Raglak ff Tenu Kitna Main Pyar Kara -by kitkat Part 1

Hey friends Kitkat here with first chappy of my second FF…..

And as always I can’t b regular…..

Here we go…..


Chapter 1

For those who missed it….

INTRO:- Intro

Maheshwari Executives branch Udaipur,

@Laksh Cabin,

Laksh was holding Swara tightly by her shoulder…

His eyes were red n he was crying bitterly.

L:- plz swara don’t leave me. U know na i love u so much. I can’t live without u…. u can’t do this with me.

Swara jerked his hand away in anger.

S:- no Laksh i cant tolerate u anymore. Ur possessiveness is scaring me now. Yesterday u injured that waiter so badly by bitting him like mad… Why??? just becoz he spilled juice on my dress. It was just his mistake he didn’t did that intentionally but Laksh Maheshwari does only that thing which he wants. He cares about nothing so now even i don’t care about u. Good bye. I m leaving India forever.

Saying this she left the cabin n Laksh fell down on his kness helpless n lifeless. Again due to his aggressiveness he lost a precious person in his life.

But Laksh was already disturbed from first n that waiter spilled the juice like cherry on cake which made him lose his temper……

Laksh even apologised the waiter later on by himself before all his staff…

But what swara saw was only his negative side…..

She never tried to understand him or his mind….

N never bothered about his emotion’s….

After sometime he went back home n then went directly to his room without uttering a word.

Even his grandparents didn’t question him anything as they got to know whole scenario from Laksh PA after he left for home….

In Laksh’s room….

Laksh was sitting on bed in his grey night dress with his head rested on the bed board n eyes closed…..

He suddenly got some restlessness on his face n sem disturbed….


A small boy about 6 years is getting scolded by his parents when a small girl of about 4 years interrupted them…

G:- Kakasa-kakisa he didn’t did it intentionally… forgive him…. he wont do do it again…. hena lucky???

A small Laksh nodded in yes n DP-AP smiled at that girls innocence…

L:- Sorry papa….

Laksh caught the girls hand n ran to play…..

Screen changes n 4 dead bodies covered with white cloths are seen lying on the floor of MM…

All are crying badly n a little laksh n uttara are cuddled to their dadi who was crying badly….

PI( police inspecter):- Sorry sir we were not able to find ur granddaughter….



I miss u Ladoo… N i know u r alive n safe somewhere…. I have lost too many things in my life n i can’t afford to lose anything else….. Loving swara was the worst mistake I did ever in my life…. I was finding u in her but i m really sorry sweetheart I forgot that no one can replace u on my life…. I will find u soon dear…. Lucky will find his Ladoo soon… n its my promise…….

LAKSH’s POV ends….

And a lone tear escapes from his eyes….

@ night on dinner table.

Laksh n dada-dadi were having food silently…

Suddenly Dadaji said…

Da:- Laksh u need to go to Singapore for 6 months for solving some quries their….

L:- But dadaji Sanskar is their na n moreover he didn’t informed me anything….

Dadaji:- He called u but ur phone was off so he informed me and even the international conference of top hotel CEO’s which is going to b held next month is in our hotel… so ur attendance is needed their…

L:- K dadaji I will talk to Sanskar n then plan when to leave….

N he wokeup…. as he was about to leave dadi stoped him n kissed his forehead….

Dadi:- I know u have grownup now but I m ur dadi ma n no one knows u better than me so no need to hide ur pain from me….

Hearing this sweet words of dadi Laksh melted n tears started to flow from his eyes on his cheaks…

He hugged her tightly n bursted in a cry even dadaji n dadima were too crying watching their life in such devastrated condition…

L(while breaking hug):- dadi can i sleep in ur Lap today?? n will u sing a lubelly for me like u use to sing when I was small???

Dadi:- why not… I will do anything for my Golu’s happiness come…

Laksh n dadi headed to his room with a smile…. n dadaji too felt good watching this….

Next Morning,


L:- Dadaji I spoke to sanskar now n he wants me to b their as early as possible… so today is Tuesday n I will leave on Saturday….

Dadaji:- k beta as u say….

Dadi was sat as he gonna go away from her but she know this too that this change is necessary for him……

Soon Saturday arrived and Laksh Left to his destination Singapore but unaware of the game destiny gonna play with him….

