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Home»Fan Fiction»RagLak: Is Everything really so Perfect as it seems to be? – Chapter 11 – By Ria
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RagLak: Is Everything really so Perfect as it seems to be? – Chapter 11 – By Ria

RiaBy RiaJanuary 7, 2017Updated:May 11, 201762 Comments7 Mins Read
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RagLak – Is everything really so perfect as it seems to be?
Segment 11

A/N: Thank you for your encouraging support previously! Well, you all wish to see Ragini torturing Lakshya the same way he did, but I guess you all are missing upon the fact that Ragini has always loved Lakshya unlike him. He married only to fulfill his revenge and now that he knows neither Sanskaar nor Ragini are at fault, he wants to do every possible thing to get Ragini back in his own life. Although Ragini’s acceptance won’t be that easy.

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Segment 10

HAPPY READING!

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(LAKSHYA)

The party was hosted in an open place. There was a bar set-up at one corner and the food arrangements were done in the other corner. The place was overcrowded and I found it next to impossible to find Ragini, bhai and di. “Lakshya”, called out someone. I turned around and shouted, “Aisha!” We hugged each other when I asked, “How come you’re here?” “I also don’t know”, she replied sarcastically. I rolled my eyes when she patted my shoulder and said, “I’m Kabir’s personal assistant.” “Oh.. Wait. Kabir Kapoor? Lucky girl”, I said. “Unluckiest man. He’s a disgusting person”, Aisha replied. “Why?”, I asked. “Hey Aisha”, someone said coming from behind. Aisha faked a smile and said, “Hello sir!” He wrapped his arms around her waist and pulling her closer said, “Kabir.” “Yeah Kabir”, replied Aisha jerking his hand and moving away. “And he is”, Kabir asked. “Lakshya Sarna”, I replied forwarding my hand. “I’m sorry. But, I couldn’t recognise you”, said Kabir. “Hey Kabir”, said bhai coming from behind. “Oh hi”, he replied. “He’s my sister’s husband”, said bhai. “Oh I see. Well, you all continue. I’ll be back soon”, said Kabir and walked away to the other guests. “Bhai, where were you? I was looking for all of you”, I said. “Arey. Even we were looking for you”, bhai said. “Whatever. Come let’s go. Oh wait. Aisha, this is”, I said but, Aisha interrupted saying, “Ragini’s brother. Nice to meet you.” She forwarded her hand while bhai shook her hand. “Okay, now come”, I said. We walked over to where di and Ragini were standing.

Ragini seemed to be least interested in the party and was looking here and there. She looked at me while looking here and there. I smiled at her while she made a disgusted face and looked away. “Aisha, this is di, my favourite and this is Ragini”, I said. Aisha smiled at them while I said, “We met after so many years right?” “Yes. After all you’re so busy”, she said. “Not at all. You only don’t have the time for me”, I said. I looked at Ragini from the corner of my eye who was looking at us with her widened eyes. “I mean for your friends”, I corrected myself and saw Ragini heaving a sigh of relief. I smiled. “Let’s rock the dance floor. We would request all the couples to come up on the dance floor”, the announcement said. “Swara, let’s go”, said bhai. I smiled as both of them walked over to the dance floor. “Aisha, shall we have a dance”, I said trying to make Ragini feel jealous. “I’m fine. You carry on with Ragini”, Aisha replied. “Arey come na. Anyways, Ragini isn’t interested in dancing”, I said pulling Aisha onto the dance floor. We both were dancing as I was observing Ragini. She looked angry and after sometime went to the bar. I wondered what she was going to do when I saw her drinking Coke. I was relieved.

I continued dancing with Aisha when a guy started misbehaving with Ragini. “Aisha, hold on. I’ll be back”, I said and ran towards the bar. I pushed the guy and shouted, “What were you doing?” “Sorry”, he said and went away. I turned around to face Ragini who was standing behind me. She held my collar and pulled me closer to herself. “Ragini!”, I exclaimed as she moved closer to me. “You won’t leave me now right?”, she said. “Ragini”, I said pushing her slightly. I turned to the bartender and asked, “What did you give her?” “Coke”, he replied. I held his collar and said, “Tell me what did you give her.” “Coke sir”, he replied. I was about to punch the bartender when I felt someone pulling my shirt lightly. I turned to look at the person and saw Ragini pulling my shirt. “What is it Ragini?”, I asked.

