RagLak OS…. Will U Still Not Forgive Me?

Hiloo ev1… here m with an OS on our beautiful couple Raglak.. hope u all like it.. sorry for my grammatical mistakes n spelling errors…

Now let’s move inside d story….



“Chall mere ghore tik tikk tikkk,, Papa move fast,, chall mere ghore tikk tikk tikkk”…

” Papa i want that balloon.. that blue walaa. !! Papa come naa.. i want that balloon plzz plzzz.. get it to me.. !! ”

“Arrey Ladoo beta,wait…Ladoo ahistha chalo beta,, see cars r (couldn’t complete)

“Ladooo”….. a terrible scream.

“Papaaaaaaaa” …. a girl wakes up from her nightmare with a jerk sweating badly.. tears r flowing like never ending.. !!

After some minutes she gets normal n looks around finding herself in her own room… !!! that incident or accident or nightmare is not in her sleep only.. even that has become d bitter reality of her life..

She wipes her tears n gets up making way to a room where alady around 45-46 nd a girl around 20-21 is sleeping peacefully … d girl is sleeping in that lady’s lap with a smile nd that lady is sleeping in sitting position leaning her head against d headboard… looking them like that a lone tear escapes from d 1st one girl’s eyes which were already wet… !!!

“Ragu ,, what r u doing here?That too at this time? Is everything okk?” Someone asks her from behind…(*yup d 1st girl is our Ragini)..

She hurriedly wipes her tears n turns around with plasteringa cute smile “Haa, woo bhai, i came to take water,,see my jug is empty(shows him d jug)…(*haa that person is Sanskar)..

“Soo u should go to kitchen naa.!! Why u staring mom n Kavya?, (realise something n asks in concern) Ragu did u got those nightmares again? U r okk na? Shall i call mom?”

He is about to enter d room …“Arrey mera buddhu bhai,, wait .. !! ( drages him to out of room) nothing like that.. it’s just i was going from here n saw Maa n Kavya sleeping .. look na they even forget to close d door !! N don’t disturb them.. let them sleep peacefully….” Ragini says admiring Shomi n Kavya…

“Ragu ! But what about u? What about ur sleep? Till how long u r going to bear the pain? Till how long they will punish u? ” asks Sanskar averting his gaze from Ragini to Shomi n Kavya …

“No bhai, they r not punishingme.. infect mom is punishing herself for my stupidity for whom all r suffering.. Maa lost her husband, Kavya n u lost Papa.. just bcz of me we r left alone.. Papa is no more with us.. ” Ragini says looking Sanskar Shomi n Kavya..

“Ragu that day u also lost”(Ragini cuts off)

“Let it b bhai, i don’t want to dig that incident again.. it will hurt everyone..” Ragini says once again wiping her tears…

“Okk !! Okk ,, i won’t say ..u plz don’t cry..u know na,i can’t see u crying.. u r my strong Ragu rit?”..

Ragini happily nodes her head with a slight smile…

” Ragu say Ramu Kaka to make d guest rooms ready, “..

“Guest ROOMS, but why? is anybody coming? “Asks Ragini Confusingly…

“Yeah, Laksh n his sister Swara is coming.. actually both has opened new branch here at Kolkata..sooo … n also for a reason u will get to know soon… ” Says Sanskar looking at Ragini’s facial expression keenly…

“Laakkshh,,, whyy here ? At our home?”Asks Ragini with stammering voice n wide eyes..

“Soo what? R u not happy? He is coming after soo many days!! It’s been almost 2 years since i have seen him or Swara,, i don’t know what happened that he suddenly left d city without even informing us” Says Sanskar checking mails in his cell phone…

“Noo no nothing like that, i just asked as he is coming suddenly naa? Soo. Anyway im going to inform Ramu kaka” Says Ragini n runs from there to her room..

As soon as she enters her room,, she closes d door n falls on floor leaning against d door where tears start to flow from her eyes ….she gets flashback of some beautiful memories , 2 persons chasing each other with great laughtersound..——————————–

“Ragini wait,, i will not leave u, how dare u call me Frogg…. waittt ” Says a boy continuously running behind agirl with a small angry pout showing his fake anger…

“Arey at first catch me, then u will show me n i will see u na Froggggg.. come n catch me if u can(sticking her toung out n showing her thumb down)” says a girl running kinda marathon laughing wholeheartedly…

The boy frowningly increases his speed n holds her wrist dragging her towards him….The girl gets shocked with his action but she is not ready to loose soo “Ahh Laksh !! (Screams) my ankleee,, !! “(Haa d boy is our Laksh)…

“Ragini u okk,, what happened BACCHA? Kahi lagi toh nehi? Let me see !!! ” asks Laksh in a worried tone n frees her wrist in order to see her ankle…Taking this as an opportunity Ragini completely frees herself from him n again starts to run….

Laksh didn’t took much time to understands her flop plan n again runs behind her… but this time with a sly smirk…

Ragini bites her lower lip in tension as there is no way to escape for a beautiful sa colourful wall ….

“What u called me ? Frog rit?“says Laksh taking a few steps towards her…

“Ragini!! Now u r gone… bear UR Laksh noww… God knows what he is upto”….Thinks Ragini still biting her inner lips…

~~BG Music {“Piya o re Piya” Remix}~~

{Piyaaaa o re piya…
Piya re piya re piya..
Piya o re piya…
Piya re piya re piyaa}..

“Tohh Ragini u were saying something me like Karela,bhindi,frog”… whispers Laksh near her ear …

Ragini comes to sence finding him soo near to her…

”nehi Laksh.. woo toh mai bass aise hii” Ragini says breathing heavily as he started to blow air in her ear..

