RagLak: Is Everything really so Perfect as it seems to be? – Chapter 15 – By Ria

RagLak – Is everything really so perfect as it seems to be?
Segment 15

A/N: It seemed like many of you forgot this story. Anyway, thanks to everyone who remembered me and waited for me patiently.

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Segment 14


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I sat down on the bed reminiscing Lakshya’s words. “He applied for the divorce,” I murmured as the tears rolled down my cheeks. I clenched my fist with the bedsheet inside it and shouted, “Lakshya!” “I can’t live without you, I can’t,” I said resting my head on my legs. “I wanted you to realise your mistakes Lakshya. I never thought you’d seriously apply for the divorce. I can’t think of a day staying away from you even after what you did. Whatever you did was just due to a misunderstanding but, I know my Lakshya,” I murmured crying. I suddenly lifted my head and said, “Where is Lakshya? I hope he doesn’t do anything himself.” I wiped my tears and ran downstairs.
I came to the hall and saw Maa reading a magazine. “Maa, where is Lakshya?” I asked. Maa looked up from the magazine and said, “I saw him going out. But I don’t know where he went. Why? What happened?” “Nothing,” I replied and rushed out of the house. I got inside the car and quickly drove away.

It was 10 at night and I still wasn’t able to find Lakshya. “Lakshya, where are you?” I murmured driving faster when suddenly; someone came in front of the car. I hurriedly stopped the car as the person fell down on the road. “God; Another problem,” I remarked getting down from the car. I went closer to the person and seeing the person whispered, “Lakshya?” I kneeled down and sat next to him. I patted his cheek and said, “Lakshya?” “Rag . . Ragi . .Ragini,” he uttered with great difficulty. “Yes Lakshya. See your Ragini is here, right next to you,” I replied placing my hand on his cheek. He held on to my hand and said, “Don . .

Don’t leave me.” “Never,” I replied. I stood up and forwarding my hand said, “Give me your hand.” He moved his hand in the air and said, “Please bring my Ragini.” I understood he was drunk while the tears rolled down my cheeks. I kneeled down again and said, “Lakshya, your Ragini is here. Come, let’s go back.” I made him stand with great difficulty and giving him support walked over to the car. I opened the door and sat him on the passenger’s seat. I drove back home as Lakshya kept murmuring, “Ragini, please don’t leave me. You’re mine. Please give me another chance to rectify my mistakes.” I looked at his face as the tears kept on rolling down my cheeks continuously. “You’re responsible for his condition,” I remarked blaming myself. We reached home around midnight.

We entered inside and found it completely empty. We both went upstairs while I supported Lakshya. I entered his room and made him lay down on the bed. I was about to go away when he held my hand and pulled me back. I fell on him as he said, “Ragini, don’t leave me.” I struggled to get up as he wrapped his arms around my waist. “I can’t go to Di’s room now. I’ll stay here for the night and then go back to the room early in the morning,” I muttered slowly. “Ragini don’t leave me,” Lakshya repeated. I kissed his forehead and he relaxed. I rested my head on his chest replied, “Never.” He tightened his grip around my waist as if he never wanted me to go away. I smiled and soon both of us fell asleep.

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A/N: I know most of you didn’t want RagLak to unite so soon, but personally I feel that Lakshya can’t do anything, but repent. He does realise his mistake and that’s what Ragini always wished for. Moreover, love isn’t about bringing your ego in between. It’s about accepting your loved one’s faults and flaws, isn’t it? Surely, Lakshya was very cruel toward Ragini, but Ragini did love him right from the beginning and she has forgiven Lakshya for it. Moreover, Lakshya isn’t really the person whom I’d portrayed in the few chapters in the beginning. He’s what I’d portrayed in the latter segments. Anyway, try dropping down your views about the acceptance whether you’re happy about it or sad! 

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  1. Hi ria
    I completely agree with ur point that love is not about bringing ego in between and I think now u should unite them now. The chapter was gud but it was too short dear pls post next part soon and a bit long

    1. Ria

      Thank you Aadhya! I’ll try posting a long chapter if possible and soon enough. 🙂

  2. Awesome update Ria. Agree with you completely love is all about accepting the person with his flaws.

    1. Ria

      Thank you! 🙂

  3. I also Agree With Your Point of View

    1. Ria

      I’m glad Hadassah! And thanks for giving it a read. 🙂

  4. IQRA222

    Agrree with u ria di

    1. Ria

      Thank you Iqra! 🙂

  5. Superb

    1. Ria

      Thank you Lovely! 🙂

  6. it was amazing…i do agree with you but to be frank iam not happy with there union so soon..because as if now laksh did nothing to rectify his mistake..i knw ego should not come btwn love but the way laksh treated ragini was so cruel..he not only tortured her mentaly but physicaly too..he beaten her,make her fall from stairs,pour hot tea on her face,make her starve,locked her in a room..what else he didn’t do..after doing all this how can he behave like nthng hapend..iam not asking to make him sufer..but plz give a redemption track..make him realize his mistake nd show his intense love for her..this is jst my opinion ria..but i will suport you 4 all your decision in the story.i jst love thisff..plz be regular nd give long updates

