RagLak and their love story – Prologue

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RagLak and their love story -Promo

“I dare you…”
Nishanth said to me with determination in his eyes..!!
“dare…!!to me…stop joking yaar…”I laughed at him…
“stop laughing laksh..!!this is not the dare that you use to won often..!! I dare you…!!if you won this I will be your slave and I will do all the works you instruct me..!!for one year…deal..!!”he says
I nodded my head by nudging away all my thoughts..!!
But still I get some instinct feelings…!!when he explained the dare..!!my heart starts bumping faster..!!
“shit…!!why did you accepted it lucky..!!he trapped you..!!”I said to myself…
Finally I gathered all my courage and neared her…!!
Heavy blow of wind..!!
Her pallu flies away from her head and it was floating in the air..!!

“aww..how beautiful she is…she is extremely gorgeous that I can’t take off my own eyes from her..!!”
Her powerful electric field eyes were attracting mine..!!
Her creamy cheeks…aww it was looking like an ice cream…her rosy lips…no no..stop it laksh..!!get away from her thoughts and start your work…
Nishanth was sighing me..!!
I don’t know that time what I was doing was wrong..!!but his slavery flashed before me..i immediately looks over to conform whether anyone is watching out..!!
I take a deep breath of sigh and takes a pinch of vermilion on the nearby aarthi plate…
{oops..i forgot to tell you na..yaah we are in the mandir…a big temple of the city which consists of almost all the gods and we are left all alone because everyone else were involved divinely in bhajan…

It seems like she came here for praying to lord Krishna..but trapped in this Krishna’s leelai…(I mean me only…hehe!!)}
I was just staring her hairline and the sindhoor..nervousness occupied my mind…
In the next fraction of second,I sprayed the sindhoor on her hairline without touching her..!!
Nishanth rang the temple bell inorder to make me caught..!!
Yes she opened her eyes…i framed like praying to god by joining my palms together…
“Ganapathi bappa..moriya…”I said…
I opened my eyes and found her staring me weirdly…
Shit..!!I realized then we are standing before lord Krishna…
I bite my lower lips embarrassingly and closed my eyes again…
I opened my eyes slightly and watched her through the corner of my eyes..she shrugged her shoulders and continued her prayers…!!

“Laadoo…!!”

“haan dadi..!!”she covered her face completely with that pallu and started leaving hurriedly..!!
I was simply staring her every move but she vanished after certain distance…
I turned my gaze victoriously towards nishanth who was bending his head down..
“I won…for an year you are my slave…!!”I smiled brightly…
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Guys*disclaimer alert*title will gets changed…it was just a prologue..hope you liked it and tell me how was the plot…
Do you liked it..??I wanna know your view about this plot…
I will start updating this ff by next week if ‘you want me to continue ‘…
Smash the comment box…
Take care dears…
~Darshu

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57 Comments
  1. woww fresh plot starting with dare .update soon

    1. Darshini

      Aww tq so much niki? glad that you liked it…will post soon dear…!!

  2. Follybraverl

    Akka loved it plzzzz continue sema cute laksh

    1. Darshini

      Aww sweetie will continue soon dear…tc da!!
      Laksh ??

  3. Wow it’s interesting yaarrrr….

    1. Darshini

      Tq so much dear ? am glad that you liked it…

  4. Mintu

    Awesome sisy..wow.. What a dare??? ena da ipidi oru dare laksh panirukan..!! Pavam ragu ku onnum therila..innimay theriya vara apo ena panuva?? Laksh nikuradhu viynayagar kovil ila.. Hehee..?andha scene supr da..!!!?? Yen ragu ava face ah cover panirukura..??? Romba traditional ah..?? ckrm next part post panunga da..!! Take care da??

    1. Darshini

      Sissy hw was the surprise..?? liked it uh??jst 15 days to go…
      Poor Ragini..don’t know what hpnd to her..
      Hehe!!laksh forgot the place where he was standing…
      Such a cutie pie..
      Yes dear she is a traditional girl..
      Tc da!!
      Will post soon…

      1. Mintu

        Sema sema sema.. I loved it dear ???

  5. Naagin

    Darshini if u change the ff name pls write it also to find easily

    1. Darshini

      Haan dear…sure i will add that too..
      Thnq so mch for commenting dear…

  6. Akshitha

    It’s interesting dear..pls post d next part soon dear…how both will fall in love dearr..

    1. Darshini

      Aww akshi…will let you know n d nxt chappy dear…!!?? am so hpy that you liked it…
      Tc da!!

