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Raglak: My Last Love… Few shot…(shot 6)

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Hii…friends….back with next chappy…hope u remember it…thanks for commenting in last chappy and also thanks to silent readers if any….please atleast comment in this one….if u r not liking my stories atleast tell i will not write but please do tell me how is it…if u r able to connect with it or not….let’s get started with story…

My Last L💖ve
Chapter:-6

My father calmed me and made me sit….
Dp:-“ok…we will go through the divorce procedure…but I have to say something…and u must listen and don’t interfere until I complete…”

Laksh:-“ok..” and nodded my head positively…

He started talking…
Dp:-” ya… first love.. it won’t go away… I understand.. I know it hurts alot.. I know b,coz even I had gone through this…your mother had gone through this… everbody have gone through this.. everybody will have a first love.. and for most of the people first love is failure..

He paused for sometime and again continued but this time his tone was little rude…he was angry…

“And ever thought of ur wife…??? Have u ever thought how much u hurt her..??”

I was shocked….and staring at my father being surprised…

“Even not talking to her…treating her worst…abusing her..and now slapping her…

Do you know how much u have made her cry….???
And u think she still stays with u…b,coz she has no other option…???”…..
“NO…!!!”He said almost shouting

“I have asked her about divorce a hundred times….but she puts down always…
Even if u r giving her worst days of life..she is still staying with u…

Do u want to know reason…???

She have same the reason….”U R HER FIRST LOVE..!!!”
I became numb after listening this…my heart skipped 2-3 beats….my mind stopped working..a tear escaped from my eye…

My father continued after a pause…

“Yes….u heard it right….u r her first love….
Love can happen after marriage too…

“Just think..how u will feel…..when..someone u love…don’t even touch the lunch u packed…and u still pack it everday….”

I remembered how she used to pack the lunch…and i didn’t even once touched it….

“Just think…how u will feel…when..someone u love…put down everything..u do to cheer them….”

I remembered how she used to play my favourite music..to cheer me and i broke the player….

“Think how…much u will be hurt.. when u r paid with the interest..for the money u had spent on them….”
“Think how much u will be broken…after being slapped by a person u love…just think once….”

Slapping her flashed infront of my eyes….

With every realisation…tears flowed down my face.. guilt occupied my mind and soul…how???when???when i became like this…???
How can i do this to anybody??? And moreover to the person who loves me…so much….i thought

My father continued again….
Dp:-“….and after all these…she still stays with for that one stupid reason…that..u r her first love…and it won’t go away…it’s not about first love…u know…it’s about The Last Love…it’s about who never leaves…whatever the situation is…it always stays with till ur last breathe….i just want u to know… i m sorry if ur hurt…”

I could not speak a word after that….my mind,heart..,senses all went blank..
And i slowly took my steps…to walk out of the house…

Dp:-“u need an umbrella..??”

Laksh:-“………no…..”

I was running….
The roaring rain couldn’t slow my steps down…

I reached home fainting…

She came running seeing me…she was about to hug me…but..she didn’t…

Ragini:-“where were u…?? I just lost my life…I m sorry…i just lost my control…i will never kiss u again…i m sorry…please…don’t go…please don’t leave me…”

She paused…and was looking at me…waiting for me to say something…

I could almost hear my heart beats…her face had marks…of my fingers in red…

I never know what to do but cry….folded my hands…fell on my knees…

Laksh:- while crying..and sobbing “i m sorry….i m sorry…i m sorry…sorry…sorry… sorry…please…if possible please forgive me…”

She was scared when he started crying…she was more scared when fell on knees in front of her…folding his hands and asking for forgiveness…her heart got pierced completely seeing him in this condition… after all whatever he did to her…he was the one whom she loved….he was her first love…

She also sat on her knees…tear started rolling down her face…again…she was always able to feel his pain…how much she may try…she was not able to keep herself away from him…

