Raglak: Love After marriage (chapter 1)

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Thanks for d warm response u gave me on d prologue. Am bit tensed abt this I never felt like when I wrote anything. I am confused abt d idea hope u people will enjoy it. Story line would be up to ur expectation.

Prologue

Chapter 1
Recap: raglak consummation nd raglak reaction on very next mng

Laksh was confused abt d things that were happiness around. The last thing he remembered was he was enjoying his new success part along with family obviously hise wide ragini. In d party he had sm drinks after that he couldn’t remember anything.
Again her sobbing sounds brought him back him. His messed up bed, their clothes around room, love mark that’s on ragini’s neck can clearly indicate him what could have been happened to between them. Seeing her HIS WIFE like this pained him to hell.

Before he could say anything to her she covered herself in d quilt nd ran to washroom nd closed it with a thud.
He too wanted to mark her or brand her HIS but not like this. He doesn’t want to make her his in a drunken state. His eyes welled up nd face dwn with guilt. He to want to confess his new found feeling to her not like this.

After a while when he was back frm wash room. He saw her who is touching d love bites on her nd trying keep them under her shaadi. Her eyes r welled up. She took her mangalsutra nd tied her neck. For d first tym she felt smthng uneasy while adoring her with vermilion of HIS name. His eyes too welled up. His heart pained to see his love like this.
Both eyes were met through mirror which showed lot of pain nd mixed emotions.
Laksh walked up to her

( laksh) ragini. Vo I am really
(ragini) its kkk laksh. It happened we can’t change d fact. We both were drunken. U were under alcohol I was exoticated with My LOVE for u.
(laksh) sry ragini I was not in my sense. I can’t even remember what all happened between us.
( ragini) don’t be sry laksh. We both r equally responsible for this. I have to think that hw can u take this step. U were not ready for this relation. U were forced to marry. Much patha hona chahiye ki tum naache mein hain. I should have been stopped u.

( laksh) its not like that ragini. Achha ( he holds his head). I didn’t even remember what I have told u.

Ragini nw understand that laksh does not know that he addressed her as swara.

( ragini) plz take rest laksh. U don’t have d habit of drinking . I will send lemonade for u

She walked out of d room. She turned at door as she heard

( laksh) can’t be give chance to this relation ragini.
She smile painfully at him.
(ragini) why laksh becoz u had s*x with me last nyt. No need for that. Am happy the way am in ur lyf

With that she walked out hide her tears.

(laksh) no ragini. Its not that I had s*x with u. Its becoz I fell for u. Ya ragini I really love you. I want to tell u that but god had another plan for us. I fell for ur innocence ur care. U never expected anything frm thing relation. I will not let u go frm me due to my this mistake. I will get u back. I will get ur love for sure.

Screen freeze on laksh determined face

Precap: ragini speak out abt swara to laksh in anger. Laksh past

Sry for d typos

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83 Comments
  1. It is different n interesting….. excited for laksh’s past..

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Thank you bia. I will update asps

  2. LovelyAliya

    Oh update soon! Really I like this story

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Thank you dr. Am a big fan of yours dr. Ur story is too different

      1. LovelyAliya

        Thank you dear 😉 please update soon 🙂 waiting

  3. Sreevijayan

    Awesome update dear….

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Thank you sree

  4. yaar its amazing really liking the story… bt how come laksh didnt remember he said her swara… plss continue i really love it… when will u update next??

    1. Fouzarshi16

      He was fully drunken. He is a social drinks so he doesn’t remember what happened last nyt between them . I will update asps

  5. Nice.Interesting precap.eagerly waiting to know about laksh’s past

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Thank you Amy. I will unfold laksh past in next episode

  6. Ragz_teju

    it’s amazing. … Laksh loves ragini awww I loved it. …

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Glad to know that you loved it. I will update asps

  7. Fairy

    Oh my godd!!!bang on episode yaaaar…i knew it,dat u”ll surely amaze us…superb superb superrbbbb update yaaar…yipppeee laksh loves her…ahh!!cnt see my ragz in pain 🙁 hope sooon she come to know dat he also loves her 🙂 🙂 🙂 u rocked it dear… keep smiling n stay blessed yaaar 😉 tc love u dear doc 😉

    1. fairy wen au gng to update nxt part of ua story.me waiting waiting

      1. Fairy

        Ahh sry yr akaash for mkng u wait!!i”ll post it tommorrow pkka…. keep smlng sweety 😉 😉

    2. Fouzarshi16

      Awwww so cute my dr doll. I will update asps. Hope u people will it

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Thank you di

  8. awesome…!!loved it…!!waiting for next part…!!

    1. Fouzarshi16

      I will update asps dr

  9. Superb

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Thank you my dr keep supporting

  10. Interesting feeling sad for ragini. Hope misunderstandings clear between them

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Hold on dr soon everything will fall in place between them

  11. Really interesting episode and eagerly waiting for next episode

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Thank you ammu

  12. Joyful Jessica

    Superb… waiting for next part

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Thank you my dr keep supporting

  13. interesting keep continuing

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Thank you my dr . I will update asps

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Thank you my dr keep supporting

  14. Asw

    Nice idea yaar keep going

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Thank you dr

  15. Moni_ragz

    Hey nice….

  16. Aasthu

    nyc………..sad for Ragini………..Arshi how can I watch swragini online??????

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Thank asthu I usually uses boot for watching SR

  17. Rafeee

    wow superb

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Thank you rafee

  18. Interesting di

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Thank you my kiddoo

  19. Akshata

    awesome update, laksh loves her but didnt get a chance to confess it. its ok laksh she is all yours do it now. precap is damn interesting.

    1. Fouzarshi16

      He will confess soon but what will be rag reaction. Laksh ko ragini ko manane keriya kitane papad bolne padenge

  20. awesome give more raglak moment and love hate relationship and plzzz be regular

    1. Fouzarshi16

      U will get more raglak months in upcoming chapters wait little more dr

  21. Superb ff I like it

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Thank you avika

  22. tat was nice dea.waiting for nxt part.stay blessed

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Thank you akaashi. I will update asps. Keep supporting

  23. Awesome

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Thank you arjuna

  24. IQRA222

    loved it

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Thank you iqra

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Thank you dharam. When will u update ur ff

      1. Dharani

        Fouzarshi i will update soon dear it takes some time sorry for the late

  25. Superb part

  26. Hemalattha

    such a different and interesting story.waiting for laksh’s past.superb part.waiting for next part.want to see raglak romantic scenes very soon.

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Thank you arjuna

    2. Fouzarshi16

      Sry dr it was mistake. U will get to know abt his past in next update. Raglak scenes r one d way

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Thank you anju

  27. Jazzy

    superb yaar ur stories r always different and soooo interesting loved it

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Ur cmmnt made me so special. Keep supporting dr

  28. Fats

    Fabulous update. It’s nice Laksh feels guilty and he also loves Ragini. Can’t wait to read more 💖

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Thank you fats. Ur cmmnt means a lot to me

  29. Shana98

    great episode

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Thank you shana98

  30. Asra

    amazing dear…feeling bad for ragini…eagerly waiting for laksh past….plzzz update soon…tkcr dear….

    1. Fouzarshi16

      I will update asps

  31. Awesome

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Thank you my dr

  32. A.xx

    nice really like this and waiting for Ragini’s outburst and past revelation.xx

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Thank you my dr. I will update asps

  33. Very nice

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Thank you monu

  34. Just amazing

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Thank you so much my dear

  35. Super amazing

    1. Fouzarshi16

      Thank you tani

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