PYAR KA DARD HAI (EPISODE 1)

this is your athira with the 1st episode thanks for the previous comments on previous ff.. sorry for this long delay.. I had changed a bit of story so was the late…. I hope you will like it also like other ff… hope you let me know… and also thanks for silent readers also….

a big house is shown, and it was night time…. the house is decorated with flowers and lights.. then the name plate is shown written ‘GADODIA MANSION’. inside the house all are very happy and doing works…

then janki is shown with a plate of mehendi… “arrey, where’s ragini?” she asked a girl… “just a few minutes, aunty… she will come down in a while” the Girl said… “say to her to be fast the auspicious time will run out” janki said and walks away… while the girl nodded to her, smiling…

the girl come into ragini’s room… ragini’s eyes are shown… she’s applying kaajjal on her eyes and then maskara.. “be fast, ragini… how much you’ll take?” the girl asked frustrated… “what, poonam? it’s my mehendi function… don’t I want me to be perfect and gorgeous? huh?” she turned and her face is shown… “it’s 15th times that you’re saying this dialogue, fast” poonam point out… ragini looked… “yes, huh? wait” ragini said and aplied lipstick on her lips… she smiles.. “how am I looking?” ragini asked… “looking beautiful only” poonam rolled her eyes… ragini noticed it… “careful… if your eyes come out” ragini said and puts her bangles… “shall we go?” poonam asked… “hmmm, okay” Ragini sais and stands up… poonam sighed relieved… Ragini and poonam walks out and then down…

“the bride is come out to apply mehendi at last” a voice said… ragini looked down smiling… poonam while laughs… the guests looked at her… janki looked at her and smiles… “my child always beautiful” she said…

Ragini sat on a sofa… while the mehendi designer came to her and sat beside her… “show your hand” the girl instructed… ragini showed her hand and the girl put mehendi on…

on the other side, a little apartment is shown… there were dresses all over the places, in a big mess… a girl came to the house and presses the calling bell… there were no reply… she got confused.. “what he is up to?” she bites her nail and touched the door …it creaked open… she opened it and looked in…she was shocked to see the place was mess… “laksh, call the police” the girl yells…

“there is no need for that” a man packing his bag… the girl looked at him… “it’s important… someone break into your house” the girl said… Laksh looked at her… “you’re wrong… it’s ours” he said and came to her… the girl smiles at him… “I’m going to my hometown for my cousin wedding, swara… it’ll be a week to come” he said.. “what? is that what you said a surprise?” swara asked… Laksh looked at her.. “yes” Laksh said…

he goes away to pack his bag… “and to say about our relationship and to marry you” Laksh smiles… swara rushes beside him… “true?” she asked… Laksh nodded… swara got excited… “it’s means, we’ll have marriage and we’ll live together?” swara said and helps him to pack his bag… “don’t get over thinking” Laksh said… swara look on at him and glares at him…

it’s in the airport, Laksh and swara came to airport… they waited for announcement… “I’ll miss you for a week” swara said….”me too” Laksh said… “when you got there… don’t ever think to look at other girl… even your cousin, okay?” swara asked, while pointing her finger at Laksh… “okay, babe” Laksh said….”don’t call me babe… I just hate that word” swara said… “why? because it was called ayush the man who you hate?” Laksh said… “don’t say that, he was very big head ache to me” swara said and grabs her head… Laksh laughs…

the announcement came… Laksh and swara hears it… “uffo, the time came” swara said frustrated… “don’t worry… it’s just a one week… on that while, we’ll contact each every day, okay?” Laksh asked… “okay, I’ll miss you” swara said and hugs him… Laksh hugged back… “miss you too” he departed from there after breaking their hug… Laksh walked away while swara waved at him…

“what’s the groom name? and what I should write?” the girl asked… ragini looked on… “what’s the point to ask? write sanskar” poonam said.. “yes” ragini said… the girl writes sanskar… Ragini looked at the name…

on the other side, a boy is shown….he was putting buttons on his sherwani and right it… he gets a call… “hello, mom?” he said… “when will you come… the mehendi function had been started” a sujata said… “mom, what’s the hurry? it’s girl’s function… why I would come there early?” the man said… “have you lost your brain.. even if it’s for girls, groom should be here, Sanskar” sujata said… Laksh took his car key… “okay, mom… I’ll be there in about 15 minutes” sanskar said… “okay… be fast and reach” sujata said hanged the phone… sujata walks away… Sanskar comes to his car and drives..

AP is shown, in the mehendi function… janki came to her… “where is Laksh, bhabhi?” janki asked… “he’ll reach here on night” AP said.. “okay” janki said… AP got a call… she attended it… “hello?” she said…

Laksh was shown, out of the airport with his luggage…”mom, I’ve reached… where is the car?” he asked… “you have reached? but you said you’ll reach late?” AP said… “the plane came fast” Laksh said… “oh, okay.. wait there… I’ll send a car” AP said… “there is no need for that… I’ll take a taxi and come” Laksh said… “okay” AP said… Laksh hang the phone down and waited for taxi…

janki looked at AP… “he has reached… he’ll be here in about half in hour” AP said.. “okay, Ragini has been waiting for his arrival” janki said…”what so special?” AP asked… “don’t know the matter… I’ll go and inform her..” janki said and walk away…

ragini has finished her mehendi and is waiting for it to dry fully… janki came to her.. “Laksh has reached here… he’ll be here in half in hour.. are you happy?” janki asked… “oh, yes, huh? yes, I’m happy” ragini said and smiles… “but you never said what’s the matter for waiting?” janki raised her eyebrows… “it’s secret” ragini said… janki looked on and shaked her head… ragini laughs…. janki walks away…

Sanskar reaches ragini’s house… he came in and looked around… Ragini notice him… Sanskar also noticed… “hi” ragini waved… “hi” Sanskar waved back… ragini shows her mehendi at him… “how is it?” she signed at him… “super” he said while signing at her… Ragini smiles…

PRECAP = LAKSH REACHED GADODIA MANSION… RAGINI LOOKED AT HIM AND SMILES…

I hope you like it… let me know your review… bad or good, comments are welcome… tq… bye…

24 comments

  1. Aleena

    Wow very interesting… lovely part each and every scene was so good😍😍😍 except that swa lak part 😁😁

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