Ragini:-“Laksh ji….” while holding his hand…

He placed his forehead on her hands…

Laksh:-still crying…”sorry…i know..i hurted u alot….and it is not possible to forgive me…for whatever I did to u…but still if possible please.. please… forgive me…i had realized my mistake…

He was stopped by ragini..before he could complete….she was also crying seeing him…

Ragini:-“I can’t forgive u…”

He looked at her…with teary eyes…

Ragini:-“yes…u heard it right…i can’t forgive u…b’coz i was never angry with u….i can understand…what u were going through…my situation was not different from urs…ur love hurted u…mine also..difference was ur love hurted u intentionally… but mine….he was so much hurted…that he even don’t know that his pain was hurting others more..so i can’t give u what u want…”

She wiped her tears…

Ragini:- wiping his tears “enough now…stop crying…it doesn’t suits u…”

She made him stand..”if ur sorry quota is over…and u r not angry on me as always….can we eat something…i m hungry…”she said with puppy eyes…

Laksh nodded positively… and went his room to change as he was all wet…

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Its been a Month after that…ragini and laksh had became best friends… yes friends…no..no…best friends… b’coz they wanted to start a fresh…they wanted to know more about eachother…so they decided to become friends…

It’s 8 in the morning…

Laksh’s POV

I m waiting for her to come…so that we can have breakfast together… i m Learning to cook so that she don’t have to get up early…and all thanks to internet recipes… i know she works all day as i think that being a housewife is the most difficult task…after working all day…they never complain about anything… manage to smile whole day…atlast she came…
I smiled at her…said “Good morning ragini”

R:-“good morning…Laksh ji..”

L:-“again ji..please…yrr remove that ji…it looks like i m some oldy…as if u r talking to some 70 yr old uncle…for ur kind Information…i m just 24 now…”he said being irritated

R:-“i don’t do it intentionally…. it just happens… btw..bf is really tasty i must say u r a quick learner…LAKSH”

A wide smile came on his face hearing his appreciation from her…and more than that..hearing his name from her..specially without ji…

L:-“thanku…thanku…”

L:-“wese whats ur program for this weekend…what about long drive…???”

It has became there routine now…laksh used to make bf…they used to go out on weekends…he always try to make her comfortable… they hd forgot every thing that happened in past…or u can say no one of them want to remember it…

He got to know the other side of Ragini… the chirpy…stubborn…adventurous… caring…and many more were still left to know…
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Time was flying really fast….he was busy from last month…he used to go early…but never forgot to make bf for her..even if he didn’t have it…he used to come very late at nights..and wasn’t taking his meals properly from last month…ragini was really worried for him..।whenever she used to ask…he always avoided it saying about workload of office as it was year ending…

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It was her birthday…but she didn’t got a chance to tell him….as he was busy…she was not excited as she was always thinking about him..he was not at all taking care of himself..she was worried for him…they hardly got time to talk with each other…

howmuch busy he may be but he always took care of her needs….he knew she will be alone at home and will be bored so he used to ask pari to accompany her…, to take her for shopping….

She got birthday wishes from all…it was her first birthday after marriage… but she was waiting for him…time seem to be stopped for her…
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She was uninterestedly watching tv when her mobile rang…
It flashed ‘laksh calling’ her face brightened reading his name…she immediately attended it….

R:exitedly..”hello..laksh..”

L:-“hello…ragini…are u free today…??”

R:-little worried “yes.. im free…laksh is everything ok..”

L:-“yes….ragini… nothing to worry…its just my friends marriage anniversary…and he wants both of us to come…and i said yes…iknow…i should have asked u first.. but…”

R:-“no..no..its perfectly fine…”

L:-“ok…be ready at 7…i will pick u up…and we will go directly there…bye..”

Before she could reply he cutted the phone….

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It was 7:30 now…she was continuously trying his phone but he didn’t picked it….

Finally he attended it…

R:-“hello…laksh where are u…???

