RagLak ff by vini – Tum mere Ho (Part 1)

Hi you all beautiful and smartest people there.. this is #Vini and I’m thankful to you all for such amazing comments…and…uh….. I love you all.. πŸ˜€ Now.. let’s go ahead with the first part of my FF ‘Tum Mere Ho’. So here we go..

<3 TUM MERE HO <3
By #Vini

β˜…Part-1β˜…

In Kolkata.. A bid Mansion is shown..
@The Maheshwari Mansion
In the house mandir.. A lady was singing the krishna aarti.. Doing the arti infront of the momentum of krishna.. And its non other than Anpurna Maheshwari. DP..RP..sujata and Swara were standing behind her joining hands..

Ap: Kab te nihaarat aapki ore..ki aap humari ore nihaaro..
Raadhe krishna humare dhaam ko..
Jaani vrindavan dhaam padhaaro..
Raadhe krishna humare dhaam ko..
Jaani vrindavan dhaam padharo..

She opened her eyes smiling and turned back to all.. All smiled opening their eyes.. Then she moved to everyone and gave aarti to all.. Then her eyes fell on someone.. And a smile came on her face..

Ap: Arey sanskaar?

All turned back and sanskaar came forward to ap, dp and all..smiling.. He bowed down in ap's and dp's feet and touched them.. Same he did with ram ans sujata..

Ap: Lo beta.. Aarti le lo..
Sanskaar: Kaisi aarti badi maa..? Mere bhagwaan to aap log hain..

Ap and dp smiled..

Dp: kaisi baate karte ho tum sanskaar.. Tum bete jaise ho humare.. Laksh humara dahina haath hai tum humara bahina haath ho.. Tum dono ke hi bina hum adhure hain..

Sanskaar smiled..and swara smiled happily looking at him.. Then..

Ap: Ek minute.. Laksh aaj bhi nahi aaya naa..? Hey bhagwaan ye ladka Bhi naa.. Pata nahi kab samjhega..
Sujata: Naa jijji.. Aap to jaante hi ho ki aapke bete ko je pooja aarti me.. Bo ke kehbe hain.. Intreasht..
Swara: Maa its interest…
Sujata: Haan bo hi.. Bo hi naa usko je pooja aarti me..

From behind..

Laksh: Exactly chaachi.. Kyunki apna bhagwaan main khud hu..

And everybody turned back and laksh was standing there..wearing a white shirt..black pant and a brown blazer.. And a smirk.. Then he came forward to them..

Laksh: aap log inn murtiyo ki pooja karte ho isliye taaki ye aapko acchi kismat de.. Accha future de..lekin Laksh Maheshwari.. Apni kismat.. Aur apna future khud banata hai.. (He smirked)
Ap: Hum jaante hain.. Phir bhi ye aarti le lo.. Humari khushi ke liye..

Laksh made bored face..but then smiled at ap and took aarti..

Laksh: Sirf aapke liye..

Ap smiled happily at him.. Then she put the plate back and all of them dispersed.. Except swara.. As sanskaar moved..swara held his hand… Sanskaar panickly turned at her…then he looked at all.. And swara kissed on his cheek and ran from there..and sanskar smiled surprisingly…then..

Dp: Sanskaar.. Aao beta naashta kar lo..
Sanskaar: abhi aaya bade papa.. Pehle aapki singhaniya's ke saath meeting fix karwa du..
Dp: Haan.. Theek hai beta..

Dp smiled.. And laksh made an irritated face..then they all were sitting on the dinning table.. Ap and sujata were serving food to all of them..

Laksh: Aaj iss halwe se chaachi ke jaisi meethi si khushboo kyu aa rahi hai?
Sujata: (blushed then realised dp) Chup.. Besaram..
Ap: (laughed a bit) Haan.. Aaj halwa sujata ne banaya hai..

Laksh chuckled..Then..

