A raglak ff – Because I loved u – 2


Guys thank you for your love & support in the form of comments 🙂 Sorry for late update,I was quite busy with my assignments , school, homeworks and all!!! Anyways lets start, shall we?

Precap – Raglak’s hidden love in between their so called hate 🙂 A girl hugs Laksh

‘ Laksh , forget her , forget her laksh , she was not meant for you..I feel degraded to say that I treated her as my sister..Because of your good nature , she cheated you ‘ saying these a girl of somewhat the similar age of Ragini hugs Laksh..

‘Swara , you were always there for me , my true friend , you were there when i had everything & you are still there with me when I have nothing in my life..i don’t know what can i do to pay u back ‘ Laksh said reciprocating the hug , crying

‘Laksh….A girl will come who will fix your broken heart , she will come, she will definately come Laksh ‘ said she breaking the intense hug..

Lak: Swara , I dont want anyone to …………The girl whom I loved so much , left me in this confused labyrinth of life for no reason ….My heart has taken her shape , so Swara no one would fit in it ..(he said with his eyes drenched with tears)

Wiping laksh’s tears Swara says : No laksh..I don’t want even a drop of your tear to roll for a girl who doesnot worth it..don’t cry for your best friend

Laksh nods with a gentle smile

Screen Shifts
Laksh : Would you like to spend your entire life with this stupid , idiot , monkey ?
Every morning would you love waking up by listening to a tuneless song sang by the worst singer? By listening to laksh’s version of ‘Tum hi ho’?? would you??
Every night , would you like to fall asleep in my embrace?It maynot be as cozy as your pillow but I ensure you’ll be safe there ‘
Ragini , would you mind being angel of a demon???Would you mind ruling my life??Would you?
Ragini will you mind being Ragini Lakshya Maheshwari ???

Ragini : (she speaks nthing yet her eyes are watery and her lips draw a line upon..her glance falls upon laksh’s bright deep black eyes..)

Laksh: itna bura tha mera proposal ki tum ro pade???(laksh unknowingly has tears in his eyes)
Ragini plz dont cry , I dont want you to cry ever because of me..
Ragini I’m going, very far , very very far from you , I dont want to become an obstacle in your love life…Hosake to maf kardena Ragu ..

Ragini speaks nothing and hugs laksh tight , laksh wraps his hands around ragini’s waist and tears flow from their eyes somewhat like a broken tap…Laksh makes up his mind that she hugged him as a farewell …Laksh breaks the hug letting not a drop to fall from his eyes although his heart was crying …crying….crying endlessly……

Rag : yes laksh yes
yes I want to spend my life with a stupid , idiot , monkey !!
I want to wake up getting disturbed by laksh’s version of ‘tum hi ho’
yes laksh yes , i want to fall asleep in your warm embrace , in my heaven…
laksh i want to become Ragini Lakshya Maheshwari , banaoge na???

Tum Hi Ho

‘Ragini mam , I’ve purchased all what you had ordered’ Sweta , one of ragini’s helper shooks Ragini from her world, the world where she was lost ..

‘Sweta , how many times should I remind you not to call me Mam ‘

‘Umm..I’ll try to modify my habit’

‘I hope you’d soon’

Screen freezes at Ragak’s expressionless faces

How was the epi??
I know it’s not special or something..My mind is stuck in between my homeworks , exams , and all schooly tings!!! because of which i am not able to write creatively..Still, comment if you wish to..Your one comment can make writer’s day yet I wont force you to coment in this boring piece of writing 🙂

Credit to: Anu

We recommend
  1. Sonya

    awesome update
    both are in pain

  2. omg beautiful. .
    described emotions perfectly…loved it
    u r a perfect writer next part plz.?

  3. damn this girl is gonna make me fall in luv wit her ffs ..eager to know how raglak will unite
    n dea post a swalak ragsan ff- sanso ko jeene ka Sahara milgaya fast it’s my fav ff

  4. Superb episode dear and plz update next part asap

  5. SPP


  6. make it only raglak and next part soon

  7. Awesome yr.. Felt really very bad for raglak.. I hope their misunderstandings get cleared.. N laksh’s proposal was cute.. Keep writing dr

  8. Sitaram

    yeah its emotinal episode

  9. Piya


  10. Dafsi

    It was such a lovely epi 🙂

  11. Megha123


Comments are closed.

Yes No