RagLak – Our Cute Love Story (Part 17)

Hey guys… So as said I am back wth next part…. Thank you so much to all those votes, comments and silent readers as well.

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A room is shown where a girl is lying on the bed with lots of wires attached to her whole body. Her face is revealed to be Ragini. Her face is so pale and lifeless.

At that time Laksh enters into the room holding a bag and places it on the table. He has a beard. His eyes are red nd bulged. His face also became so pale. He lost all his charm.

He goes to Ragini sits beside her. He holds her hand carefully and kisses it. He looked at her keeping her hand in the middle of his both hands. His eyes are teary.

Laksh: (with chocking voice) Duckling wake up na… Still how much time you want to rest? It is been 8 months you are resting. You know your jelly is missing you so much. Please…

Saying he sobs holding her hand near his chest.

He slowly sits on the floor beside the bed holding her hand and keeps head on the bed. He slowly goes into the flash back of 8 months ago.


Laksh: (screams loudly) RAGINI

Hearing his shout Sanskar, Dp and Shekhar come near him and find him in devasted state and get worried. Sanskar immediately rushes to him and hugs him.

Laksh breaks down in his embrace.

Sanskar: (worried) Lucky what happened? Why are you crying and why did you shout Ragu’s name?

Laksh: (breaking the hug and looking at him with tears) Ra… Rag…Ragini… Acci…Accident (are the only words he could able to say and broke down again while all others gasp listening to him)

Shekhar stumbled back while Dp holds him preventing from falling. Shekhar looks at him while both Dp’s and Shekhar’s eyes are filled with tears.

Sanskar: (composed himself breaks his hug and holds him through shoulders) Lucky say properly what happened?

Laksh explains him everything.

Sanskar: (stammering) Ra…Ragu we… We should go there.

Laksh nods and they start to go at that time Laksh receives call from Ragini’s mobile.

Laksh: Ragini (he immediately attends the call hoping she is fine but on the other side it was someother person who admitted Ragini in hospital and made a call to inform about her accident.)

Laksh: (teary eyes) thank you so much for admitting her in hospital I… I will… (Chokes) reach there as soon as possible.

Laksh cuts the call and immediately runs towards the parking lot followed by Sanskar, Dp and Shekhar. Laksh was bout to sit in driving seat but Sanskar stopped him and asked driver to drive the car as he knows nobody will be able to do it properly. So he does not want to take any risk.

They reach the hospital and Laksh immediately runs to the reception and asks about Ragini and runs to the direction where Ragini’s treatment is going on. He stands outside OT and sees her through the small glass view.

His heart sank seeing his love covered with blood all our her body and having difficulty to breathe. He closed his eyes in pain and tears roll down his cheeks.

While on the other hand Shekhar sat on the chair with an emotionless face beside him Dp while Sanskar holding Laksh. Nobody is able to react nor strong to console the other.

The shine, smile, laughter, cuteness and happiness of their house is struggling there for her life. Which is just giving them only pain and nobody is able to make themselves strong for others.

They did not even remember to inform others. Thanks to the driver he gave the info to the others and they arrived there and the condition of them is also same. All are just sitting on the chairs emotionlessly and just staring blankly at the door of the OT. Laksh is sitting on the floor just staring blankly but tears are flowing without stopping making him weak.

At that time doctor comes out of the OT making all alert but Laksh is not responding he is still staring blankly. Sanskar came near to doctor.

Sanskar: (choking) doc… doctor… How is…. she?

Doctor: you?

Sanskar: I am her brother in law Sanskar Maheshwari. How is she doctor?

Doctor: We tried our best Mr. Sanskar but there are many internal injuries. If she did not get conscious within 12 hours she may slip into coma. Sorry.

Saying doctor goes from there. All became shocked and more devasted listening to doctor.