On the other side they told her that the person whom this belongs to met with an accident… his condition is very critical… and nobody is ready to take him to hospital…and told her address…

She immediately ran out of house and hired a cab and reached..the given address… she paid for the cab…

And started looking for laksh…
But there was nobody whom she can ask about accident…

Ragini:-shouting..”Laksh…. Laksh….. Laksh where r u..????..”

In the meantime somebody dragged her in a dark room…
Her heart skipped so many beats mean while…

Lights turned on…and laksh was standing there infront of her…she ran to him hugged him tightly so that he can’t go anywhere…she came out of hug and…She kissed him all over his face…and again hugged him…tears were flowing from her eyes continuously…yet there was a wide smile on her face..a satisfaction can be seen on her face that nothing bad happened to him…he to reciprocated to her hug…her hands were locked around his neck…and his one hand was on her waist and other on her back of her head continuously rubbing to assure her that everything is fine….

After some time when she calmed…

Laksh:-“Happy Birthday… Ra..gi..ni…” he wispered in her ears..with a smile..

That is when she came into her senses…they were still hugging eachother…she opened her eyes to see where she was….slowly she came out of the hug…and looked laksh standing in front of her with a wide smile…she was still confused what is happening…

Laksh:-“HAPPY BIRTHDAY RAGINI…”he again said with wide smile…

But that smile didn’t last long….

Bcoz.. ragini’s expression were changing from confused to angry one…before he could react he got a tight slap….and before he could react to the slap…he got other slap on his left cheek…

Camera shifts to the ceiling… and we can only see the white ceiling…but a sound of the slap is heard again…one more slap sound is heard but it was louder than the previous one….

And we can see ragini standing there with red face and tears all over her face…but laksh was no were to be seen…

Wait….wait…there he is on floor sitting on his knees…holding his both cheeks…trying hard not to cry…

Ragini:-“u idiot gorilla…u moron monkey…duffer donkey… is this the way to wish somebody…have u ever thought what i was feeling when i got news of your accident… how bad thoughts came into my mind….how many times i died in every second bcoz of the thought of losing u…have u thought even once….

Before she can say ssomething more..

Laksh took her into a tight hug…rubbing her back to calm her….and assuring her that nothing happened to him…

Laksh:-“Sssshhh…calm down see nothing happened to me…im here only….”he slowly took her out of the hug… and cupped her face and kissed her forehead…to calm her…

She looked at him…he also looked at her…he wiped her tears…and they had small eyelock..which was broken by laksh…

Laksh:-“ok…now stop this crying…and tell me how is my surprise…”with a wide smile

Ragini:-she looked at him being confused “what surprise????ur accident news??? Or that u r fine nothing happened to u..it was a fake news which was made by u..???”

He slapped his own forehead…seeing his wife’s intelligence..

Laksh:-“who was that duffer who made this idiot a college topper..??”he said pointing towards her…

Ragini:-“hey..!! Don’t call my professor duffer…”angrily

Laksh:-“and it is okay…if i call u idiot…??”

Before she could reply….

Laksh:-“ok..stop..stop..we will continue this someother time…now come with me…”he said holding her by shoulders…”

He took her outside of that room…there was a beautiful board magenta in color ‘RAGSY’s was written on it…

Laksh:-“this is urs ragini…i know u wanted something like this…u wanted to become world’s best fashion designer… and also that u have completed ur diploma in fashion designing from IIFD…and u were the topper…and many more…iknow almost everything about u..okay i know what u r going to ask…that how i know all this… he na??”

She nodded like a kid…

Laksh:-“what do u think..?? What i was doing all this days.??”he said raising his one eyebrow and smirk on his lips….

Then she realized…that he was planning for her birthday… he was not busy with any office work…he did what nobody did till now for her…She had tears in her eyes…looking at his concern for her..

