RAGLAK (A piece of my heart) intro

Good morning everyone and hope you all enjoy reading this fan fiction…..
So….I will introduce myself at the end of the episode and do tell me promptly whether you all liked the fan fiction or not without any hesitation…..and if you don’t like this episode I would ask you all to wait for few more episodes and then decide whether to quit or continue……
So….let’s get into the story…
It was a perfect lazy day, the crispy blue sky with the sun on it with a bright full face to disturb everyone on such a morning where everyone would love to fall asleep for some more time, but this bright full face was trying to wake us up on such a beautiful morning……..
Now, we are in the park…..and we can see a girl jogging and doing some exercises, she is doing it with so very much perfection…..she finished her workout and came to her car and started driving and came to a Mansion and ran inside that…..
The Black Mountain Mansion……. (In Venezuela)
I can see a big Mansion in front of me…. Let’s enter the Mansion….now where to go….let me enter this room…..It was a huge extra-fluffy bed, with millions of pillows and a huge down feather comforter. We can see a thin, extremely thin figure sitting in between the millions of pillows and doing something……actually she is writing something and she is the one who was in the park…..she closed the book suddenly as she heard the melody sound of the door move….and covered herself fully in the blanket and slept off on the feathery comforter…..
We can see a gentle man with his face full of tiredness and hunger……he walked to the heart shaped bed in the middle of the master bedroom….he saw the thin figure sleeping there, he was about to open the blanket but, took back his hand and sat there…..
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The Fountains Eve Mansion……. (In Cape Town)
The pearly rays of the sun played on my eye lids and woke me up to a fine morning……it took me only a few steps towards the window pane to see and feel the difference…. The air smelled earthy and the dry and drooping plants were now boasting of their new found youth it was coming of the age; but yes in reverse order….
Adjoining the plants were their new neighbours, slick, curly, twirling bougainvillea and weeds. They almost looked up to the tall trees, wishing to grow as tall someday. They gyrated with the smooth wind. Letting their Leafs dance to its tune like Cinderella with her prince charming…. But, without you it is all a waste of time…..

The boy who was writing this closed his book and started walking towards some room come, let’s follow him……
Better to close our ears and get into this room, there is so much of noise coming out of this room….which room did he enter…..there is so very much of noise inside….

Actually this is the boy whom we saw writing the dairy in his room and now he is practicing music….
Boy: e dil tanha kyu rahe….
Kyu hum tukudon mein jiye….
e dil tanha kyu rahe….
Kyu hum tukudon mein jiye….
Kyu roo meri e sahe….
Now he starts to sing in a loud voice….
Boy: mein adura jee raha hu…
Har dam hein keha raha hu…
Mujhe teri zaroorat hain
Mujhe teri zaroorat hain
Mujhe teri zaroorat hain
e dil tanha kyu rahe….
Kyu hum tukudon mein jiye….
e dil tanha kyu rahe….
Kyu hum tukudon mein jiye….
Kyu roo meri e sahe….
mein adura jee raha hu…
Har dam hein keha raha hu…
Mujhe teri zaroorat hain
Mujhe teri zaroorat hain
Now he plays his guitar……
He finishes the song fully and then opens the door suddenly a girl comes and drags him from there……

Precap: some talking and scrating few mysterious past time…..

So how do you all feel was it a good episode……before you decide let me tell you I’m not a good writer but, tried to my satisfaction……hope you all found it good or better than worst at least…..

Who do you think are the pairs in Cape Town? ; Also Venezuela?

And do comments about this episode without fail whoever is reading and encourage me guy’s…..
Let me tell you something…..

So, guy’s I am not new here. You all know me already Just writing is my passion and I thought of writing about RagLak so thought of going with this but, don’t worry there are SwaSan also…..Hope you all like it….i think many of you know me here so….hello everyone……Ani, Rafee, Ruhani, Sindhu rm, Naimi, Meghs, Hayathi, Taiana, Nita, Tania, Anu4875, Neha, Swati, Ayushi, Ajsa, Reji, Harini, Aarti, Ammu, Priya, Kalai, Kaira, Kruthi, Janebetty, Heena, Dafsi, Darsh, Zzzzz(Charming), Gifta, Pav(Pavani), Shreya, Namita…..and many more babe’s I know you all will start guessing me……so keep guessing guys…..i know you all guys but not sure if you all remember me……
And I’m not posting it under my real name in which you all know me just want to see whether you all will guess or not….and don’t worry I will reveal my name soon…..
DO dump all your comments in the comments box and I will be waiting for your messages and suggestions…..
Again have a fantastic day ahead…..

Credit to: SS

36 comments

    • Ayushi

      that’s so sweet of you Ani…..i’m happy that you remember her…..that tooo so very well……she will be very happy i will indeed tell her…..

    • Ayushi

      she was not writing it…..i insisted her so much then she started writing……i’m so happy that i did right….

  1. Ruhani

    Omg u r sharon right I missed u babes so much great strt dr hopes to see mre… Cme back soon

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