RagLak- Aliens at my house (intro)

The present story is inspired from daa daa daa named japan cartoon. With few changes.. I want to write it…

hope u will all enjoy it…

Ragini- a cheerful talkative innocent girl… whose parents leave to US for working in NASA. She has to stay in Maheswari house as optioned by her parents…she is 20 years old..final year in degree.

Laksh- he is studious clever and handsome boy… 20 years old. 2 months elder than Ragini. He too final year degree. His mother passed away. he is under guidance of his father durga prasad.

Sanskar- an alien from outer space. (his details will be reveled in further story..)

Chotu- a baby alien(we shall know about him in further story..)

The rest all charecters are swara nikil pari adarsh sahil kavitha sharmista shekar…. they all will come in the middle of story..

main story runs around raglak sanskar and chotu…

plz comment and say ur views… so that i will continue….

thanks all…

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  1. Madhuchhanda

    Oh my god sanskar is an alien ???? but really the plot is interesting pls continue

  2. Raglakholic

    It’s interesting one
    Character sketch is awesome
    Eagerly waiting to read more
    Please do continue soon

  3. Awesome plot


  5. Jazzy

    interesting concept

  6. looking interesting concept and unique

  7. its awesome amazing brilliant outstanding mind blowing no world to describe it plzz see Na swasan ff are so much plzz raglak ff writer try to write more for raglak plzz for raglak write more raglak ff plzz this is a request hope u full fill plzz CVS has done so much partiality to raglak we have to prove that even if that raglak are the best and have equal fandom plzzz give more ff and yaa thanks also that u give so much precious time to raglak but plzz many raglak ff is started and left in the middle but a swasan complete their ff and none ff raglak reach 100 so plzz

  8. Interesting

  9. ShivanyaSharma

    Lol ? sanskaar is an alien between interesting concept and post sooooon

  10. Awesome

  11. woww suprb

  12. interesting

  13. Nice concept

  14. IQRA222

    awesome loved the plot

  15. Interesting intro dear and plz continue

  16. Asra

    wow interesting dear….Sanky alien haha…waiting for nxt one…tkcr dear….

  17. A.xx

    nice xx

  18. Hemalattha


  19. Fats

    Great start. I loved the characterisation. And the alien plot sounds interesting. Can’t wait to read more ?

  20. Ragz_teju


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