PYAAR THODA HATKE (Intro)

HI, I have read many FFs and I know my is not as good as your FFs but I just want to try. They are a set of Love stories in a hatke way and the first story is taken from:
1YHM I have changed the name of ruhi to tara so please cooperate . its a love story so ther is only one villain so shagun and ashok are good and are happily married couple living with aadi . the main focus of the story is on tara.
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CHARACTERS
TARA(19): A TOMBOY . SHE IS MATURE BUT NEVER LIKE A GIRL . SHE LOVES HER MOTHER MORE THAN ANYONE IN THIS WORLD .
ARJUN(22): A LOCAL GOON WHO IS ALSO THE RIGHT HAND OF AN UNDERWORLD DON . HE IS AN ANGRY YOUNG MAN AND LOOKS A VILLINIOUS PERSON. HE HAS A TROUBLED CHILDHOOD .
ISHITA(43) : A GENTLE WOMAN WHO LOVES HER FAMILY VERY MUCH . SHE IS VERY KIND AND IS LOVED BY HER CHILDREN VERY MUCH.
ISHAN(6): TARA S YOUNGER BROTHER . HE IS CUTE ,INTELLIGENT AND A NAUGHTY BOY. HE ALSO LOVES IS FAMILY A LOT.
RAMAN(44): HE IS A TYPICAL FAMILY MAN AND LOVES HIS FAMILY.
UNDERWORLD DON BABU(27) : HE IS A BAD MAN AND KNOWS VERY WELL HOW TO MANUPULATE PEOPLE. HE STICKS TO HIS RULE.
AADI(24) : HE IS A LOVELY YOUNGSTER AND TARA S BROTHER .
SHAGUN(43): A GOOD LADY AT HEART BUT WAS DIFFERENT IN THE PAST , ISHITA CHANGED HER AND SHE S AADI S MOTHER.
ASHOK(44): A NORMAL BUISNUSSMAN.

Credit to: Piya

9 comments

  1. Aisha

    Story is gud but I want ruhi in the story not Tara plz n want to know is Tara (ruhi)in this story is ishita daughter n pllz change tara

  2. Niharika Ahmed

    Story is good but I think its more like Ye Wada Raha of Zee TV than YHM. In that case plz consider changing the characters’ name coz; when we hear Ishita & Raman ultimately we visualize DT & KP. So it would

  3. Niharika Ahmed

    Story is good but honestly; when we hear Ishita & Raman we ultimately visualize KP & DT & their chemistry. I think you should reconsider about the characters name. Story based on a tomboy & all other from YHM when the name of the protagonist isn’t even Ruhi, just doesn’t mesh well. I am extremely sorry if I’ve hurt you but this is just my opinion.

  4. Roma

    Hi piya dear, nice intro, all the best for future updates. ..plzzzz continue and post the first episode soon, love you loads

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