He cupped her face and wiped her tears with his thumbs…

Laksh:-“u have sacrificed alot for me…but not any more…i don’t want u to depend on me for everything… and please Stop this crying now….and tell me atleast that u liked it or not…”

Ragini:-“it is the best gift of my life…no gift can be better than this…”she said with a wide smile…

Laksh”ok lets go now….”he said dragging her holding her wrist…

Ragini:-but where..???

Laksh:-“long drive….”

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Laksh was riding the bike…Ragini was sitting behind laksh holding his waist and head laid on his back smiling.. and feeling the cold breeze…which were making her hair fly…she was looking at beautiful scenery of nature… and thinking about her life and love…about her laksh..
When Suddenly she heard something…and she jerked…

And she brushed of her thought..

After sometime she again heard same thing..that was

‘I LOVE U…RAGINI…’

She smiled widely with tears she recognized the voice it was of laksh…

Ragini:- what u said..???please say it once again…

Laksh:-“what happened..??? What r u talking about???i didn’t said anything…”

She thought…that she is thinking too much…he just treat her as a friend…it’s just her imagination….and tried to brush off the thoughts but she could not bcoz she heard that many times again… in her journey… when suddenly laksh stopped the bike…

It was a isolated place…and was no light other than laksh’s bike headlight…

Laksh:-“let’s go Ragini…”

Ragini:-“no…i will not go any where…its very dark here…i m afraid of darkness…u know na…let’s go home…”she said trying to drag to the bike

Laksh:-” I m there with u…i will not let u happen anything..trust me…”

Ragini:-“ofcourse i trust u…i trust u more than my self…but i don’t trust tiger…,lion…,snake..,insects.., bhoot…,dayan…chudail…u know..What if they kill u and try to kill me??”she said being scared…and again trying to drag laksh..

He looked at her..making wierd face…he hold her hand with which she was trying hard to pull him…he holded it and pulled her…and due to force she hitted his chest…he picked her in the bridal style… and started walking in darkness…. she was trying Hard get down but his grip was tight on her…so she started shouting…

Ragini:-“bh..bh..bhoot jjjjjiii….dddd..da.da..dayan jjjiii…please don’t eat us…we r not at all tasty…if u will eat us na…u will say chi…yuck..and may be u get food poisoning…. and will have to go hospital…i mean bhoot wala hospital..and there they will give u big injection… so don’t eat us…pleeeaaaassee..”

Laksh wanted to slap his fore head again but he couldnot bcoz he was carrying her….he was feeling so much helpless hearing to her talks…finally he reached where he wanted..he putted her down..

Laksh:-“shut up…just shut urr mouth..not even a word again…”he yelled at her..”and look there..”he said pointing towards sky…

She made puppy face…and nodded…like a kid…and looked at the sky…

He looked at his watch “10…9…8….7..6……..3…2..1…”

And there was written…”I LOVE U RAGINI” in the sky…

Then he looked at her…who was standing there with tears in eyes…and smile on her face..

Laksh:-looking at her with a wide smile… and waiting for her answer…”say something Ragini…”

Ragini:-“let’s go home laksh…i m Not feeling good…please let’s go home…”she said with teary eyes…

Laksh:-“why??what happened..??didn’t u liked it…?? “Worriedly..

But she didn’t said anything… he understood what had happened… and smiled at her innocence…
He made her look at him…

He knelt down on his knees infront of her

Laksh:-“love is like rainbow..it’s colorful..and makes people smile…
Love is like an ocean..it’s deep and beautiful…
Love is like sun…it shines and it’s warm…
Love is like a rain…it’s calm and refreshing…
Will u let me show u that love???”
He said with all emotions..and..lots of love..forwarding his hands towards her…

Ragini:-she smiled and nodded no….”i want u to show me ur love…”
And kept her hand in his hand and knelt down to him…and hugged him…

Laksh:-“that was not hallucinations…it all was real….i really said i love u in whole the journey… and fire works also showed i love u ragini…”he said with a wide smile

