Pyar Tune Kya Kiya- Twinj’s Story (OS)


?Happy birthday to you! Happy birthday to you! Happy birthday dear Laddoo, Happy birthday to you! ?
Laddoooooooooooooooo, it’s your big day! And I know u requested something on my ff and I’m extremely sorry I couldn’t do it. I tried to but it was not fitting my plot. Then I thought, u are too special, I have to do something for you. So I wrote this OS just for you. It has been roaming in my head for so long. I love Pyar Tune Kya Kiya so I thought why not have an episode for Twinj? I am completely packed and tight on my schedule and extremely busy. But I found some time and wrote this. Hope you like it! And excuse all the mistakes, I wrote it all at once…Now without further ado, let’s get on with the story…..


“Hello Madam! Are u listening?”
A girl looks up from her book. It is Twinkle. She is wearing glasses and her hair is in a pony tail. She looks up at the man talking to her. It is a conductor of a bus.
Cond- Madam, can I see ur ticket please.
Twinkle- Oh um…sorry…
She looks for her ticket in her bag and stuff falls out of her bag. Twinkle nervously picks them up.
Cond- Hello madam. I don’t have all day. This bus has a place to go and there are other passengers also.
Twinkle- Yes sorry…actually…I can’t find my ticket….
Cond- What! U have to get out. People pay and get on the bus. Yeh aap ka baap ka bus hai kya? That whenever u want u can ride for free?
Twinkle looks around embarrassed and nervous. A guy wearing sunglasses looks up from his phone and looks towards the commotion.
Twinkle- But I had brought a ticket…I don’t know where….
Cond- Driver! Stop the bus! Madam u have to get off now.
Twinkle wipes a tear off her cheek and picks up her bag and hugs it to her chest. She goes to the door of the bus. Suddenly a man puts his arm on the doorway, blocking Twinkle from leaving.
Man- Bhare bhare sheheron mein aise choti choti baat hoti rehete hai. No need to worry. I’ll pay for ur ticket. Conductor, how much?
Cond- Saab 200 rupees.
The man pays for the ticket and gives the ticket to Twinkle. Twinkle looks at the floor and takes the ticket.
Twinkle- Thank u.
Man- No problem….oh and have some confidence. There’s no need to feel shame. Such a pretty face like urs should be facing the world, not the floor.
Twinkle looks up at the guy. The guys gets off the bus. Twinkle looks at the guy from the window as the bus passes him. The guy waves at Twinkle. Twinkle smiles. She looks at the floor and notices a card. She picks it up and sees the card is a driver’s license. It was of the same guy who bought her the ticket. She reads the name on the license.
Twinkle- Kunj Sarna….

Next Scene…

Kunj is riding his motorcycle. He stops at a red light. A traffic guard comes around asking for everyone’s license. He comes to Kunj.
Police- Sir can I see ur license please.
Kunj- Yea sure.
Kunj looks in his pocket but can’t find his license.
Kunj- Hehe…sir one second.
He takes out his wallet but still can’t find the license.
Kunj- Sir I don’t know where my license is…but I swear I have one…I must have dropped it somewhere.
Police- What! Driving without a license?
Kunj takes out a 500 note. He quietly passes it to the traffic police.
Kunj- Sir u take this and please let me go.
Police (enraged)- What! U are bribing me? Come let’s go to the police station. I’ll teach u now.
The traffic police grabs Kunj by his collar and takes him to the police station.
Kunj- Are sir please listen!

