pyar ki yeh ek kahaani……(krpkab and edkv) Ep 2

Hey guys……I am so happy that you all liked my ff …….so I will answer all your questions at the end of today’s ff and I have a lot to tell you…..today I will introduce some other characters also so let’s start….

Characters….
Pushkar-same relationship as in serial…

Here chacha and chachi of shravu will be mama and Mami of suman..that means mama and Mami of suman are not suman’s relatives….in my ff they will be characterized as chacha and chachi of shravan…..and pushkar will be this chacha and chachi’s son…..

Bejoy and Asha will be suman’s mama and Mami….they have a daughter named Elena….

Lalaji and chachi of edkv will be characterized as nithin(duos dad) elder brother and wife…..

Other non important characters…..

Recap of the previous episode…..
Character sketch
Sumo and sona conversation
Sumo and shravan….

Episode 2……..

Oye shravu ke bache…..ruk…
Shravan was running and entered in the class XI A……and sat on his seat….he gave a hi if with his other friends and his relative pushkar..till that time sumo also entered in the class….
In front of her!!!!!!!
Hitler….
I mean Hitler mam Femina….
(As for femina miss and sumo relationship, they are like the like poles is a magnet…they always repel…..unki kabhi banti hi nahi this….whereas for shravan,he was the pet of miss as he is the most brilliant student in the class….)
Sumo in mind-ab ye Hitler Kaha she tapak aayi….had bar mere raste ke beech me kadi ho.jathi hi…. πŸ™
Femina miss(in English): suman ……what is all this?I have already told you not to run like this…
Sumo-but mam shravan was also running….
Femima-so what…are you a boy to run like boys…be like a girl..when your parents come for PTA I will surely tell them about you……
Shravan-mam I am sorry to speak to you in this way but I have to…you can not discriminate between girls and boys..this is not fair and our constitution has also said the same….you are a history and civics teacher and you yourself told us about no discrimination …..I am sorry to tell you but it was me who told sumo to run after me….
Femina mam-as she fully trusted shravan she told that yes I myself is wrong….I am sorry sumo for scolding you…you can go to your seat…..
Sumo-looking at shravan and saying to miss…..thank you mam….
So for shaman scenes are finished for now and the scene changes to XII B (sona’s class)
Sona-mam I have collected all the books and written the attendance also….
Liby mam-oh thank you my dear…(liby mam is the oppoait character of femina miss…mam is a sweet and jolly woman and loves all her children….)

***now I will be introducing dev*** πŸ™‚

Liby mam-so children today I will be introducing a student who studied in our school and has become a very successful bussiness tycoon at a very young age 22…he is none other than Mr.Dev Dixit…..

In that time dev entered….

He came and sat on the seat….

Liby mam-thankyou dev for coming ….now I request sonakshi to come and give flowers to dev..
Sona-hay mere bhagwannn….mai kya karu…time unhe flowers de hi deti hu….and she took the bouquet of flowers and gave it to dev…..
Dev instantly loved her beauty…..even in uniform she looks like a beautiful charming girl like his sisters………but he cannot consider her. as my sister….something else….whatever…..
Dev-hello my friends. I am dev..dev dixit….I have studied in this school from my 5th onwards….(then he told about his family,and his mother’s hard work to make him successful in life…etc)
Sona(in mind)-ye mister dev kya bak back kar rage he….me bore ho gay I hoo….

Dev completed his words and sat down on his seat….
Liby mam-thankyou dev….now I have a news for everyone…a good news….dev is going to give you classes from today about which career you should choose…how to pass in your exams etc….now dev has to go to his office so let’s windup this program…..
So dev went….

Precap:dev comes to school….shaman friendship scenes….and…a secret…

I hope you all feel it is a long episode…I am on this for more than 90 minutes….I am feeling really restless so let’s end this episode. For now….

And a big thanks to
Aaru
Princess
Deeptanu
Manya
Ibtesam
Fatimagulesarfraz
Maleeha
Erika
Sons
Ariana
For liking my fan fiction and commenting….a big thanks to all other silent readers.for loving my ff…..
Now I will be answering all your questions ….
Shaman is introduced but dev in devakshi….
Now I hope for this question you will get a answer in this episode…
Why last episode was short?
As I wrote character sketch and the episode 1 together I wrote a short episode….
Pls write longer episodes…
This one is a longer one and I will write long episodes from now on…
Erina’s question that I am new…
Yes,I am a new person but I was a silent reader for about from 6 months….I wanted to write ff like others so I took membership in this site..

And I want to ask a thing to you all…….
Should I explain each and everything in this fan fiction/ hive details for specific important things/go with a bit speed in this ff … pls comment down below….
Critisicm accepted and I think it will help me improve my story. ….
Pls comment all your doubts and I will clear it as soon as possible ….
Till then bye

With love,
Aarion.
πŸ™‚

21 comments

  1. Avni14

    |Registered Member

    Awesome!! Amazing!! Wonderful!! Lovely!! Im.. out.. of.. WORDS!! ( I have the tiniest dictionary EVER) But seriously this was so amazing, Waiting for the next one!! Upload fast!!

  2. Ariana

    |Registered Member

    Aww dear u r soo sweet u mentioned all of our names, nd personally thanked us. Really nice of u. The epi was beautiful. The way Shravan stood for Sumo!! Awwww!!! Just loved it. Sona seems to have 0 interest on dev. Lol!! Pls post next part soon.
    Loads of love

  3. Aarion

    |Author

    Hey everyone….hope you like my story….please comment the answer of my question which I have written at the end of the ff…..only then I can write the next episode…..the highest majority answer would be taken..if you are not a registered member of telly updates also no worries….pls pls pls comment….
    With loads of love,
    Aarion…

  4. Ria rs

    Awesome,the best,love it………..no words……pls make every thing in detail….upload the episode as soon as possible..

  5. sona

    Nice one…😊😊😊😊
    As the introπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜ŠπŸ˜ŠπŸ˜Š
    Dev become a business tycoon..such an young age…😊😊😊
    Super yaar..πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜†πŸ˜†
    And my answer for ur question…
    Dear..I don’t have any prblm…if its lengthy..or short..type..but I want one thing..that u go with ur comfort..that..means..according to ur school..exams…u will get time to write ff so..if u thnk…lengthening..will never effect in future..thn u can..otherwise..make it short only..okOK.😊😊

  6. Erina

    Ya dear plzzz don’t move in speed bcse we want to feel nd leave it also. So in my opinion agar story detailed me ho to jyada interesting lgti hai kyuki aap usko sirf padh hi nhi feel v krte ho aur kahani k sth sth aap usko jeene v lgte ho. So i love to go with detailed one. Let see what others want?????

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