“I ordered Coke”, she said holding the glass in front of her face. I took the glass from her hand and smelt it. “Ragini”, I said and threw the glass. I looked at Ragini who stood there with a crying face. “Why did you throw it? It was tasty”, she said. “Ragini, you come with me”, I said holding her hand. “No, I want the drink”, said Ragini stamping her foot and throwing her hands in the air like a kid. “Ragini, please don’t behave like a child. Come with me”, I said pulling her. She jerked away my hand and said, “I want the drink.” I bent down and picked her up in my arms. “Ahh..ahhh.. Wh..What are you doing?”, she asked. I walked towards the empty side of the lawn. “I want that drink”, she repeated again and again.

I stood at an empty place and made her stand. She was about to go when I held her hand and said, “Ragini, stand here.” “No, I want that drink”, she replied trying to move away. I tightened my grip on her hand and said, “Ragini stand here and talk to me.” She walked towards me and holding my collars pulled me closer. “Ragini, what are you doing?”, I asked trying to move away. She sensually moved her finger on my face and then neck. “Ragini!”, I exclaimed trying to move her away. She said while playing with my buttons, “You won’t leave me right?” I smiled and said, “Never. Now, move Ragini. Let’s go back to the party.” “No. You won’t go there. You’ll again go to that girl then..what’s her name? Aa..a. what?”, she said. “Aisha”, I replied. “Ya whatever. You won’t go anywhere. Stay here”, she said wrapping her arms around my neck. I moved my hands to her waist and holding her tightly said, “Okay. I won’t go anywhere.” She smiled and kissed my cheek. I pointed towards my lips. She turned crimson as I moved closer to her. I was about to kiss her when she lost her balance and moved away. I removed my hands from her waist and later, hers from my neck. “Ragini, you wait here. I’ll get you some lime juice”, I said. “No, you won’t go anywhere”, she replied holding my hand. “I’ll come back in two minutes”, I said and ran away.

I came back after a minute or two and found the place completely empty. I searched everywhere but, couldn’t find her. “Ragini, Ragini”, I shouted but, didn’t get any response. I suddenly remembered Aisha’s words. “Kabir. I hope he didn’t do anything”, I said becoming tensed. I went back to the party and searched for her but, couldn’t find her. I called di and bhai aside and told them everything. “Lakshya, do something and find out Ragini”, said di. “Where di?”, I asked. “Lakshya, let’s check in the hotel first then we’ll do something else”, bhai said as we ran inside the hotel.

• • • • •

A/N: Sorry for the late update. I was caught up with my school work unfortunately. The next update would probably be on Monday and if not, then surely on Tuesday. ☺

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    62 Comments

    1. thinesanju on January 7, 2017 1:36 pm

      awesome

      • Ria on January 8, 2017 4:20 pm

        Thank you! ?

    2. Sreevijayan on January 7, 2017 1:41 pm

      U r right…i dnt want ragini to torture laksh like d way he did..den there wnt b ny diffrnce btw dem..bt i have a concern..was waiting to see laksh knwing d truth nd repenting..bt none of dem were shown..i dnt knw if i missed it or u nvr showed it..yes u hve showed it sme parts bt i was nt kinda satisfied wid it knwing d way he tortured a pure soul.

      However d story nd ur writing is too gud…cnt wait to read mre

      • Ria on January 8, 2017 4:23 pm

        Hey, I totally get your point. The entire truth will be revealed in the next update and Lakshya’s repentance will be coming up after that. Anyway, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update. ?

    3. dharani on January 7, 2017 1:41 pm

      awesome

      • Ria on January 8, 2017 4:24 pm

        Thank you! ?

