RagLak: Is Everything really so Perfect as it seems to be? – Chapter 3 – By Ria

Raglak – Is everything really so perfect as it seems to be?
Segment 3

A/N: Thank you for your encouraging support previously. Well, I’m extremely sorry for making Laksh torture Ragini so much. The torture will be there for a few more segments and I really hope you all won’t stop supporting me.

Here’s the link to the second segment:

http://www.tellyupdates.com/raglak-everything-really-perfect-seems-segment-2/

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I woke up as a beam of sunlight entered the room through the slightly open window. I walked towards the window and saw a couple hugging each other. I smiled and remembered how me and Lakshya used to do the same but, now thinking about all this was of no use as I knew the truth now. The most bitter truth of my life that Lakshya hates me. I turned around and saw Lakshya sleeping. I walked up to him as the innocence of his face attracted me. I was about to lean down when everything that had happened with me in the past two days flashed through my mind. I quickly took my clothes and went out of the room to the servants’ quarter.

While going my gaze again fell on that isolated room. I don’t know but, something was weird with that room and also, I felt an unknown connection with that girl. I was lost in my thoughts when suddenly my foot slipped and I fell down from the stairs screaming.

I woke up and found myself on the bed of some room. I don’t know where I was. I tried getting up when the doctor said, “Be careful.” Lakshya placed some pillows behind my back and helped me in getting up. “Where am I?”, I asked. “Ragini, this is my room”, replied maa. “But, what happened to me? Why am I here? I remember I was climbing down the stairs but, how did I come here!”, I said. “You fell down from the stairs”, said maa. I touched my forehead and saw it bandaged. “Did I hurt myself a lot?”, I asked. “Yes, and now you need to be in complete rest for the next two days. You’re staying in this room till then as I know you’ll start working as soon as you go to that room”, replied maa. “No maa, I can’t”, I spoke up but, maa interrupted and said, “I want my daughter back to normal. I don’t want to listen to anything.” I hesitantly agreed to maa’s decision of staying in that room. The doctor handed Lakshya a prescription and said, “These are the medicines.” Lakshya smiled at the doctor and went to get the medicines while the doctor left.

At around 8 maa said, “Ragini, it’s time for your medicine. I’ll just get your dinner till then Lakshya will be here. If you need anything you can tell him.” I smiled at maa while she went down to the kitchen. After around 2 minutes Lakshya entered the room fidgeting with his phone. He smiled at me and said, “So, was it fun falling down from the stairs?” I ignored his question and waited for maa while he added, “I told you not to do anything that I don’t like. See, yesterday you didn’t eat the food and today you had to slip down the stairs.” I looked at him blankly trying to understand his words. “Don’t be so confused. When you went to sleep yesterday without eating the left out food, I spilled oil on the staircase”, said Lakshya making me shocked. He came close to me and caught my hair. “Now, I’m happy. It’s too much fun to see you in pain”, he said. Tears rolled down my cheeks while the only word came to my mind was “IMPERFECT. Everything is just imperfect”. I tried removing his hand as it was hurting me more today because of the injury. Lakshya tightened his grip and said, “Don’t even try.” “Who told you hurt me? Ragini Taneja isn’t so weak”, I replied clenching my teeth. “Maybe but, now you’re Ragini Lakshya Maheshwari and she’s weak”, said Lakshya. “I feel ridiculous to join your name with me. The way I’m your wife only in front of the world similarly, even you’re my husband only for the world”, I replied pushing Lakshya back. He walked towards me and said, “Don’t talk so much. The doctor told you to take complete rest.” I gave him a confused look while maa entered and said, “Ragini, will you be able to get up?” I was about to reply but Lakshya said interrupting, “Of course maa. Wait, I’ll help her.” Lakshya came and stood in front of me blocking maa’s vision. He held my hand tightly and pulled me up with a jerk. He placed the pillows behind me and pushed me back. “Come maa”, he said moving away. Maa came and sat beside me. She picked up a spoonful of soup and said, “Have.” “No maa. I don’t feel like eating”, I replied. “Ragini, if you consider me your mother, you’ll have it”, said maa. I hesitantly opened my mouth while maa forcefully made me eat the entire soup. I looked at Lakshya in between who was looking at us with a frustrated face.

After around 15 minutes maa said, “That’s like my Ragini. I’ll keep this and come. Lakshya, come down for the dinner now. It’s pretty late.” I held maa’s hand and nodded my head in a no asking her not to go as I could figure out what was coming next. “I’ll just come in 5 minutes. Okay, Lakshya you stay here till then”, said maa. “No, it’s okay. You both go have your dinner”, I said. Maa smiled at me and walked out of the room saying, “Lakshya, come.” “Ya maa, you go. I’ll come”, replied Lakshya. As soon as maa went out Lakshya closed the door and walked towards me. I moved back while he leaned towards me and pressing my cheeks said, “What did you just do?” I ignored him and tried getting out of his grip but he pressed my cheeks tighter and said, “Get ready for something worse now.” Lakshya left me and walked out of the room. “What could be even more worse now!”, I said and laid down on the bed thinking about Lakshya’s words.