{Main vari javan,,
Main vari javan,
Satoya ki ho ya bekasur re…..
Main vari javan,,
Main vari javan,
Dil to hoya majbor……
Main vari javan….
.Main vari javan}

Ragini feels tickling sensationn smiles due to shyness…. “Laksh !! What r u doing? Let me go!!…”

{Piyaaa o re piya…
Piya re piya re piya..
Piya o re piya…
piya re piya re piya}.

She is about to move but Laksh again drages her through her delicate waist n murmurs “Nah, u can’t escape.. let me taste u my Karela taste… what’s say Miss Ragini Gadodia??” Says Laksh all time continuously gazing at her rosy lips…

“Haa, i remember.. i have some work.. will meet u after sometime Laksh… now i need to goo… !!! ” Says Ragini avoiding his killer gaze on her…..

{In duriyo ne nazdiki yo se
Saouda koi kar liya,,
Jhuke nigaho ne dil se ishk ka
Vada koi kar liya}..

Laksh holds her waist more tightly demanding whatever he want …. Ragini looks at his handsome face who is now eagerly waiting for her approval….She shyly closes her eyes giving him a positive sign … in a friction of seconds she feels his rough lips on her rosy lips…. !!

{I love you baby
I’m gone derive a crazy
O baby hole me nov
I’vana fel you
Don’t you make it love or life
I love you baby
I’m gone derive a crazy
O baby hole me nov
U’vana fel you
Don’t you make it love or life}…

There was a sweet kiss between RagLak that turnes into a passionate one testing EO’s essence of love showing how much they love each other.. ..

Soon they broke d kiss feelings out of breath….

{Main vari javan,,
Main vari javan..
Sato ki ho ya bekasur re
Saou saou taro se bhar ke ye daman
le chal mujhe kahi dur..
Piya o re Piya…
piya re piya re Piya..piya….re..re..piya}

“Soo how was my taste Ragini?” Asks Laksh teasingly…

“Shut up Laksh!!” Says Ragini beating him playfully n hides her face in his chest….

Laksh smiles watching his blushing Ragini n protectively warps his arm around her hugging her as tight as he can… both has a satisfying n bright smile,,, feeling blessed in EO embrace…

{I love you baby,
I’m gone derive a crazy,,,
O baby hole me nov…
I’vana fel you don’t you make it love or life…
I love you baby
I’m gone derive a crazy
O baby hole me nov
I’vana fel you don’t you make it love or}


Ragini’s chains of thoughts r broken hearing some sound…

”Ragini beti, jaldi aao… Sanskar baba is calling u for Puja…

“Abhi Ayyi Ramu Kaka..just give me 10 minutes…” answers Ragini n goes to washroom…


@ Hall :::

Shomi is doing Puja n Sanskar, Ragini n Kavya is standing beside her…After finishing Puja she moves towards them to give Arrti n Prasad…

Shomi gives Prasad to Sanskar… he happily takes Prasad as well as her Blessings… “always be happy my son”!!…

Ragini extends her hand with a smile to take Prasad but it fades away when Shomi passes from her doesn’t even looking at her once n give Prasad to Kavya… She kisses her forehead “Always b happy my daughter.”…

Ragini withdraws her hand back , wiping her tears from d corner of eyes… !! She looks at Sanskar who is about to say something …. “No Bhai.,, not now” Says Ragini holding his hand …

Sanskar fists his palm “Then when Ragu? Whennn? ”

“Arrey let it b bhai.. now give me Prasad (indicating to d Ladoo).. at least i can have it from u rit.. !! So give me d bigpiece”… says Ragini trying to lighten his mood…

“Tuu bhi na Ragu.!! U will never change… loo open ur mouth(feeding her a big piece)…Pagal..!! “…

“Bhaii.. it’s tasty..!!U r d best bhai… Thnk u.. “says Ragini giving him a side hug again wiping her tears without his knowledge….!!

“Arrey bass bass abb rulayegi kyaa?(now will u make me cry?)” Says Sanskar in a dramatic manner wiping his fake tears.. !!

“Hawww bhai!! U can also shade crocodile tears like Swara.. !! U both r same !! Mr n Mrs.Crocodile.. !!! ” says Ragini to tease Sanskar..

Hearing Swara’s name Sanskar’s back get straight n he left d place with a smile that was surely noticed by Ragini… !!!

“Ohhoo my soon to b Bhabhi Swara.. !! Welcome welcome…“shouts Ragini happily..

“Swara,, where is Swaraaa,?¿” Sanskar comes back hearing Ragini taking Swara’s name…

“Bhai,,woo toh mai aisee hii chida rehi thi appko..,,,!!! Buddhuuu”says Ragini n again runs to her room…

“This girl naaa”…. Sanskar says n smiles shyly…


Next Day :::

“Hey Buddy !! What’s up? After a longg time… !!”

“Lucky !!! My buddy part2.. !!How r u? Seriously yaar Aftera longg time. !! Missed u like hell !!”Sanskar n Laksh hug .. both r soo happy to meet EO after soo longg… !!

“Ehemm ehemm !! M also here.. !!. If u both have done ?Can i also meet Sanskar?” Says a girl giggling n looking at both buddy n buddy part2 who were hugging EO from long n not ready to leave …!!!

Both comes to sence hearing her giggling sound n breaks d hug.. Sanskar instantly looks at her n gets mesmerized seeing a Devine beauty … he is just too lost in her smile but comes to his sence feeling pain “ahh!! What’s this Swara? Ur habit of pinching is still not changed na?” Says Sanskar rubbing d place where she pinched him hard… !!