As he landed in Singapore Sanskar came n hugged him n they left to Sanskars house for now as Laksh gonna leave in his private presidential room in his hotel which will b ready by next morning…..

He got fresh n rested for while before joining Sanskar for his evening tea….


Laksh felt bored being home idle so decided to have a walk around in the nearby garden….

( Laksh has been in Singapore many times before but max for 10-15 days so know places around Sanskar’s home)

He was near a public garden n rain started…

He was about to leave but a melodious voice attracted him n he started going in that direction attracted like a magnet….

Cham cham cham..

A girl in shoulder cut 3/4th sleeved neted cream color top n faded blue jeans with long n straight hairs with oxidized long metallic zhumka’s was seen with some small children….

Cham cham cham……

Zulfon se bandh liya dil…..

Only her back was visible to Laksh… She was rotating her head…. N her hairs were dancing on her face….

Seene pe se udne laga aanchal

Her slim n flat waist waist was shown…

Mujhse naina mila ke

Her beautiful brown eyes n glossy pink lips were shown…

Mausam hone lagge paagal

Sabse hoke befikar
Nachun main aaj cham cham cham (hey!)
Cham cham cham
Cham cham cham..

She did the signature step of the song ( like shraddha kapoor do in baaghi)

Her wet cloth’s were perfectly now clunging on her petite n delicate figure….

Main nachun aaj cham cham cham (hey!)
Cham cham cham
Cham cham cham..

She turn towards Laksh but she cant see him as he is too far….

She was reveled as Ragini….

He was just lost in her beauty….

Rain drop bouncing
My heart is announcing
You got to take me away

Let’s start jumping
My heart goes pumping
I love you in every way

His trance was broken as she continued singing….

Dhadkano pe boondein jo giri
Toh nachun aaj cham cham cham (hey!)
Cham cham cham
Cham cham cham..

Main nachun aaj cham cham cham (hey!)
Cham cham cham
Cham cham cham..

Gili hawaye jhoomti hain
Tann ko mere chumthi hain

She turn around herself while facing sky n hands spread….

Chhod ke ye sharam waram
Jhoom ye jiya
She says brushing her own palm from her other palm to her face while her eyes closed….

Maine toh kabhi suna kahan
Dil ne mere jo bhi kaha
Maine woh kiya

Koi bhi kahe kuch bhi yahan She says pushing a fat aunty with her bum who was scolding her for dancing for dancing in a public place….

Laksh smiles at her antiques…..

Haan is pal ko main aaj jee loon
Jo bhi hoga dekha jayega kal
Mujhse naina mila ke
Mausam hone lagge paagal haaye

Sabse hoke befikar
Nachun main aaj cham cham cham (hey!)
Cham cham cham
Cham cham cham..

Main nachun aaj cham cham cham (hey!)
Cham cham cham
Cham cham cham..

Baarishon ki taal pe yeh
Khanak mere dhadkano ki
Keh rahi hai jee le tu zara

She says banging her silver bangles on eachother in front of her face her face….

Baar baar saath mere
Saare ab thirakne lage
Dole zameen naache aasman

She says spashing water from a puddle….

Main toh hawa hun
Hath na aaun
Marzi se apni, udti hi jaaun

She spreads her arms like a birds n swings arounds with many children behind her….

Ho khud ki karun main kya taarife

She bits her head playfully

Raat ne churaya mera kaajal

Mujhse naina mila ke

She moves a finger under her eye with beautiful expressions….

Mausam hone lagge pagal
Sabse hoke befikar

She carelessly moves her hand in air

Nachun main aaj cham cham cham (hey!)
Cham cham cham
Cham cham cham cham cham..

All youngsters in garden joined them….

Cham cham…
Sab naache aaj
Cham cham cham……..

Suddenly she realised something n bited her tongue while hitting her forehead…..
She said something to a young girl beside her….

The crowd covered her n Laksh became restless…

Cham cham cham
Cham cham cham cham cham..

As the song stopped Laksh searched her alot but dint found her….

He moved his hand in his hairs which made him realised that he was whole wet as it was still raining….

He restlessly n half-heartly left the place still thinking about ragini….

He went home n changed himself in a robe after a hotwater wash…..

He sat on a soft sofa chair in his room quietly…

Just then sanskar came there as he got to know about Laksh getting wet….

He was followed by a servent who was caring ingredients for making tea in his hands…..