    4. Raglakholic on January 7, 2017 1:50 pm

      Amazing update

      • Ria on January 8, 2017 4:25 pm

        Thank you! ?

    5. neina on January 7, 2017 1:51 pm

      i have been waiting 4 ur update yar..i thought you wil update on friday..but no wories you updated 2 day..i knw ur xams are cming nd u r busy..thankz 4 this update yar..bt plz dnt make ragini forgive him easily..iam nt asking to torture laksh like he do with ragini..bt atleast maintain the cold behaviour of ragini towards him..nw we have 2 wait til monday 4 another update na…wil mis ur ff tomorow nd plz give long one on mndy plz

      • Ria on January 8, 2017 4:27 pm

        Hey, thank you so much for understanding. Well, sorry for updating a bit late. I was caught up with my studies. ? Btw, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update. Lakshya’s repentance and Ragini’s cold behaviour is coming up ahead. ?

    6. Ashnoor on January 7, 2017 1:52 pm

      Amazing

      • Ria on January 8, 2017 4:28 pm

        Thank you! ?

    7. Ria on January 7, 2017 1:54 pm

      Hey guys, there’s a mistake up there. Extremely sorry for it. It should’ve been Lakshya Maheshwari instead of Sarna. Sorry! ?

    8. lovely on January 7, 2017 2:07 pm

      Interesting

      • Ria on January 8, 2017 4:29 pm

        Thank you! ?

    9. zera on January 7, 2017 2:16 pm

      exactly..i also agree with you..iam also nt asking to torture laksh..bt he should understand his mistake nd repend on it..bt here he behaves like nthng hapend nd try to make ragini jelous..plz ria we wnt to see laksh’s love 4 ragu

      • Ria on January 8, 2017 4:30 pm

        Lakshya’s repentance coming up ahead. ?

    10. Ammy on January 7, 2017 2:19 pm

      Superb

      • Ria on January 8, 2017 4:31 pm

        Thank you! ?

    11. Sayana on January 7, 2017 2:45 pm

      Very intrsting…….
      Plzz update nxt part soon….

      • Ria on January 8, 2017 4:31 pm

        Thank you! ?

    12. saranya on January 7, 2017 2:47 pm

      superb

      • Ria on January 8, 2017 4:33 pm

        Thank you! ?

    13. SPP on January 7, 2017 3:27 pm

      Awesome Superb Fantastic
      What yaar U should have made Laksh jealous instead of Ragini
      Waiting for the next one………….

      • Ria on January 8, 2017 4:34 pm

        Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update, but sorry for not standing upto your expectations. ?

      • SPP on January 9, 2017 9:55 am

        U r always welcome dear
        And I am sorry if I have hurted u
        I just said that because we know that Ragini loves Laksh but he was not and was so rude to her that’s y
        Really sorry???

      • Ria on January 9, 2017 4:24 pm

        Hey, you didn’t hurt me at all. I do get your point and please don’t be sorry. ?

      • SPP on January 11, 2017 12:42 pm

        Okkk dear

    14. asra on January 7, 2017 3:30 pm

      awesome dear…i love drunken ragini scenes…..

      • Ria on January 8, 2017 4:35 pm

        Thank you! ?

    15. Aasthu on January 7, 2017 3:44 pm

      Hello Ria…..Ragini has loved Laksh all her life….but Laksh’s remorse is missing….I liked this chapter like the rest…..Ragini’s angry face on seeing Laksh and Aisha dance together…that was cute…….but Ragini’s talks and actions after taking the coke was even more cuter…….I loved her repeated question to Laksh: “u won’t leave me right?” and also her cute pleading……Laksh for sure melted like a chocolate…..after getting a kiss on his cheeks from Ragini, the way he made her blush by asking a kiss on his lips…..ah that was also cute………oh so Kabir is the rapist?? I hope the past won’t repeat again……if possible update on Monday itself…..anxious to know whether Ragini will be safe…..I really hope so…….

