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Pyaar toh hona hi tha-(Avneil) Part-1

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Hey peeps!! I am new to dis blog… I read some fan fictions and was really amazed seeing the lovely storylines… So, thought of writing one… Hope u guys like it….
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So… The story revolves around d very bubbly n lively character Avnii who’s deprived of all d happiness dat a child requires and is shown as a gul totally into studies unlike d girl next door character…. And she gets affection n love from her mother Neela( her step mom)…
Ashish Mehta is Avni’s dad who is bit strict yet extremely loving towards his daughter… he prefers staying out of d country most of d tym for his work matters…
Neil is d male protagonist who is shown as d most happening and sought after guy in Avni’s college….
Ali… Avni’s best buddy who is a character with grey shades… but is overprotective towards Avnii..
So… The story begins at Avni’s house… where Neela is preparing breakfast for her..

Neela- Avniii… Avnii… Beta have ur breakfast… I have made ur fav Dal makhani and kheer …
Avnii- Maa… I am getting late for college… L have jus a bite.. from ur hands…
Neela- *smiles* Ohk…here have dis… n makes her eat with her own hands….
Avnii- Uhmm.. Wowww… It’s yummy… oohk mom I gtg now… I hv to rush… else dat professor will kill me…
Neela-Ohk….Take care … And have something on d way…
Avnii- Ok… bye…runs…n den returns back… kisses Neela on d cheeks…runs again…

Neela- *smiles*..Dis gul will never change… She has had all d worst times in her childhood… Faced d death of her mother… I hope she finds someone who’s worthy of her love… makes her understand d meaning of love… My bachchi deserves all d happiness… 😊

(Scene at college)
Siddhi- Avni, Did u complete d presentation… dat Malini mam had allotted to us a week bfr…
Avnii- No, It’s halfway complt… m gonna cmplt d whole by tomorrow….
Siddhi- Ohk.. Bdw, where’s Ali?
Avni- Dat bhukkad must be in d canteen…
Siddhi- I see… Well…I … I… I…
Avnii- What happened??? y u stammering???
Siddhi- Luk behind… My jigar da tukda …. d most cutest guy of clg… Neil Khanna is here…
Avni- Turns back… shows no expression… ( Hates Neil for his attitude)…and says… I dun find him gudlukn…
(Neil sees Avni n comes towards her)….
Neil- Hey miss??? sorry I forgot ur name..
Avni- Gud for u…
Neil-Whoa dat was rude…
Avni- Luk… am getting late for my class… get away from my way…
Neil- (Thinks..I lyk hr attitude… but have to break her attitude….teach her a lesson)… Well… sure….
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So..dats fr today…. how will love evolve between Dem… stay tuned to Kno more…

24 Comments
  1. will you post it everyday.. other ff writers donot post everyday.. hope u will post everyday.. its nice but write lil more.. looks beautifull

  2. Woww.. superb story line… plzz continue soon… 😍

  3. waiting for Next

    1. Nupurbose

      Thanks Kash… 😊

  4. Nupurbose

    thanks adi 😊

  5. Nupurbose

    Yes Shehrish… I will post everyday!! I have already posted d second part… Hope it’s updated soon… thanks for commenting😁

  6. Woooww…
    Its really sound interesting…
    Plzzz continue soon..
    Waiting for the next…😊

  7. Wow superb my mastermind 😍My drama queen😘😘eagerly Waiting fr d nxt episode 😍😍😍

  8. Nupurbose

    Thanks Suchismita and Ankita… Second part will be updated by 11 pm… keep supporting guys… luv u

  9. Shibani Behera

    Well..this is just awesome
    Quite impressive
    Loved this
    Eagerly waiting fr the 2nd part

  10. Superb😍😍…

  11. Kadambini jena

    Wow..beautiful re…gud going girl…eagerly waiting for the next one ☺

  12. Nupurbose

    Thanks Aish… I hope u will love the next part too

  13. Nupurbose

    Thanks Shibani… thanks a lot for supporting…Hope u like d next part too… stay tuned

  14. Nupurbose

    Thanks Kadambini… M glad u liked it… stay tuned fr d next part… 😊

  15. Good going. Dont go with the stereotypical hate turned love stories… I see potential in your writing. Do something unique with your storyline… So far it luks interesting. Lukn forward to more of it….. Well doneπŸ‘Œ

  16. Superb…carry on baby…

  17. Anuprava Routray

    Superb…carry on baby…

  18. Nupurbose

    I will try not to make it stereotypical … and it has a bit different storyline… It features teenage romance.. And hope u like d upcoming parts.. thanks fr d suggestion Saswat 😊

  19. Nupurbose

    Thanks Anuprava 😁

  20. Nupurbose

    The new episode … part 2 is already updated guys… read n comment… keep loving n supporting 😊

  21. Good work Nupur. I really like it 😍

  22. Nupurbose

    Read d next part… Purnima… N thank u fr supporting 😊

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