck not working oh god that is awesome

  18. it was jst amazing yar..actualy,laksh loves ragu alot..hope they will soon realize there love keeping ego aside

  19. Jazzy

    omggg kya ha yeh ffi am falling in love with this ff just amazingg yaar

  20. Loved it to the core. Update nxt part soon

  21. Every time…I open this ff…but ends up in closing it without reading…due to lack of time…!! This time I am successful…!! loved all episodes…!! The are cool…!! But…at the end of 4th episode…I noticed the writer as you…!! Yaar,..!! You are soo talented!! writing many ff’s in different styles…that too regularly…!! _/\_ _/\_ _/\_

  22. Once again a mindblowing episode dear and i just love my ragu and lucky. I am just speechless.

  23. Superb Astra.. Aww I love RagLak’s attitude..

  24. Asra

    astu it’s a fantablous update dear…..loved loved loved it core…..am again fall in love with thz ff…..raglak fight superbbb…..u r incredible dear….last scene laksh teasing ragini that scene amazing dear….shocks queen u r great…..am eagerly waiting for ur nxt update….plz update soon dear….tkcr dear…

  25. A.xx

    Ahaha yar amazing love it,,,love their convos and especially lakshya’s replies xx

  26. Fats

    Amazing update. Aww I love RagLak’s cute fights. Laksh is such a tease ?. Can’t wait to read the next part ?


  28. Affaa

    Hiiii Astra I hope my comment will reach at u… Astra I don’t know how to express what I’m feeling now… Do you know ff love, ishq, kadhal by dhamini it’s was ragsan ff…..yaar that ff was my most favorite one….when that ff got end.. I was so sad..so I thought to write one ff….but I was still reading other ffs… All that was good … But not my favorite… After few months I started to feel everything as boring means my ff and others ff… So I toke gap from tu… I came back last month to tu… And I started to writing my ff again… Still I didn’t find its as interesting… For last two weeks I didn’t post my ff also… U may be think why I’m saying all this to u right…
    Astra today I found one ff… Which got in my mind yaar…. Seriously do you know I read ur ff 10 times… When to ur account I saw so many ffs… But I didn’t read all that… I may not read also… But I promise this ff is now my favorite for last 5 months I was searching such a ff…. I don’t know how to appreciate u for this great work… This 4 episodes stolen my heart….. Now I’m ur fun and ur my inspiration….yaar I promise I’ll be ur regular reader from today.. Ur storyline masha Allah outstanding…. And this episode marvelous…
    I don’t know all my words will reach at ur heart or not but belive me it’s all from my heart yaar… Ur just amazing… Love you lots… Keep writing…
    Insha Allah I’ll be back soon… Please post next episode asap.. Keep writing… Rock ur life…
    Take care…
    Bye Affa?

    1. Astra

      I read ur comment at least 5 times yar… bcz… they have really touched my heart. i can’t express my happiness just in thanks… i have to say a word which is more than that… i never thought this ff will be this good and you Will like this this much..!! you have really made me moved..!!! Dear…. thank you thank you and millions of lots of thanks…. today I’m feeling top of the world… I’m so glad that I have entertained u… I’m not understanding how to express my happiness now… again…thanks a lot dear… bye..take care…

  29. Superb part

  30. Osmmmmmm

  31. Asw

    Yaar sorry for late comment it’s amazing keep going

  32. Hahaha…..
    Loved Raglak nok jhok……

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