“Huh i was talking to u.. n u were lost somewhere.. kyuu? M i looking like an alien?” Asks Swara looking at her once again from head to toe keeping a cute pout…!!

“U r looking like a Fairy.. ” says Shomi descending steps from stairs… !!“Shomi aunty.. !! How r u? How is ur health? “Asks Swara n runs to give her a bone crushing hug.. !!

Shomi hugs her back,, caressing her hair with lots of love. !! “M perfectly fine Shona..!! How r u? U have become soo big.. now i should start to search a prince for u.. what’s say Sanskar?” Says Shomi winking at Swara. !!

Swara blushes at her statement where Sanskar is also in a same situation.. !!

Lakah comes to her n takes blessing “Aunty !! How r u going on? U r fine na?”..

Shomi gives him side hugg “yes my son.. m okk now.. !! Waise bhi…(Swara cuts off)
“Aunty,Laksh bhai.. now stop ur conversation… i m damn hungry.. !! My stomach is doing Gutur Gutur. ! aunty rest will u plz talk later.. now i wanna eat something…plzzzz” says Swara showing her puppy dog eyes..

“Sure Shona abhi laati hoon..u both go n fresh n up… !! I have made ur fav Gajar ka halwaa “.. ….says Shomi n goes to kitchen….

“Sanskar where is Ragini?” Here comes d most awaiting question for whom Laksh is waiting..

Ragini,, who was watching all that scenario from corner of hall comes wiping her tears …she has still not seen Laksh,, but only could hear their voice….. “Shona ,, m here”…

Swara turns towards d direction from where d voice is coming n sees Ragini …. both runs n give EO breath taking hug… !! Both stays in a same position.. !!!SwaRagini together ” I MISSED U SOO MUCH Swara Ragini… “…

After breaking d hug Ragini looks at Laksh who is only gazing her like eating her alive.. !! His eyes showings lots of emotions like Pain,happiness,sadness,anger, as well as disgust… !!! They have a passionate eye lock …!!

“Buddy , Swata come ur rooms r ready..” says Sanskar to Laksh n Swara… !!“Haa Bhai chalooo… !! I m soo hungry.. let’s get fresh n up soon… i can’t wait more for Aunty’s hand made Halwa.. !! ” says Swara Dragging Laksh with her..

Laksh turns n again looks at Ragini for giving her a killing glare showing his hatred towards her..

“M i going to marry this mad girl?” Asks Sanskar to himself scratching his hairs ….


@ Dinner Table :::

“Wah Aunty wah, kya Halwa hai… maaja aa gaya.. !! I guess U have some magic in ur hand .. u can cook soo well.. !! Sanskar, Ragini n Kavya is so lucky.. !! Areey haa i forgot to ask about Kavya. where is she? I haven’t seen her since i come here.. ” Asks Swara taking a big spoon of Halwa.. !!

“Well thnk u for d compliment…n about Kavya, Actually Shona, she has some assignments so went to her frnd’s home.. will come back after 3 days…. ”

“Ohh Okk , no problem.. !” Swara notices Ragini who is playing with her food..

“Ragini!! Why r u not eating anything.. !! Look naa Aunty has made soo yummy Halwa..! Did u take it? Noo na… yehh looo.. !! ” She wants to give Halwa to Ragini but her hand doesn’t reach till her plate.. !!

“Aunty ..plzz pass d bowl to Ragini.. look her plate is empty .. give her some Halwa..otherwise i will finish everything.. !!

”Shomi doesn’t say anything… Ragini can easily understands that she is not comfortable …

“Shona,, u take as much as u want !! Don’t think about me as i always got to eat MAA’S hand made food.. but u don’t naa… sooo grab d opportunity n eat all..!! ”

“I know u can eat Aunty’s hand made food everyday but it doesn’t mean u will miss this awesome Halwaa.. !!”Shomi without having any emotion serves Ragini Halwa… !!

Ragini n Sanskar’s eyes r filled with tears…Ragini without anyone’s notice wipes her tears n takes a spoonful of Halwa …. she feels soo blessed to eat her Maa’s hand made food after soo many years..

Sanskar sees this n smiles …..!!


Evening :::

Ragini is passing through Laksh’s room murmuring something underbreath… !! “This Shona na.. she will kill me one day.. She is still a kid.. don’t know how Bhai will handle her… !!! Yeh Laksh bhi(her words left incomplete as a strong arm drags her to a room n obviously it’s of our Laksh…) !!!

Her eyed widened at his sudden action n is about to say something but “Shhhhh Ragini(pressing his finger on her lips in order to shut her mouth)… let me see u

Laksh hugs her whispering “I MISSED TO SOO MUCH RAGINI.. !! “.

Ragini’s breath stop for a second feeling him soo close to her like before.. !! She couldn’t stop her tearss n reciprocate d hug… He breaks d hug inhaling her scent nuzzling his face in het hair “Did u missed me Ragini?” Ragini breaths heavily …

“Laksh !! I missed u” Ragini couldn’t complete as Laksh jerks her ….“How could u miss me Ragini Gadodia? We miss them whom we love .. But u never loved me … rit? Soo how can u miss me?” ..

“Laksh nothing like that .. u don’t know how much I MISSED U there 2 years.. !!N u also know i LOVED U n I ONLY LOVE U.. !! ”

“Ohh is it sooo Miss Ragini Gadodia… !! But i really don’t think soo. !!”