Laksh: Accha.. Papa wo main aap logo batane wala tha ki main aaj shaam ko lucknow jaa raha hu..
Dp: Lucknow? Kyu?
Laksh: Ghumne papa.. Main amar aur jeet.. Hum teeno jaa rhe hain.. Actually jeet america jaane wala hai..so uske jaane se pehle teeno saath me outing par jaa rahe hain…
Dp: Theek hai..lekin tum wapis kab aaoge..?
Laksh: 3-4 din baad..
Ap: Par laksh..Aise kaise..Achaanak se..?
Laksh: Haan maa.. Wo suddenly plan bann gaya…
Ap: Lekin…
Laksh: Maa lekin wekin kuchh nahi.. Mujhe jaana hai.. To matlab jaana hai..
Ap: Accha baba.. Chale jaana..bass..? Abhi naashta kar lo..

Laksh smiled and started having his breakfast..

After that..
Laksh was in office in his cabin with his friends.. Sitting on sofa talking to Jeet and amar.. They trio were laughing and talking..

Jeet: Isne usey apne saath le jaane se mana kar diya Aur phir uske baad iss amar ki ussey ladayi ho gayi..
Amar: Yaar tum logo ko hassi aa rahi hai.. Meri band baji hui hai..
Laksh: Aisa kya hai yaar? Usey nahi pata ki ye boys trip hai.. Wo kya karegi aa ke..?
Amar: Yaar usey pata hai..par meghna nahi maani to kya hoga mera.. ?

Just then sanskaar entered in and looked at laksh.. Laksh looked at him and a kind of anger and attitude came on his face..

Sanskaar: Laksh.. Wo bade papa ki meeting hai.. Tum log shor kam karo please..

Jeet and amar looked at laksh.. And laksh got up looking at him like that..he came forward to him and stood infront of him looking into his eyes..

Laksh: Manners nahi hai tujhe? Kisi ne sikhaya nahi ki jab kisi ke cabin me aao to pehle knock karke permisson lo..
Sanskaar: Laksh wo main bass bade papa..
Laksh: Oh yes.. Yaad aaya.. Tujhe manners honge bhi kaise..? Maa baap to hai nahi tere… Tujhe Manners sikhayega bhi kaun..?
Sanskaar: Laksh please..
Laksh: (smirked and turned back at amar and jeet) you know guys.. Ye 10 saal ka tha jab iska baap humare ghar kaa naukar hua karta tha.. Phir ek din bechare ki maut ho gayi aur ye anaath ho gaya.. Phir mere papa maa ne iss anaath ko sahaara diya.. Padhaya likhaya.. Itna bada kiya.. Aur tab se lekar aaj tak ye humare hi tukdo par pal raha hai..
Sanskaar: (getting furstrated) laksh please..
Laksh: (turned to him) Apni auwkaat me rehkar baat kiya kar mujhse.. Naukar hai tu.. Only a bl**dy servant..you got that? Aur haan..ye jo abhi order diya tha naa tune.. Usey apne saath leke nikal jaa yaha se.. Get lost..

Amar and jeet laughed…Sanskaar was angry on him but he couldn't say anything as he was durga prasad's son..he then removed his eyes and was going out then..

Laksh: Ek minute.. (He stopped) Mere aur mere friends ke liye cold-drinks le kar aa.. (Grinded teeth) Aur agli baar knock kar ke aana.. Samjha?

Sanskaar then moved out without saying anything and laksh smirked..

Jeet: Bhai.. Ye tere maa papa ne naa.. Zyada sar chadhaa rakha hai ye sanskaar ko..
Laksh: (turned to them) I know..
Amar: Aakhir hai to naukar hi naa..
Laksh: Haan.. Lekin maa papa nahi maante isko naukar.. Apna dusra beta kehte hain isko.. (Grinded teeth) Iski auwkaat bhi hai.. Laksh maheshwari ke saath rishta jodne ki..?
Amar: Leave it guys.. mujhe meri problem kaa solution batao..
Laksh: Yaar teri problem…

Just then sanskar knocked again.. And brought coldrinks for them..

