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Home»Fan Fiction»RagLak- The Journey (7)
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RagLak- The Journey (7)

AstraBy AstraAugust 24, 201727 Comments6 Mins Read
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Hi friends, thank you all for previous comments n likes.
I thought I have given good clue what actually Laksh is feeling for Ragini and what his feelings towards swara. But, all are confused. Hmm.. that’s what i want. Haha.. bcz, this confusion will have to haunt till the last episode and finally I will revel what is Laksh’s real feeling.
I know guys… even it was very hard for me to write i love u swara for laksh. It has troubled me a lot.

All parts: Here
Previous: Part 6

Journey 7

“Now, what’s the plan?” Sanskar asks Laksh.
Laksh is looking at the map which is kept on the bonnet of jeep.

“This is entrance, here all men will be there. This is swara’s room…” Laksh is saying something.

Ragini was leaning to door of jeep and looking somewhere.

“What about Ragini then?” Sanskar asks.

Laksh smiles and Laksh and goes near Ragini. He too leans beside her. She moves a little far from him.

Lak: what are you seeing??
Ragini just nods her head negatively.
Lak: don’t worry, everything will be alright Ragini. I’m with you.
Ragini just smiles hiding her tears.

On other hand, Bhuvan frustrates near Dadaji and Daadi maa.

“Your grand daughter has escaped from house and roaming with the guy who eloped on her marriage..!!”

Daadi and dada amazes.

“Atleast you come and stop her. I won’t force Ragini to get married to my son, but I can’t tolerate when she is with that cheater guy.”
Bhuvan says.

Daadi and dadaji looks on..

At Shekar’s house,

“Sir, Laksh is at outskirts of Mysore.” One man says.

“stop him there itself and don’t let him come..!!” Shekar orders. Those men nods and goes. Swara worries.

“Yahoo..!! we entered the Mysore city..!!” Sanskar shouts.

“Bro, we didn’t enter their mansion yet..!!” Laksh says.

Ragini then opens her mouth,
“stop the jeep Sanskar..!”

San: no. the vechile won’t stop till the mission is completed..!! right bro..!!
Lak: yes dude..!!
Both laughs and gives hifi.

Ragini gets annoyed.

“I said STOP”

Laksan gets amazed with Ragini’s anger as they never saw it. Sanskar stops the jeep. Ragini gets out and takes her bag. Laksh gets surprised and he too gets down.

“Ragini, what happened??” Laksh asks.

“Journey has finished. You go in your way, I will go in my way.” Ragini says while going.

Laksh holds her bag. Ragini turns back.

Lak: Ragini, stand and talk. Did you get angry on me? Are you upset with me?? Tell na, why do you want to go away??

Rag: laksh, don’t waste time here. There swara marriage might start.

Lak: keep aside about her…

San shouts holding phone, “bro, swara has send a message. If you won’t come by marriage time, she will suicide it seems.”

Laksh looks at Sanskar confused. Here Ragini starts going away again. Laksh comes forward to her.

Lak: ragini, don’t be childish now. let’s go soon and let’s come back successfully.

Rag: what success?? Why would I celebrate your love success?? Why should I come with you?? Leave me alone..!!

Lak: how could I leave you alone?? Ragini, you have to be with me..!!

Rag: go and marry swara Laksh, I didn’t say no.

Sanskar comes, “Ragini, you are misunderstanding laksh..”

Rag: please stop..!!

Lak and san looks at Ragini silently.

Rag: laksh and Sanskar, thanks for helping all the way. All the best Laksh and happy married life. Good bye…

Lak: Ragini…

Laksh holds her hand.

Ragini frees her hand,
“there is nothing more to say Laksh.”

Ragini starts going away and Laksh looks at her in tears.
“Ragini, I will not force you to come with me. But, if you won’t come, I will stand here itself.” Laksh says in tear rolling eyes.

BG song plays…

Phool jo band hai panno mein
Tum usko dhool bana dena..

Ragini turns other way and starts going… Laksh looks at her sadly. Sanskar is telling him something.

Baat chhide jo meri kahi
Tum usko bhool bataa dena

Ragini wipes her tears remembering all incidents between her and Laksh. Laksh was just standing there as he said. Sanskar is shaking him to come into world.

Lekin wo bhool ho aisi
Jis se bezaar nahin….

The gap between RagLak keeps increasing and vehicles are going in between them.
Tu jo soye toh meri tarah
Ik pal ko bhi karaar nahi

Ragini stands at bus stop facing towards Laksh.. and he is looking at her silently.

Maana ke hum yaar nahin
(Song ends)

Ragini raises her head and still Laksh is standing there without any moment. Ragini suddenly makes her eyes big and shouts,
“Laksh..!!”

A man comes and beats on Laksh’s head with a log. Laksh falls front holds his head and looks back.
Those are Shekar men.

“Go back and be alive. Otherwise, die in our hands.” that man says.

