RagLak – Is everything really so perfect as it seems to be? (Segment 10)

RagLak – Is everything really so perfect as it seems to be?
Segment 10

A/N: Thank you for your encouraging support previously! I’m glad you all have been liking the way Ragini’s behaving with Lakshya. Here’s an early update for you all.

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Segment 9

HAPPY READING!

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(LAKSHYA)

The next morning, I came down to the hall wearing denims and a blue shirt with it. I relaxed myself on the sofa and waited for Ragini and di. I was looking here and there when suddenly I saw Ragini coming down the stairs. She looked drop-dead gorgeous in her pink anarkali with open hair. I couldn’t stop staring at her. Her dupatta was pinned on one side and as she was coming down it got stuck to the railing of the stairs. She tried to pull it without the dupatta being torn apart but, she was unable to do so. I walked up till her and placed my hands on hers. We looked at each other but, soon she moved her hand away and started looking here and there. I removed her dupatta carefully and held it in front of her. “Excuse me”, she said. I looked at her and arched my eyebrows asking what. She signalled at the dupatta through her eyes with a disgusted face. I looked down and quickly left her dupatta. She walked past me and then turned around and said, “Mr. Mah.. Lakshya, are you ready?” I smiled and nodded my head in a yes. “Even I’m ready”, a voice came from behind. I turned and looked at di and understood why Ragini called me by my name. The smile from my face soon faded away and in a disheartened tone I said, “Let’s leave.” I took the keys and we went out of the house.

I sat in the driver’s seat while Ragini and di went behind. “Someone should sit in front or else, we aren’t leaving”, I remarked. “Di, you go. I’ll sit behind”, Ragini said disappointing me. “No Ragini. You go”, said Ragini. “Di, please?”, she asked. “I wanted to talk to Sanskaar but, it’s okay”, di said throwing her tantrums. “Talk or romance”, asked Ragini teasing di. I smiled as di turned crimson. “Okay fine”, Ragini replied as a broad, satisfied smile crept over my face. I started driving but, soon applied the brakes and stopped the car at the side of the road. “What happened?”, asked di. I moved towards Ragini while di said, “Lakshya, I’m here too.” I gave her a disgusted look and moved towards Ragini. I looked at her and found her looking at me with widened eyes. I moved closer as she closed her eyes. She lightly pushed me away while I pulled the seat belt and pressed it inside the holder. “You can open your eyes”, I whispered and moved away. “Oh I thought”, di said but Ragini interrupted and said, “Let bhai come.” I laughed while di angrily looked at both of us. We reached Kapoor mansion and picking up bhai we went to the party venue.

We reached the party venue and got down from the car. Ragini started walking with bhai and di. I pulled her behind holding her elbow. “Mr. Maheshwari!”, she exclaimed. She jerked my hand away and said, “Stop acting like a husband.” I smiled and said, “Okay fine. A boyfriend then?” “You very well know you mean nothing to me”, she said. I started walking towards her as she moved back. She was walking behind unless she was blocked by a car. The parking lot seemed to be completely empty. She pushed me trying to move me away but I held her hand and moved closer to her face. “Mr. Maheshwari”, she said. I kissed her right cheek and said, “Lakshya.” She remained shocked and after sometime said, “How dare you kiss me?” I moved closer to her and kissed her other cheek. “Lakshya”, I said. “Mr. Maheshwari”, she said. I kissed her forehead and said, “Lakshya.” “Mr”, she said but, I interrupted saying, “Next time I hope you know where I would kiss you.” She opened her eyes and said, “Lakshya, move away.” I moved towards her face and said, “Politely.” “Never”, she replied. I moved closer to her as I could sense her nervousness. “Lakshya, please”, she said. I moved away and asked, “Why are we here? It’s bhai’s friend’s party right?” “To find out the culprit”, she said and pushing me away walked inside. Her words were pondering in my mind unless my phone rang. I picked up the call. “Lakshya, come inside”, said di. I was disappointed to find out that di called from Ragini’s phone. “Ya”, I replied disconnecting the call and walked inside.

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70 comments

  1. Priya23

    Hey ria.. M silent readers of ur all ff and os.. M big fan of ur writing.. Ur just novelist, splendid, and out standing writer..sry I couldn’t praises well..but words are less in front of ur writing.. Its just awesome…and what not…
    .
    M from Bangladesh.and 17 years old..
    I know u don’t no me..but i know u very well baby… ( he he.. kinda dramatic way)..
    .
    Well m TEI TU twinj big fan.. I follow ur all writing and see main yaha tak v agayi..he he.. Well I read ur this ff in twinj version in ur writing… This is just mind blowing.. I missed it very much yaar..ur just lovely..
    Well bhtt pakaliya tumhe.. Plz post ur ff soon in TEI TU page.. M waiting 4 it..
    Stay happy and keep smiling..
    Love you..

    • Ria

      Ria

      |Author

      Hey Priya,
      Thank you so much! I’m glad you’ve been following all my writings all this while and liked them too. It really means a lot too me.
      Well, as I told, TEI FF will be published only once or twice a week so, the next update is either coming up this weekend or, the next week. 😀

      Love,
      Ria.

