Pyaar toh hona hi tha-(Avneil) Part-1

Hey peeps!! I am new to dis blog… I read some fan fictions and was really amazed seeing the lovely storylines… So, thought of writing one… Hope u guys like it….
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So… The story revolves around d very bubbly n lively character Avnii who’s deprived of all d happiness dat a child requires and is shown as a gul totally into studies unlike d girl next door character…. And she gets affection n love from her mother Neela( her step mom)…
Ashish Mehta is Avni’s dad who is bit strict yet extremely loving towards his daughter… he prefers staying out of d country most of d tym for his work matters…
Neil is d male protagonist who is shown as d most happening and sought after guy in Avni’s college….
Ali… Avni’s best buddy who is a character with grey shades… but is overprotective towards Avnii..
So… The story begins at Avni’s house… where Neela is preparing breakfast for her..

Neela- Avniii… Avnii… Beta have ur breakfast… I have made ur fav Dal makhani and kheer …
Avnii- Maa… I am getting late for college… L have jus a bite.. from ur hands…
Neela- *smiles* Ohk…here have dis… n makes her eat with her own hands….
Avnii- Uhmm.. Wowww… It’s yummy… oohk mom I gtg now… I hv to rush… else dat professor will kill me…
Neela-Ohk….Take care … And have something on d way…
Avnii- Ok… bye…runs…n den returns back… kisses Neela on d cheeks…runs again…

Neela- *smiles*..Dis gul will never change… She has had all d worst times in her childhood… Faced d death of her mother… I hope she finds someone who’s worthy of her love… makes her understand d meaning of love… My bachchi deserves all d happiness… 😊

(Scene at college)
Siddhi- Avni, Did u complete d presentation… dat Malini mam had allotted to us a week bfr…
Avnii- No, It’s halfway complt… m gonna cmplt d whole by tomorrow….
Siddhi- Ohk.. Bdw, where’s Ali?
Avni- Dat bhukkad must be in d canteen…
Siddhi- I see… Well…I … I… I…
Avnii- What happened??? y u stammering???
Siddhi- Luk behind… My jigar da tukda …. d most cutest guy of clg… Neil Khanna is here…
Avni- Turns back… shows no expression… ( Hates Neil for his attitude)…and says… I dun find him gudlukn…
(Neil sees Avni n comes towards her)….
Neil- Hey miss??? sorry I forgot ur name..
Avni- Gud for u…
Neil-Whoa dat was rude…
Avni- Luk… am getting late for my class… get away from my way…
Neil- (Thinks..I lyk hr attitude… but have to break her attitude….teach her a lesson)… Well… sure….
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So..dats fr today…. how will love evolve between Dem… stay tuned to Kno more…

24 comments

  1. sehrish

    will you post it everyday.. other ff writers donot post everyday.. hope u will post everyday.. its nice but write lil more.. looks beautifull

  2. Nupurbose

    Nupurbose

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    Yes Shehrish… I will post everyday!! I have already posted d second part… Hope it’s updated soon… thanks for commenting😁

  3. Ankita Sahoo

    Woooww…
    Its really sound interesting…
    Plzzz continue soon..
    Waiting for the next…😊

  4. Suchismita

    Wow superb my mastermind 😍My drama queen😘😘eagerly Waiting fr d nxt episode 😍😍😍

  5. Shibani Behera

    Well..this is just awesome
    Quite impressive
    Loved this
    Eagerly waiting fr the 2nd part

  6. Saswat

    Good going. Dont go with the stereotypical hate turned love stories… I see potential in your writing. Do something unique with your storyline… So far it luks interesting. Lukn forward to more of it….. Well doneπŸ‘Œ

  7. Nupurbose

    Nupurbose

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    I will try not to make it stereotypical … and it has a bit different storyline… It features teenage romance.. And hope u like d upcoming parts.. thanks fr d suggestion Saswat 😊

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