(Police Station…)

Kunj holds the cell bars and bangs his head against the bars.
Kunj- Kya kismat hai meri!
A police comes to Kunj and unlocks his cell.
Police- U can go now. Someone bailed you out.
Kunj- What really? Wow great!
Kunj leaves the cell and goes to the desk. He sees Twinkle standing there.
Police- This girl returned ur license. U can go now.
Kunj- Aap?
Twinkle hands Kunj his license and walks out of the police station. Kunj runs after her and catches up to her on the street.
Kunj- Hey wait!
Twinkle stops and fixes her glasses. She looks at the ground.
Kunj- Thank you for bailing me out. I want to repay u for the money.
Twinkle-…it’s ok. I owed you for the ticket.
Twinkle starts walking and Kunj walks with her.
Kunj- By the way, how did you find me?
Twinkle- Voh….I was walking home when I saw the police taking you…so…
Kunj- Oh thank you.
Kunj jumps and stands in front of Twinkle, making her shocked, He forwards his hand.
Kunj- Hi. I’m Kunj Sarna.
Twinkle looks at the floor nervously.
Kunj- Vaise, an introduction only works if the other person introduces themselves also.
He smiles.
Twinkle- Twinkle.
Kunj- Kya?
Twinkle- My name is Twinkle Taneja.
Kunj- Twinkle! Wow such a unique name!
Twinkle- I have to go now.
She starts walking away. Kunj watches her leave.
Kunj- Interesting girl….