“U know Laksh ,, u know it very well..!!”i love u d way u love me.. !! . I missed u d way u missed me.. !! ” says Ragini Looking straight into his eyes.. !!

Laksh smilies n says mockingly “ohh really!! Then why d hell u broke my heart that day? Why d hell u did that with me.. with us Ragini?Why? (Holds her arms tightly)Was I a thing for u to hand over me to other’s.. !! ? Was our LOVE so weak that thattt u forgot about us so easily !! (Jerking her arms)u wanted me to marry Kavya Rit? See m doing d same thing u said me.. !! Now m going to marry Kavya in front of u. !! U just wait n watch Ragini.. !! I will punish u d way u punished all these 2 years… !!! “Says Laksh wiping his tears.. !!

“Laksh can’t u forgive me once?”

“No !!! never.. Ragini. !! I can’t forgive u ever … i will never forgive u Ragini.. !! NEVER.. !! ” Says Laksh shouting… !!

Laksh shivers at his tone n rushes from there where tears were flowing for their eyes…!!

Lalsh bangs his hand on wall” I will never forgive u Ragini..!!. ”


Next Day :::

“Toh Pandit jii,, Day after tomorrow will b perfect day ford engagement rit?.. !! Soo Sanskar n Swara r u ready for taking a step forward to ur new life?’ Asks Shomi to both SWASAN !!!boty nods their head with a positive sign.. !!! Both takes blessings from Shomi.. !!

“Always be happy my children”…

“Bhai ..it was d reason Swara came here.. ohooo !!! Now i get it.. !! ”Ragini hugs both SwaSan ” M soo happy for u bhai n my soon to b Bhabhii !!! Finally u both r going to b One… !! ”

“Of course Ragini… afterall they love EO truly.. !!” Says Laksh giving them side hugs… (indirect taunt)…
Swara doesn’t say anything n left from there… !!

Laksh closes his fist tightly… !!

Sanskar notices Ragini being changed from d day Lalsh has come … neither she talks with him nor she passes time with him like before.. !! As they both know EO from college… infect both were soo closed …

Their this kinda behavior makes Sanskar confuse… !! Finally he decides to talk with Ragini at night.

Night :::{Ragini’s room}

“Ragu u r happy na with our relation.. !! I mean … (Ragini cuts off)..

“Bhai what u asking? Huh why will i not b happy too see u both Happy? Haa tell mee..!! ” answers Ragini adjusting her wardrobe …

“Then what happened Raguu?”..

A file falls down from her wardrobe… !! Ragini has still not seen that..

Sanskar moves n picks up d file… !! After reading d file he gets d biggest shock of his life.. !! He searches for another papers n gets some pics of RagLak… !!Tears start to flow from his eyes..

“what is this Ragini? (*huh don’t think wrong readers..Ragini has no any disease)… !! U r leaving for California that too day after my engagement.. !!!

”Ragini shockingly looks at him but acts as she doesn’t care much.. “Haa Bahi..!! M leaving ..actually it’s very good job offer n i seriously don’t want to miss it.. “…

“U love Lalsh ?”that was really a thunder storm for Ragini.. !!!

“Whaatt whatt u sayying Bhai? Nothiingg likee thaaat?” Ragini says avoiding eye content .. !!

“What is this Ragini?”shows her all d pics ..Now Ragini didn’t take much time to broke down.. !!! She was hardly holding her tears back.. but now she couldn’t.. she couldn’t stop her those pearls from flowing…

Sanskar is shocked to see her in devastated state n takes her in his embrace where Ragini cried her heart out n says everything from starting till d day Laksh left d city… !!

“And after all this.. i don’t know to be here.. plzz Bhai,, don’t say it to anyone.. even though this news will not effect any of them.. but phir bhii.. !! Promise me u won’t say it to anyone… Sanskar just nods.

Anyway Bhai(wiping her tears) let’s enjoy ur engagement together.. !! ..Sanskar without even uttering a single word left her room.. !!!


Engagement Day :::

BothSwaSan exchange Rings.. ev1 claps for them.. !!

Swara- Sanskar r u not bored?

Sannsar-Hmm!! U2..!! ?

Swara- Haaa.. we r same..!! Gimme hifi.. !!

Sanskar – yeh loo Hifi..!!.

Swara- Waise i have an idea..

Sanskar- N what’s that?

Swara- I will say Bhai n Ragini to sing..

Sanskar- Whaatt? Nooo.. !!

Swara- Attention ev1..!! Today is my engagement with my soon to b hubby Sanskar Gadodia.. !! N i want My Bhai Laksh Maheswari n my friend Ragini Gadodia to sing a song together as we all know both sings soo well …. soo what’s say people? Do u all wanna RagLak to sing.. !!

All people ” Yesssssss we want”…

Swara- Soo Bhai n Ragu… get ready to sing n make ur tune of throat ready.. !!

This is my upppsss sorry it’s our Demand.. We wanna hear RAGLAK…..!!!

Ragini doesn’t know what to say or react … she can’t deny Swara as she don’t want to spoil her mood.. !!She looks at Laksh n signals him through eyes… he nods his head as he also wants d same…

Taking a deep breath Ragini starts,,,,

{~it’s d song from d film Super Nani,,,”Maheroo”.. }

Thoda Thoda Shor Hai
Dil MeinThoda Thoda Gum Sum Hai
Thodi Thodi Saaf Hai Baatein
Thodi Thodi Uljhan Hai

{Yeah,,There is little bit noise in heart
It is little bit lost
Some talks(conversations) are clear
There is little bit complexity}…

[This time Laksh closes his eyes n statrs to sing],,

Thoda Thoda Shor Hai Dil Mein
Thoda Thoda Gum Sum Hai
Thodi Thodi Saaf Hai Baatein
Thodi Thodi Uljhan Hai

{There is little bit noise in heart
It is little bit lost
Some talks(conversations) are clear
There is little bit complexity}…

[Ragini takes few steps towardsLaksh]….