At that time Aakash and Ritu come there along with Ayan after picking him from school. Ayan runs to the door of OT and he starts crying looking at Ragini. He looks at Laksh who is looking blankly sitting on the floor with tears in his eyes and runs to him. He sits in his lap and hugs him tightly sobbing in his embrace. Laksh just blankly hugs him back and slowly both starts sobbing in each other’s embrace. All others who are equally in pain look at them with tears. It is Aakash, Ritu and Swara who composed and consoled all of them and sent back home saying that they will take care of her and inform them if she gets conscious. All went home except for Laksh, Ayan (who was not ready to leave Laksh at all), Swara and Aakash. Sanskar is not in the state to stay there so Swara asked him to go back home along with Viren and all went home. All went home on the insistence of Swara but no one really wanted to go home. Nobody ate anything after their breakfast from morning.

Time passed and 12 hours are over but Ragini did not gain conscious. Doctors checked her again.

Doctor: I am so sorry but she skipped into coma.

Swara: (stammering and tears rolling from her eyes) Wh… When….will she become…fine?

Doctor: may be days, months, years. We can’t say. But I only suggest you guys is always try to make her happy.

Laksh: (who was all silent till now spoke for the first time in this 12 hours) Can…can we…take her home? She…she hates hospital.

Doctor: (nods) yes you can but we need to check her everyday so I will appoint a doctor who can check her everyday coming to your house.

Laksh nods and looks at Aakash.

Laksh: (choking) inform… Ma…and papa that we are bringing…Ragini home.

Aakash nods. While Laksh goes to Ragini lifelessly holding sleeping Ayan in his arms. Ayan slept due to continuous crying.

He sits beside her and holds her hand with his one hand while Ayan is in his other hand.

Laksh: (sobbing) why are you doing this to me duckling? Are you angry on me? Did I do something wrong? If so I am sorry… Please come back to me. Please give me your cute smile. Please bacha please. (He keeps his head on the bed holding her hand and cries vigorously)

At that time Aakash keeps his hand on Laksh’s shoulder. Laksh composes and looks at him.

Aakash: all the arrangements are done. Shall we?

Laksh nods and they take Ragini home in ambulance. All the family members look at her with pain. Shekhar and Janaki are completely devasted. Laksh makes her lay on the bed in their room.

Laksh: you all go and take rest. (Chokes) I will take care of her.

All look at him and nod ok. Janaki who is sitting beside her looks at her with teary eyes while Shekhar holds her and takes her to their room.

Jeevika nears to Laksh and was about to take Ayan but Laksh looks at her she immediately backs off. They leave from there leaving Laksh, Ragini and Ayan.

From that day Laksh and Ayan are lifeless while all others are just living with the hope of Ragini’s recovery and praying to god to return their house’s happiness.

Laksh finished his MBA and started going to office along with Dp and Shekhar. But he just stays in his room if he is at home. Ayan goes to school and comes back home. As soon as he comes back from school he directly goes to RagLak’s room and just keeps looking at Ragini and speaking to her all the things happened in the school. Everybody is just lifeless but moving along with the time. Like this 8months passed.

@flashback ends

Laksh is crying holding her hand in between his two hands. At that time Ayan came from school and ran to their room. Laksh composes himself seeing him as he also will start crying.

Ayan comes and hugs him while Laksh kisses his head.

Laksh: Ayan bacha go and change and come na.

Ayan just nods his head. Once he looks at Ragini and goes to change. Laksh looks at him sadly.

Ranjhan dhoondhan main chaleya
Ranjhan mileya naa ye…
Jigraan vichon agan laga ke Rabba
Laqeeran vich likh di judaai

He remembers how they used to play in childhood. How they used to tease each other. Their support for eachother.

Kho gaya, gum ho gaya
Waqt se churaya tha jo
Apna banaya tha..
Ho tera, woh mera
Saath nibhaaya tha jo
Apna banaya tha..

He remembers how she was so excited on her first day of school. Her smile whenever he gives her her favourite chocolate.

