A raglak OS (part : 2) by malika

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Hahaha…… Omg I didn’t know that you will love it. Yes it the same movie I mean pyaare kiya to darna kya. Haha…….. I’m not good in writing you it will be different I don’t know.. Thank you all soo much for your beautiful comments. Let’s start:

Ragini: Ooooh really why don’t you said it directly to sanskar.

Sahil : are!! I could said but your bhai when he came in front of me he tremble and shakes like a leaf. Hahaaaa

Sanskar : really!!!

Sahil: yes..!!
And he looked at sanskar and get shocked.

Swaragini was laughing silently.

Sanskar : choti and swara go home it’s very late.

Sahil : bhaiya can l also go??.

Sanskar : wait wait what you say wait in a minutes..???

Sanskar take sahil and beat him a lot. Everyone who was present there were scared. Then we can see sahil in the ground I mean his whole body except his face is shown. And his eyes are black nooo not far circle. It looks like someone has given a punch on his both eyes.

Sanskar : if ever I see you around ragini or swara. I swear I will kill you.
Saying this sanskar went from there.

Sahil said to himself : why don’t he kill me.??

At night:

Ragini came in the dining room.

Ragini: bhaiya!!! Bhaiya!! Where are you??

From outside : sanskar answer: I’m here choti.!!

Ragini came with a plate : bhaiya!! Where were you, I were searching you everywhere.??.now forget all those thing which had happened why you are taking stressed??

Sanskar: but it mean if any thing happened with you I can’t tolerate.

Ragini: ooohuhuhhhhh bhaiya take eat….

Sanskar take a bit and said : did you cooked this??

Ragini: yes bhai..

Sanskar: it’s awesome. Hahaha…..
After that both went to bed.

In the morning :

Ragini enters in sanskar room with a plate.

Ragini: bhaiya!! Wake up…… Bhaiya!!

Sanskar : yes choti I’m not sleeping what happens.??

Ragini: bhaiya!! Today is your day….

Sanskar : Ooooh yes I didn’t forget because of this day Im alive.

Ragini: don’t say like this…… Now forward your right hand.
Ragini tie rakhi in sanskar hand and fed him sweet….

Sanskar : may God blessed you choti.

Ragini : nooo bhai today no blessing I want to ask you a special thing.

Sanskar: what!!

Ragini: I want to go to Mumbai. I want to study there..

Sanskar was thinking and he went near a pictures which was hang on the wall. It was their parents pictures. After thinking too much he made a decision.

Sanskar: okkk choti just for you..

Ragini was very happy : yaaaaaaahhhhhh
She run and went outside and was dancing like mad….

Scene changes : in a seaside :

A cool boy his face is not shown due to darkness. He is riding his bike. His muscles are shown like any girl can fall in love with him. He went is a stage with his bike.

The boy face was still not shown as he was looking in other side. He take his guitar and start playing with it. Many people were running and they came towards the stage and started shouting.

The boy turn around and shouted : i love you all guys….!!!!!!!! there is no destiny !!!! No companion. !!!!!and play with his guitar.

Many people shouted: laksh!!!! laksh!!!!!!
Yes it was our hero laksh
He sing a song and also dance as everyone was enjoying it…..

Recap: ragini first day in college + raglak meeting.

Guys if it’s not good then do tell me. Because I have write this part in hurry. Please bear me. I know laksh intro was not good but soooo sorry next time I will make it. Don’t worry next part I will write a long chappy that’s too full of raglak scenes. Please do comments. …please silent reader …….

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88 Comments
  1. AMkideewani

    Superbly awesome my jaan, your story is killing me in a good way❤️❤️❤️❤️

    1. Malika

      Thank you soo soo much sweet heart your ff made me mad. Really you are a good writer. ????

      1. AMkideewani

        Thank you very much jaan???❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️?????
        Do read the next chapter and episode❤️❤️❤️❤️

      2. Malika

        Of course I will read. And yes aaaah I’m not in Watt’s upp. But I think next years. Don’t know but next year may be.

    1. Malika

      Thank you soo much lovely. ????

      1. Malika

        Keep smiling and stay bless. ??

  2. Rafeee

    superb

    1. Malika

      Rafee thank you Sooo soo much. ???? stay bless and keep smiling

  3. Awesome

    1. Malika

      Ashnoor thank you soo soo much. Keep smiling and stay bless. ????

