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Home»Fan Fiction»RagLak: Is Everything really so Perfect as it seems to be? – Chapter 6 – By Ria
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RagLak: Is Everything really so Perfect as it seems to be? – Chapter 6 – By Ria

RiaBy RiaDecember 17, 2016Updated:May 11, 201761 Comments6 Mins Read
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Raglak – Is everything really so perfect as it seems to be?
Segment 6

A/N: Thank you for your encouraging support. It really helps me to write more.

Previous update:

http://www.tellyupdates.com/raglak-everything-really-perfect-seems-segment-5/

HAPPY READING!

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“I need a divorce”, I shouted again. Mr. Maheshwari laughed and walked over to the bedside table. He picked up the water jug and walked back towards me. I smiled and walked towards him. He gave me a confused expression but, continued walking. We stopped in front of each other and he splashed the water on my face. I forwarded my hands and took out the handkerchief from his pocket. I cleared the water from my face and gave it back to him. “How dare you?”, he asked pointing his finger at me. “Why should I tell you?”, I replied. He twisted my hand and said, “Don’t try to be over smart or else, you need to bear more pain.” I let out a faint laugh and replied, “Do you think it hurts anymore? Anyways, I don’t have time to talk to you. I need a divorce.” He laughed and said, “You can’t have any wishes.” “I’m not your slave that I’ll do whatever you wish. I’ve already bore a lot and now, I just need a divorce”, I replied. Mr. Maheshwari twisted my hand tighter and said, “You should’ve understood in these few days that you’re not less than a slave in my life.” He pushed me hard while my hand hit against the corner of the table making it bleed. He walked towards the cupboard and took out the first aid. I smiled and walked towards him. He applied Dettol on the cotton while I forwarded my hands. He cleaned the blood and aided the cut. “Thanks”, I blurted out and walked out of the room.

I was climbing down the stairs when the doorbell rang. I quickly went down and opened the door. I saw maa and Swara di standing together. The diary pages again flashed through my mind. I was wondering how I could get to know what happened when maa shook me and said, “Ragini, where are you lost?” I came out of my thoughts and smilingly replied, “Nowhere. I’m sorry. Come inside.” Maa went and sat in the hall while Swara di went back to her room. Lakshya came down and asked, “Any improvement?” Maa replied coughing, “No.” “I’ll get you some water maa”, I said. Maa smiled at me while I walked towards the kitchen wondering what needed improvement. “You’ve got a really nice life partner for yourself”, I heard maa saying. “I wish he had the sense to understand that”, I murmured boasting about myself and later, smiled to myself.

I came into the hall with a glass full of water while maa said, “The next appointment is next month I guess, on 2nd.” “What appointment?”, I asked forwarding the glass to maa. She was about to reply when she took the glass from my hand and said, “What happened to your hand? Why is there so much of blood clotting?” I quickly hid my hands behind my back and said, “It’s nothing maa. My hands are perfectly fine.” Maa kept the glass on the table beside and pulled my hands from behind my back. “What is fine? Nothing is fine. How did this happen?”, asked Maa pointing at my wrist. “Nothing maa”, I replied. “Ragini, tell me what happened”, said maa. “Maa actually..umm.. Mr. I mean Ku”, I said and was about to complete when the doorbell rang. I quickly moved my hands away and said, “I’ll see.” “No, you both go to your room. My friends have come”, replied maa. “Okay sure maa”, remarked Lakshya. Maa went to open the door while Lakshya held my hand and dragged me to the kitchen.

“Mr. Maheshwari, it’s hurting. Please leave my hand”, I said trying to free my hand. “Just shut up”, shouted Mr. Maheshwari and entered the kitchen. “What did you think that you’ll tell maa everything?”, he asked pushing me on the floor. “I swear I wasn’t telling maa what you did”, I replied trying to get up. “Don’t try to justify yourself. I very well know what you were upto”, said Mr. Maheshwari. He walked towards the gas stove and lit it. “What are you doing? I didn’t want to tell maa anything”, I said being scared. He let out a faint laugh and walked towards the cupboards. He took out a packet of camphor and turned towards me. “Now, you’ll always think thousand times before telling anything to anyone”, he said taking out a cube of camphor from the packet. “I wasn’t going to tell today also. Please don’t do this”, I said moving away. “Don’t dare to move”, said Mr. Maheshwari. “Give me your hand”, he added. I hid my hands behind my back and nodded my head in a no. I tried to run away from the kitchen but, Mr. Maheshwari caught hold of my left hand and pulled me towards the stove. He placed the camphor on my palm and held my hand above the stove. I closed my eyes in pain while the tears rolled down my cheeks. After around 10 minutes Mr. Maheshwari freed my burnt hand and walked out of the kitchen switching off the gas stove. I sat by the cupboard and cried on my fate. After about half an hour later I went back to Mr. Maheshwari’s room composing myself.