She came out of the hug and stared at him angrily…started hitting him on his chest…
“U moron monkey… i thought i became mad…but uuuu…
Before she could complete he hold her hand took her into a passionate kiss…”
They broke the kiss when they fell out of breathe…. she felt shy…and was blushing not able meet his eyes….he looked at her…and smiled… and started shouting ” I LOVE U Ragini….I Love u…very much…bhoot ji r u listening…i love her….” and there she was trying to stop him while laughing at his antics…

so this was the story of Ragini’s first love and Laksh’s last love…

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Hope u liked the story…and sorry for mistakes and for this much late update….i tryed to show there bonding…some cute moments…and understanding…. and also tryed to show more shades of ragini’s character such as innocence.., anger..,understanding..hope u liked it…do tell me..how was it…thanks for giving ur precious time and read it…sorry if it was boring…and also wanted to tell that those lines which laksh said to ragini are not mine they were taken from youtube….

Next story will be “one and only love” it is OS hope u will like it to…

Keeping reading… be happy… stay blessed… take care… Bye…💕🙋

47 Comments
  1. Superb

    1. MI_MAHI

      Thank you..very much Aanchal….glad to know that u liked it…thanks for reading…keep reading.. be happy… stay blessed.. tc..😃

  2. IQRA222

    awesome

    1. MI_MAHI

      Thanks IQRA…it means alot…keep reading… Be happy ..stay blessed… tc..😃

  3. Sindhura

    Awesome

    1. MI_MAHI

      THank you very much…sindhu di….glad to know u liked it….thanks for reading it…keep reading… be happy.. stay blessed.. tc…😃

  4. Awesome dear….really loved it……

    1. MI_MAHI

      Thank you…very much dear….glad to know u liked it..keep reading… be happy…stay blessed.. tc…😃

  5. Astra

    superb

    1. MI_MAHI

      Thank you…very much Astra dear….it means alot….thanks for reading…keep reading…be happy…stay blessed…tc…😃

  6. Raglakholic

    Its amazing update mahi
    Totally loved it
    Each nd every raglak moment’s r simply outstanding
    Loved the way you showed their bond getting stronger nd stronger
    Eagerly waiting to read ur next work on raglak
    Thanks for this wonderful work on raglak

    1. MI_MAHI

      Big wala Thank you dear…it means alot…thanks for reading… be happy..stay blessed… tc…😃

  7. Amazing

    1. MI_MAHI

      Thank you..very much Megha….glad to know that u liked it…thanks for reading…keep reading.. be happy… stay blessed.. tc..😃

  8. Awesome plz come back with another raglak ff

    1. MI_MAHI

      Thank you..very much sanchami….glad to know that u liked it…will surely write more stories on Raglak…thanks for reading…keep reading.. be happy… stay blessed.. tc..😃

  9. Omg! Omg! Omg mahi amazing yar

    Please write more raglak stories

    1. MI_MAHI

      Thank you… Thank you..Thank you..very much lovely….glad to know that u liked it…yup…will surely write more stories on Raglak..thanks for reading…keep reading.. be happy… stay blessed.. tc..😃

  10. Asra

    awesome dear….laksh proposal superbbb dear….and bhoot ji bhoot wala hospital superbbb…i love that scenes…..tkcr dear….

    1. MI_MAHI

      Thank you.. soooooo much Asra….that part is mine favourite too…glad too know u liked it…keep reading…be happy…stay blessed.।tc..love u…😃

  11. Amazing….
    Waiting 4 ur next OS….
    Plzz write it only on Raglak…..

    1. MI_MAHI

      Thank you..very much dear….glad to know that u liked it…thanks for reading…keep reading.. be happy… stay blessed.. tc..😃

  12. plzzzz comeback with new ff plzzzz yaa waiting for ur is eagerly plzzzz hope u write on memory loss of swara but stop only swara remember lakshya till raglak suffering if possible plzzzz write ff plzz