Maheroo De Sukoon Kar Meri
Chahat Qubool
Kar Qubool
De SukoonMaheroo Maheroooo..

{Moon-faced give peace
Accept my love
Accept, give peace
Moon-faced, moon-faced}…

[Laksh also takes few steps towards her],,

Maheroo De Sukoon Kar Meri
Chahat Qubool
Kar Qubool
De Sukoon
Maheroo Maheroo

{Moon-faced give peace
Accept my love(desire)
Accept, give peace
Moon-faced, moon-faced}

[Ragini sings d next few lines remembering her 1st meet with Laksh where she was about to fall but Laksh held her from her waist helping her from falling…]…..

Tum Se Mili Toh Yun Laga
Khud Se Huyi Hoon Main Rubaroo
Mere Pyaar KiHar Daastaan
Tujh Pe Khatam
Tujh Se Shuru..

{When (I) met you,felt likeI have come to myself,face to face..Each tale of my love
Ends with you, starts with you}

.[Laksh follows her next lines remembering d same incident when Ragini kissed inhis cheeks tight to fulfil her Dare]….

Tum Se Mila Toh Yun Laga
Khud Se Huya Hoon Main Rubaroo
Mere Pyaar Ki Har DaastaanTujh Pe Khatam Tujh Se Shuru…

{When (I) met you,felt like
I have come to myself,face to face..Each tale of my love
Ends with you, starts with you}…

[Ragini continues her singing n looks at Laksh… their eyes meet instantly placing a painful eyelock]

Dil Ki Sar Zameen Pe Tera Sajda Main Karoon
Aaja Mere Maahi Khud Ko Tujh Se Jod Doon

{On the territory of heart
I bow to you
Come my beloved
I will bind myself to you}….

[Laksh moves towards her cupping her one cheeks n kisses her forehead]….

Maheroo De Sukoon Kar Meri
Chahat Qubool
Kar Qubool
De Sukoon
Maheroo Maheroo.

{Moon-faced give peace
Accept my love
Accept, give peace
Moon-faced, moon-faced
Moon-faced give peaceAccept my love}..

[Ragini sings d last few lines closing her eyes feeling d touch of her LOVE]…..

Maheroo De Sukoon Kar Meri
Chahat Qubool
Kar Qubool
De Sukoon
Maheroo Maheroo.

{Moon-faced give peace
Accept my love
Accept, give peace
Moon-faced, moon-faced
Moon-faced give peace
Accept my love}..

Both RAGLAK comes to sense hearing d clapping sounds n they find themselves at d same palce… !! It was just their imagination… imagination of their heart n soul.. !!

RAGLAK wipes their tears…. !! Ragini hurriedly goes to her room .. Laksh had a urge to go behind her but couldn’t due to some of his friends.. !!

After sometime Laksh goes towards Ragini’s direction but he stood froze at his place watching a drunken boy trying to misbehave with Ragini..

She is trying her best to frees herself from his clutchs but it’s of no use.. that bl**dy moron is touching her neck, exposed waist n belly sensually… !! She is feeling disgusted .. tears of helplessness is continuously flowing from her eyes.. !!

Laksh looks at them with blood shot eyes(*omgg look at his eyes) n rushes to them .. !!
He holds his hand n gives him a tight punch.. in no time d boy was lying on floor with blood all around his body…

Laksh beat him balck n blue…Ragini runs to her room following by Laksh who is so damn tensed thinking about his LOVE in this state..!!

Laksh enters in her room but doesn’t find her … he is about to leave but again turns around hearing sobbing sound…He looks on shock finding Ragini in d corner sobbing hard.. !! He immediately goes n tries to calm her… !!

He holds her wrist but she jerks it saying “stay away from me,, don’t touch me,, stayy stayyy awwayy”..

Laksh tightly closes his eyes”Ragini it’s me,! It’s mee Laksh ! Look at me.. BACCHA !! (Cuping her cheeks)”..

Ragini looks at him n hugs him”Laksh,, hee.. heee touchh m.ee heree(rubbing her neck).. Lakshhh.”…That is it for Laksh.. he picks her up in his arms n moves towards bathroom… !

He makes her stand n turns on d Shower…Water starts to flow through their body.. ! Ragini is not in her sence just blabbering n saying Laksh to stay away..“Ragini open ur eyes n look at me,, it’s me UR Laksh. ! Look at me damn it(holds her shoulders tightly)…

“Noo noo Laksh leave me..! Plzz ” says Ragini with her shivering lips n Laksh didn’t take much time to capture her those shivering petals..!!

Neither Ragini reciprocate nor she did any movement..Laksh stops sucking her lips after making her calm..”Nothing happened Ragini. nothing.. u r safe “..

Ragini nods n Laksh immediately left her alone..

Laksh runs his hand through hairs n shouts” i will not leave that bastard.. ! I will kill him..(*God knows what happened to that sinful soul)…


Next Day :::

“Knock knock”…

“Yeah come in”..

“Laksh i wanted to say thnk u for yesterday’s help.. Thnk u “.. says Ragini avoiding eye contect..