Chadariya jheeni re jheeni
Chadariya jheeni re jheeni
Aankhein bheeni ye bheeni ye bheeni
Yaadein jheeni re jheeni re jheeni

He remembers her crazyness when she wore her favourite fancy dress costume of duck.

Chadariya jheeni re jheeni
Chadariya jheeni re jheeni
Aankhein bheeni ye bheeni ye bheeni
Yaadein jheeni re jheeni re jheeni

He remembers her making fun of him calling him jelly. He remembers her crying face when he was showing fake angry on her and not talking to her.

Aisa bhi kya milna, saath hoke tanha
Aisi kyun sazaa humne hai paayi, Ranjhana ve
Phir se mujhe jeena, tujhpe hai marna
Phir se dil ne di hai ye duhaai, Saajnaa ve
Laqeeron pe likh di kyun judaai..

He remembers her teary face when he proposed her on her birthday. He remembers her jealous face when he was acting to ignore her with Isha. He remembers her first confession in hospital. He remembers her teasing him along with Ayan.

Gair sa hua khud se bhi, na koi mera
Dard se karle chal yaari, dil ye keh raha
Kholun jo baahein, bas gham ye simat rahe hain
Aankhon ke aage lamhe ye kyun ghat rahe hain
Jaane kaise koi sehta Judaaiyaan.

He remembers their unexpected marriage. He remembers her happy face on their marriage day with all rituals. He remembers her peacefully sleeping face on their wedding night. He remembers her crying face on their first day due to his teasing. He remembers how she felt happy when Ap said that she needs to make Maggie as her first rasoi.

Chadariya jheeni re jheeni
Chadariya jheeni re jheeni
Aankhein bheeni ye bheeni ye bheeni
Yaadein jheeni re jheeni re jheeni

He remembers her innocence, her fear when Samar sent goons to kidnap her. He remembers her smiley face when she got to know that Swara is her own sister.

Chadariya jheeni re jheeni
Chadariya jheeni re jheeni
Aankhein bheeni ye bheeni ye bheeni
Yaadein jheeni re jheeni re jheeni

He remembers their after married life how she used to wake in his arms every morning with her beautiful smile. Finally he remembers her last fearful talk before the accident.

Ranjhan dhoondhan main chaleya
Ranjhan mileya naa ye…
Jigraan vichon agan laga ke Rabba
Lakeeran vich likh di judaai

He closes his eyes tightly remembering her condition on the day of accident in hospital.

Laksh: (composing he speaks with her with heavy pain in his voice) you know duckling tomorrow is Valentine’s Day. Did you remember our first Valentine’s day. You surprised me at 12 in the night.


Laksh is happily sleeping in his room. At that time a loud sound is heard. He wakes up with jerk and finds the alarm clock making huge sound disturbing him. He makes an irritated face amd switches of the alarm. His eyes fall on the note beside the clock. He picks it and opens it.

“Come to GM terrace within 5minutes”
Yours Duckling

He smiles and jumps from his bed grinning widely. He runs to balcony and gets down through pipe to reach garden. Later runs to GM and again climbs to Ragini’s room. From Ragini’s room balcony he goes to terrace but he finds it all dark. He steps into terrace and lights get on. He gets mesmerised seeing a small heart shape with red roses. And “HAPPY VALENTINE’S DAY” in middle of the heart shape.

He then finds a table in corner and walks to the table where there is a small red velvet cake. But his eyes fall on an object. It is a “Clothes pin” stating “You have a message” with a small picture of post cover. He takes it into his hand and press the pin and a message is shown in between the prongs of the clothes pin. The message states ” I LOVE YOU”

Laksh: (smiles and whispers) I love you too Duckling.

At that time he feels two soft hands around his waist from back. He smiles and kisses her hand. He turns towards her.

Ragini: (with broad smile) Happy Valentine’s day love. (She kisses his cheek tightly.)