Laksh smirks and keeps his folds his shirt sleeves back,
“Lucky never looks back once he is into a mission. Try to stop me, if you can..!!”

Those men start fighting, and Laksh fights with them. Ragini is looking at him worried.

“Bro.. bro.. save me bro..” Sanskar shouts, when a man holds him and other one is beating him. Laksh comes and drags those men away.

The fight continues..

Then, Ragini sees a man approaching Laksh with a knife in hand. Ragini leaves her bag in shock.
Laksh was busy in beating them, he was coming from back..

“Laksh” Ragini shouts, but due to horn sounds he can’t hear.

That man is nearing Laksh…
Ragini runs from her place to Laksh.

That man is about to back stab Laksh…..

“Ahhh” Laksh hears Ragini’s voice.

He turns back. That man has stabbed Ragini as she came in between. Laksh shocks looking at Ragini like that.

Ragini is holding her stomach where she got stabbed and she was bleeding. That man runs away looking at her shocked.

“Ra..ragini..” Laksh holds her in tears.

Ragini falls on him being unconscious. Laksh sits on his knee, and Ragini was on his knee, Laksh was holding her hand.
“Ragini..” Laksh calls her again in tears.

Ragini is closing her eyes.

Laksh shouts, “No Ragini..!! You can’t leave me..!! open your eyes..!!!” she pats her cheek.

Laksh is about to lift her in his arms, Ragini opens her eyes taking heavy breath and holds Laksh’s collar with her one hand.

“La…la..ksh.. I .. I want to tell you… something..” Ragini says very hardly.

His neck is glued with her blood as she touched his collar with her red hands.

“Ragini” Laksh lifts is about to lift her.

“If I don’t tell it now, I can never say it…” Ragini says and holds her stomach in pain.
Ragini takes her all strength and says in one go..
“I love you Laksh”

Laksh looks at her dumb.

“I love you Laksh”
Ragini says again.. and she closes her eyes. Her hand falls down from his collar. Ragini was lying lifelessly in his hands…

“Ragini..!!!!” Laksh shouts as his nerves burst out.

To be continued…

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    27 Comments

    1. Elizebathlovely on August 24, 2017 3:49 pm

      Awesome

    2. Soumya on August 24, 2017 4:12 pm

      Simply superb di….post next soon

    3. Arjuna on August 24, 2017 4:14 pm

      AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME

    4. aleeza on August 24, 2017 5:09 pm

      Awesome

    5. Thahseem on August 24, 2017 5:41 pm

      Awesome

    6. Monu on August 24, 2017 5:44 pm

      Interesting dear

    7. ROJARANI on August 24, 2017 6:30 pm

      Awesome

    8. asra on August 24, 2017 7:08 pm

      awesome dear…loved it alot…omg our ragu…hope nothing happen to her..eagerly waiting for nxt one….tkcr dear

    9. Sherin on August 24, 2017 7:44 pm

      Awesome dear

    10. Vennila on August 24, 2017 7:55 pm

      Awesome episode

    11. Pearly on August 24, 2017 8:28 pm

      Superb part

    12. Follybraverl on August 24, 2017 8:31 pm

      Astra you nailed it dear….
      But can’t beat their separation
      If possible Plz show jealousy laksh ??

    13. Balaji on August 24, 2017 8:35 pm

      awesome…

    14. Malu on August 24, 2017 9:03 pm

      Amazing part nd can’t wait for next

    15. IQRA222 on August 24, 2017 9:38 pm

      asthu di !! you rock. it was hell awesome
      loved it
      but pls pls dont separate my sweethearts!!
      waiting for the next part

    16. Aamy on August 24, 2017 9:50 pm

      Awesome

    17. Zoya on August 24, 2017 10:04 pm

      Awesome part

    18. teitokUn1718 on August 25, 2017 12:57 am

      Amazing… Loved it…

    19. Vini on August 25, 2017 6:42 am

      Good one, keep going

    20. Raglak_fan on August 25, 2017 3:39 pm

      Fabulous dear

    21. Ashly on August 25, 2017 4:59 pm

      Mind blowing superb amazing

    22. Laashya on August 25, 2017 5:14 pm

      Wonderful episode and feeling bad for ragu and can’t wait for episode

    23. Anju on August 25, 2017 5:43 pm

      Awesome episode

    24. Ammu on August 25, 2017 8:26 pm

      Outstanding episode dear and Raglak scenes are awesome. Feeling bad for Ragini, I know u won’t let anything happen to Ragini. Loved Ragini’s confession. Eagerly waiting for next episode and please post next part ASAP. Love you dear and take care

    25. Pearly on August 25, 2017 8:34 pm

      Awesome

    26. Jiyani on August 25, 2017 8:45 pm

      Fantastic dear…..Loved it

    27. Monisha on August 25, 2017 9:10 pm

      Super duper part

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