Checking his files n without even looking at her Laksh answers ” No need of Thnk u Miss Ragini ! I should have done d same if there was any other girl instead of u .. U know it’s like my duty.. !! “..

Ragini gets shock at d way he is speaking..”Yeah, i can understand, it was ur duty… anyway i came here to say Thnk u.. n i said that”..

Laksh sees her with corner of his eyes “These bags,? R u going somewhere?”..Ragini stops n says “m leaving for California”..


@ Hall :::

Everyone is present at hall.. !
Ragini bends to take blessings from Shomi but she takes a step back n moves from there without saying anything… Ragini touches d place where she was standing …She goes to Kavya to hug her but Kavya also makes a way after her mom..

Ragini helplessly wipes her tears n hugs Swara n Sanskar plastering a tight smile..

A lone tear escapes from Laksh’s eyes watching his love going away from him.. but he can’t do anything.. ! !his ego is not letting him to do what his heart wants..

But Swara n Laksh were confused with d behaviour of Kavya n Shomi towards Ragini.. Laksh thinks to talk about it to Sanskar…


Sanskar’s Room :::

“Sanskar is anything wrong with Aunty ? I mean is Kavya n Aunty angry with Ragini..? Actually m observing them from many days both doesn’t talk with Ragini properly.. ! Why ?” Asks Laksh being so confuse…

Sanskar smiles painfully” Yes, Laksh ..Kavya n Maa is angry with Ragini.!”

“But why?”

“Not from today. She is angry with Ragini from d day Papa left us…Kavya n Maa is not talking with her from d day Papa left us.. !!”…

“What do u mean?”

…“U know Laksh. Ragu was only 9 when that horrible incident took place in our life..We 5(Maa,Papa,Me,Ragu n Kavya) were so happy.. i was 13 that time n Kavya was 6..we went to market for shopping but when we were coming back Ragu wanted to buy balloons, she was so adamant that didn’t listen Papa n run towards d balloon man ….

We were shocked bcz a car was coming with full speed n at d last moment Papa pushed her n”……..(couldn’t complete)…

“Papa was spot death”….“From d day Papa passed away… Ragini is curving for Maa’s love.. that day we lost our Papa… but Ragu .. She lost everything.. she lost her mother too.. !! She was blamed for Papa’s uncertain death..Mom never talked with her from that day.. never show any motherly affection towards her..”

“Mom somehow consoled herself as we were still kids n she had to take care of us..!! N she did.. she became strongfor us. !! Looked after us without any hesitation.. !! Maa always tried to fulfil every duty as a mother as wellas a father.. !! “…(taking out a pic of Ragini)

“U know Laksh ,, me n Kavya always slept in Maa’s lap,, but Ragu .. she was left alone.. there was no one who can consoled a innocent soul… !! Who made her sleep without those nightmares… At that time Ragu wanted Maa’s embrace d most.. but nooo,, Maa couldn’t fulfil that duty … coz according to her only bcz of Rahu’s Zid Papa is not with us.. !!
Ragu used to cried all night but it was of no use.”.

“That incident not only changed our life but also every got relation changed.. !! Kavya always blamed her for being d reason of Papa’s death.. !! Her hopefull eyes always searched for Maa when she got up from those nightmares but nooo Maa was not there with her.. !!Maa was not there … Maa was not there to take her in embrace.. !! ”

“I always asked Maa why she did this with Ragu .but d answer was ONLY SILENCE.. !! ”

“People say Time heals every wound.. but some wounds r can’t be healed with times.. infect it gets more deeper… same happened with Ragu.. she made her separate from us.. her behaviour got totally changed… our bubbly n naughty Ragu was no more.. She was lost somewhere… !! I have seen her crying alone… i have seen her sleepless eyes.. i have seen her breaking down… she still can’t sleep peacefully.. her eyes soo tired like has not sleeping from years.. !! But Maa never seen her face once with love.. there was nothing which can Maa shared with her … not even hated… all her tears were gone unnoticed by Maa!! ” (staring Ragini’s pic)..

Turns around to looks at Laksh” N then one day u came in her life.. she once again started to smile , to laugh… We were getting our Ragu back.. but Destiny didn’t take much time to stole her even that smile.. !!”

“U remember Laksh when u both wanted to talk about ur relation to Maa!!?”

Laksh nods in anticipation..

Sanskar continuous” That day was d most beautiful day for Ragu. she was soo happy n was going to share it with Maa but her words couldn’t come out of throat as Maa was thinking about our(SwaSan)n urs n Kavya’s marriage.. !! ”

“From that day Ragini never tried to talk with u… bcz she didn’t wanted to snatch anything from anyone.. specially when it was Maa’s decision… n after that u all know. “…

Laksh was standing there numb…there was no emotion in his face… he was blank..being rooted in his place he couldn’t move.. but there was thud sound for whom both turns n sees Shomi … her eyes r filled with tears…

Sanskar sadly smiles n says ” Why r u crying Maa? Now everything is in d way u wanted… no need of crying Maa.. !!”…

“Noo Ragini,, u can’t do this..!! U can’t love my Laksh.. u can’t snatch my Laksh… u can’t Raginiiii u can’t… ” Kavya Shouts like a mad scratching her hairs..

” i won’t leave u this time.. !! At 1st u took my Papa from us.. now u Want my Laksh… noooooo Ragini. Nooooo.. !! ” says Kavya grabbing her car keys….

“Kavyaaaaa beta “….

“No i can’t let Ragini goo.. !! I LOVE HER.. I ONLY LOVE MY BACCHA.. !! i need to stop her.. ”

“Laksh beta i will also come with u” says Shomi…“Jii aunty..”