Sanskaar: May I come in..?

Laksh turned and smirked seeing him..

Laksh: Hmm..

He entered and put the tray of coldrinks infront of them on table..and was about to move up to go..

Laksh: serve bhi kar..

Sanskaar looked at him frustrated..jeet and amar smirked..and laksh was looking at him with same attitude on his face.. Then sanskaar removed his eyes and started serving..

Laksh: Haan to amar.. Teri problem kaa solution ye hi hai ki tu chhod de uss meghna ko faltu me uske nakhre uthaane ki zarurat nahi hai.. Be a man..
Amar: Yaar lucky tu pagal hai? I love her yaar..college time se pyaar karta hu main ussey..
Laksh: Come on yaar.. Pyaar kaa kya hai.. 2-3 din baate.. Aur phir 4-5 raate.. Iske baad to bore ho jaata hai harr koi.. Aur tu to uske saath 2 saal se hai.. Bore nahi hua..?

Sanskaar was hearing what he was saying.. And these words were showing that what he thinks about girls..

Jeet: Exactly..
Laksh: aur nahi to kya.. Aur ladkiya to khilauna hoti hai.. Kuchh waqt tak hi mazza deti hain.. Aur phir baad me wahi hota hai jo tere saath ho raha hai..to better hai ki tu meghna ko chhod aur koi dusri patta le.. Kuchh din enjoy karne ke baad usko bhi chhod diyo aur koi nayi patta liyo.. Aise tu bhi bore nahi hoga..aur hum bhi bore nahi honge..

He winked at jeet smirking..and they both did a high5 laughing..then sanskaar moved out of there being irritated thinking what they were talking about..

Sanskaar: (thought to himself) Oh god.. Agar bade gharo ke ladke aise hote hain to main kabhi apni laado se waada nahi karunga ki uski shaadi kisi acche khaandaan ke..bade ghar ke kisi raj kumaar se karwaunga.. (Just then he got a call.. he checked it..and it was ragini calling him.. he got a smile) kitni lambi umar hai iski.. (Picked up the call moving out) Haan laado..

On the other hand..
A beautiful girl was seen wearing pinkish anarkali and a fish braid Walking on some road with her friend tanu…and ofcourse its ragini..

Ragini: (smiling excitingly) Hello bhai?
Sanskaar: Haan.. Kaisi hai? Aur exam kaisa hua tera?
Ragini: Bohot bohot bohot accha..
Sanskaar: Accha.. To last exam tha naa?
Ragini: Ji.. Last hi tha..
Sanskaar: to theek hai.. Main kal tujhe lene aa jaata hu..
Ragini: Offo bhai.. Itni bhi kya jaldi hai.. Hume yaha kuchh aur waqt ke liye rehne dijiye naa.. Hum aane se pehle apni friend ke saath waqt bitana chaahte hain..
Sanskaar: matlab tujhe meri koi parwah nahi hai.. Main yaha kabse tere exams khatam hone ki wait kar raha hu taaki tu wapis aa jaaye aur tu..?
Ragini: Arey to hum kaunsa mana kar rahe hain.. Bass 1-2 din aur…
Sanskaar: (shocked) 1-2 din??????
Ragini: Haan.. Waise to bohot kam hain..hum to soch rahe the ki araam se 4-5 din…
Sanskaar: (scolding her playfully) Accha ji?

And ragini laughed and sanskaar too..

Sanskaar: Accha chal theek hai.. Par tu araam se rehna.. Hmm?
Ragini: Ji.. Bhai badi maa kaisi hain?
(Note- badi maa is not ap..she's ragini's maasi who raised her up after her mother died)
Sanskaar: Theek hain.. Tujhe bohot miss karti hain..
Ragini: unse kahiyega ki hum aane ke baad sabse pehle unhi se milne aayenge..
Sanskaar: Accha keh dunga.. Chal main tujhe baad me phone karta hu.. Office me hu..
Ragini: Ok.. Bye..
Sanskaar: Bye..apna khyaal rakhna..

