RagLak: Is Everything really so Perfect as it seems to be? – Chapter 12 – By Ria

RagLak – Is everything really so perfect as it seems to be?
Segment 12

A/N: Thank you for your encouraging support previously. The revelation of the culprit will be followed by Lakshya’s repentance.

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We were about to enter the hotel when bhai received a call. “Kabir”, he said. “Put the call on speaker”, I replied as bhai attended the call. “H.. Hello”, said bhai as we heard Kabir laughing. “What do you want?”, I shouted losing my temper. “Oh! Mr. Maheshwari seems to be very angry”, he said. “Just come to the point”, I replied trying to control my temper. “Nothing much. I just need a night with your wife”, he said. I grabbed the phone from bhai’s hand and said, “You dare not touch Ragini or else, I swear I’ll kill you.” “Mr. Maheshwari, just calm down. You know your wife is with me”, he said. “That doesn’t mean you’ll blackmail me. I very well know you’re in this hotel itself”, I shouted. “Well. I must say you’re intelligent but, you can’t find me. Do you think I’m a fool? Try finding me if you can. You won’t be able to do anything today also just as you or Sanskaar couldn’t do anything when I raped your sister”, he said. I looked at bhai and di who seemed to be equally shocked. “Your luck won’t favour you every time”, I said and disconnecting the call we all rushed inside.

We rushed towards the reception. “Kabir Kapoor?”, I asked. “Sir, please fill in the details in the visitor’s book”, said the receptionist. I picked up the pen and scribbled in the details. “Kabir Kapoor?”, I asked. The receptionist looked into the computer and after a minute said, “Sir, we don’t have any booking by this name.” I punched my hand on the table and said, “Where can he take her?” I started thinking when my eyes fell upon the visitor in the visitor’s book. It said KK. I quickly ran my fingers along the row and said, “Bhai, room number 4056.” “What?”, shouted bhai following me as I ran towards the elevator. After two minutes, I said, “Bhai, you come by the elevators. I’m going by the stairs.” I rushed upstairs to the fourth floor hoping that nothing would happen to Ragini. I rushed around the corridor and finally found the room 4056. I knocked the door and said, “Kabir, open the door.” I stood there for a couple of minutes but, didn’t get response. I was about to go away when I heard a voice saying, “Call Lakshya.” It was Ragini’s voice. I broke the door and barged inside.

I clenched my firsts in anger as I saw Kabir trying to force himself upon Ragini after ripping her salwaar sleeves. He pushed Ragini on the bed and threw his coat away. He moved towards Ragini and as he was about to touch her I held his hand and pushed him towards the wall. “I told you not to even try”, I shouted and punched him on his face. I held his collar and pulled him up. I was about to kill him when di and bhai shouted from behind, “Lakshya, stop!” “The police will handle him”, di said. I left him and said, “Arrest him.” The police arrested Kabir and as they were about to go di asked them to stop. Me and bhai were quite surprised by her action. “Di, what’s wrong?”, I asked.

Di walked up to him and slapped him hard. He held his cheek and looked at di in shock. “You can take him away”, she said. The police was dragging him as he said, “Swara, I love you!” Di looked at him and letting out a faint laugh said, “I was your obsession not love. Moreover, you’ve spent nights with so many girls. You love so many girls? I’m surprised.” He lowered down his vision as the police dragged him out of the room. We heaved a sigh of relief as someone tugged my shirt sleeve. I turned around and saw Ragini standing behind me. “Lakshya, you didn’t kiss me”, said Ragini. I widened my eyes and heard di and bhai giggling among themselves. I looked at them while Ragini again tugged my shirt and said, “Lakshya! Kiss me.” “Ragini, let’s go home”, I said and held her hand. “No, first kiss me”, she replied trying to jerk away my hand. Di and bhai burst out laughing as I turned to look at them. “Okay, we’re leaving”, said bhai and dragged di out of the room closing the door behind them. “Lakshya”, said Ragini trying to shout. “Ragini, you’re not in your senses. Let’s go back home”, I said. “No, no, no”, replied Ragini throwing her hands in the air and stamping her foot. “Ragini, just come with me”, I said and was about to hold her wrist when she held my collar and pulled me towards herself. “Ragini!”, I exclaimed. “Don’t you love me?”, she asked. “Ragini, don’t behave like a kid”, I said. “You love me or not?”, she asked frowning. I smiled looking at her face and pulled her cheeks. “You look so cute”, I said. “Why don’t you answer my question?”, she asked. “Do you really need an answer?”, I asked. She smiled and nodded her head in a yes. I moved closer to her and pulled her closer by her waist. She wrapped her arms around my neck as I lifted her up and kissed her. I felt a spark inside me as I kissed her. It was our first kiss and it was the best thing that had ever happened in my life. We pulled back after a pretty long time when we were out of breath. I looked at Ragini who had turned completely pink blushing. I smiled looking at her and said, “Can we go home now?” Ragini nodded her head and walked towards me while stumbling. I picked her up in my arms and walked towards the car.