    1. Ria

      Thank you Neina! I’m glad you presented your point of view. Please don’t be sorry. I really appreciate the fact for putting forth your opinion. Also, don’t worry the story won’t really be having a happy ending if your consider in terms of RagLak. Anyway, I’ll try giving long updates if possible, but please adjust to my irregularities because I’ve my finals coming up pretty soon and I don’t get much of free time. And thanks again. 🙂

  7. Sindhura

    I am happy rhat she forgive him this is kove righg

    1. Ria

      Glad you’re happy. 🙂

  8. Awesome update..

    1. Ria

      Thank you Folly brave! 🙂

  9. Suprbb…..i dont know wht to write …true or false…bt gud to see that Raglak are not suffering by their divorce…unique thinking

    1. Ria

      Thank you Bubbly! Don’t be upset dear, this story would’ve a tragic ending in terms of RagLak. Sorry about that, but a tragic end is what will define the story. 🙂

  10. It’s really superb but don’t end it soon plz give more parts

    1. Ria

      Thank you Ankita! Well, there are few more segments to go. Don’t worry. 🙂

  11. Asw

    Nice I accept ur words ria hope Ragini forgive lakshya keep going

    1. Ria

      Thank you! Glad you’re thinking alike too. 🙂

  12. nice dear and i agree with you

    1. Ria

      Thank you Gayu! Glad to know you’re thinking alike. 🙂

  13. Jazzy

    amazinggg but i dont agree with ur point of view its not ego that is between them … if he loves her it doesn’t justify his previous deeds it was inhuman how vould he do to anyone leave it a wife

    1. Fairy

      Oye hoye jaaaannn…calm downnn!!!…n ria plz make laksh repent a lill bit dr…..i know hes not dat bad n even rags loves him soo much…bt still ..he litterelyy tortured her sooo muchh..he even burned her hand….so he should have to realise it n he should punish himself for torturng her……..
      Bt atlast its ur ff…we are always wid u my sweetheartttt coz u r jst mindblownggg!!!love u lotzzzz n lotzzzz..n v r really sry if u gt hurt by our words…? i jst said it..coz i consider u as my frnd???once again sry…n yeah i love ur ff hehe???

      1. Ria

        Hey, please don’t be sorry. I’m glad you put forth your opinion. Well, Lakshya will surely justify his deeds and unfortunately, this story would’ve a tragic end to make things turn in favour of Ragini. 🙂

    2. Ria

      Thank you Jazzy! Yeah, you’re right. I’ve gone a bit wrong over there. Anyway, this story would’ve a tragic end because that’s how things would be fair enough for Ragini. 🙂

    1. Ria

      Thank you Pooja! 🙂

  14. Superb… I agree wid u..sry ria…I’m just ur ff..I know I’m to late…!!!! Can u plss write more raglak ff nd os…..!!!!coming to the point bt he behaved rude with ragini… Nd tortured her….So he must show intense love towards her…and he must repent for the mistake by his love ..!!!

    1. Ria

      Thank you Mintu! Well, about FF, I don’t think I’d be able to, but I’ve a few stories in mind for one shots which I’d try writing after my exams or after this FF is over. And importantly, this FF would’ve a tragic end to make things turn in favour of Ragini. 🙂

  15. Fairy

    Mindblownnnggggg update dr…omgg loved it so so soooo muchhh…u know i always wait for dis ff impatientlyyy!!!!i love dis ff so so soooo muchhh..its one of my fav….. d way rags loves him is soooooo heart touchnggg!!!n d way u write ahh!!jst love u yaaar..???waitng super eagerlyyy for nxt update…..plz plz post it sooon…n p lzzz dr post longer one….all in alll mindblownggg update…thnx a lot for dis wonderfulll ff sweetheartt?????keeeep rockng n stay blessssed .????????

