A raglak OS (part : 1) by malika

Hey guys I was getting bored so I thought too write a raglak os. Let’s start. :

In the morning :
In a village, we see a beautiful girl is running towards a big mansion. She went inside. At the same time a car came and stooped at the entrance. There were two boys in it. They were well dressed looks like they have come to see girl. One boy named raj., he is black is in colour and worn an orange jacket plus black jeans. Other one is his father named anil. He is completely different from his son. He is white in colour.

Anil: hahahahahahahahah
Raj: what’s so funny dad the road very bad.
Anil: hahahahahahahahah

Inside the mansion.
The same girl came inside and went towards the kitchen that the chef came in between . He was singing and coming with two plates full of sweets in both hands.

Chefs : lalalalalaal gagagamaaasaaaa.!!!

Girl;: are : kaka is everything prepared.??

Chef: are!! Swara beta until I’m here everything is prepared in time.

Swara : hahaaa…. Ooopss I’m sorry.

Chef was going smiling that he. Colide with the wall.

Chef:: oooo maaa…..
And then he went from there. Bit at the same time when swara turn she saw an old man was coming out from his room

Swara : chacha thakur, they have come…

Thakur: but why are you soo excited???haha. …. Goo and see if ragini is ready or not.

Outside. :.

Anil: see son this is a very respected family. You have to be very nice.

Raj: don’t you worried dad I had I had the..

Anil: yes I know. 99 girls have rejected you… So you must have learn something with them….. Haha…..

Raj: what!! …..

Anil : haha…….
Then thakur came there.

Anil : are thankur sab….. Namaste ji namaste…..

Thakur : namaste jii…….

Anil: thakur sab this is my son raj…

Raj: hi sir I’m rajjjjj

Then they came inside.

Thakur : did you have any difficult to reach here. ???

Anil: are thakur sab in this village where everyone said your name. How will we get any difficult.

Raj: but the roads were very bad.

Thakur: roads are bad but people are goods.

Anil: that’s why we came here

They all went in the living room and sat in the sofa.
Swara came with ragini whose face was covered . They came and also sit in the sofa.raj was looking carefully. Slowly slowly ragini remove her cloth which was on her face and look at raj. Raj and anil were shocked as ragini eyes were together and her mouth was. ??Like that. Ragini then come to normal. Both raj and anil was like thank God…….

Raj : bad I like that girl….. I want to marry her.

Thakur : yes yes but let’s ask ragini option . Ragini beta what is your decision.

Ragini : uncle my life decision will be taken by bhai. …..
At the same time… A boy handsome, good looking came inside. And see that every one was present in the living room.

Thakur : here is sanskar….. Come beta….. See your jiju…. I mean future jiju….

Ragini and swara was laughing quietly without ant one notice as they know what sanskar will do.

Sanskar: come future jiju. Let’s go. I will show you farm and then we will talk about marriage of my sister.

Thakur: nooooo I mean next time beta. ….. Not now.

Anil : let it be thakur sab. …..goo raj with sanskar.
After that sanskar took raj with him along with swaragini. We went outside.

Inside the mansion:
Thakur said tensely : two has gone but one will come only.

Anil: why you ate saying like that…… Hahahhhhhh

Sanskar punch raj on his face. Sanskar took him and throw him in the grass . Sanskar beat raj a lot. Raj cried in pain.

Raj: sanskar are you mad. …. Why you are beating your future jiju.??

Sanskar : future jiju!!!!
He started to beat raj more and more.
Swaragini were laughing loudly and giving high five to each other.

Hearing raj voice, thakur and anil came outside. Thakur know that sanskar would do like this but anil was shocked.

Anil : thakur sad if you didn’t want to accept this proposal then why did you call us here.

Saying this anil went towards sanskar who was beating raj with full of power. And stooped sanskar…. Raj and anil went from there with out time. swaragini was very happy. …

Thakur: what is this sanskar……when the first time I see that boy I know that it neither my choice not you. Good.

Sanskar: sorry uncle. Haha…… From now I will chose a boy for my ragini.that’s too the best boy.
Saying this sanskar sent from there.
Ragini was like it of world she was dancing with joy……swara was happy for ragini.
When thakur see ragini is dancing he said. : dance! Dance… Haha…… And he went from there.

Scene changed in the market. :
Ragini was busy in choosing rakhi for sanskar.