Twinkle reaches home and quietly starts going up the stairs. An older lady sees her.
Lady- Oh so finally the queen decides to come home.
Twinkle stops walks and holds her bag tightly.
Twinkle- Ma I…
Lady- Shut up! How many times did I tell you don’t call me ma.
Tears form in Twinkle’s eyes.
Lady- Yea ur dad married me after ur mom died. That doesn’t mean that I accept u as my daughter. I only have one daughter and that is Misha. Hmmph!
The lady walks away. Twinkle runs to her room and lays on the bed and cries. After Twinkle’s mom, Leela died, RT married again. But this time, Twinkles stepmother hated Twinkle. Misha was younger than Twinkle. She also hated Twinkle, but somewhere also had a soft side for her. Sometimes, she would come to Twinkle as a sister and ask her for help, which Twinkle liked. And other times, she would torture Twinkle. But in front of RT, they acted innocent. Twinkle also could not tell RT anything. He would not believe her.
Twinkle (crying)- Ma. where are you? I miss you.
Misha barges into Twinkle’s room.
Misha- Twinkle!
Twinkle sits up and wipes away her tears.
Misha- Twinkle! I need help.
Twinkle- What happened Misha?
Misha- I have a history assignment for college. I need you to do it for me.
Misha starts looking at her nails.
Twinkle- But Misha, it’s ur project. How can I do it?
Misha- Ur doing it and that’s final. If u don’t do it, then….
Misha picks up the iron and holds it above her hand.
Twinkle- Misha!
Twinkle runs to Misha and takes the iron away. In the process, she gets a burn on her arm.
Twinkle is stunned as tears fall down her cheek. Misha leaves and Twinkle silently cries in her room while blowing onto the wound. The next day, Twinkle leaves to the library to do Misha’s assignment. She goes to the computer and starts typing the assignment.
“Misha Taneja?”
Twinkle turns around and sees Kunj. Kunj sits on the empty seat next to her.
Kunj- But you said ur name was Twinkle Taneja.
Twinkle quickly prints the assignment and turns to leave.
Kunj- Are wait.
Kunj holds Twinkle’s arms. Twinkle flinches as he holds the wound. Kunj looks at her arm and sees the burn.
Kunj- Oh my god! Are you ok?
Tears stroll down Twinkle’s cheeks. She moves her face away from Kunj.
Kunj- Why did u not bandage it? It is going to get an infection. Come with me.
Twinkle- No I…
Kunj holds her hand and pulls her with him. He goes to the librarian desk and asks for the first aid box. Then he leads Twinkle to the back of the library, in an empty corner. He makes her sit on a chair and sits next to her. Twinkle watches him as he applies ointment on the burn then bandages the wound.
Kunj- Twinkle, u need to take care of urself. There is only one of you in this world and if this world loses one Twinkle, it will be a huge loss to the world. We are all alive, but some of us are not living. Insaan koh jeena hai. U need to live ur life to the fullest. Give me ur phone.
Twinkle is shocked.
Kunj- Give me your phone.
Twinkle- But why?
Kunj- Just give it na.
Twinkle hands her phone to him.
Kunj- Here, I put my number in there. If u ever need anything, please call me. And also, I took ur number. So I will be calling you also.
Kunj winks and walks away. Twinkle watches him leave in shock. At night, Kunj calls Twinkle. Twinkle hesitantly talks to him. Days pass and the night time phone calls becomes a habit to the both of them.
Kunj- Twinkle, u have to come to my house this Saturday night.
Twinkle- Why?
Kunj- It’s my birthday. I’m having a small party.
Twinkle- Kunj…I don’t think I can come. I don’t really like parties.
Kunj- Twinkle, if u consider me as ur friend u will come. Otherwise, I won’t celebrate my birthday.
Twinkle-Kunj please…
Kunj- Twinkle, what is ur address?
Twinkle- Why?
Kunj- Just tell me.
Twinkle tells him her address. Days pass and Kunj stops calling Twinkle. Twinkle becomes restless upon not receiving his calls. Then Saturday rolls around. In the evening, Twinkle’s dad calls her downstairs. Twinkle comes down and is shocked to see Kunj sitting there.
RT- Twinkle, Kunj came to take you to his birthday. U didn’t tell me that u were going?
Twinkle- Voh dad…I wasn’t planning on going.
Rt- Why not puttar? Kunj is a very good boy. And he said u guys are friends. Quickly go get ready. He is waiting for you.
Kunj winks at Twinkle and Twinkle runs upstairs. She comes down half an hour later wearing a beautiful burgundy dress with her hair in light curls. (The dress she wore during the dance competition for Mrs. Amritsar). Kunj was mesmerized to see her. Twinkle fixes her glasses and looks around nervously.
They leave for his house. A few of Kunj’s friends were at the party. Kunj introduces Twinkle to them. Throughout the whole party, Twinkle felt out of place and nervous. Soon everyone left.
Twinkle- I should go now Kunj. Its getting late.
Kunj- Can u stay a little. I just want to sit and talk to you.
They sit on the couch.
Twinkle- Ur family didn’t come?
Kunj- Uhh…no not really. Actually, I’m an orphan.
Twinkle- Oh. I’m sorry.
Kunj- No no it’s fine. So tell me, about ur mom and dad.
Twinkle tears up.
Kunj- Twinkle why are you crying? Is everything ok?
Twinkle- My mom died when I was little….
Twinkle told Kunj everything…everything about the tortures her stepmom and Misha did to her…everything. Kunj teared up and saw a shaking Twinkle. He held her close in her embrace and patted her hair. Twinkle held Kunj tightly and cried her heart out. After about 10 minutes, the broke the hug.
Kunj- Come, I want to show you something.
Kunj led Twinkle to his bedroom. He showed her a huge picture on the wall of Usha and Manahor and in the middle, a cute little boy.
Kunj- My parents. They left me alone in this world when I was 10. From then, I was alone in this cruel world. No one was by me. Until I met you.
Kunj held Twinkle’s hand.
Kunj- Twinkle, I love you.
Twinkle was shocked. She took her hand away.
Twinkle- No Kunj how can you love me? I’m not hot or appealing. I’m not the perfect girl for you.
Kunj- Twinkle, u are beautiful. Ur personality makes you beautiful I didn’t look at you body and fall in love with you. I fell in love with ur heart. When I met you, I realized that there is someone with me. I am not alone anymore.
Twinkle looks at Kunj lovingly. She wipes away the tears from his eyes and suddenly hugs him.
Twinkle- U are not alone Kunj, I’m here with you. I love you Kunj.
Kunj smiles as he hugs her tighter, pulling her closer towards himself. In a matter of seconds, they melt in each other, forgetting about the world around them. Kunj traces his finger down Twinkle’s bare back as she shivers due to his touch. He picks her up and lays her on the bed. He takes her glasses off and lays on top of her.
Kunj- Twinkle, u are beautiful…
Asking permission with his eyes, Kunj looks into Twinkle’s beautiful brown eyes. Her eyes give him permission as Kunj leans down and captures her lips between his. The serenity of the situation takes over as Kunj traces his nose down Twinkle’s neck as Twinkle digs her nails into Kunj’s bare back. Kunj runs his hand through her hair, giving her the feeling of comfort. The weight of his body on hers and the contact of their skin send sparks through their bodies. They entangle their fingers together and cover themselves with blankets as the moon shines throughout the night. The next morning Twinkle wakes up in Kunj’s embrace and blushes. She takes the blanket, covering herself and gets dressed. After leaving a kiss on Kunj’s forehead, she bids him goodbye and leaves for her home. Upon reaching home, she sees her stepmom furiously waiting for her.
Mom- Where were u all night? Besharm! U deserve to die! U have no shame spending the night with a guy! U characterless girl. I will get rid of u today! U are getting married today.
Twinkle falls on her stepmom’s feet.
Twinkle- Please ma. Please don’t do this. I love Kunj. I can’t live without him.
The mom kicks Twinkle and she falls on the floor.
The mom pulls Twinkle by her hair and makes her stand. She pushes her and Twinkle lands on someone’s feet. She looks up to see a furious Kunj. Kunj makes her stand and clenches his fists while his eyes turn blood red.
Mom- Look who came now!
She brings a stick.
Mom- This girl needs to be taught a lesson now.
The mom pulls Twinkle out from behind Kunj and raises the stick to hit her.
Twinkle- NAHII!!!!
Twinkle closes her eyes. After not feeling an impact, she opens her eyes to see Misha standing in front of her.
Misha turns towards Twinkle.
Misha- Go di…
Twinkle- Misha…
Misha- Yes go di. Please forgive me for everything. Go, go live ur life with ur love go.
Mom- Misha tu!
Misha- Mom just stop it!
Kunj holds Twinkle’s hand as they run out of the house and into the world, ready to start their new life together, hand in hand as the Pyar Tune Kya Kiya title song plays in the background.


