PYAAR TUNE KYA KIYA (RAGLAK) MAHA EPISODE (20 +21 )

Hey guys riya here and this the next maha episode hope u all will like it –

RECAP- LAKSH UNWELL, RAGLAK EMOTINAL TALK, PREPARATION 4 SWALAK ENGAGEMENT, ADHIRAJ ‘S ENTRY, AP AND DP SHOCK,ADHIRAJ MISSBEHAVE WITH RAGINI ,ADHIRAJ AND LAKSH FIGHT,RAGINI SHOOT FROM GUN …………………………….

Episode start with ragini sitting on her knees lifeless. drops of blood were clearly visible on her face ,she was like a statue no emotions, no expression, no tears ,and no sorrow ,then slowly slowly she stood up and went near cliff where laksh was lying unconsiously with pool of blood sarrounding his body ,again she fell on her knees and shout with all stength-

RAGINI- lakhhhhhhh !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Song sart playing in BG-

……………….TU MUJHE CHHOD JAAYE
………………………..YE NAHI HO SAKTA ………..SAATHIYA…………….

Tears slowly skipped from her eyes

MERI BAATON MEIN TERA ZIKR SADAA
MERI YAAD MEIN TERI FIKR SADAA
MAIN JO BHI HOON TUM HI TO HO
MUJHE TUM SE MILLI APNI ADAA……………………….

Then she hold his head and place it on her lap then she start crying hard with sooooooo much of noice-

RAGINI(sobbing )- laksh !!! laksh !!!! open ur eyes plz g,,,,et up !!! u can’t leave ur ragini like…….ha haan…. this !!! u can’t leave ur LADO laksh !!!! ya laksh i…..i ammm …. ur lado laksh ur LADO !!!!!!!!!!!

KYUNKI TUM HI HO AB TUM HI HO
ZINDAGI AB TUM HI HO
CHAIN BHI MERA DARD BHI
MERI AASHIQUI AB TUM HI HO………………………..

Listening his angels’s crying voice laksh slowly open his eyes ,it was hard 4 him to speak but still he was trying-

LAKSH- lado !!! my lado !!!

A painfull simile came on his face-

LAKSH- rag…ini do u kn…know i always ge…..get the feeling that ur my la…..lado and see i was ri8 !!!!

Ragini was only crying and was looking in his eyes –

TUM HI HO TUM HI HO
ARZ BHI MERA MARZ BHI
CHAIN BHI MERA DARD BHI
MERI AASHIQUI AB TUM HI HO……………..

LAKSH- Now i am happy that my ra…gini is my ,……….lado my lado !!!!!

Then AP and doctors came near them and then took laksh and make him to lay on the stretcher still they were looking at each other laksh was holding her hand tightly and was trying to capture her image 4 last time ,ragini was lost in his pure luv and his pain …………………………….

TERE LIYE HI JIYA MAIN
KHUD KO JO YUN DE DIYAHAI
TERI WAFA NE MUJHKO SAMBHALA
SAARE GHAMON KO DIL SE NIKAALA

(Still they were holding each other hand now camera is on laksh’s eyes which was full of luv 4 his lado and there was also the fear and pain of separation )

MAIN JO MIT BHI GAYA TO WAJOOD MERA
SADAA TUJH MEIN RAHE ZINDA ………………………………………..

Suddenly AP came between them and forcefully free ragini ‘s hand from laksh now all take laksh inside the midical van but still his were stuck on his angels face then he gave a painful simile to her here ragini fell on her kness-

KYUNKI TUM HI HO ABB TUM HI HO
KI…………. ZINDAGI ABB TUM HI HO
CHAIN BHI MERA DARD BHI
MERI AASHIQUI ABB TUM HI HO……………………………………….

All her sweet moment with laksh start revolving in her mind –

a) first meeting in temple

RAGINI- now what do u want ? haan !!

LAKSH- listen i was ……………

Before he could say more ragini ‘s foot slip and she fell on river …………

b) Their first hug at laksh’s welcome party-

Ragini ran from her place and hug him tightly with closed eyes laksh also hug her back both were lost in each other

c) Their first kiss when he save her from kiddnappers –

LAKSH- Now why r u crying ?? ur safe plz stop this

RAGINI- no let me cry !!!

LAKSH – will u stop crying or else ??

RAGINI- or else what ??

Before she could sense anything laksh put his lips on her and was kissing her softly both were lost in each other –

FLASHBACK ENDS………………………………

Ragini who was sitting on her kness simile bitterly a tear skipped from her eyes she shout with all her strength-

RAGINI- lakshhhhhhhhhh !!!!!!!!!