Ragini: swara help me naaa . Won’t you buy one rakhi for sanskar ?

Swara : what you are saying are you out of mind. I will tie rakhi to sanskar. Huuuhhhh. .. I love him yr.

Ragini : then why don’t you tell her.
At that time a boy came in a lorry with some guards when he saw ragini he stopped and came towards swaragini.

Boy : oooh ragini why don’t your brother get you marry. ??

Ragini who was not interested said: because I want to study first.
Sanskar who was passing saw swaragini with sahil and went there. He stand near sahil silently. Swaragini saw sanskar and kept quiet. But sahil continued to say.

Sahil : yr ragini I want to marry you. But I know your brother will not agree. I don’t know what’s his problem….. Always fight with people. Saying this sahil keep his hand on sanskar shoulder.

Recap: brother and sister bonding + raglak love story.

Heys guys in this story I will show more scene of raglak and sanskar . Swara scene will be less but swasan love story will be shown a little. ….. Swaragini are childhood friend. Sanskar love ragini a lot. He can do anything for her. Ragini only sanskar is her world her mum and dad also. Swara love sanskar secretly only ragini know this. Sanskar also has a feeling but can’t understand. Ragsan parents are died very long time ago when ragini was baby and sanskar was five years old. Now they stay with their uncle.

Guys of you all didn’t like this story I will stopped it. Please drop your valuable comments and tell me if this story is good or not. The story will be four or five part .


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  1. Sreevijayan

    Awesome start dear..loved it…

    1. Malika

      Thank you soo much Sreevijayan. ????

  2. Malika

    So sorry for spelling mistake. Please forgive me. My keyboard is not working properly that’s why.

    1. Hey di why are you laughing???What did I say that you are laughing???…Hum aapke upar gussa hai….Ab hum aapse baat nahi karenge…Ekdam katti…And how are you???I asked you already…

      1. Malika

        I’m absolutely in happy mood. Why I’m laughing haha…… You won’t understand choti. Love you yr. Nooo please talk to me……… ?????????

    2. OK I will talk to you…And moreover you are my di so I will talk to you…Be happy my di☺?????

      1. Malika

        Stay bless my ssisoo. Thank God. Sigh of relief. ???

    3. Shrinjal

      Di mujhe toh pairs bata do plss

      1. Malika

        Thank you soo much but I didn’t understand I’m ran the pairs are raglak and swasan. ?????

    4. Shrinjal

      Oh u won my heart<3<3
      Nd I forgot the title also, bhulakadd!

  3. Awesome plz post next part asap

    1. Malika

      Thank you soo much sanchami. I will post next part soon. ????

  4. Waiting for raglak scenes

    1. Malika

      Thank you soo much lovely. Yes me to waiting for raglak meeting. ????

    1. Malika

      Thank you soo much ammy. ????

    1. Malika

      Thank you soo much sindhara. And please update your ff I’m waiting. ????

  5. Saaaaara

    Arey bohut acche likhe hai aap … bohut khobsurat hai … air dusra part toh intezar kar rahi hoo main … i hope i write hindi well becuz am not indian .. am arabian from.egypt but i know little hindi

    1. Malika

      Haha… Don’t worry although you are not an Indian you wrote Hindi better than me.. I understand saraaaaaa. Thank you soo much I will try to post next part soon. Don’t worry. ????

  6. A.xx

    great,,,loved it .xx

    1. Malika

      Thank you soo much. Xx. ????

  7. i know this story love it keep it going

    1. Malika

      Really thank you soo much Lisa. ????

  8. Fairy

    Bahaut awesome hai yaar!!!!loved it….ragzy baby is totally drama queen :p swaragini bondng is nyc…sanskaar beatng dat boy ws helarious…hahahaha 😀 ..N sahil ab to tu gaya 😛 …waitng eagerly for nxt part n raglak meetng!!!!keep rockng n stay blesed sweety 😉 😉 😉

    1. Malika

      Ooooh fairy haha…. Yes sahil you are going to die. Haha…… Thank you soo much for your lovely comment. Mee too waiting for raglak meeting. I will post next part soon. ????

  9. Astra

    Vey nice….when u will update raglak ff??

    1. Malika

      Thank you soo much astra. Raglak ff will be posted on Friday . Don’t worry I will post long chappy. ???

