Pyaar toh hona hi tha – Avneil part 7

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Avni is let free after warning from Principal… She enters d class wid a heavy heart. ..n is all teary eyed….since she never faced anything like dis bfr…

Neil-(seeing Avni)- I shud be happy but Y m I rather feeling upset??Y m I not able to see her like dat?? Y God y!!!?

(Neil feels extremely bad seeing Avni sad..but unaware of his feelings he chucks d matter… )

Few days later,At college….

Prof Rajat- Class, I hv a great news for u.. Clg is planning a forest camp to Rashigarh…. since dis is ur final year… I want everyone to be a part of it….

(Students rejoice in joy hearing to d news…..)

DAY OF COLLEGE PICNIC/CAMP….

(In d picnic bus)..
Everyone busy discussing bout d fun dey r gonna hv at d camp… Neil n Daksh discussing something… when Avni, Siddhi n Ali enters into d bus…
Miss Malini n Rajat advise d students to b careful n not lose coordinatn since it’s a jungle area…n could be risky… Neil looks at Avni who z constantly ignoring him after dat day…

Neil- Yaar Daksh …. Nakchadi is really upset on me… Aise ignore kregi toh kese chalega… Panga lene m maza nai aayega na…?

Daksh- Bhai, U r jus impossible!!
Students r busy playing Antakshri….Neil gets up n announces…

Neil- Guys… It’s getting boring….Itna fika nai chalega… Let’s hv some fun added to it….
I hope u all Kno abt d game *passing d parcel*… So, let’s play dat… 2 groups r made… Avni’s group…n Neil’s group…

Avni- Guys m not interested… U guys can carry on…

Neil- Yes guys, she is right… Anyway, she u would have lost d game…. it’s kinda challenging… not fr ppl lyk u…

Ali- Enough Neil, Avni will play…

Avni- But Ali… He z jus…

Ali- Avni… for my sake…n holds Avni’s hands….Plz Avni… For me… say yes…

Avni-Ohk… m ready …. n she smiles…

Neil feels jealous seeing Ali holding Avni’s hands…

Siddhi- Guys… I shall play d host… I’ll play d music…Wherever it stop.. it will be checked who has d parcel ..n he/she has to perform d dare dat will b alloted…

So… Game begins… Fst it’s Daksh’s turn… He z asked to enact Deepika padukone’s *Ek chutki sindoor*…. he does…n everyone rolls out laughing… Then it’s Arun from Avni’s team… he z asked to do *Naagin* dance…Again ppl burst out laughing… Then it was Neil’s turn… He was asked to propose d most cutest gul according to him in his class…
Neil went ahead n stands near Avni… Avni was clueless…She was showing fake irritation on her face …but was getting butterflies in her tummy..

Neil- Nakchadiii… Would u mind if I say u… dat…

Avni-Neil ….Dun u dare… U…jus …

Neil- Listen to me Avni…holds her hands… goes close to her …looks in her eyes..n says… U r blocking my view …n path both… Excuse me a bit…
And he walks past Avni…n proposes Another girl, Luci… just to add to Avni’s irritation….

Everyone laughs since Avni is highly trolled….

Neil- Hey Luci, U look terrific…Such ravishing look u posses… Ur smile…. one in a Million …. Ur eyes…(He says all day thinking about Avni’s features)….Lastly…. I love u… *winks*… he goes close to Luci n whispers…(dun take it seriously…I was jus doing d dare… I Kno u hv a bf..)…

Luci-I Kno Neil…Ur such a sweetheart…

But obviously… no one can hear dat…n to everyone it looks like Neil gave a peck on Luci’s cheek…

Avni is burning wid jealousy…
Avni- Here too… Moron… Can never change… ugh….

She is unable to control her frustration over dis..n goes to get her wafers.. D bus gets a jerk..n Avni was about to fall… when Neil holds her… n Ali n Everyone watches d scene…
Neil saying…

Neil- Careful Nakchadi… Y do u everytym slip around…

Avni- What?? Wat did u say…

Neil-I said SLIP…not SLEEP…??….n he lets her go…

Avni Starts munching on her wafers… recalling Neil holding Luci’s hands..

Ali- Avni… Have it slowly…Wafers r not running away…??

Avni-Uhmm yea.. ohk.. ?
Listen … we have to win this game…else dat nonsense Neil will keep eating my head…u get it??U r wid me right..?

Ali- Yes Avni …. dun wry… I m always wid u… I will never let u go…

Avni- What!!

Ali- I mean.. I will never let you​ lose…we shall win…?

Then Ali’s turn…He is asked to say something about his dream girl… He describes abt Avni trying to drop a hint dat he likes her a lot..widout taking hd her name… Avni not does und…but Neil gets hint n feels weird…Now d scores r equal at both d ends… Finally only Avni left… her mark will decide as to which team will win d game…..

Neil asks Daksh…to replace her dare..chit…so as to make it difficult fr her to win….

Avni gets d dare…to kiss d cutest boy she finds..in d bus!!

Avni is shocked seeing her dare….

So… dats all fr today!!
Will Avni complete her dare… will she win??? Stay updated to know ….

Precap-Avni misunderstands Neil to be father of Luci’s child

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22 Comments
  1. Its jst an amazing part… wowsome..
    u write amazingly… Neil getting jealous n Avni… dey bth r jst wow… cant wait fr more ? ?
    continue fast

  2. It’s really awesome yaaar…plz continue..Neil n avni both are jealous..very nice story..

  3. Nupurbose

    Thanks Kash… ?

  4. Nupurbose

    Guna cotton, thanks dear?

  5. omg luv post next update soon

  6. Really excited to find out what happens next. Great story writing so far. Congo.

  7. Really very excited for next update
    today episode was awesome .show some more jealousy of neel .
    yaa waiting for another episode ..
    plz update longer episode

  8. Seperb re..
    Plz update the next part soon.
    I am eagerly waiting to know what will happen next..?

  9. Nupurbose

    Sure… SHREYA…. ?

  10. Nupurbose

    Thanks Alia… Alright?

  11. Nupurbose

    Saswat… Thank u ?

  12. Nupurbose

    Thanks Archisha ?

  13. Nupurbose

    Ankita …. Thanks dear ?

  14. Sweetgirl7

    Update the next part. This one was interesting. And do clear her misunderstanding in the next part only

  15. Nupurbose

    hehhe… i will see… Thank u soooo much fr suggesting Sweetgirl7…??

  16. Very nice.I was literally enjoying reading it.hope the misunderstanding brings these two closer.I can’t see Avneil separated.you are so good writer I would like to request you to write another ff if you have time on avneil.don’t make us wait and update soon

  17. Pritiyadav

    Nice one ,continue it

  18. Nupurbose

    Ofcourse Ananya… Misunderstanding is what makes a relationship stronger…. Until now Avni is not aware of Neil’s loving side… She has jus seen him flirting…. So after misunderstanding only she will see a New Neil… N u guys will luv it… M sure!!?

  19. Nupurbose

    Thank u pritiyadav?

  20. Kya twist hai????

  21. Nupurbose

    Hehhe… Thanks Suchismita ?

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