      • Ria on January 8, 2017 4:41 pm

        Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update and found the drunk Ragini cute. ? Well, Lakshya’s repentance is coming up ahead. I’m trying my best for tomorrow so, let’s keep our fingers crossed and hope that Kabir doesn’t do anything. ?

      • Aasthu on January 9, 2017 6:52 pm

        why does that ring a wrong bell????? plzzz Riya make Ragini safe…..

      • Ria on January 9, 2017 8:52 pm

        The next segment is posted. ?

    16. lisa on January 7, 2017 3:55 pm

      nice

      • Ria on January 8, 2017 4:42 pm

        Thank you! ?

    17. nikky on January 7, 2017 4:17 pm

      Monday it’s to late plzzzz give tomorrow plzz try to give at everyday it’s a request actually I fell in love with ur ff awesome amazing excellent superb mind blowing brilliant speechless next part soon don’t be late and yaa thanks to all raglak writers for writing mind blowing concept and they are just brilliant hope we get more raglak ff ts ss O’s and plzzz raglak ff give daily ff or be regular and yaa plzzz write more bcoz now days raglak ff is very less in comparison to Swasan so all raglak ff writer plzzzz it’s a request plzzz

      • Ria on January 8, 2017 4:47 pm

        Thank you for those beautiful words! I’m glad you liked the update. Sorry for not being able to update tomorrow. I’m trying my best for tomorrow. ?

    18. Malu on January 7, 2017 4:24 pm

      superb part

      • Ria on January 8, 2017 4:48 pm

        Thank you! ?

    19. Asw on January 7, 2017 4:44 pm

      Nice Ragini is so cute keep going

      • Ria on January 8, 2017 4:49 pm

        Thank you! ?

    20. Fats on January 7, 2017 4:59 pm

      Great update. I love how romantic Ragini is when drunk ?. Her kisses, jealousy, and closeness were all so dreamy ?. Can’t wait to read the next part ?

      • Ria on January 8, 2017 4:50 pm

        Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update. I’m trying my best to update tomorrow. ?

    21. Akankshanna on January 7, 2017 5:08 pm

      Awesome……..fingures crossed….

      • Ria on January 8, 2017 4:51 pm

        Thank you!
        Yeah, *Fingers Crossed*?

    22. Vk on January 7, 2017 8:00 pm

      Awesome

      • Ria on January 8, 2017 4:52 pm

        Thank you! ?

    23. Ammu on January 7, 2017 10:38 pm

      Interesting episode and loved it. I hope Ragini ke saath kuch bura nahi honga

      • Ria on January 8, 2017 4:53 pm

        Thank you! I’m glad you liked the update. Yeah, *Fingers Crossed* Hoping the same too. ?

    24. IQRA222 on January 7, 2017 10:38 pm

      awesome
      loved the raglak scenes
      waiting for the next episode

      • Ria on January 8, 2017 4:54 pm

        Thank you! I’m glad you liked the update. The next one would probably be up tomorrow. ?

    25. A.xx on January 7, 2017 11:47 pm

      Amazing and wonder what happened to Ragini maybe it was Kabir and loved raginis jealousy but want to see lakshyas jealousy soon to xx

      • Ria on January 8, 2017 4:55 pm

        Thank you! Im glad you liked the update. The truth revealation would be followed up by Lakshya’s repentance and then, probation I could add up Lakshya’s jealousy. Thanks for the suggestion though! ?

    26. Pooja on January 8, 2017 3:57 pm

      supppprrrbb

      • Ria on January 8, 2017 4:56 pm

        Thank you! ?

    27. Arjuna on January 8, 2017 7:04 pm

      AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME

      • Ria on January 8, 2017 11:08 pm

        Thank you so much! ?

    28. hemalattha on January 8, 2017 10:19 pm

      Awesome

      • Ria on January 8, 2017 11:09 pm

        Thank you! ?

    29. Ragz_teju on January 9, 2017 12:26 am

      I think kabir is culprit… hope ragini is fine… raglak scenes are amazing… superb chappy

      • Ria on January 9, 2017 4:24 pm

        Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the chapter. ?

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