@ Airport :::

Kavya drages Ragini out of airport n starts to screams ” u wanted to snatch my Laksh.. ! Ragini why u want those things which i love d most.. Nooo nooo noooo this it won’t happen.. i won’t let u do that… understand u bl**dy murderer… u can’t snatch my Laksh.. !! “Shouts at her top voice..

“Kavya calm down… !! Nothing like that… Laksh is urs only.. plzzz calm down.. ur health will” (Kavya cuts off)…

“I don’t care … i don’t caree..” again shouts Kavya taking steps backward…

Ragini tries to calm her down but she became out of control… at that time Ragini sees a truck is coming towards Kavya… that horrible day again flashes on her eyes but after some second there was a loud Scream ” Kavyaaaaa”..

Shomi n Laksh shakingly takes steps n view they witness took their breath away…

There Ragini is lying on pool of blood breathing heavily…
Shomi n Laksh couldn’t move but comes to sence when people r saying to call ambulance…

Ragini is about to shut her eyes but d next word she heard from her Maa feels like getting a new life… “Ragini, Ragini BETA open ur eyes.. see ur Maa is calling u.. !! Raguu…!!!” Calls Shomi tapping her cheeks…

Ragini slowly opens her eyes ”Maa”!!

“Haaa Ragu m here.. !! Seee Ragu.. !!Nothing will (Ragini cuts off)“


“Noo m not angry with u.. listen to me Ragu.. plzz don’t close ur eyes.. Ambulance is coming.!! “…

“Then why r u not calling me Ladoo?? Maa,,, plzz call me once Ladooo.. i wanna hear it from u.. !.plzz once call me Ladoo like u called me in childhood…”…

“Haaa Ladoo..!! Ladoo .. i will always call u Ladoo.!…”Ragini smiles brightly n avartes her gaze to Laksh n calls his name weakly ” Laksh”…

Laksh takes her in his embrace “Ragini !! Can u hear me…? Ragini. !(watches closing her eyes) open ur eyes Ragini.. !! Plzzz Raw .! ”

“WILL U STILL NOT FORGIVE ME?”…. asks Ragini with her trembling voice…

“Noo BACCHA .. m not angry with u. ! N i can’t b for long..!! Listen BACCHA everything will b fine.. !! U don’t close ur eyes.. !okk look at me. !.. look at me Ragini. !! U know na i can’t live without u.. u know naa I ONLY LOVE U.. !! Ragini r u listening what m saying.. !! Ragini… !!”..