I made her sit inside the car and drove back. We reached home around 8 and I saw Ragini sleeping peacefully. I smiled looking at her and touching my lips smiled. I got down from the car and while picking her up in my arms whispered, “I love you!” I walked inside the house and later, to OUR room. I placed her on the bed and kissing her forehead pulled the blanket over her. I was about to go out when I realised Ragini had held onto my hand tightly as if she never wanted to let me go. I smiled and slept next to her sitting on the floor resting my head on her stomach.

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  1. SPP


    |Registered Member

    Awesome Superb Fantastic
    Loved it to the core
    Finally the culprit got
    Raglak were Amazing
    Waiting for the next one………

  2. nikky

    now ragini should get sense back and she hate or getting and now now sanskar heard them what in human behavior lakshya did with her sister and we can see sanskar doesn’t let ragini to get marry to lakshya and search new option of marriage for her sister as he believed lakshya doesn’t deserve to be with her sister and plzz new entry for rag who become obsessive for ragini

  3. nikky

    actually I fell in love with u u are amazing plzz at least reach 100 episode and plzz be regular days be late and u are such a fab writer and plzz complete it don’t leave in middle
    for small appreciation for my side
    nice amazing superb excellent mind blowing speechless outstanding but now days raglak ff is getting lesser day plzzz bcoz Swasan ff are so much in no this the only we keep in touch to raglak plZzzzzzzz don’t be late be regular may be tomorrow its a request hope u full fill

  4. zera

    you updated..yey..it was amazing part yar..loved raglak moments..waiting 4 ragini to gain her sense..to be frank laksh dnt deserve ragini..i still cnt move on frm wt he has done to her..hw much he hurt her..nw it seems like nthng had hapend..realy wnt ragini to move on with divorce nd laksh tadpan 4 ragini..plz ria..dnt let her forgive him easily..if you can plz let sanskar to knw wt hapend to ragini nd show some brotherly moments

  5. neina

    it was cute update ria..bt realy needs ragini to move on.waiting 4 laksh rependence..plz ria dnt let ragini to forgive him easily..when will you update nxt part? Plz will you give it tomorow

  6. Asra


    |Registered Member

    fabulous dear….omg ragini u r chooo cute….love u dear. .raglak scenes r amazing….waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear…

  7. Ammu

    Outstanding episode and it’s really awesome dear. Raglak scenes are so cute. I loved Raglak first kiss and waiting for next

  8. Shazi.Rajpoot


    |Registered Member

    Omg thank u so much for updating so quick I love this part a lot ❤ I am so eager to see what happens next and how Ragini will react in the morning 😁

    • Ria



      Thank you so much Shazi! I’m glad you liked the update. Sorry about the late update, probably segment 13 will be up tomorrow. 🙂

  9. Aasthu


    |Registered Member

    Hello Ria !!!!!!! Kabir really got on my nerves….I was so tensed whenever I thought of your ff….thanks for the link….I wonder why I didn’t see it…but I had searched for it too…..ah just forget it…..

    I loved the punch he got…and Swara’s slap and her dialogue…..funny part was Ragini still under the drugs influence asking Laksh to kiss her….Laksh’s reaction-Swasan teasing all funny…..ah raglak’s kiss…..that was cute….I loved Laksh pulling Ragini’s cheeks and calling her cute…..Laksh carrying Ragini to their bedroom and finally going to sleep by keeping his head on her stomach……that was also good…..eagerly waiting for the next part where Ragini wakes up…..

    Plzzz don’t extend this to over a 100…like nikky asked….the story will loose its charm….and about introducing another obsessive lover will only make it a serial drama…..

    If u don’t mind..can u msg me the links when u post the next one??? bye…

    • Ria



      Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update and probably, the reactions too. Well, this is a short story and I won’t extend it upto 100 because I don’t think even 30 would be a number I’ll come uptil. Anyway, for now you all enjoy the story forgetting the number of updates.

      Also, I’ll try sending you the links whenever I post. Please forgive me if I forget the same. 😅

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