Sanskar found Laksh lost somewhere…..

S:- Hey Lucky where r u lost…

He said forwarding the tea cup towards him??

Laksh took the tea while smiling at him….

Nothing bro just was thinking something ….

S( in a naughty tone):- something or someone…??

Laksh laugh as his lie was caught….

L:- how u read my mind so correctly always Sanky….???

S:- becoz Sanky is the best…

He said straightening invisible collar of his T-shirt…..

N they both bursted into a laugh while passing a hi-fi….

Scene shifts to a big 3 floor building with sober sculpture n old construction….

Ragini slowly entered the main gate n then went to second floor while the childrens ran to their rooms on ground floor to change their wet cloths…

Ragini peeped in dark flat n sigh muttering to herself….

“ Today u r fortunate Ragu u got saved hitler is not here”…

Just a stern voice startled her n her eyes went wide…

“ Who told u that u r safe???”

Her back was facing the person….

P:- turn towards me Ragini…..

Ragini turned smiling sheepishly and the person who was sitting on sofa walk towards her n held her ear….

R:- Aah Aai (mom) its paining….

The person is Reveled as Shrilata….

S:- Paining ha?? Who told u take the children out in my absence?? n see urself u r fully drenched in rain….

She left Ragini’s ears n went into a roon n returned with a towel….

She made Ragini sit on sofa n started drying her hairs….

S:- Cant to listen to me once… u didn’t even took ur phone with u…

R:- It was Raining aai…..

S:- Then also… u didn’t informed to even Balwant chacha( co-caretaker of their orphanage)…. how can u b so careless?? U know na u catch cold n fever as soon as u get wet….

Just then Ragini sneezes….

S( her eyes turned teay):- See….

Ragini goes aww with her mother’s care n made her sit beside her on sofa….

R:- oh my sweet Aai can’t even get angry too…

She catches her ears with a puppy face n pouty lips…..

R:- Showwy….

Shrilata laugh upon her antique’s within her tears…

Ragini wiped away her tears n kissed her chick while hugging her…

Lata hitted her playfully on her back n parted…

S:- nautanki kahiki…. go n change or u will get fever…… I will get ginger tea for u or u will get fever…. hmm??

Ragini nodded in yes n smiled at her mother’s innocence n sneezed again……

Screen freezed on raglak’s smiling faces……

PRECAP:- Raglak’s first meeting n friendship to boss*m followed by a misunderstanding…….

Tan tanna… here is the first chapter….

Do like n comment guys….

I will post my SS THE INCOMPLETE PAST next….

N next update of this ff depends on ur responce…

More comments quick update… less comments late update…



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  1. AMkideewani

    Amazing di?

  2. Superb part

  3. Awesome di , it was very good , i can literally imagine ragini dancing on cham cham cham . it was very good update soon ….take care

  4. fantabulus dear

  5. Loved it, keep going

  6. Asra

    awesome dear….loved it alot….eagerly waiting for nxt one….tkcr dear

  7. Amazing

  8. Awesome episode

  9. Saghi


  10. Excellent dear

  11. Fantastic dear

  12. Very nice

  13. Awesome dear

  14. TeitokUn1718

    Loved it…

  15. I may have missed the intro, but I have read both now and I am SOOOOO EXCITED for the story. ???

    1. Kitkat

      thank you sweetheart????

  16. Laashya

    Wonderful di

  17. Amazing part nd can’t wait for next

  18. Elizabethlovely



  20. Nice one

  21. Superb dear

  22. Awesome episode

  23. Jiyani

    Fantastic dear…Loved it

  24. Awesome ??

  25. Dharani

    Awesome kitty loved it

  26. Simply superb di…continue soon

  27. Fantastic awesome superb

  28. Firstly I want to thank you for posting ur 3 Raglak stories one by one ???? it’s also interesting episode dear ????? feeling sad for Laksh ?? loved hope soon he will find out his ladoo aka Ragini. Ragini’s intro is awesome. Eagerly waiting for Raglak face off. Please post next part ASAP. Love you dear and take care ?????????????

  29. IQRA222

    OMG Kitty di.. it was hell awesome
    both the entries of our leads were just fab..
    loved ragu’s entry more and the dance steps were totally love!!!
    anyways waiting for the next part
    take care
    keep smiling and writing
    love you!!

  30. Awesome dear

  31. Akankshanna


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