RagLak ff-20 days to go (Promo)

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RagLak ff-20 days to go:Promo
A car is shown racing at it’s fullest speed…a man who is in the driver seat pushed away the hands of the girl who is pleading him to stop the car…
They were dressed up heavily with same colour lehenga and sherwani…
He haven’t shown any importance to her words and pressed the accelerator hard…the car reached it’s maximum speed and finally he applied brake and stopped near the bridge..{our swaragini bridge}

He opened the door and rudely drags her out and pushed her down on the road…
She gets wounded in her hands and her left leg got sprained…
“aah…”she winces in pain and stood up facing his blood shot eyes…
“what’s wrong with you laksh..!!why you’re behaving this much rude to me laksh…why did you drag me here from mandap…”said she…!!

“why…!!what sort of question is this my so called love…!!”laksh laughs evilly…
“laksh..!!”she gets emotional and lil bit nervous too…
“haan Ragini…what do you think that I will shower you with full of love and affections…haha!!{evil laugh again} but what am showing was also a love dear which you deserves…you deserves it completely…”laksh holds her shoulder tightly…
“kya Hua laksh…!!tum teek hona…”Ragini cups his face…

“just hell with your love Ragini…!!I don’t love you…infact I can’t even fall for a girl like you…you damn it…”he tightened his grip even more…
“laksh!!stop kidding…”Ragini tried to smile…

Laksh:kidding..!!what’s this dear…believe me…am saying the truth only…this is the truth…i wanna take revenge from you…that’s why I trapped you into my love…how about my gift Ms.Ragini Bharadwaj…the love you have been dying for, the love you for which you left everything,the love for which you have thrown away all your luxuries is just a fake…just for a revenge…
Ragini stands numb and her eyes starts welling up…
“this revenge is for my swara’s state…take it as a return gift for your doings…”laksh laughs loudly…

Ragini clutches his shirt and cries bitterly…
He pushed her down and says “you should not forget this in your lifetime Ms.Ragini…and I don’t want to see your face anymore…you’re dead for me…”
Laksh then gets into his car and takes ‘U’ turn like he is turning his life back…
Ragini ran towards his car and knocks his car door…he waves his hand and pressed the accelerator…
Ragini ran behind his car and falls down on road crying bitterly…
“laksh…!!”she screams…
Laksh was holding the steering tightly..his tears touched his cheeks…

“it’s you who took me to this place Ragini…kyun kiya mere saath damn it…!!”laksh raises the speed and his eyes turned reddish colour…
To be continued •••

Guys I haven’t decided the title yet and the first chappy of this ff will be on may 31…that’s why I named it as 20 days to go…
Don’t get angry on me..i just want to start this ff at the end of this month because my sister’s birthday is on may31 and secondly I wanna complete my other ff’s too…so I finalised that date…
Do comment whether you liked this concept or not…don’t worry the past will be revealed soon in the upcoming chapters and what do you think about this plot…please let me know whether I can continue or not…
Thanks for reading it dears..
~Darshu

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60 Comments
  1. Astra

    what is this…??? my lucky my cute laksh is doing like this..? oh no..! what happened?? u kept a twist and saying u will update on may 31st? u r getting inspiration from me in giving shocks i think. haha.. do continue. i will be waiting. and ya, swaragini bridge.. missing it badly. ??

    1. Darshini

      Haha!!yes asthu our cute laksh is doing like this bt u knw na I won’t separate them…
      And yes I told you alrdy na shocks queen u r alwyz my inspiration…
      Love u a loads…!!
      Oh my sweetie is missing the bridge…hehe!!
      Thnks for understanding da…tc dear..!!

  2. Berdilla

    Awesome dear friend continue

    1. Darshini

      Aww tq so much dear berdilla? glad that you liked it…

  3. Jayanti

    awesome darshu di….will wait for it….

    1. Darshini

      Tq so much dear jaya for understanding ? am hpy that you liked it…tc dear….!!

  4. Awesome

    1. Darshini

      Tq dear aleeza ? glad that you liked it…

  5. Dharani

    Haha as u did not fix the title and as u r posting it after twenty days u named it like this wah I really loved ur thought darshi… And about the prologue it is awesome… Loved it to the core and sad that should wait for 20 days… Love u… Take care

    1. Darshini

      Hehe!!dharu dear that thing jst cme up da that’s why posted the same…
      Tq so much dear…
      Wat to do dear u have to wait till 31st of this mnth…
      Love you too❤…
      Tc dear!!

  6. Sindhura

    Awesome

    1. Darshini

      Tq dear Sindhu ? glad that you liked it…

  7. Mintu

    Awesome awesome awesome…!! Wow… U trying give shock for me na sisy.??? aiyoo en ragu patha pavama therilaya noku..hehe..!! Na miss panitney.. Late ah pathutn..!!! Pathikirn unagala..!! I loved it to the core..!!! Aiyoo innum 20 dys wait pananum ah??? ??avalo nal aakum ah..!!Na en pasamalar kita soli ungala thaniya pathuka solurn ..!!! Love u dear.. ???

    P.s – NKP.. Bt TRV
    Take care dear.. Bye ?

    1. Mintu

      TTI PU.. ILTS TFMMSU..kandupudinga sisy..!!

      1. Asra

        yenadhu dear….TTI PU….ILTS TFMMSU na….mintu ena nenga rmba confuse panrenga…ps la sonengala Apadina yeana dear…

      2. Mintu

        Hehee.. Athu chuma da..code language mari..!! Dharshu sisy.. Kandupudikurangala nu paka sonnen da..!!