  4. superb loved it

    1. Malika

      Awww jj thank you soo much. Keep smiling and stay bless. ????

  5. What you have written di!!!!!Mind blowing amazing…Totally loved it a lot…And Ragsan bonding is too good…I am waiting for Raglak meeting…Update the next episode as soon as possible…And when will you update the next episode of your Raglak ff love story??????

    1. Malika

      I will update raglak ff + os on Friday. Thank you soo much choti. You made my day through your comments. .?????keep smiling and stay bless.

      1. But why you are sad???You gave a sad smiley that’s why I am asking…

      2. Malika

        Because I’m going naaaa away with from my parents that’s why. ….nothing else

  6. Balaji

    superb

    1. Malika

      Thank you so much balaji. Kepp smiling ad stay bless. ????

  7. SRSL

    Awsm di!!!!!!really nice upload soon…..

    1. Malika

      Awwww love you yr. When are you going to update your ff. Thank you soo much…….???? keep smiling and stay bless. I will update on Friday.

      1. SRSL

        I already uploaded mine di!!! U please upload fast..I wanna read raglak’ s version of pyaar kiya to darna Kya…love u three..

      2. Malika

        On Friday dear soo sorry but will update long one for you don’t worry

  8. Superb

    1. Malika

      Thank you so much Arjuna. Kepp smiling ad stay bless. ????

  9. Awesome

    1. Malika

      Thank you soo much saranya . Keep smiling and stay bless. ????

  10. Kakali

    Waaaaawww !!! Diiii…
    Hats of !!!
    it’s amazing… it’s soo beautifuly written.. love it dii..
    Thnk u.. ;-*

    1. Malika

      Awwww choti when you will update your ff. I’m waiting .really!!! Thank you sooo much yr. Keep smiling and stay bless. ????

      1. Kakali

        Dii i have already posted … its TU who is taking soo much if time fir updating it… Love TU..*buttering
        .

      2. Malika

        Yes you are right.

    1. Malika

      Thank you soo much sindhura.keep smiling and stay bless. ????

  11. Awesome dear

    1. Malika

      Thank you soo much ammy. Keep smiling and stay bless. ????

  12. Super dear pls update next part soon waiting

    1. Malika

      Vavachi thank you soo much. I will update on Friday. Keep smiling and stay blessed. ????

    1. Malika

      Malu thank you soo much. Keep smiling and stay bless. ????

  13. Radhika..

    di i will not talk to u u don’t tell me about this os that’s not good.
    about the chappy it was awesome and the story is also brother sister bond and love story and sanskar caring for his sister and sanskar fighting nature. that he fight with anyone for his sister lovely bond and he accept every wish of ragini. laksh intro is nice not bad atall di and how they meet and fall in love waiting for that loved it di ???
    not talking angry on u ??

    1. Malika

      Omg I have to confront with radhika. Why!!!. Choti listen actually I forgot to inform you. Soooooooooooooo sorrrrrrrryyyyyyy. See I’m holding my ears. Aaaaaaaaaah don’t get angry in happened yr. ……well really!!! You like it thank you soo much radhu. Thank you soooooo much. Thank you once again. Yr. I will update on Friday. And yes please talk to me…… ????????????????????

      1. Radhika..

        ok di i am talking to u after all how can someone stay angry on such a sweet di for more time and waiting for friday to come eagerly as exams are ending and ur part is coming two good news and your welcome and please di now if u write please inform meor else i will miss such a beautiful story and writting love u?????

      2. Malika

        Okkkkkkkkkk cool thank God. ????

      3. Shrinjal

        Didi mujhse bhi sorry bolo???
        Mujhe nahi bataya u started writing a FF..
        Laiken ab padhna padega coz my di is the writer! !I’ll read this part ASAP..
        Leken. .SORRY bolo Varna…raat ko bhoot aayega aapko darane
        Fir aap???!!!

      4. Malika

        Ooooh God you send my other choti. Hateeeee you God. Noooo dear I’m not telling you. See I’m scared thank godbyou didn’t say bhoot like in Annabelle otherwise I could have got an heart attack. Hah…….. Soooooooorrrrrryyyyy see I’m holding my ears…….. I forget to inform you……. Thank you soooo much for commenting. ???????