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68 comments

    • Ria

      Ria

      |Author

      Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you’re liked the update. So sorry about Laksh. Hope I’ll be justifying all the characters by the end.

      I’ll try updating soon.

      Regards,
      Ria

  1. Sindhura

    Sindhura

    |Registered Member

    Post regularly never miss to post dear if you post twice also no problem amd a little more long as i want to read it
    If it possible give his pov too

  2. Angel20

    Angel20

    |Registered Member

    Hey Ria,
    Again an awesome episode! Even though it’s sad, I loved it! Post the next one soon!!
    And please don’t end Devakshi ff yaar!😢

    With Love💕

    • Ria

      Ria

      |Author

      Hey Maria,
      Thank you so much dear! I’m glad you liked the update.

      I’m extremely sorry about the DevAkshi FF. I’ll try coming back with a two or three shots’ series on the same.

      Love you back💕

    • Ria

      Ria

      |Author

      Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you’re liking the story and finding it interesting. I’ll try uploading the next one soon.

      Regards,
      Ria

  3. Raglakholic

    Raglakholic

    |Registered Member

    Poor ragini
    Just feeling like cry by seeing her position
    U did very well dear
    It’s just heart touching one
    Please do continue soon
    Eagerly waiting to see what is laksh gonna do more worse than this

    • Ria

      Ria

      |Author

      Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you’re liking the story. I’m so sorry about Laksh. I hope I can justify all the characters by the end. I’ll try updating soon.

      Regards,
      Ria

  4. Rasha

    Rasha

    |Registered Member

    i hate this violence, harming a women is not Good.. women’s also a human being wife is respectable equal to mother not an any slave.

    • Ria

      Ria

      |Author

      Hey, I’m really sorry. I know Ragini is being unjustified at the moment, but I really hope I can justify all the characters by the end. I’m sorry again. Also, I agree to your opinion.

      • Rasha

        Rasha

        |Registered Member

        Hey dnt be sorry Dear, I knw that I will justify al the character on the time but it hurted to see her in harming.. I too can conclude about his behaviour, which he is doing now it hurted him more before al this.. I want regular update & if you can please make it twice in a day.. we won’t miss at any way

    • Ria

      Ria

      |Author

      Hey, I’d surely love to update on a regular basis. I’ll try taking everyone’s opinion into consideration. Plus, two updates I don’t think it’d be possible. Sorry about that.

  5. Fouzarshi16

    Fouzarshi16

    |Registered Member

    I don’t know why am suspicious abt ap’s behaviour too. I think she too knows abt laksh plan. Am getting negative vibes from ap’s side.
    The epi was really nice. Don’t worry dr we will support u until d end

    • Ria

      Ria

      |Author

      Hey, firstly, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update. Well, about AP, she is positive. Laksh isn’t such a negative character. It’s just his revenge because of which he’s behaving like this.

      Regards,
      Ria

  6. Priyashini

    Priyashini

    |Registered Member

    Very much interesting…… Actually I hope it is gonna be more interesting really when laksh starts to feel for ragini…. Let’s see..eager to know post soon. Take care keep smiling

    • Ria

      Ria

      |Author

      Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you found the update interesting. Well, let’s see what happens when love slowly starts blossoming. I really I can justify all the characters and meet up to all your expectations by the end.

      Regards,
      Ria

  7. Fats

    Fats

    |Registered Member

    Great update. Laksh sure does have some intense hatred for Ragini. Reading his torture is making me so excited for his redemption. Can’t wait to read the next part 💗

    • Ria

      Ria

      |Author

      Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update. I really hope I’ll be justifying all the characters by the end and also, I can meet up to all your expectations. I’ll try updating soon.

      Regards,
      Ria

    • Ria

      Ria

      |Author

      Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update. Things will be in Ragini’s favour soon. Hope I can justify each character.

      Regards,
      Ria

    • Ria

      Ria

      |Author

      Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update. Things will soon be in Ragini’s favour. I hope all the characters will be justified then.

      Regards,
      Ria

    • Ria

      Ria

      |Author

      Hey, I’m really sorry for Ragini. Things will soon be in her favour. I hope all the characters will be justified then.

      Regards,
      Ria

  8. Akshata

    Akshata

    |Registered Member

    amazing update, i am so feeling bad for ragini, she is suffering too much. Is AP really that lovable and kind?????? i am just wondering, her behavior is extremely sweet towards ragini, extra sweetness is not good for health. if she really cares for her then i am more than happy for ragu, atleast she has someone who cares for her but not then i am hell worried for her. laksh has gone mad or what? he poured oil on the floor what if she suffered severe injuries. and pls be regular, you dont know how much i am loving your story. so update soon.

    • Ria

      Ria

      |Author

      Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked this update. Well, about AP, she’s completely positive. Ragini really has someone who cares about her. Hope you’re happy now.