    1. MI_MAHI

      Thank you..very much nikky….glad to know that u liked it…will update OS sooner..may be on tuesday or wednesday…thanks for reading…keep reading.. be happy… stay blessed.. tc..😃

  13. awesome nice mind blowing superb outstanding u r such awesome writer and u people are writing for raglak and thank u thank u thank u so much all raglak ff ts ss os and yaa plzzzz keep on writing and keep raglak alive and yaa I must say raglak ff ts as is getting decreasing but u people keep them and prove that Temish fan love them so much what so ever the situation and I hope that most of raglak ff reach till 50 plzz guys the writer update regularly don’t be late update daily or alternate day but plzzzz don’t stop or leave in middle as I saw. many raglak ff doesn’t have end thank u once again for ur precious time

  14. Jazzy

    amazing chappy i just loved laksh caring side and his gift too and ragini’s reaction tooo

    1. MI_MAHI

      Thank you..very much jazzy….glad to know that u liked it…thanks for reading…keep reading.. be happy… stay blessed.. tc..loveu..😃

    1. MI_MAHI

      Thank you..very much lisa….glad to know that u liked it…thanks for reading…keep reading.. be happy… stay blessed.. tc..😃

  15. Superb.. Keep writing more raglak stories

    1. MI_MAHI

      Thank you..very much Mintu….glad to know that u liked it…thanks for reading…yup surely going to write more on Raglak…keep reading.. be happy… stay blessed.. tc..😃

  16. Aasthu

    Hey Mahi !!!!!!!! Thanks for the update…….that was least expected…..I loved Dp’s words to Laksh…..I also cried like Laksh……it was a surprise for me too to know that Laksh is Ragini’s 1st love……Ragini’s answer for Laksh’s forgiveness was really nice……..Laksh’s surprise and the proposal was amazing…….really good in all aspects…..when’ll u be updating the OS????

    1. MI_MAHI

      Thank you… Thank you… Thank you very much Aasthu…glad to know that u liked it….and about update i was going to update it sooner but it was not complete… but whenu asked for it…i had no other option than to complete it and update it…so credit goes to u for this update…and iwill post the os may be on tuesday…thanks for reading…keep reading.. be happy… stay blessed.. tc..love u…😃

  17. Dharani

    awesome

    1. MI_MAHI

      Thank you..very much Dharani….glad to know that u liked it…thanks for reading…keep reading.. be happy… stay blessed.. tc..😃

  18. A.xx

    AMazing xx

    1. MI_MAHI

      Thank you..very much dear….glad to know that u liked it…thanks for reading…keep reading.. be happy… stay blessed.. tc..love u..😃

  19. It’s amazing.. Superb.. I liked it to the core… Write more raglak stories

    1. MI_MAHI

      Thank you..very much Mintu….glad to know that u liked it…thanks for reading…yup…surely going to write more stories on Raglak…keep reading.. be happy… stay blessed.. tc..😃

  20. Awesome episode dear and plz write more Raglak stories. Miss u and take care

    1. MI_MAHI

      Thank you..very much Ammu….glad to know that u liked it…thanks for reading…keep reading.. be happy… stay blessed.. tc..😃

  21. Suprb…..fabulous…ur modulation ……imaginatuons……confessions……..definition of love……..mind blowing….. awesome….too gud….waiting for next.stay blessed….💖💕💕💖

    1. MI_MAHI

      Thank you..very much Anayt….glad to know that u liked it…thanks for reading…keep reading.. be happy… stay blessed.. tc..😃

  22. Marvelously awesome….Loved it alot

    1. MI_MAHI

      Thank you…. very much tani….glad to know u liked it….keep reading… be happy…stay blessed… tc..😃

    1. MI_MAHI

      Thanks alot Ragz….it means alot dear…keep reading..be happy..।stay blessed… tc…love u…😃

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