  14. SPP

    Awesome Superb Fantastic
    Just loved it

    1. Malika

      Spp you like it. I’m sooooooo happy dear. Thank you sooo much. Keep smiling and stay bless. ????

      1. SPP

        U r always welcome dear

    1. Malika

      Thank you soo much Sam. Keep smiling and stay bless. ?????

  15. Ragz_teju

    awesome loved it

    1. Malika

      Thank you soo much teju. I love your ff a lot. Keep smiling and stay bless. ????

  16. Deesh

    Fantastic!! I totally loved this chappy. Superb!! Waiting for the next!

    1. Malika

      Hahahaaaaaa I didn’t know yr. I trouble you a lot yesterday. Hahahhhh deesh — na. Choti thank you soo much. Update your ff. I will update on Friday. Keep smiling and stay blessed. ????

  17. Astra

    ofoo…it is awesome awesome…just awesome…. plz update raglak ff soon da….

    1. Malika

      Astra love you and your ff a lot. I will update it on Friday sorry… Thank you soo much. ????

  18. NYC chappy

    1. Malika

      Thank you soo much tani. Keep smiling and stay bless. ????

  19. Fairy

    Super amazng n awesome update dear..loved ragsan bondng…yipppeeeeee i loved laksh’s entry …waitng eagerly for dere meeting… keep rockng n stay blessed anji.. love u dear 😉 😉 😉

    1. Malika

      Fairy you are amazing yr. Love your comment when you will come with a new ff I’m waiting. Thank you sooo much yr. I will update on Friday. And keep smiling and stay bless. ????

      1. Fairy

        Hahaha oh god thnku so much anji.. bt m nt more amazng den u dr 😉 ..u r really v sweet 🙂 ..n about my ff ??i dnt know yaar..i have alredy written some parts bt dnt know whts stoppng me to post it!!! Actually my results r on d way so maybe m stressed coz of dat bt for sure wl post it soon maybe till 20th oct..
        N thnku so much for always encouragng n askng me about my ff. 🙂 ..keep smiling n take care of urself sweety;) 😉 😉

      2. Malika

        Ooh best of luck dear. And inform me when you will update your ff. Take care . ??????

  20. awesome di , today only i read both the parts , both were just awesome . eagerly waiting for the next part….

    1. Malika

      Varshini I missed your comments yr. Where were you. Thank God. And thank you sooo much for reading this os . Keep smiling and stay bless. ?????

  21. Asra

    awesome dear….

    1. Malika

      Asra
      Thank you soo much. Keep smiling and stay bless. ?????

  22. Awesome episode and eagerly waiting for Raglak meeting

    1. Malika

      Thank you ammu. Keep smiling and stay bless. I will update on Friday. ????

  23. Anniya

    Awsm one di…

    1. Malika

      Thank you sooo much choti. Keep smiling and stay bless. ????

    1. Malika

      Thank you soo much lisa. Keep smiling and stay blessed. ????

  24. Kakali

    Diii !! my chappy has posted.. *huffff !!!

    1. Malika

      Hurfffff miss monkey. Now I will call you like that don’t worry only in my ff hahahhhhh I have already commented choti monkey.

  25. Very…very nice….just love ur ff……keep writing..waiting for next one

    1. Malika

      Awww thank you soo much. Dear keep smiling and stay blessed. ????

  26. Sreevijayan

    Nice update dear….

    1. Malika

      Thank you sree. I will update soon. ??

  27. Hemalattha

    fantastic.waiting for raglak scene.

    1. Malika

      Thank you soo much hemalatta. I will update today…… Next ep. And you soon much I’m very happy to see your comments. Keep smiling and stay bless. ?????

  28. Mahavir

    it was awesome di ijust loved it and ya y u saying that u r going away frm ur parents ????

    1. Malika

      ThNk you soo much for your beautiful comments. And yes I’m going naaa that’s why….

      1. Mahavir

        but where di ????

      2. Malika

        Ooooh I’m going to get married. You didn’t know that

      3. Mahavir

        di when ???? where ???? u not even informed ur choti about ur marriage its ok congrats di and finally my sister is going to married u know what di my sis also got married last year and she have a male kid now and anyways di di how is jiju

  29. Mahavir

    di i post my ff

    1. Malika

      Soooo sorry but I’m confused there are many people here. I thought you know. He is fine and yes thank you soo much for informing me okk I’m going to read it. …..

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