  10. Innovative

    Loved it. Update soon

    1. Malika

      Omg innovative thank you soo much yr. I will post next part soon. ????

  11. Pyar KIA toh darna kya

    1. Malika

      Absolutely correct tani. Yes I wrote the title but it got delete. ???

  12. Awesome

    1. Malika

      Ashnoor thank you soo much. ????

  13. Deesh

    Awesome di!! Good going!!

    1. Malika

      Thank you soo much my dear. And one more thing did you update your ff. ????

  14. Super dear cute sister and brother bonding I love it

    1. Malika

      Vavachi thank you soo much in next part you will see more bro and sis bonding. ????

  15. Interesting dear and waiting for precap

    1. Malika

      Ammu thank you soo much. I will post next part soon. ????

  16. SRSL

    Its awsm…but it seems kind of like the movie pyaar kiya to darna Kya…plz update soon….

    1. Malika

      Yes srsl it’s the same movie. Thanks you soo much. I will post next part soon. ????

  17. Samairaseth

    Hey! I am Samaira. I am totally new here. But I must say your os is totally amazing. Waiting for our hero’s entry

    1. Malika

      Thank you soo soo much yr. I’m very happy that you like it. I will post next part soon. ????

  18. Oh di from where you are getting these ideas???? Please tell me the secret…And don’t ask sorry for spelling mistakes….Its can happen… And the episode is just outstanding…. Totally mind blowing…Ragsan bonding is superb…Hats off to you and your brilliant mind my di…You are an amazing writer….Seriously you nailed it by first episode… And I am damn sure that next episodes will be more excellent….Just keep writing like this…And how are you?And how ia jiju?

    1. Sorry I also did spelling mistakes..Its can happen not it can happen…And how is jiju?

      1. Malika

        Haha…. Omg cool cool you don’t know choti how I’m feeling right now after reading your comments. Thank you soo soo much well all the credit goes to tv. Haha….. Nooooo don’t praise me soo much I’m very poor in writing . Haha….. Your jiju is fine. I will post next part soon. Don’t worry. Love you yr…. ?????

  19. Ragz_teju

    awesome loved it.. please continue

    1. Malika

      Thank you soo much ragz. I will update soon. ????

  20. Awesome

    1. Malika

      Thank you soo much sharanya. ????☺

  21. Awesome plz continue

    1. Malika

      Thank you soo much divya. ????

  22. Awesome story

    1. Malika

      Thank you soo much saranya. ????

  23. Kakali

    Thnkk u dii for informing mee.
    chappy is too awesome dear… loved it.,, uhhhh u have soo much of ideas in ur mind.. huhuhu. Thank u.

    1. Malika

      Many more ideas I have. Haha…. Aww thank you soo much I was waiting for your comments. And yes update your ff. It’s too superb. ???thank you soo much choti.

  24. amazing yaar i loved it it is an improved version ko salman and kajol’s movie pyaar kiya toh darna kya an i right??? anyone post next part soon

    1. Malika

      I’m here j jjjjjjjj you are amazing. Absolutely correct. I will post next part soon don’t worry. Jjjj seriously please start your baba business I want to come. Please haha……. ?????

      1. sure dear if my dentist work will be flop then i’ll switch my job ????? hahahaah and i will definitely inform u first

      2. Malika

        Thank you jjj I will wait hahah….. ?????

  25. Asra

    Really interesting ….waiting for raglak love story….plz update nxt one

    1. Malika

      Asra thank you soo

    2. Malika

      Asra thank you soo much. I will post next part soon. ?????

  26. Anniya

    Thanks di for informing me.
    Now coming to this part, it’s truly an awsm one.
    Now I will again going to rpt my dialogue, update next part asap

    1. Malika

      Yes yes thank you soo soo much yr for your lovely comments . You made my day.. I will post next part soon. Really choti….. You are great soo many ff…. You write…. Wow…. ????

  27. AMkideewani

    I don’t like it, cause I love it dear❤️❤️❤️❤️

    1. Malika

      Thank God you love me otherwor I could have got heart attack. Haha…….. Thank you soo much sweeto. Update your ff soon. ????

      1. AMkideewani

        Jaan I would never hate you❤️❤️❤️❤️

      2. Malika


      3. AMkideewani

        Cause I love you too much❤️❤️❤️❤️

      4. Malika

        Same too you. ???

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