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A RagLak OneShot by Kyvalya

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Note- In this OS….. Sanskar is Ragini’s brother and He lives in the same apartment where Ragini lives along with Swara. He is a doctor…. And Swara is a housewife. Laksh is an honest police officer who loves his wife very much. Ragini is a software engineer who left her career after marrying Laksh.

Ragini’s POV
Every girl… From her childhood itself dreams about the person whom she is going marry…… Some marry their school friends…. Some marry their classmates…. Some marry their seniors…..
Only few are fortunate enough to marry their loved ones…… And I am one of them… I am married to Laksh Maheshwari….. The love of my life…. Whose presence makes this Ragini complete……
Laksh…. He was my first crush…. Though I never told him…. We were in a relationship but then we sacrificed our love for our parents….no one knew abt us then…. But unexpectedly…. I got married to him…… Ours is arranged marriage…. But we loved each other like soooooo much…. He treats me like a princess…. One look of mine is enough for him to undedstand what I want….. I still remember the day he got fever and I started crying…..
*****Ragini’s POV ends*****

*****Flashback starts*****
It was a random day after RagLak’s marriage…. Ragini woke up and smiled at him…. She kissed on his forehead and went to bath… After coming out she went out and started preparing breakfast….. She prepared and went to Laksh…. It was 10 already …. As he never slept tilll this time he went to him and started waking him up…. But he was not responding…. She was worried as hell…. She didnt understand what ti do… She started running and went downstairs…. Where SwaSan were staying….. While running she slipped but managed to balance but hit her head to a wall… But though she was running and finally… She reached the place…. She was ringing the bell continuously…. And Sanskar opened the door…. Before he could say anything….
Ragini – Bhai…. Bhai…. Laksh…..
Sanskar – Ginu… Relax…. Saans to lo pehle…..
Ragini – Bhai…. Vo Laksh uth nahi raha hai…. Bhai mujhe bohot darr lag raha hai bhai…. Aap aao mere saath…. Plzzz
Sanskar (worried) – chal mere saath….. (Looking at Swara who was behind him) Swara mein abhi aata hoon…. Koi zarurat ho to mujhe call karna….. (To Ragini) chal ….
Ragini nods and they go….
Ragini was sooo worried she starts crying…. They go to Laksh who was still lying on the bed…..
Sanskar goes to Laksh and starts checking him…. Meanwhile…. Ragini starts feeling dizzy and Sanskar turns back to Ragini….. And he tells her what happened to her….She only listens that Laksh is having fever and then she tooo faints…. Its because of her low blood pressure…. He holds her on time and catches her on time puts her on the bed beside Laksh….. He gives her an injection… And goes to tell these two….. Swara comes and takes care of them…. After sometime Ragini opens her eyes…. She sees Swara amd asks her to go and take rest….. Ragini goes to Laksh and she starts crying…. And then brings water and cloth and starts putting the cloth on his head…. After sometime. He wakes up and sees Ragini weeping….
Laksh (weakly) – Ragini….. Plzzz rona mat mera bacha….
Ragini wipes her tears.
Ragini – Sab meri galti…. Agar mein uss din aapko ice cream nahi khilati to yeh sab kuch nahi hota…..
Laksh – Aisa mat bolo Ragini…..
He hugs her tightly….
*****Flashback Ends*****

Ragini’s POV
I still remember the day he slapped me for my carelessness I will tell you what actually happened…. I was actually thinking smthg and crossing the road and I didnt notice a car coming towards he noticed an pulled towards him and slapped me… And started scolding him…. All I could do was hug him…. Then he too hugged me back tightly saying me that he was damn scared….
These days My Laksh is busy dealing Sravan Kumar’s case who has done a lot of murders…. I pray that he succeeds in this mission…. I think there is someone at the door…. Let me check….. I opened the door and found a man with a mask…… He sprayed smthg on me….
*****Ragini’s POV ends*****
As soon as the man sprays something on her…. She faints…. The man takes and her and goes…. Sanskar sees this and tries to stop hi but fails…. But he notices a tattoo on his wrist…… He calls Laksh and informs abt this…. Laksh gets worried and goes immediately in search of her….. He finds the van and finds Sravan Kumar in it….. And also Ragini struggling to get away frm his clutches…… And in anger Sravan Kumar gives her a tight slap…. Laksh sees this and gets soooo much angry…. He stops the van and starts fighting….. Meanwhile…. Sravan Kumar takes Ragini and tries to push Ragini into a river but then Laksh pull them and pushes Ragini aside and she goes in to middle of the road and gets hit by a car…… And the person in the car doesnt even stop….. Sravan Kumar smirks seeing this….. Laksh is shocked seeing this….. Meanwhile all the constables come and arrest Sravan Kumar….. Laksh now runs to Ragini who was lying in a pool of blood….. He picks her up and takes her to the hospital where Sanskar is working…. Sanskar was shocked seeing her and has tears in his eyes…. He with a lot of difficulty operates her…. Laksh was unconsolable…. He didnt expect this day to come in his life…. He lost hope and wanted to resign his job because of which he lost his parents and now Ragini in this condition…. But Swara gave him the courage….. Saying that Ragini would be sooo upset if ahe comes to that he left his career for her….. After two days which were like centuries for Laksh….. Ragini opens her eyes….