So how was it? Kind of long right? Sorry. Please leave ur comments down below. Oh and rotten tomatoes zhor se maarna ok? Once again another happy birthday to Laddoo. Hope you have a wonderful day and may all ur wishes be fulfilled! ❤️

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  1. Mindblowing yaar…loved it

  2. Ommmmg Sara it was super…se…uper…..

  3. Zuha Fatima

    It was simply amazing! Hats off to you for such a wonderful one shot ?? well Ishu I have already wished u but once again happy birthday dear..

    Well Sara hi,
    We are interacting for the first time well I am Zuha, writer of “When Life gives you 100 reasons to cry_Show life that you have 1000 reasons to smile!!” And “U can fall in love many times…but it is not true always (twinj and twiraj )” also “twinj kind tashan e shaadi” if you get time do read them and if u write any FF do tell me 🙂

    Keep smiling 🙂 Always 🙂


    1. Ria

      She wrote Love Is Blind (My fav) and currently she’s writing I Hate You..It’s just the start. You can start reading it Zuha.

      Loads of love.?

      1. Zuha Fatima

        Thanks Ria! I will definitely catch up with the FF 🙂 love u??

      2. Sara28

        Aww thank you Ria! And yes zuha, I read ur ff “When life gives you…”. As Ria already stated, I wrote a ff called “Love Is Blind” please do check it out. Who knows, maybe u will like it. Currently I am writing one called “I Hate You”.

  4. Anam_sidhant

    It was awesome❤❤❤

  5. Ria

    Hey Sara,
    I’ll throw the rotten tomatoes at you bohot zor se.. why do you always tell that whatever you write is bad? Huh? Okay, Laddoo shouldn’t read this comment or else, she’ll tell look who’s talking!?

    Well, I loved this one, Okay? It was so nice. And, Misha’s sudden change at the end was great. I loved the story overall. Well, I know you forgot but, please for once check out your PM.