I walked into the room and laid down my suitcase on the floor. Mr. Maheshwari stared at me and asked, “What are you doing?” I ignored his question and packed my luggage. “Answer me”, he shouted. I got up from the floor locking my suitcase and said, “I’m going to Taneja Mansion. Please send the divorce papers there.” I pulled the trolley and was about to get out of the room when Mr. Maheshwari said, “A step ahead and I’ll kill your brother.” I immediately stopped at the doorstep while he continued, “My revenge will also be over.” I turned around and looked at him shockingly. After a fraction of seconds I asked, “What revenge?”

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A/N: Sorry for the extremely late update. I’d been keeping busy throughout because of my mocks and school work. I’ll updating the next one at the earliest.

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    61 Comments

    1. Sindhura on December 17, 2016 4:50 am

      Nice
      He is becoming more rude

      • Ria on December 22, 2016 3:23 pm

        Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update. The next one would be the last torturous segment.?

    2. Ammy on December 17, 2016 6:07 am

      superb

      • Ria on December 22, 2016 3:24 pm

        Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update.?

    3. lovely on December 17, 2016 6:26 am

      Wat is ragini mistake in this!! I hate you laksh

      • Ria on December 22, 2016 3:25 pm

        Sorry. The next one would be the last torturous update.?

    4. Raglakholic on December 17, 2016 6:57 am

      No words to explain
      U just left me tounge tied
      Totally fantastic update
      I just loved this track
      Totally in love with this story
      Please do continue soon
      Eagerly waiting to read more

      • Ria on December 22, 2016 3:26 pm

        Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you’re liking the story. I’ll try my best to update by tomorrow or max by Saturday.?

    5. nikky on December 17, 2016 7:51 am

      plzz next pAart bcoz I can’t wait each time I see telly update for ur ff plzz give next part soon and plzzzz long one

      • Ria on December 22, 2016 3:27 pm

        The next part will be up in a matter of two days may be. That was a huge compliment though. Thank you so much!?

    6. sanchami on December 17, 2016 8:15 am

      Laksh is really a cruel person

      • Ria on December 22, 2016 3:27 pm

        Sorry about that. The next one would be the last torturous update.?

    7. Sreevijayan on December 17, 2016 8:25 am

      This is tooo much… i csn nvr frgive a persn like him whatevr justification he has…is he a human?

      • Ria on December 22, 2016 3:28 pm

        I’m so sorry?

      • Sreevijayan on December 23, 2016 1:41 pm

        Awwweee….my ria darling…its juz i tuk out my fruatration…u r a sweetheart na

    8. kee on December 17, 2016 8:38 am

      o poor ragini plzzz update soon

      • Ria on December 22, 2016 3:28 pm

        The next update is coming up in a matter of two days may be.?

    9. Pooja on December 17, 2016 8:48 am

      suprrrbbb yr i rd al ff yr its osm i lve it updt sn dr

      • Ria on December 22, 2016 3:30 pm

        Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked my FF. The next update is coming up in a matter of two days may be.?

    10. Asw on December 17, 2016 10:48 am

      Nice laksh is soo rude keep going

      • Ria on December 22, 2016 3:31 pm

        Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update. The next one would probably be the last torturous update.?

    11. Ammu on December 17, 2016 11:17 am

      Interesting episode and plz don’t make laksh more rude. plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz it’s a huge request

      • Ria on December 22, 2016 3:32 pm

        Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update. Well, the next one would probably be the last torturous update.?

    12. Ankita on December 17, 2016 11:41 am

      I really hate this lakshya how can he burn ragini hand he is such an evil man hope ragini got free from this devil asap if he want to take revenge from sanskar for hurting swara then try to harm sanskar not innocent ragini he is worst then anyoneand no excuse will be good for him because he hurt ragini who
      Has nothing to do with whatever sanskar do with swara

      • Ria on December 22, 2016 3:32 pm

        I’m so sorry.? Hope my justification seems to be fair enough.

    13. SPP on December 17, 2016 12:01 pm

      Awesome Superb Fantastic Fabulous
      Loved it
      Poor Ragini and hating his rudeness
      Please no more yaar how much more she have to bear
      Waiting for the next one……………..

      • Ria on December 22, 2016 3:34 pm

        Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update. The next one would probably be the last torturous update.?

        The next segment will be up in a matter of two days may be.

      • SPP on December 22, 2016 4:51 pm

        U r always welcome Dear

    14. IQRA222 on December 17, 2016 1:28 pm

      awesome
      pls make laksh fall for ragoo soon
      i cant take his torture towards ragoo anymore

      • Ria on December 22, 2016 3:35 pm

        Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update. The next one would probably be the last torturous update.?

    15. jazzy on December 17, 2016 5:47 pm

      omg laksh is tooo much hate him

      • Ria on December 22, 2016 3:35 pm

        I’m sorry for making you hate Laksh.?