Ragini’s POV
I dont remember what happened after I got hit by the car….. I slowly opened my eyes my body is aching badly…. As soon I opened my eyes…. I saw my Laksh’s face… But he is worried….. He came to me and started kissing me like I was away frm him for decades or centuries…. I smiled at him weakly….. Then I realised that there was a bandage on my head and I broke my right hand and sprained my left leg…. I assured Laksh not to worry…. As I cant see him like tht…. But he was sooo worried…. He took a leave frm his job nly to take care of me…. He treated me like his daughter…. I am really blessed…..
After an year…. I became perfectly alright….. And then he allowed me me to my work….. Now… I am pregnant and I donno how I am going to tell him….. Atlast… He came …. He looks sooo tired…. I suddenly got an idea… I also put an expression … Like i am not well and as soon as he came inside….. I fainted on him…. Which is not true…. He was soo worried and he called Sanskar Bhai…. Bhai checked and announced him…. I could sense him being happy…. All the tiredness was gone I think….. Then slowly I slept…. Frm the next day onwards it was like I’m in heaven…. Laksh took care of me soo well… He always tolerated my mood swings with a lot of patience….. One day I even asked him to do belly dance and poor Laksh he had no optio but to do it….
In the 8th month…. I dont knw why but my tummy started aching like anything….. I called Laksh and he didnt lift….. I called Swara bhabhi….. She took me to hospital….. My god…. I am not able to bear this pain and Laksh directly came to the hospital as Bhai informed him…. Its like… I am going to die…. And I shouted soooo badly…. Laksh was soo scared he also had tears in his eyes…. And atlast….
*****Ragini POV ends*****

Raginu gives birth to twins one boy and one girl….. After giving birth…. She faints…..

*****Ragini’s POV starts*****
I opened my eyes and found Bhabhi in frnt of me….. I looked at her and got up slowly…. She helped me and I saw Laksh coming inside with two babies…. They look sooo cute….
We named them as Ragya(girl) and Raksh(boy)
I shud say that Ragya is daddy’s little girl…. He understands her soooo well….

Finally…. I feel I’m the world’s luckiest person….

25 Comments
  1. Superb

  2. Astra

    at first i was excited to see laksh as police office..!!! yay..!! i like to imagine him like that… now, this os is simply awesome. loved it so much….. keep writing more on raglak…tc dear

  3. Sindhura

    Awesome

  4. Nice. Cute story.

  5. IQRA222

    it was too sweet and awesome

  6. Raglakholic

    Omg….
    It’s amazing os dear
    Totally awesome one
    Loved d cute raglak
    Please do write more on raglak

  7. Plz yar,write an os about raglak when rajat take ragini instead of swara to the cliff and pushed her from their.

  8. And ya your os is awesome.

  9. Superb
    It’s awesome amazing
    Please write more on raglak
    Please give more os on raglak

  10. Awe so cute plzzzz keep giving is love it awesome next one soon

  11. nice awesome mind blowing outstanding plzz all raglak ff writer. give raglak ff and os ss ts but plzz write there raglak ff is decreasing day by day and yaa all who are writing is not updating left in middle plzz don’t do this and some are ending so soon plzz see Na swasan have many ff who reach above 50 and still writing but raglak is very less plzz did Temish fandom is weak plzz who raglak fan write more and new one and complete update regularly plzz guys and all those who were writing big wala thanks u keep raglak or Temish alive and plzz guys pay their hrdwork by comments

  12. loved a lot

  13. tëìtō kUn

    Superb….

  14. Awesome os dear and loved it a lot. Please write more Raglak stories and take care

  15. Asra

    awesome dear…loved it….tkcr dear…

  16. Superb shot

  17. Superb… Amazing dear…loved it!!!! Write more raglak os dear..!!!!

  18. MI_MAHI

    Superb…

  19. Fats

    Aww this was a really sweet OS. I loved RagLak’s care for each other and their happy ending. Thank you for writing this. I had a nice time reading it 💗

  20. superb

  21. Stupendous

  22. Ragz_teju

    awesome

  23. awesome…!! loved it..!!

  24. Hemalattha

    Awesome os dear.

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