      Moreover, about regular updates. I’ll surely love to update everyday, but unfortunately there are so many FFs coming up on this page that it isn’t that easy to catch upon all the stories in a day. That’s the sole reason why I update once in two days. I’ll try being regular though.

      Regards,
      Ria

  9. Asra

    Asra

    |Registered Member

    awesome dear…feeling bad for my ragu….how much she is going to suffer…hate thz laksh….waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear…

    • Ria

      Ria

      |Author

      Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update. Well, things will soon be in Ragini’s favour. Hope all the characters will be justified then. I’ll try updating at the earliest.

      Regards,
      Ria

  10. Devihaa

    Devihaa

    |Registered Member

    Hey hello dr…. I’m newly commenting…….actually I was silent reader
    ……but currently broke my silence…… I think Laksh will b having some valid reason for doing it…….really feeling sry for ragu……something stroke my mind…….” I not like ur brother to rape u” that ” isolated room” and that ” girl”…… By connecting all this …….I gotto know something…….. That may b that girl is laksh sister….. And sanskar might have rape her…..and so she is torturing ragu……
    But I think laksh must have misunderstood sanskar
    ……and after he may repent for it……
    Just hope it is lucky guess……
    Whatever it is……I hope….no no…..I’m sure u will justify all the characters…..
    And can I know what ur studying…..
    I’m in my 11 std….

    • Ria

      Ria

      |Author

      Hey Devihaa,
      I’m so happy that you started commenting. It really means a lot for the authors when silent readers start commenting.

      Well, about your guess. Let’s see to it as the story unfolds. Haha.. thank you for believing me so much. Let’s see if you all feel justified or no!

      Also, I’m in 11th too. Looks like we’re of the same age. Haha..

      Regards,
      Ria

  11. Rasha

    Rasha

    |Registered Member

    Laksh sis is swara & now she is mentally affected.so before al this sanskaar may b loved swara but she refused to accept it & this lead to sanskaar raped her , it shocked swara to lose mental stability.. it may b collapsed laksh to see his little in that state & enquired about everything.. then he trapped raging in his fake love & married her to torture to make her life hell r to make sanskar to hurt.. but the fate is sanskar himself hurting & guilt about his act, it’s unknown to anyone..

    • Ria

      Ria

      |Author

      Hey, seems like you’re pretty excited. Just a bit of patience. I promise to disclose each and every secret in front of you. Just hoping that you all won’t be disappointed.

      Regards,
      Ria

  12. Dharani

    Dharani

    |Registered Member

    i read all the episodes just now he is hurting her a lot yaar i want to see a brave ragoo and solve all the problems i know u will definitely do it till then we should wait i know all the best my ragini

    • Ria

      Ria

      |Author

      Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad that you started reading the story. Ragini surely will portray a strong character. Just a bit of patience is what we need and a ray of hope to fight for is what Ragini needs. Ragini will surely take your good luck into consideration. Haha..

      Regards,
      Ria

  13. Fairy

    Fairy

    |Registered Member

    hey dr..frst of all where r ur hands i really wanna kiss dem ..omg yaaar wt a flawless writer u r..uff!!ur story jst stoled my heart yaaar…so so soooo amazng interestng….!!!
    loved it soooo very much!!
    u know its bcomng one of my fav. ff
    .
    plz plz plz post nxt part as soooon as posssssible plz…
    n i wanna tell u one thng,sry bt i cnt comment regularly as m really bsy nowadays…bt wenever i”ll get free i”ll pakka comment..
    n always remember dat i love dis storyyyy so very muchhhhh ….
    raglak r jst fantastic…feeelng reallly sad for my ragz 🙁 …hope laksh soon realise his mistake..waitng eagerly for love to blosssom btweeen raglak 😉 …
    keeep rockng n stay blessed sweeety 😉 😉 😉
    thnx a ton for dis super dooper wonderful story 🙂

    • Ria

      Ria

      |Author

      Hey, thank you so so much for this ton of appreciation! I’m glad you liked the story. Well, I don’t really think I deserve such a huge appreciation, but thank you so much! It really means a lot to me. One of your fav FF? Really? Thank you so much!!

      I’ve submitted the next segment. Hope it gets published at the earliest. Also, don’t be sorry. It’s alright. I do understand.

      Moreover, don’t thank me. I should be the one thanking all of you for giving me such a great audience. I’m really glad to have been writing for you guys.

      Also, if you wish to and if you’re free, you can try out my OS. It was my first attempt on Raglak. Here’s the link:

      http://www.tellyupdates.com/raglak-ishq-bulava-one-shot/

      Regards,
      Ria

    • Ria

      Ria

      |Author

      Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the segment. Ragini won’t be torturing him physically at all. I don’t want Ragini also to stoop so low like he did, but ofcourse things won’t be that easy for him either. I hope I can just justify all the characters and the story meets up to all your expectations.

      Regards,
      Ria

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