Ragini then ended the call..

Tanu: kya kaha unhone?
Ragini: (sadly) Kal lene aa rahe hain bhai hume..
Tanu: (got sad) No yaar.. Humare outing plans kar kya hoga..?
Ragini: Kya hoga.. ? Kuchh nahi.. Hume jaana padega..

Tanu got sad face while removing down her eyes and ragini got a cute smile looking at her..

Ragini: Jaana padega outing par..
Tanu: (got sparkles looking at her) Outing par?
Ragini: Haan baba.. Nahi aa rahe bhai kal..
Tanu: Really? (Hugged her happily) I love you.. I love you…
Ragini: (broke the hug) Haan bass bass..

And then she laughed..and tanu too…

In late evening..
Laksh (white shirt..reddish brown blazer.. Black pant) reached lucknow with his friends amar and jeet..and they entered in a luxurious room in a hotel.. And they all were looking around observing the room..

Amar: Oh man..! Lucky yaar.. Tera dost hone ka ye hi fayda hai.. This Royal treatment..

Laksh smirked.. Just then a hotel staff girl entered with a staff boy who brought their bags..

Girl: Mr. Laksh Maheshwari..?

Laksh looked at her and came to her looking at her smirking..jeet and amar also looked at her being mesmerised..

Girl: (smiling)So this your room and here is your luggage.. Aapko kisi bhi time humari service ki zarurat pade to you can call any of us anytime..
Laksh: (smirked) Are you sure about that….. "anytime"?
Girl: (got stunned for a moment.. Then..she laughed a bit) Yea.. Anytime.. (She smirked)
Laksh: (winked) Ok babe.. See you soon..

The girl gave him a wide smile.. Then..

Girl: Ok sir… Now you can have rest..
Jeet: Excuse me.. Come soon.. (He smirked)

Girl laughed a bit.. Then she went out of the room..

Jeet: Oh yaar.. Kya maal hai..
Laksh: Kuchh khaas nahi hai..
Amar: To phir line kyu maari tune uss pe?
Laksh: she was a kaam chalau..
Jeet: tujhe to sabhi kaam chalau lagti hain..kabhi kisi ladki ko dekh ke kahega bhi..yeah she is the one..!!
Laksh: (smirked) Haan par agar wo uss trah ki hui to..
Amar: What do you mean by..uss trah ki?
Laksh: Uss trah ki matlab.. (Walked ahead a bit)Jo mere dil o dimaag par chhaa jaaye..jo mujhe pagal kar de.. Jisey dekh kar mujhe lage ki wo sirf meri hai..jisey dekh ke main kahu ki yes she's the only one..!
Jeet: Jaane de.. Tujhe koi nahi pasand aane wali.. (Laksh smirked) Chalo.. Baahar chal ke kuchh khaate hain..
Laksh: Yeah.. I'm really hungry..

On the other hand..
Ragini was sitting in a Ice-cream parlour with tanu..

Ragini: Dekho tanu jaldi karo.. PG me late night entry allowed nahi hai…
Tanu: Offo.. Araam se khaa.. Late ho gayi to mere ghar par rehne aa jaana late night party karenge.. (She winked)
Ragini: Haan..aur phir agle din humara PG owner hume humare samaan ke saath baahar nikaal dega..

And they both laughed..

Tanu: Ragu..I'll miss you a lot..
Ragini: Hmm.. Same here.. Par tum chinta mat karo.. Hum tumhari shaadi me ayenge naa.. Invite to karogi naa hume?
Tanu: Haan but ek condition par.. Tu bhi invite karegi mujhe apni shaadi par..
Ragini: (laughed) hum to shaadi karenge hi nahi..
Tanu: Kyu?
Ragini: Aise hi..
Tanu: To kya lifetime ke liye apne bhai ko pareshaan karti rahegi?
Ragini: Haan..