    1. Ria

      Aww . . Thank you so much Fairy! I’m glad you’re liking this FF. 🙂

  16. no its awesome but rag should forgive but plzz sanskar should know the truth now he doesn’t want rag to stay with lakshya than sanskar want good match for rag plzz so we can see lakshya crazy and passiveness for rag

    1. Ria

      Thank you Nikky! 🙂

  17. what happened to raglak writer and their love bcoz she swasan ff is increaseing and raglak ff is one or two in no plzzzzzzz speach plzzzzz loved it guys what happened to raglak ff writer now its so less in number plzz try to write more bcoz now days raglak ff is decreasing as compare to swasan bcoz raglak ff os ss ts plzz give more and don’t stop in bcoz many writer are stop in middle and some end sudden plzzz guys prove that raglak fandom is not less plzz guys give some new one try to regular plzz give some new raglak ff and yaa plzz write more at least 100 episode bcoz many swasan ff reached 100 but none raglak ff reach plzz write more guys for raglak its a request by raglak fan

    1. Ria

      Thank you Ammy! 🙂

  18. Asra

    awesome dear….am agree with u dear….we didn’t bring our ego in between our love….but i think it’s not a ego in between raglak…he hurt her and torture her too much….so I thought he himself give a punishment for his deed….and I also know ragini don’t like thz bcz her love s soo pure….but he want punishment for his doings hena…it’s just my thought dear….if I hurt u means am really sooo sorry dear…..and whatever u give in thz story i accept that dear….waiting for nxt one….tkcr dear….

    1. Ria

      Thank you Asra! Please don’t be sorry. I’m glad you’ve forth your opinion. You’re right. I’ve just messed up in the A/N at the end and I’m extremely sorry about it. This story would’ve a tragic end to make things turn in favour of Ragini. Will try posting soon. 🙂

  19. Dharani

    awesome episode i totally agree with u

    1. Ria

      Thank you Dharani! 🙂 Glad you think alike too, but the A/N at the end is a little messed up. 🙁

    1. Ria

      Thank you Anu! 🙂

  20. Awesome

    1. Ria

      Thank you Saranya! 🙂

  21. Me too agree with you. Awesome episode dear and loved Raglak scenes. Waiting for next

    1. Ria

      Thank you so much Aamu! Glad you liked the update and agree with me, but the A/N is messed up a little. Sorry for that. 🙂

  22. Awesome update Ria ragini’s Love is so pure. But I feel that that laksh should not be forgiven easily he tortured her way too much both mentally and physically. It’s not about ego but I feel laksh even didn’t apologized for his deeds. Sorry this is completely my opinion sorry if it hurt you.

    1. Ria

      Thank you Priya! Please don’t be sorry. I’m happy to have the varied opinions from everyone. And I’m glad you’ve put forth your opinion too. Yeah, you’re right. It’s not ego. The A/N at the end is a little messed up. Just to make things in Ragini’s favour, this story would’ve a tragic end. 🙂

  23. Sorry to say but you are totally wrong.Its not ego its called self respect.What Lakshya did to Ragini was not Mistake it was a crime & here after getting beaten by him in past she is feeling guilty coz he got drunk & was “sad”. Wow.Laksh needed to get atleast some punishment.

    1. Ria

      Hey, don’t be sorry at all. It’s nice to have everyone’s opinion. And I’m too glad you’ve put forth your opinion. Yes, you’re right. I did mess up the A/N at the end. Sorry about that. And this story would’ve a tragic end to turn things in Ragini’s favour. 🙂

  24. Aasthu

    Hello Ria……..well since Ragini loved Laksh from the beginning, it sure would hurt her seeing him like that….women are more prone to sentiments….so I understand Ragini’s decision….she had seen the repentance of Laksh…..no woman would want her loved one to catch her leg…he should truly repent for his deeds and should seek forgiveness…….so I’m happy with this decision…..hope you’ll give some raglak romance (plzz don’t think I’m desperate. Just..you know….)

    1. Ria

      Thank you Aastha! Well, glad you’ve understood the point. Lakshya would seek forgiveness, but that won’t be very fair toward Ragini so to make things turn in her favour, the story would’ve a tragic end. And about RagLak scenes, they’re coming up in the next few segments. 🙂 And please don’t be sorry. It’s great to have varied opinions and I’m glad you’ve put forth your opinion. 🙂


    1. Ria

      Thank you Arjuna! 🙂

  26. Ria

    Hello everyone,
    Well, I know you all are pretty disappointed over the fact that Ragini has forgiven Lakshya and trust me, even I am. Yes, I know then, the question comes why did I unite them, but there’s something more shocking and sad is coming up in a few more segments which hopefully would be a fair move toward Ragini. But before that the updates will mainly involve RagLak scenes, but please trust me. I’ll try not to disappoint any of you and keep upto your expectations and your love too. 🙂

    Love you all,

    1. Fairy

      Love u more dear…n we have full faith in u?????jst post nxt part sooon…as m reallly addicted to ur ff????keep smiling????

      1. Ria

        Thank you so much Fairy! Well, I’ll submit the next segment tonight (probably). So stay tuned. ?

  27. Sooperb and amazing update

    1. Ria

      Thank you Megha! 🙂

  28. A.xx

    Aww cute and feel bad for lucky x x

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