TUM HI HO,TUM HI HO
KARZ BHI MERA MARZ BHI
CHAIN BHI MERA DARD BHI
MERI AASHIQUI AB TUM HI HO……………………………

Here she was shattered completely suddenly AP came and hold her arm tightly due to that she stood up and then AP gave a tight slap on her face-

AP- U !!!!! I WILL NOT LEAVE U !!!!!!!!!!!! if anything will happen to laksh then remind me i will kill u now just wait and watch what will happen with u !!!

With this she leaves

Screen shift towards hospital were laksh was admitted his condition was so crictical ,doctors and maheswaris were tensed ,he was hurriedly admitted in icu ,when Doctor was about to enter the room DP fell on his leg and start pleeding-

DP- plz doc save my son he is my last hope !!! plz do some mirracle but safe my son !!!!

Then doc make him to stand

DOC- Listen mr maheswari ur son condition is so wrost ,the bullet has hitt him on his chest near his heart there is less chance of his survival but we haven’t losen our hope so just relax we will try our best !!!!!

With this he entered in icu leaving DP who was shattered completely

In the icu doctors were doing laksh’s operation

DOC- oh god !! his pulse rate is going low !!!

suddenly laksh start breathing heavily

DOC- nurse !!! nurse !!! fastly cover her mouth from oxgen mask !!!!!!!

Here ragini was sooo much restless ,she was feeling that someone is stabbing on her heart continously ,someone who is near her heart is going far away from him

RAGINI- no i can’t let this happen !!!! he can’t leave me !! if i am taking my breathe then he will also !!! IF RAGINI IS ALIVE THEN HIS LAKSH NEEDS TO BE ALIVE we r one !!! no one can separate us even not death !! i will save my life anyhow !!!

Then she took off her slipper and start running on the street with bare foot –
song start playing in BG-

DEVA SHREE GANESHA
DEVA SHREE GANESHA
DEVA SHREE GANESHA
DEVA SHREE GANESHA……………………..

JWALA SI JALTI HAI AANKON MEIN JISKE BHI
DIL MEIN TERA NAAM HAI
PARWAH HI KYA USKA AARAMBH
KAISA HAI AUR KAISA PARINAAM HAI…………………………

(ragini was running on the street with bare foot here doctors were doing laksh’s treament )

DHARTI AAMBAR SITAARE
USSKI NAZAARE UTTAAREIN
DARR BHI USS SE DARA RE
JISKI RAKHWALIYA RE
KARTA SAAYA TERA

DEVA SHREE GANESHA
DEVA SHREE GANESHA
DEVA SHREE GANESHA

(Ragini reach near the SIDHI VINAYAK TEMPLE one of famous temple of lord ganesha in mumbai ,her foot were bleeding badly but still with lots of pain and tears in her eyes she start climbing the stair by the help of her kness )

HO…………………..
TERI BHAKTI KA VARDAAN HAIN
JO KAMAYE WO DHANWAAN HAI
BIN KINARE KI KASHTI HAI WOH
DEVA TUJH SE JO ANJAN HAIN

(Screen shift towards crime place where laksh and adhiraj both were shooted, cops arrived their and was doing their investigation then they found a gun from which ragini has shooted suddenly they notice adhiraj dead body which was lying on the other side of cliff .it was clearly visible that someone has shot him on his forehead by making a small hole all open their mouth in shock )

YUN TTO MOOSHAK SAWARI TERI
SAB PE HAI PEHREDARI TERI
PAAP KI AANDHIYAN NA KAHA
KHABHI JOYTI NA HAARI TERI

(Ragini entered the temple and was looking at ganesha ‘s idol with a ray of hope )

APNI TAQDEER KA WOH KHUD SIKANDER HUAA RE
BHOOL KE YEH JAHAAN RE
KISKI SILIEN YE HAARE
SAATH PAYA TERA

DEVA SHREE GANESHA
DEVA SHREE GANESHA
DEVA SHREE GANESHA

(Laksh’s pulse rate was getting low and he was breathing heavily ,doctors were so tensed to what to do ? here ragini raised her hand towards ganesha as like a beggar who is asking her love ‘s life )

HO TERI DHULI KA TEEKA KIYA
DEVA JO BHAKT TERA JIYE
USSEY AMRIT KA HAI MOH KYA
HASS KE VISH KA VO PYAALA PIYE

TERI MAHIMA KE CHHAYA TALE
KAAL KE RATH KA PAHIYA CHAALE
EK CHINGARI PRATISHODH SE
KHADI RAVAAN KI LANKA JAALE

( ragini stood up with gr8 difficulty as her knees and legs were bleeding then she took aarti’s plate on her hand and start doing ganesha’s arti here laksh’s treatment was going on )

SHATRUO’N KI QATAAREIN IK AKELE SE HAARE
KANN BHI PARVAT HUA RE
SHLOK BAN KE JAHAAN RE
NAAM AAYA TERA HEY

DEVA SHREE GANESHA
DEVA SHREE GANESHA
DEVA SHREE GANESHA

(Screen shift towards a cabin where group of officers were disscussing

COP 1- How can this possible ? how can anyone shot two person at a same time ?