  2. nikky

    nice amazing superb plzz give next part tomorrow nice amazing superb excellent mind blowing plzzz be regular don’t be late bcoz we want so many raglak ff ts ss O’s but now they are very less so all raglak ff writer plzzzz give more for raglak ff and yaa big thank to all those write who write raglak ff giving their precious time

    • Ria

      Ria

      |Author

      Thank you! Sorry for the short update. I’ve my exams coming up so.. I’ll try my best and update tomorrow itself as a compensation. 😀

  3. Ankita

    It’s really superb but want to see laksh suffer more like he did with ragini how could he behave normally after doing so much with her

    • Ria

      Ria

      |Author

      Thank you! 😀
      Well, I do get your point, but Lakshya is suffering. In the upcoming segments, his feelings and emotions would be showcased properly. May be not physically, but mentally he’s already suffering. 😀

  4. Raglakholic

    Raglakholic

    |Registered Member

    Outstanding update
    Totally loved it
    Raglak small interaction is superb one
    Totally loved the way ragini is behaving with him
    He totally deserves her anger
    Nd much more too
    Nd it was too small infront of what he had done with her
    Eagerly waiting to read more
    Please do continue soon

    • Ria

      Ria

      |Author

      Hey, thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update. I do agree with you, but the fact that remains is Ragini has always loved Lakshya, but Lakshya didn’t. He used her to fulfill his revenge and now that he knows Ragini or Sanskaar, neither of them are at fault, he wants to rectify every mistake of his. He wants to do every possible thing to bring her back into his life.
      Yeah, trying my best to update tomorrow as well. 😀

  5. zera

    hey riya…iam a die heart fan of your’s..i just love this ff..it’s just mind blowing..i realy want laksh to sufer more 4 ragini..after doing too much with her how can he behave like nthng hapend.he tortured her mentaly and physicaly..we see the intensity of his haterdnes..nw want to see the intensity nd pasion of his love.plz dnt make ragini to forgive him easily..nd plz update soon dear

    • Ria

      Ria

      |Author

      Hey, thank you so much dear for your kind words! I’m glad you liked the story and it really means a lot to me.
      Well, I do agree with you that Lakshya is behaving very normally with Ragini and I completely understand the point of you all willing to have Ragini torturing Lakshya the same way, but the fact remains that Ragini has loved Lakshya unlike him who enacted to love her only to fulfill his own revenge. But now that he has realised that Ragini and Sanskaar both of them are completely innocent and not at fault, he wants to do everything to make it upto her, to bring her back into his life.

      Yeah, I’m trying to update tomorrow too. 😀

  6. Aasthu

    Aasthu

    |Registered Member

    I liked Laksh’s disappointed face when he understood that Ragini called him by his name only because Swara was there……Laksh behavior kinda increases my anger towards him…….1st he tortured her like hell by simply assuming that Sanskar is the culprit….if he really wanted to take revenge, he should have investigated the matter……but right now….when he saw that his sister is cured and came to know that Sanskar is innocent he wants Ragini…..disgusting…..I hope Ragini continues to give him the cold behavior until he can be forgiven,….

    • Ria

      Ria

      |Author

      Hey, well you’re absolutely right. I don’t find it wrong when you all day that Ragini should behave like Lakshya and torture him like he did, but the difference here lies is that Ragini has always loved Lakshya unlike him. Lakshya never loved her and the only reason for this marriage from his side was to fulfill his revenge against Sanskaar. But now that he realises that neither Ragini nor Sanskaar are at fault, he’s ready to do anything to get her back in his life. But things won’t be so easy for him. Ragini won’t agree to Lakshya unless he realises his mistake and repents about it.
      Hope you liked the update. 😀

      • Aasthu

        Aasthu

        |Registered Member

        thanks Riya for clearing the doubt…..ya I forgot that ragini always loved him…..happy that he will do anything to get her back.and that it will be difficult for him….can u give some more moments were Laksh admires Ragini and maybe get jealous??????

        Don’t say hope….I loved it……

    • Ria

      Ria

      |Author

      RagLal scenes coming up in the next update, but probably things will be the other way round. 🙈

      Thank you so much! Glad you liked the update. 😀

  7. Asra

    Asra

    |Registered Member

    amazing dear…..raglak superbbb superbbb dear….finally laksh kisses ragini awesome dear….i love ragini attitude towards laksh….waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear….

  8. SPP

    SPP

    |Registered Member

    Awesome Superb Fantastic Fabulous
    Loved it to the core
    Culprit is going to be caught
    Excited for the next one
    Waiting eagerly for the next one………….

    • Ria

      Ria

      |Author

      Thank you so much! I’m glad you liked the update. Yeah, the culprit would be caught soon. I’m trying my best to update tomorrow too. 😀

  9. Fats

    Fats

    |Registered Member

    Amazing update. Omg, so many kisses and that too from Laksh 😍. Oh how times change. But then again I am LOVING this change. Can’t wait to read the next part 💕

    • Ria

      Ria

      |Author

      Hey, thank you so much! Glad you’re liking the change. Working upon the next update. Hopefully, it’ll be up soon. 😀

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