    Also, if this is long then what was my OS? A short fan fiction? Seriously? Okay, I’m telling you. This one was of an average OS length. Okay, you’ll be bored now so, here it ends.

    Loads of love.?

    1. Kruti

      Maine padh liya…..nd sacch mein not only ishu will tell that I will also tell
      Default settings wali ladki is questioning someone

      1. Sara28

        LOL ur absolutely right Kruti ?

  6. SIDMIN-Daamini

    Omg Sara……. it was ………. stupendous……. God knows kahaan se tumhe aise ideas aate hain …..loved it ……. superb…?? Keep writing such amazing ffs ????

  7. Loved it…Best part was when Misha turned in a positive character and saved Twinkle….Amazing :)..

  8. Ayeshakhanum11

    omg u know I got 440 volts jhatka after reading ur ff it was really heart touching

  9. Sujina

    sara…itsso beautiful
    loved it…
    n happy b’day ladoo
    love u…???

  10. Meeta

    That was just…..
    I really don’t have words.
    Matlab u write so well.
    Kaha chhupa ke rakha tha inna talent
    That title track is love.??
    Happiest birthday Partner.
    Love you both.?
    Spread Love.?

  11. Kritika14

    I loved this! I am so out of words. You write so beautifully! Also, even i love pyaar tune kya kiya! Hope to see your ff posted soon. Really waiting for it. Loves xx

  12. SidMin

    Loved it Sara 🙂 The story was so sweet 🙂

  13. Sara diiiii!!!!
    U took out time frm ur busy schedule for me?
    Awww….I love uu?????
    Trust me, this was soooo beaitiful!!!!!
    I loved this oh so much!
    And Twinkle’s character was so well portrayed….
    Thanku so much for the lovely surprise..
    Love u??
    Thanking everybody who wished me up there or would wish me

  14. So intense got tears in my eyes ??Amazing Mind-blowing fabulous ?????

  15. superb …….simply mind blowing
    its really so good to read
    loved it
    please do write more things like this

  16. Ayu

    Wow!! Shooo shweet!! Amazing comcept!!!❤️❤️❤️

  17. Anushka

    awsmmmmmmmm se bhi jyada wala awsm

  18. R.S.H.H.P

    Wow such a beautiful os dear loved it ☺☺☺???

  19. Kruti

    Hey sara the os was damn good yar….loved it

  20. Awesome os Sara
    Loved it

  21. Sayeeda

    OMG …..Sara ….this OS is the best one I read till date…..
    Woooowwww yrrrr u nailed it ….u always make me speechless through ur writing skills …..
    Thanks for this amazing OS ……

    Love you???

  22. Ritzi

    Oh damn awesome…. Loved it yaar…no words ….I swear I m cursing myself dueack of words….muah!

  23. Amazing os.. I legit loved it.. one of the best I’ve read till date.. the sudden change in misha’s behaviour was surprising.. loved how kunj supported twinkle.. ❤❤❤

  24. Rashiverma2199

    Wow …..lovely is….amazing

  25. Fan

    Awesome os!!!

  26. It was an amazing beautiful awesome cute romantic.. ……..ab words ki kami ho gayi??

    Ha so. …………very nice episode
    I’m new here still………….very nicely written

  27. Omg sara outstanding yrr….
    Loved it vry much …
    I must say u r n amazing writer…

  28. Romaisha

    Soooooo cuteee!!!!! Really cute!! Emotional and just damn sweet! Di u really create wonders in my life! Happy birthday to whom this treat was meant for! Laddoo di ??
    Loads of love to both of you 🙂 ?

  29. dreamer...arundhati

    Sara no words… Beautiful

  30. Baby

    Ohhhh god sara sooooo sweet n cute love stry emotional n full of passion amazing luvd it 2 core
    Laddooo happy birthday belated I m sooo sry I m late….luv u kods sara beautiful os…

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