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Raglak – The rain in Spain , stays mainly on the plain! ( OS )

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Salam , Namaste , Hi!!
So guys I am Zuha , and u must know me and if not so you will know me. Guys I am here with my first OS which is for Raglak , hope you enjoy.

The journey begins…..

In a dark rainy night , I was all alone on the road as my car’s tyre was puncture , in hope of an aid I was praying to god , when I noticed a shadow lurking behind me. A thought came in my mind “Oh No!” This one word only comes when I see his face and listen to his stupid talks. I was not in the mood to see his face , but what can I do if destiny made me his. Yes , he was Lakshya , commonly known as Laksh. Laksh”Senorita , need my help?” I “Mr. Maheshwari , please I want to reach home ,pack my stuff and fly back to India , well I am happy that I will be staying away from you.” Laksh”Senorita , Laksh Maheshwari gets what he wants , and this is the case of true love”

Yes , he loved me madly like anything , and I was fed up of his words which only said “I love u , Senorita!!!” Literally , 2 years these 2 years were like hell for me to tolerate this mad person , he knows I am going to get married to Sanskaar when I will reach India , but his madness , Uffff!!!

Laksh continues”Senorita , aisay chotay chotay daishon mai aisi choti choti baatein hoti rehtein hain”

And the most irritating thing of him was , he keeps on repeating SRK’s line and think himself of Raj from DDLG and me as his Senorita urf Simran. Ugghhhh!!!!

Laksh ” Look , atleast today accept my love , look you are leaving today, 4rever , I do not care you will be in my life or not , you will be my Simran or not , you marry me or someone else but just say you love me , please…”

I know he is mad totally mad , crazy , stupid , idiot , psycho , whatever , but today I did not wanted to spoil my mood by shouting or fighting with him coz this is the last day of mine with him , then I will be free from him , so I was standing queitly and listening to his stupidity.

Laksh pulled me closer , and asked me do I love him , I wanted to say no , but something was stopping me to do so, I did not know why? But then I realized I am someone’s fiancee , Sanskaar flashed in my mind and I pushed him. I started walking away , ignoring him. I heard him calling out my name but I had to control on my unknown emotions , which I felt today and what they meant I do not know and actually donot want to know.

Laksh”Goooo! But if my love is true you will never leave me , today I am challenging God , My love will win or your commitement which you never made.”

I turned to reply him back , but was left shocked at seeing the sight , he was pointing a pistol towards himself , leaving me shocked.

I shouted “Laksh!!!” , he did not listened and was about to pull the trigger when the emotions which were hidden somewhere in my heart came on my lips. I shouted “I love you Laksh , I love you to the eternity , I love u!!” I broke down into tears , he left the pistol , stretched out his arms, I ran and hugged him , I felt peace in him , I found myself complete that day.

Yes , it is my story , my love story , which makes me complete. I am Ragini , Ragini who came to study Textile Designing in Spain but she did not knew she will find his Prince , sorry Raj there. That rain made me fall in love with him and the trees of love grow each and every day at the plain of our heart. That rain , that night , that feeling I can never forget. And yeah about Sanskaar , he married my little sissy Swara , and they both are a happily married couple in India. So , our love story finishes here , remember 1 thing , Love can happen anywhere , any momment , but never stop yourself from loving your soulmate , or you will regret.

So this One Shot ends here , hope u enjoyed , tell me in the comment box below.
Sorry , no Swasan but will come up with a new one for them surely.
But , till then bye ~ Zuha Fatima

Credit to: Zuha

42 Comments
    1. zuha(Asya Fan)

      Thanks.

  1. Short but cute

    1. zuha(Asya Fan)

      Yeah it is short , thanks for liking.

    1. zuha(Asya Fan)

      Thanks.

  2. Awesome……..god bless u……continue with more os or ff

    1. zuha(Asya Fan)

      Thanks Tasi 4r so much love , will come up soon.

    1. zuha(Asya Fan)

      Thnx.

    1. zuha(Asya Fan)

      Thanks

    1. zuha(Asya Fan)

      Thanks

  3. ur way of writing is really good and nice and write more os on raglak

    1. Zuha (Asya fan)

      Thanks for appreciating my work I will come up with more ☺

  4. superb….waiting for next part of ur ff update asap……

    1. Zuha (Asya fan)

      Thanks Kriya, I will be posting it by tomorrow parka ☺

  5. priya tripathi

    Hi zuha u remember me us os is good n ya i m fan of swasan more than raglak

    1. Zuha (Asya fan)

      Of course I remember u Priya, Ok soon will come up with an OS for Swasan soon, thanks for reading☺

  6. Superb ♥♥

    1. zuha(Asya Fan)

      Thanks?

  7. Superb ….and thanks for writing os on raglak…. Pls write more os on raglak

    1. zuha(Asya Fan)

      Thanks Nikkin , I will come with more soon.

  8. Awesome…..literally I was smiling, it was so good.

    1. Sorry, forgot to say Wasalaam.

      1. zuha(Asya Fan)

        No worries?

    2. zuha(Asya Fan)

      Awwww, I am happy that u smiled?
      Keep smiling?

    1. zuha(Asya Fan)

      Thanks?

  9. Superb dear and thanks for raglak

    1. zuha(Asya Fan)

      My pleasure!

  10. awesome

    1. zuha(Asya Fan)

      Thanks , Lovely!

    1. zuha(Asya Fan)

      Thnx ?

  11. Its such a cute short fairytale love story. Really very good. Keep it up.

    1. zuha(Asya Fan)

      Thanks 4r ur lovely comment?

  12. Nice story…. Plz come up with more such one shots

    1. zuha(Asya Fan)

      Thanks Nita , will come up with more OS?

  13. wow good.you are an amazing writer.short and sweet story

    1. zuha(Asya Fan)

      Thanks Swara , for reading and complimenting.

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