COP 2- eactly ??

COP 3- but sir adhiraj and laksh both were shoted from a same gun and from a same bullet !!!!! and the fact is it is not from ragini’s gun !!!!!!

ALL- what ???

GANPATI BAPPA MORYYA !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

TWAMEVA MATA CHA PITA TWAMEVA
TWAMEVA BANDHU SAKHA TWAMEVA

(In the temple ragini was doing aarti suddenly a vermillion plate fall on her head and all the vermillion scatterd on her maang she bacame numb at that moment )

TWAMEVA VIDYA DRAVINAM TWAMEVA
TWAMEVA SARVAM MUM DEVA DEVA

(Looking at all this a priest simile he came near towards her and then place his one of hand on her head and said

PRIEST- may this vermillion always adorn ur forehead !!!! god bless u !!!

Ragini was expressionless at that moment she was totally numb then she took a burning camphor on her plam and start doing ganesha’s arti here in icu doctors were now done with his operation)

ACHUTAM KESHVAM RAMA NARAYANAM
KRISHNA DAMODARAM VASUDEVAM HARIM (she was doing aarti with full rage here laksh start opening his eyes slowly )
SRIDHARAM MAAHAVAM GOPIKA VALLABHAM
JANKI NAAYAKAM RAMACHANDRAM BAAJE

HARE RAM HARE RAM
RAM RAM HARE HARE HARE (Laksh open his eyes slowly here ragini was about to lose her balance )

HARE KRISHNA HARE KRISHNA
KRISHNA KRISHANA HARE HARE !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Suddenly ragini loses her balance and fall on floor unconsiously
Episode end on ragini’s unconsious state while laksh opening his eyes………………………………..

PRECAP- …………..DE RAHA HAI KOI MAHESWARI PARIVAR MEIN SAJEESHION KO ANJAAM (someone in maheswari family is doing conspiracy )
…………………………………….KAR RAHA HAI KOI RISHTO KA KHOON (someone is doing murder of all relations )

……………………..SHAK KE GHERE MEIN HAIN APNE YA PHIR HAI KOI AUR ( doubt is on family member or else someone from outside doing all this )

Credit to: riya kapoor

50 comments

  1. Diya

    Amazing Riya, You made me cry today in this episode. Loved it. You wrote it so well that every scene was visible in my mind. Hats off to you dear. Amazing episode. Love you

  2. Plz tell na what is ap planning…. Hope ragini and laksh get well soon …… Plz unfold the mystery soon….. I think this mystery linked with raglak and they are main in that conspiracy…..

  3. Dafsi

    Awesome as usual omg I have no words to express riya you have given a clear Image of each incident loved it

  4. Sofia

    ur writing is just awesome. i love ur simple yet beautiful writing skills.
    Oh ya, i am a silent reader of ur ff. Nice plot <3

  5. Superb work riya.this is my favourite raglak ff & I love raglak very much in your ff specialy laksh’s charactor.you nailed it dear.update next part soon

  6. Solai

    Hai! I guess u have forgotten me. I am the one who requested u 2 things. Ty infinitive times for accepted & replied me. Sorry as now only I’ve found ur last 2 parts eventhough I searched regularly. As usual I’ve lack of words to either for praising u or appreciating ur ff. Love u & ur ff. Hope my fav raglak’ll be united by their love with ur awesome writing. Sorry for late and bad long comment.

    • Thanx solai 4 ur lovely comment, ur comment amazed me always i am glad that u find some talent in this stupid creature !!!! and luv u tooo dear !!!!

  7. Prateeksha

    I’m very sorry siso for late reply. I had some network problems. What to say yaar amazing? Wonderful? Awesome? I can’t find the exact words. Now please accept me as your number one fan. Please pretty please. Love you a lot siso.

    • awww siso u know how much i was waiting ur comment ?? ur soooooooo special to me thanx a lot siso luv u from my heart !!! and yah i am also one of the biggest fan of urs ff !!!!

      • Prateeksha

        You are also very special to me sis. I’m very lucky to have a sis like you. Love you to the core ????

  8. Prateeksha

    Sry siso for late reply. I had some network problems. As far today’s episode concerned what to say? Awesome? Wonderful? Amazing?. I can’t find the right word. Please accept me as your number one fan. Pretty please. Love you a lot ☺

  9. Ruhani

    Omg I’m speechless u r such a fantastic writer dr.. Seriously hats off to u I don’t have words to describe… It was really touching n emotional yr… Plz update the nxt part as soon as possible..

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