“I LOVE U TOO Laksh”…She looks at Shomi n Laksh for once with a bright smile

“I need to Leave… Papa is calling me.. !! ” that was d last lines Ragini said for d last time n her hand fall from Shomi’s grip … She shut her eyes peacefully n her heart finally stopped beating ….“Raginiiiiiiii/ Ladooooooo”… these two words echoed in d whole place…

~~~The End~~~


” So what u think about d script Mr. n Mrs. TANEJA .!! Will i take ur tears as a positive sign.”…

“ TEMISH is in ”in this project”…

“That’s awesome.. !! Let’s rock this film with KaChu Tele Films”….

“Suree !! TEMISH will rock it.”…shaking hands with EO … !!

“See u soon Mr. n Mrs. TANEJA..!! ?

””–THE END–“”…


#THINA – This one is for u my sis/frnd… m missing u yarr… i miss our fight over SwaSan n RagLak.. ur whole family is missing u soo much… i don’t have Much word to convey my sentiments now.. but wherever u r stay happy n stay blessed….. LOVE U DEAR…


Thnk u sooo much for reading…
God bless u all… <3 <3…

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  1. SRSL

    Kaku diii….this is the same story written on swasan right…god you know how cried imagining swaragini pain in both ff…huff..I am a very emotional person while people are dying here to make me cry with their emotional ff…*indirectly pointing you…*won’t talk to you kutty….Awsm is god I loved it specially the end…oh god I really want tejaswi to be Mrs.Taneja….kitna cute haina….Mr Namish Taneja and Mrs Tejaswi Namish Taneja……????

    1. Kakali

      Liyaaaa !!! my cute sis.. thnk u soo much dear.. !! yup it’s d same story i have written for my SWASAN.. but again wrote it in RagLak version for my frnd Thina . coz that day was d exact day she left us one year back .. she was a big fan of RagLak.. soo thought to share n dedicate this OS to her n RagLak..
      awww u don’t cry sis*wipe ur pearls…now talk to me plzzz?.. heheh glad u loved d twist.haa they look seriously cuteeee ?. loads of love dear..*hug..

  2. Raglakholic

    It’s simply outstanding
    I can’t stop my tears
    Hatts off to u dear
    It’s fabulous nd emotional os

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u sooo much Harsha for ur appreciation n golden words dear,, it means a lot…!! *wipe ur pearls.. !! ;-*

  3. Sindhura


    1. Kakali

      Thnk u sooo much Sindhura dear.. !! ;-*

  4. Amazing and very emotional story .

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u sooo much dear Ashnoor.. !! ;-*

  5. Don’t know why but it’s really tough to control my tears, I want to see ragini alive

    Please try to write one more part with happy ending

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u sooo much Lovely dear.. !! but sorry this is d end ,, moreover it was just a script of a film …soo can’t give u any other part or happy ending…hope u understand.. ;-*

  6. omg this story is soooo breathtaking loved it

    1. tëìtō kUn

      Soo Emotional?….

      1. Kakali

        Thnk u sooo much Teito dear.. !! ;-*

    2. Kakali

      Thnk u sooo much Lisa dear.. !! m glad u loved it.. ;-*

  7. SPP

    Awesome Superb Fantastic Fabulous Emotional
    U made me cry alot
    Really was feeling the bitterness that she would have undergone
    U made me numb
    U rocked it Dear

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u sooo much SPP dear fir ur appreciation n golden words,, it means a lot.. !! sorry to make u cry*wipe ur pearls.. yup i wanted to convey to express or convey that bitterness only… loads of love.. ;-*

      1. SPP

        U r always welcome dear
        I am glad that u liked my comment
        And yeah I have wiped my pearls too
        Thank you for the OS again

  8. Devihaa

    Omg….it’s really really…… Awesome di…..totally loved it….
    The end was……..what to say about it…..
    I’m short of words…….

    1. Kakali

      Awww Thnk u sooo much my new sis Deviha..!! m glad u loved d whole update as well as d end.. loads of love dear… !! ;-*

  9. actually really I am crying plzzz come back this with raglak ff may be we get tomorrow a new ff by u
    awesome amazing excellent superb mind blowing brilliant speechless next part soon don’t be late and yaa thanks to all raglak writers for writing mind blowing concept and they are just brilliant hope we get more raglak ff ts ss O’s and plzzz raglak ff give daily ff or be regular

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u sooo much Nikky dear for ur appreciation n golden words.. Iit means a lot.. n about RagLak ff, will try my best.. *wipe ur pearls
      yeah standing ovation to all d RagLak writes who r trying to keep RagLak alive through their beautiful story.. !! ;-*

  10. Sreevijayan

    GOD..m crying here..awesome os dear

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u sooo much Sree dear.. !! *wipe ur pearls… ! ;-*

  11. Jazzy

    omg what to say its too good yaar

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u sooo much Jazzy dear.. !! ;-*

  12. Raina_Riz

    Amazing one
    Loved it a lot…

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u sooo much Rizna dear.. m glad u loved it.. !! ;-*

  13. Aasthu

    really awesome…..just can’t stop my tears……

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u sooo much Aasthu dear.. !! *wipe ur pearls… ;-*

  14. Awesome speechless………..really very heart touching

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u sooo much Jessica dear.. ! feeling glad that it touched ur heart…! ;-*

  15. Very emotional os Di

    1. Kakali

      Awwww !! Thnk u sooo much Kiddo.. ! ;-*

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u sooo much dear J… !! ;-*

  16. Simply awesome

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u sooo much Sherin dear.. !! ;-*

  17. Amazing os
    Please do write more on raglak

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u sooo much Arohi..! will try my best dear.. !! ;-*

  18. Awesome

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u sooo much Saranya dear.. !! ;-*

  19. Awesome amazing Superb
    I was Sad but after reading Mr. and Mrs.Taneja…..wow it’s a superb twist and loved it

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u sooo much dear Abi.. !! m glad u loved d twist.. !! ;-*

  20. Asra

    awesome dear…omg it’s too emotional dear…..u made me cry… tkcr dear….

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u sooo much Arsa… !!! aww sorry to make u cry dear…! *wipe ur pearls…
      u2 TC.. ;-*

  21. Mica

    Rest In Peace Tina dear,, love you….

    1. Kakali

      Micaaaa,, She is Thina.. not Tina.. gosh. !! ;-*

      1. Mica

        haaa… uugghh, rest in peace Thina… soorryy dear *puppy eyes

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u sooo much Madhhuchna dear.. !! ;-*

  22. Outstanding os

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u sooo much Mintu dear… !! ;-*

  23. Awwww no words
    I am literally having tears in my eyes
    U r impossible

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u sooo much dear Ragini for ur words.. !! it means a lot..
      well yes, m soo impossible.. ;-*

  24. Liya

    Amazing dear? Really touched my heart?

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u sooo much Liya dear… !! feeling soo glad that it touched ur heart.. ;-*

  25. Amazing
    Please do write more on raglak

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u Sahana..!! will try my best dear… ;-*


    1. Kakali

      Thnk u sooo much Arjuna dear.. !!;-*

  27. Ragz_teju

    awesome loved it so much… very emotional one

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u sooo much Ragz_Teju..m glad u loved it dear.. ;-*

  28. awesome..mind blowing..plz come back with more raglak os plz

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u sooo much Neina… !!will try my best dear…. ;-*

  29. Asw


    1. Kakali

      Thnk u sooo much Asw dear… !! ;-*

  30. Brilliant

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u sooo much Tani dear… !! ;-*

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u sooo much Vk dear… !! ;-*

  31. IQRA222


    1. Kakali

      Thnk u sooo much Iqra dear… !! ;-*

  32. Awesome os dear and loved it a lot

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u sooo much Ammu dear… glad u loved it… !! ;-*

  33. Omg! literally tears r in eyes. osm story lvd it .one f d bst os

    1. Kakali

      Thnk u sooo much Glorinn for ur golden words, it means a lot !! ;-*

  34. Hemalattha

    kaku dear It’s simply outstanding and wonderful. I can’t stop my and feeling sad. it awesome dear.

    1. Kakali

      Awwww Hemmaa !! Thnk u sooo much dear for ur appreciationn. !!loads of love.. ;-*

  35. SNY

    When I see the title I guessed u only update that os…raglak os version also superb?????keep rocking &&&Tc kaku sis????

    1. Kakali

      Yupppp my Sis Yazzzz !! its me only… u know me sooo well.. hahha that’s why we r sis.. thnk u soo much once again dear…loads of love n TC.. ;-*

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