Laksh: (hugs her) happy Valentine’s day to you too bacha.

Ragini: how is the surprise?

Laksh: just like you beautiful especially this I LOVE YOU. (He says showing the clothes pin and kisses her forehead)

Ragini: come let us cut the cake.

Laksh nods and they both cut the cake and feed eachother. He applies some cake on her nose making her pout. He chuckles and licks her nose making her giggle. They enjoy some quality time there in terrace for sometime and go back to their rooms and sleep peacefully with everlasting smiles on their faces.

@flashback ends.

Laksh: (he shows her the same clothes pin) see duckling this was the cutest thing you gave me from all the gifts and my favourite too. And tomorrow is first Valentine’s day after our marriage but (he chokes and starts to cry again holding her hand) wake up Ragini please for me. For Ayan. Did you see he lost all the charm. He is always dull. And he is not teasing me also. Please wake up please.

Ayan comes there running after changing. He is followed by Jeevika who is asking him to have something but he is denying. Laksh sighs. He takes the plate from her hand and signs her to leave. She looks at them sadly and leaves from there.

Laksh takes Ayan in his lap and rubs the tears from his eyes.

Laksh: Ayan bacha if you dont eat how will you play with your cutie when she wakes up ha. You should have strength na for scolding your cutie for sleeping so long ha (Ayan nods) then come on have it.

Ayan opens his mouth looking at Ragini he eats what all Laksh feeds him. Finally he eats and lays beside Ragini, holds her hand and sleeps.

Sanskar comes there holding another food plate for Laksh after some time. Laksh looks at him and nods no.

Sanskar: (forcefully makes him to sit on the couch and forwards the morsel) eat Lucky you need energy for staring her and crying (he says with tears flowing from his eyes.)

Laksh hugs him and both of them cry in eachothers embrace.

Laksh: bhai she listens to you na ask her to wake up please bhai. (He said crying like a small child)

Sanskar: She will Lucky she will wake up for you, for us, for her darls. Be strong. (Tears roll from his eyes while he keeps rubbing them away)

Laksh hugs him again. He knows how important Ragini is for Sanskar. The pain Sanskar is going through is also not less than the pain he is going through. He breaks the hug and feeds him as well, as he knows that he would have not eaten anything. They both had their food and Sanskar leaves to his room.

Laksh goes to Ragini and kisses her forehead and again comes to couch and lays down on it. He keeps looking at her face and slowly sleep takes over him due to tiredness. He sleeps everyday in couch looking at her while Ayan sleeps beside Ragini holding her hand tightly.


Ok ok I know many of you wanted to kill me for making Ragini like this but I know you can’t do it because if you kill me who will give you next part. Hahahaha *devilish laugh*

So guys another news is that I am not going to update next part till two weeks. Hmm I may update it after 28th as I am little busy till then. But don’t worry I will give next part of Got You by Miracle of Fate in between.

Thank you for reading. Hope you guys liked it. Do vote and comment your views. Meet you all after two weeks.

Till then keep smiling.

Love you lots???

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  1. Superb dear

  2. Emotional episode

  3. Nice

  4. Fantastic awesome emotional

  5. Superb part

  6. Amazing part nd can’t wait for next

  7. Elizabethlovely

    Poor Raglak


  9. Superb episode

  10. Laashya

    Awesome part didu and poor ragini and lovely raglak moments

  11. Fantastic dear

  12. Loved it, keep going

  13. Interesting dear

  14. Jiyani

    Amazing dear and do continue

  15. It’s awesome

  16. Fantastic awesome superb

  17. So Sad

  18. Superb di…. post next soon

  19. Excellent dear

  20. As usual interesting episode dear ??? Raglak valentine’s day scenes are beautiful ????? feeling bad for Ragini ?? hope she will be fine soon. Eagerly waiting for next episode and please post next part ASAP. Love you dear and take care ???????

  21. Emotional

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