They both laughed again.. Then..

Tanu: But jo bhi ho ragu.. Shaadi to karni hi padegi.. Kabhi naa kabhi to apne bhai ko chhod kar jaana hi padega tumhe..
Ragini: Hmm.. Jaante hain.. Par hum uss hi insaan se shaadi karenge jo humare aur humare bhai ke rishte ko samjhe..aur hume kabhi unse dur naa kare.. (Lost in some thoughts) Jo sab ki bohot izzat kare.. Jo sab ke chehro par bass khushi le aaye.. Jiske hone se humari life complete ho jaaye.. Jo humse.. Humse bohot pyaar kare.. Jo hume harr baat par ehsaas dilaaye ki wo humse pyaar karte hain..aur sabse badi baat.. Jo humare bhai ki bohot izzat kare..
Tanu: Oh god Ragu.. (Laughed a bit) Teri duniya naa..tere bhai se shuru ho ke tere bhai par hi khatam ho jaati hai..
Ragini: (laughed too..then) accha chalo ab chalte hain..
Tanu: Ok chalo..

They then got up and moved to the counter to pay.. Mean while..laksh and his buddies entered in the same parlour.. They all looked around..then tey trio moved to the icecream counter where ragini and tanu were paying.. As they moved to it ragini and tanu turned to go.. Both laksh and ragini didn't notice eachother but their shoulder got hit to eachothers'.. Laksh turned back to her and saw her but not her face.. Then he removed his eyes and turned ahead..ragini then turned back and saw him a bit angrily but didn't see his face.. She turned ahead and moved out of the parlour.. And laksh..jeet and amar sat down on the same place where ragini and tanu were sitting..then after coming out ragini realised something..

Ragini: Tanu..!
Tanu: Kya hua?
Ragini: Lagta hai hum apna phone andar table par hi bhool aaye.. Ruko hum laate hain..
Tanu: Ok jaldi.. Main tab tak scooty parking se nikalti hu..
Ragini: Hmm..

Meanwhile.. Laksh saw a phone on the table..

Laksh: (confused) Ye kisi kaa phone reh gaya shayad..
Jeet: Pink colour hai.. Zarur kisi ladki kaa hoga..

Laksh smirked a bit.. Then he got a call And he got up..ragini entered in the parlour..he moved to go out looking at the phone..ragini moved in being panicked.. Both didn't notice eachother again.. And ragini came to the table..

Ragini: Excuse me.. Wo humara phone hai..
Amar: Ye? (Gave the phone) lijiye…
Ragini: thank you..
Amar: No its ok..

While jeet was busy in watching the other girls sitting on the other table.. Ragini then turned and moved to go out..where as laksh entered..he was still looking at his phone..and ragini was looking at her own phone.. As they were moving towards eachother their shoulders got hit again.. And laksh got irritated while turning to to her but didn't see her face again.. She was about to turn to him but she got a call..he realised that she's the same girl he got hitted to on the ice cream counter.. And she received it..

Ragini: Ji bhai..

Laksh made an frustrated face..then he removed his eyes and came to his place..and ragini turned a bit and saw him again..but not his face..and realised that he is the same guy she got hitted to on the counter and she got frustrated too..then she removed her eyes turning back and walked out..

Ragini: Haan bhai..hum theek hain..
Aap chinta mat kariye..hum khud hi aap ko bata denge ki kab aana hai..
Haan theek hai..
Aap bhi.. Bye..

Then she ended the call and waited for tanu to come.. And inside the parlour..

Laksh: wo phone kaha gaya?
Amar: jiska tha wo le gayi…
Laksh: Le gayi?
Jeet: Hain le gayi..? Kab?
Amar: Jab tu unn ladkiyo ko dekhne me busy tha..
Jeet: Shit.. Kaisi thi?
Amar: Suit wali thi..
Laksh: wo?