    2. Darshini

      Tq tq tq so much da sissy??????
      Haha!!hw abt this…unexpected hai na…
      Athunaala daan sollalaye…
      Am hpy that u found it??
      Toisfu…ahbd…{itha epdiyum kandupidichiduvanu nenaikren….!!}
      Achacho ur pasamalar is really bad…haha!!
      Love u loads dear…
      Tc da…!!

  8. The intro is AWESOME akka. Feeling bad for ragini but eagerly waiting to know what happened in their past and also waiting for 31st of may akka. So all in all, according to THALAPHATHY’s style I AM WAITING.

    Bye akka. Take care.

    1. Darshini

      Tq so much dear? will let u knw n d upcmng chapters…bt u have to wait…
      Haha!!vj fan uh semma?
      Glad that you liked it…

  9. Asra

    darshu dear 2o days ku Apram nenga update pana porathey title la vachudengala..superbbb dear….wow unga sister birthday ya…advance wish panen nu Solunga….bcz enaku numbers la maranthu poyirum….frnds birthday phn no la neyapagamey vachuka maden maranthirum dear…frnds idhuku thiduvanga…aana enaku neyapaga irundha Kandipa panuven….uff nenga than Indha ff update panuvengala Adha vachu kandu piduchiren….rmba olarenu nenaikiren…sry dear….
    it’s awesome prologue dear….waiting for may 30….tkcr dear….

    1. Darshini

      Haha!!asra thanga pulla ippavum nee maranthutta da…her b’day is on 31st may not 30 th day dear…
      Naanum eppavachum ipdi daan maranthuduven…hehe!!
      Don’t worry u can wish her through my ff…
      Tc dear!!
      Love u loads ??

      1. Asra

        Ohh 31st la chi pathudu type panrathula kuda thappu paniden….sry dear…

  10. Akshata

    awesome

    1. Darshini

      Tq so much akshu dear ? am hpy that you liked it…

  11. Bela

    Ye Kyun hua? Why? And why on our Swaragini bridge(manhoos jagah hai wo to???)

    But I am really looking forward to this story???

    1. Darshini

      Haha!!tq dear bela? and u have to wait…
      Am hpy that you liked it…thnks again dear…

    1. Darshini

      Tq dear ammy ? glad that you liked it..

  12. Was scrolling down and looking through the page when suddenly my eyes fell on your ff, the title grabbed my attention and I clicked on it and guess what, I didn’t make the wrong decision, it’s one interesting and amazing story.

    Continue soon and please do message me once you’ve uploaded this FF, sometimes I miss to see it and then wait like a desperate girl waiting for her fave ice cream which is promised to come ?
    Since you said it’s title is also changing then I’m defo gunna miss to see it. ?

    Take care and keep smiling ✨

    ~ H.A.L.I.M.A

    1. Darshini

      Aww.. Tq so much halima dear…
      Am so hpy seeing your cmnt…
      And sure I will text whn I updte this ff…haha!!
      Thnks once Again dear..!!
      Ur cmnt mde my day..?
      Tc dear..!!

  13. Lovely7

    Amazing

    1. Darshini

      Tq dear lovely ? glad that you liked it…

  14. Awesome

    1. Darshini

      Tq dear sinni ? glad that you liked it…

    1. Darshini

      Tq dear avika ? glad that you liked it…

  15. Asw

    Interesting keep going

    1. Darshini

      Tq so much dear ? am glad that you liked it…

  16. AWESOME

    1. Darshini

      Tq Arjuna ? glad that you liked it..

  17. Awesome

    1. Darshini

      Tq dear sherin ? glad that you liked it…

  18. It’s really Interesting dear and plz continue. Waiting for first episode

    1. Darshini

      Tq so much dear? am Cho happy that you liked it..

  19. IQRA222

    darshu di !!! today toh you have to tell me from where do you you get these mind blowing, fab superb ideas today toh i wanna know it from my didu
    it is such a fab concept
    fell in love with it
    its really a shock to see our sweetie lucky hurting our ragu
    but i know you are there so no tension
    waiting for the episode eagerly

    1. Darshini

      Haha!!iqu doll…it’s a random thought that popped into my mind dear…
      Yes our sweetie lucky is doing like this…
      Bt don’t worry u trust me na I won’t separate them..
      At d end it will be raglak only…
      Tc da!!love u ??

  20. Superb promo

    1. Darshini

      Tq so much dear malu? glad that you liked it…

  21. Interesting

    1. Darshini

      Tq dear Anju ? glad that you liked it…

  22. Awesome

    1. Darshini

      Tq dear soumya ? glad that you liked it…

  23. Bharu

    akka akka akka….epdi irukiga missed u alot…actually en kita phne illa adha akka comment panala…sry…veetla elaru epdi irukaga….read all ur ff akka…everthing was awesome nd emotional….unga story padika romba happy ah iruku akka…waiting for this story….take care love uu akka…bye…missing uu

    1. Darshini

      Oii bharu..,hw r u da??Inga ellarum Fyn…unga veetla ellarum epdi irukkanga??
      Leave daane ipo??
      Am Cho hpy da whn I saw ur cmnt…
      Tq so much dear..
      Eppo muruga ff update panna pora…am waiting for that…
      Love u too ?? and missing u da…

  24. Amazing….
    But sad k I have to wait till 31st May ?
    But what to do will wait for you ??

    1. Darshini

      Haha!!teito that’s so nice of you…
      Will b bck soon…tc..!!
      Am hpy that you liked it…

    2. Darshini

      Haha!!teito..,that’s so nice of you..
      Will be back soon and tc…!!
      Am happy that you liked it…

  25. Follybraverl

    Akka sema soooper seekiram next part enakaga plzzzzz

    1. Darshini

      Tq da sweetie ?…
      U have to wait till may 31st dear…am sry da…
      Am hpy that you liked it…

  26. Hemalattha

    Interesting dear. Continue.

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