  7. OMG Darshu it’s really interesting, Laksh filled Ragini’s mang. Eagerly waiting for next episode and plz continue. Thanks a lot for ur another Raglak story

    1. Darshini

      Aww ammu dear…that’s so kind of you…
      Thnks a lot for your constant support dear…
      Will post soon dear..
      Tc da!!

  8. Oh akka Superb, awesome please continue akka. Laksh placed sindoor on ragini’s hairline without her knowledge,that is called dare which everyone dared to do but Laksh did this. Superb, Lucky won it but also ended up in a sweet trouble which will change his life. Waiting to know when ragini find this what will be her reaction akka.

    Bye akka. Take care.

    1. Darshini

      Tq so much dear??..
      Hehe!!true he ended up in sweet trouble…
      Poor Ragu doesn’t know about this…
      Will post soon…
      Tc dear!!

  9. Naz_Temish

    Awesome ?

    1. Darshini

      Tq dear naz? glad that you liked it…

  10. Asra

    wow darshu it’s different dear…awesome loved it alot dear…dare ipadilama kudupanga….pavam ragu onumey avaluku Idhu vara theriyala…V2ku poi patha ava nelama yeana agum….yaru sindhor ra vachadhuney theriyala…dadi serial vara mathiri strict na nama ragu nelama avalavu than….ragu yean face close panikira….krishnar kovil la irunthu kudu ganeshar kida pray panraya laksh…so sad Una vachu ragu yeapadi life va send pana poranu theriyala…..poor soul…eagerly waiting for nxt one…tkcr darshu dear….

    1. Darshini

      Hehe!!en moolaikku ipdi oru dare daan yettichu…!!
      Poor Ragu..true dear she doesn’t know about anything…
      Dadi is not like that in serial dear…
      She is loveable in this ff…
      Yeana she is traditional so she hid her face using her pallu…
      Alagula mayangittar laksh…adaan enga irukkomne thrla pullaikku..
      Will post soon…
      Tc too dear!!

  11. Amazing. Waiting for ragini’s reaction

    1. Darshini

      Thnks a lot dear ? will post soon…tc…

  12. Asw

    Interesting keep going

    1. Darshini

      Tq so much dear ? will continue soon…glad that you liked it…

  13. Shrilatha

    Awesome akka..Laksh u forgot ganpati bappa And Krishna…it happens when u see angel in front of u ..awesome darshu akka.
    Don’t stay away ff please..

    1. Darshini

      Thnks da shri ? hehe!u r right he forgot everything whn she came bfre him…
      Am hpy that you liked it…
      Stay away will b updtd tmrw dear…
      Am on a vacation…that’s why…
      Tc dear!!

  14. It was amazing . I promise I will read all episodes so, plz continue it .

    1. Darshini

      Aww that’s so kind of you dear…
      Am hpy that you liked it..
      Keep supporting..tc dear!!

  15. Berdilla

    Awesome dear friend

    1. Darshini

      Tq dear friend ? am so glad that you liked it…

  16. AWESOME

    1. Darshini

      Tq Arjuna ? glad that you liked it…

  17. Awesome…

    1. Darshini

      Tq so much teito ? glad that you liked it…

  18. Amul

    hey darshu another raglak waiting for u r ff …………………………

    1. Darshini

      Tq dear amul? glad that you liked it…
      Will post soon…tc!!

  19. Awesome

    1. Darshini

      Tq dear sherin ? glad that you liked it…

    1. Darshini

      Tq dear avika ? glad that you liked it…

  20. Awesome part nd plz continue

    1. Darshini

      Tq dear malu ? glad that you liked it…
      Will continue soon…

  21. Interesting

    1. Darshini

      Tq dear soumya ? glad that you liked it…

  22. Awesome

    1. Darshini

      Tq dear aleeza ? glad that you liked it…

  23. Dharshu. Eppdi pa unakku intha mathiri ideas lam varadhu. Laksh was cute but his deed was so daring. Waiting for Ragu’s reaction. Rock sissy

    1. Darshini

      Hehe!!tq so much da gayu ?
      Haan dear his deeds r daring…
      Will post soon da…
      Tc dear!!

  24. Dharani

    darshuuuuuuuuuu it is just awesome… how can u get such ideas yaar… i became big fan of ur writing…. eagerly waiting for next episodes… take care

    1. Darshini

      Aww…tq so much dharu?
      Hehe!!
      That’s so kind of you…
      Will post soon dear…tc too da!!

    1. Darshini

      Tq so much Anju ? glad that you liked it…

  25. Sindhura

    Awesome

    1. Darshini

      Tq dear sindhira? glad that you liked it…

  26. Interesting di

    1. Darshini

      Tq so much dear monu? glad that you liked it…

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