He was looking out through the glass wall.. Ragini was waiting for tanu she was standing like that so that her face couldn't be seen to laksh and his buddies..

Amar: Haan wo hi..
Jeet: shitt.. Rokta naa.. Thoda mazza le lete.. (Looking at her) chehra bhi to nahi dikh raha..
Laksh: Even mujhe nahi dikha jabki do baar takraya main ussey..
Amar: Relax guys.. She was really beautiful but apne type ki nahi hai..
Jeet: (removed his eyes) yeah.. Suit vuit.. Ye to bilkul bhi apne type ki nahi hai..

While laksh was just looking at her.. Then waiter got their icecreams and he removed his eyes looking at the icecreams..and on the other hand..ragini went from there with tanu..laksh then looked back at her but she was gone.. Laksh then removed his eyes from there and they had their icecreams..
Next morning..
Laksh (black jacket with its hood on.. Black lower..and half finger hand gloves) Opened the door of his balcony holding a glucose sipper in his hand.. Then he stepped out and looked around.. The sight was good..and infront of him there was multistoried building.. He then put his sipper aside and started doing his exercise.. While the other two guys were sleeping in.. He did his pull ups..and was doing his push ups holding the balcony railling.. His face was sweaty..wet hair were falling on his forehead..then he looked up while doing his push ups.. saw something.. And he stopped.. He saw the girl wearing peach coloured anarkali..wet hair.. And yes it was ragini standing in her balcony just infront of laksh's balcony..laksh don't know how but got to know that she's the same girl he got hitted to last night.. He then stood straight.. Looking at her but her wet hair were still covering her face as she was drying them.. He was standing holding the railling to see her face.. Then she removed her hair back and laksh finally saw her beautiful face.. His eyes got stuck on her.. A simple face with beautiful big eyes.. Beautiful smiling lips..so much of innocence.. So much of patience.. Laksh couldn't get off his eyes from her.. He felt a bit restless.. He took up his sipper and started drinking his glucose while staring her and she was drying her hair.. Then she put back the wet towel on railing and her eyes fell on laksh who was sipping the glucose while staring her.. Both shared an eye contact.. But then she removed eyes and went in.. Laksh put down the the sipper seeing her..and she set off the curtains too..laksh smirked a bit thinking about her..then he also went back in the room..

Precap- How will raglak meet?? Will they fall in love or something else would happen?

Leave your precious comments guys.. :*
#vini
This ff is not by me but by vini she posts it on facebook

22 comments

  1. tisha

    hii vini, I read ur ff daily on fb but I never commented sorry for that. u r awesome writer it’s my favorite ff .n I want to say thank u.only becoz of ur imagination,hardwark I can read such beautiful love story of raglak daily on fb so thank u thanku very much.god bless u

  2. Jaan

    Hi dear. I justlove your ff. I am reading it in facebook. I loved it to the core. Thank you for such a beautiful ff. Great work

  3. Jaan

    Hi…… I just read ur ff on fb plz plzzzz dont seperate them.he have suffered more than enough. Plz dont seperaye them again.

  4. Fats

    |Registered Member

    Amazing update. I love how Laksh is mesmerised by Ragini even though she isn’t his ‘type’. And aww, RagSan share a cute sibling bond. Can’t wait to read the next part πŸ’•

  5. Sreevijayan

    |Registered Member

    Laksh is seriously a spoiled brat..m sure he is gonna hurt my ragu….awww..ragsan bond is the best..

    Amazing start dear..absolutely loved it….pls update the next part soon……

  6. Aasthu

    |Registered Member

    Its good………but can u ask Vini to write in English?????????? I didn’t understand majority of the ff………….

  7. Asra

    |Registered Member

    superbbb dear…i also have a request like hemalatha plz write in English…i don’t know hindi ya…

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