RAGLAK— OUR LOVE STORY (Episode-5)

Laksh was walking with ragini and talking.
Ragini:-dont you have phone number..
Laksh:- haa.
Ragini:- then give it naa.
Laksh says land line number..
Ragini:- dont you have cell number.
Laksh:- dad said that he will give cell phone but i should sit in office thats why no cell phone.
Ragini:- dont you like to work.
Laksh:- i like to work but in my own office and trying for loan too.
Ragini:- wow that means you want to stand on your own legss.all the best
Laksh:- hmm thanks.
Ragini:- this my number i will you ok in your house no one will mind na..
Laksh:- may be..
Ragini:- ok then in my cell i had a voice change app i will call by male voice ok.
Laksh:- done.
Ragini is playing with stone by her legs ..she hits it and it goes and hits on some one leg ..
Laksh widens his eyes while running ragini comes back and pulls him and tuns with him.
They both runs far and hides beside pillar and laughs.
Laksh:- you are mad ragini..
Ragini:- i knew manufacture default you see.
Laksh laughs loud and ragini looks on.
Laksh:- why are you watching me like that.
Ragini:- you look good while laughing whole heartedly or else their is always a pain in ypur eyes why..
Laksh looks on amd says nothing like that little tension about loan.
Ragini:- why dont you take your dad hrlp to get loan.
Laksh:- no ragini .i want to stand up on my own if i use his name mean i lost it na.
Ragini:- wont your father supports you.
Laksh:- he will support infavt he loves all of us so much that all are very less infront of him.
Ragini:- dads will be like that only .even my dad is very protective.
They both talks on random things..
Laksh goes inside house ..he gets a call on landline and picks it up..
Voice:- we are calling from airtel..do you need
Laksh:- no we dont need it..
Ragini:- hi laksh i am ragini.
Laksh:- hii ..
Ragini:- i just called you to conform my number to you.
Laksh smiles :- so you reached home.
Ragini:- hmm
Ap hummes a song and ragini lisens to it.
Ragini:- wow laksh which singer are you lisening it awesome.
Laksh:- not singer but my mom.
Ragini:- really wow its awesome can i lisen it by closely.
Laksh sure and takes phone to her.ap turns and shocks by seeing laksh with phone.
Laksh:- did you lisen how is it.
Ragini:- awesome laksh your mom can be a great singer still time is their..
Laksh:- really.
Ragini:- really. Go then bye chotai pop is calling.
Laksh bye.
Ap:- what are you doing laksh for whom are you lisening my song.
Laksh:- maa my friend and he is saying that you can be a good no great singer.
Ap holds her face and says really.
Laksh laughs and hugs her mom.
Ap cups his face and says..
Always laugh like this laksh you look completed
Laksh again hugs her..
Sanskar:- again started..
Laksh:- arey tell me one thing did you had any wifi connection with maa when ever i hug her you will come.
Sanskar:- not wifi connection but mom and son connection.
Ap hugs both..
Next day.
Laksh was getting down sanskar to gets down swara comes from behind shouting without seeing laksh..
Swara:- sansky baby your tie and gets embarresed by seeing laksh and goes from their.
Laksh:- what sansky baby..
Sanskar:- shut up laksh..
Both gets down..
Dp:- laksh will go to office i am having head ache..and sanskar was going for meeting
Laksh:- ok dad..
Laksh gets ready in formals and goes to office.
Every one greets him.
He goes to pa..
Pa was talking in phone..
Laksh:- dad said to check some files.
Pa:- sir just called me sir i will check all files you just sign on them ..
Laksh nodes
Pa goes from their..
He goes towards a team who are working on project..
He about to say some wrongs..
Member:- sir explained us sir you dont take tension you can relax in sir cabin.
Laksh gets anger and goes inside his cabin.
A girl comes and says laksh to sign on some papers..
Laksh pulling his collar signs.
Girl:- dont feel bad sir .dp sir was always like this only.
Laksh:- excuse me will you mind your own business if i again lisen you talking against my dad .i will make sure that you wont get any other job.
Girl:- sorry sir ..and goes from their..
Laksh sits upsetly and remembers that he made a plan with ragini to go colz for certificates and hits his head..

Precap:- angry ragini and laksh fights with some people

43 comments

    • Sindhura

      Sindhura

      |Author

      Of thanks alot darshu i am
      Sindhura who completed alot more than 10 ff with all new concept storirs and this was a idea taken ftom that movie snd that movie
      So if want read or else uou can quite in middle with out knewing completr story
      Sry for my behaviour but your words hurted me

  1. Sally_blr

    Sally_blr

    |Registered Member

    Any idea is a inspiration from some or the other source Sindhu. Getting inspired and copying are two different things sweetheart. Don’t get effected by words of people who doesn’t even know Santhosh Subramaniam is copy of Bommarilu and talk about creativity. When you have already said that the story is inspired before only people who have problem should not read it at all. Complete your idea for your readers dear

    • Sindhura

      Sindhura

      |Author

      Thanks alot sally
      But some even i cam give justice to tjis story
      Dont knrw why bit i felt unstaisfy that why
      Sny way i will come with new obe
      I hope you will stay with me in my decision

      • Sally_blr

        Sally_blr

        |Registered Member

        I can understand dear. I loved all your stories and in future also I look forward for all your stories. You gave so many dimensions and new pairs to Tejaswi and I love you for that. You are and will be always my inspiration. I’m always with you in your decisions. I know you will come back with a bang and I’m waiting for that. Love you

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