    16. Fats on December 17, 2016 6:21 pm

      Great update. Omg Laksh is being such an ass atm. I’m so excited for the moment when his torture will end up torturing him with guilt. Can’t wait to read the next part ?

      • Ria on December 22, 2016 3:37 pm

        Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update. Well, Laksh would soon be guilty of his actions. The next segment would be up in a matter of two days may be.?

    17. dharani on December 17, 2016 6:34 pm

      sorry for not commenting in previous episode i have my exams so not able to comment and the episode is awesome but feeling really bad for ragini

      • Ria on December 22, 2016 3:38 pm

        Hey, don’t be sorry. I completely understand.

        Well, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update. The next one would probably be the last torturous update.?

    18. asra on December 17, 2016 7:06 pm

      awesome dear…..feeling bad for my poor ragu….laksh u r soo cruel….how dare u to burn our ragini hand….laksh u r too much….if you want to revenge from Sanky means u hurt Sanky y u give a pain to our ragini…what s her fault….
      sry ria dear u already told laksh has a reason for hurting ragini…but i can’t tolerate pain of ragini dear so only I hate thz laksh….
      waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear…

      • Ria on December 22, 2016 3:40 pm

        Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update. Well, don’t be sorry. In fact I feel happy that you all are able to connect to the story and feel her pain. The next one would probably be the last torturous update.

        The next will be up in a matter of two days may be.

    19. arohi on December 17, 2016 7:55 pm

      Amazing

      • Ria on December 22, 2016 3:40 pm

        Hey, thank you so much!?

    20. taiana on December 17, 2016 8:18 pm

      Nice… laksh is very bad…

      • Ria on December 22, 2016 3:41 pm

        Hey, thank you so much! The next one would probably be the last torturous update.?

    21. hemalattha on December 17, 2016 8:18 pm

      superb and interesting.waiting for next part.

      • Ria on December 22, 2016 3:42 pm

        Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update. The next one is coming up in a matter of two days may be.?

    22. Arjuna on December 17, 2016 10:43 pm

      Awesome

      • Ria on December 22, 2016 3:43 pm

        Hey, thank you so much!?

    23. A.xx on December 18, 2016 7:58 am

      fab hate him and feel bad for her..want revelation.xx

      • Ria on December 22, 2016 3:43 pm

        Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update. Everything would be revealed soon.?

    24. Akshata on December 18, 2016 1:12 pm

      so this is it, laksh’s behavior is worst than wild animal. really feeling bad for her. dont make her forgive him so easily. awesome update,

      • Ria on December 22, 2016 3:44 pm

        Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update. Laksh won’t be forgiven for whatever he did easily. Just hoping my way of justification seems to be fair enough.?

    25. Ragz_teju on December 18, 2016 4:18 pm

      awesome loved it

      • Ria on December 22, 2016 3:45 pm

        Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update.?

    26. Malu on December 18, 2016 9:31 pm

      Superb part

      • Ria on December 22, 2016 3:45 pm

        Hey, thank you so much!?

    27. Anju on December 20, 2016 5:36 pm

      Nice

      • Ria on December 22, 2016 3:46 pm

        Hey, thank you so much!?

    28. Fairy on December 20, 2016 5:49 pm

      its so so soooo amaznggaggggg mindblownggggg ff dr.
      ..loved it so soo muchhh!!!m addicted to dis ff…update ws fabulous….bt i jst hate dis lakshhh ..ahhh!!!i”ll killl him…how cn he torture my ragini…
      u think now laksh wl tell about his revenge!!!waitng eagerly for nxt part…
      ria plz upload it sooon dr…m waitng impatiently for nxt part..yaaar plz plz upload it sooon..keeeeep rockng n stay blesssed sweeety 😉 lotz of love to u 😀

      • Ria on December 22, 2016 4:09 pm

        Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update. Well, thank you so much for the appreciation. I’m so happy that you’re liking the story. Secrets would be disclosed soon.

        The next segment will be up in a matter of two days may be. I’m extremely sorry for the delay caused.

        Love,
        Ria.

    29. Ayu on December 22, 2016 3:43 pm

      Why am i so late again????
      Bastard Laksh?
      But i feel everything is happening for the best…but i just cannot bear manhandling nor can i hear about anything as such. My blood boils in anger!!!
      Make him regrets his deeds dear!
      Love u?

      • Ria on December 22, 2016 4:12 pm

        Hey Ayu,
        Arey late ki baat chod. Tujhe kya lagta hai main bohot punctual hoon? Arey, ye wala segment 5 days pehle upload hua tha and I’m replying to the comments now??

        Anyway, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update and everything is surely happening for something better (Bol toh aise rahi hai jaise tujhe pata nahi??).

        Hi5!! Even I’m completely against domestic violence, but this story? I mean it has to go like this in order to make it meaningful.

        All love,
        Ria.

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