Pyaar mein sab QUBOOL HAI……Episode 2

hi guyzz…its meh patakha princess……i got less cmnts but still i am going to write fr the ppl who cmnted…..tysm for your cmnts……..do criticize…..nd tell me wether you ppl luv the plot or not……plz give me ideas for the ff……

recap:- zoya is happy abt her new skool and new bus…..

its a bright morning in bhopal…..the weather is friendly…..suddenly a voice is heard……

aapi: zoyaaaa…..uthi ho ya nahi…..zoyaa uth jao…i am going to murder u…….first day at skool…aur koi is larki ko dekho abi abhi admission mila hai…….kal tak excited thi skool jaoon gi frndz banaoongi…..pata nahi kitny frndz banaingy is ke…….zoya uth jaoo

jiju:- zoya uth jaa meri maa…is ghr main zalzala(earthquake) aa jaye ga……

aapi:- app hi ny ise bhigara hai(u have pampered her)

a girl is seen…with straight hairs and with side swept bangs…..wearing pant and shirt….as usual looking cut…

zoya:- allah miya wats wrng with you appi…..kiya hua aapi kyun chilaa rahi hoo…..galla (throat) bait jaye ga…..

aapi:- allah…kiya karoon main is larki ka…zoya it’s ur skool not any fashion show…..jaa ke kapry badal kar aao…..u are not going to wear pant and shirt…..its bhopal not america……go and wear some traditional dress…..i have kept red suit…..

zoya:- excatlly appi is not any fashion show…..keh meh jaa kar woh red suit pehnoon…..noo appi uss peh kitni embroidery hai….sorry appi….

appi:- app dekh rahy hain iss larki ko….ise kehye keh meri baat suny…..ise kahye keh ye jaa kar red suit pehny….

zoya:- no way….
appi:- yes way…
zoya:- no
appi:- yes
zoya:- no
appi:- yes
zoya:- no…..appi and jiju bye bye…main jaa rahi hoon skool…..she gives a peck on appi’s cheek and leaves……….

in the bus…..
as zoya steps in….ayaan is sitting on first seat….he sees zoya….zoya sees him and remember her banging with him(she had seen him but he could not see her)……
zoya passes by him and a girl offers her seat…zoya is sitting at the back of ayaan…she befriends with the girl…..zoya asks her…the girl replies and tells her naam is tanveer khan…

tanveer: wats your name….

zoya:- my name is zoya farooqui….tumhe pata hai tanveer…yeh jo larka hai na bara bura hai…..badtameez larka…kal giraya mujhe pata nahi ab aagy kiya kiya karay ga…..bilkul champo hai champo…..lagta hai kabhi baal nahi katwaye aur na hi kabhi sar dhoya hai…

ayaan listens this all…and says..

ayaan:- excuse me…..

zoya:- yes…kuch kaam hai…

ayyaan:- app ke baal kitny shiney hain…kya aapp ny oil lagaya hai….kya full bottle khatam kar di hai app ny dabur amla oil ki…..
well isi baat per aik shair arz kiya hai….

whole buss replies saying irshad irshad…..

zulfi zoya ki zulfoon main aisa khoya keh behoosh ho gaya……
zulfi zoya ki zulfoon main aisa khoya keh behoosh ho gaya……

jab hoosh main aaya toh bola :
zoyaa tumne kitny dinoo se sar nahi dhoya…..?? ( laughs)

whole bus enjoys and sayd wah wah….kya baat hai ayaan mian….

zoya get furious and says……

toh hum ny bhi arz kiya hai…..
whole bus says irshad irshad……

bus ke piche truck…truck ke piche lorry….
bus ke piche truck…truck ke piche lorry….

before going to skool you have to say sorry…..

whole bus enjoys zoya’s counter attack and says…wah wah….jeet liya dil zoya aap ny…

2 girls stands up and says:- zoya…hi we are nikhat and nuzhat…

nikhat:- i am in 12 grade….and u….

zoya:- i am in 8 grade…nd nuzhat in which grade are you….

nuzhat:- i am in 6 grade….nd bhaijaan…ap ko takkar dene ky liye iss bus ab koi hai…..kyun dosto hum ny sahi kaha naa….
the whole bus agrees….

zoya:- are you 2….this champoo’s sisters……pata nahi allah kiya kiya moojze(miracle) dekhata hai…..kahan yeh bandar (pointing towards ayaan) and kahaan tum doono behny u both are like gems…..nd yeah u….champoo say sorry ryt now…..

ayaan:- main aur srry….app kisi ghalat bandy ko keh rahi hain srry…..tumhein sry kehti hai meri jooti(shoes)

zoya:- bechari tumhari jooti (shoes)…lagta hai kabhi polish nahi kiya tumne app ny shoes ko……(the pattern of the shoes was like…it waz nvr polished…)

ayaan:- tum larkiyoon ko kya pata fashion kiya hota hai…..

zoya :- chalo mana hum larkiyoon ko fashion ka kuch nahi pata…but bandaroon (monkeys) ko bhi fashion ka kuch nahi pata…

ayaan:- don’t call me bandar…

zoya:- say sryy.

ayaan:- noo ways….

zoya:- yes ways….either say srry or bear me…..

ayaan:- mohtarma (madam)…maine aaj tak kabhi kisi ko srry nahi kaha….

zoya:- say sryy ryt nw….

ayaan:- nvr….

nuzhat:- bhaijaan…mujhe aik baat yaad aayi hai…yaad hai appko maine nikhat baji ki fav brand ka make up kharab kar diya tha…and maine kaha tha keh main baji ko bataoon gi…toh app ne mujhe srry kaha tha…nd maira moo (mouth) band kar wany ky luye app ny mujhe chocolate di thi…..yaad hai bhaijaan…

nikhat:- so mr. ayaan ahmed khan…woh lipstick app ne todi thi….i am not going to spare you….w8…..ajj ghr chalain gy to main tumhe bataoon gi

ayaan:- he started to bite his nails in fear and said……srry nikhat……nd you ms. nuzhat…main aapp ko nahi choorn ga…tumhein chocolate toh dee thi naa phir moo (mouth) kyun khola tum ne……

nuzhat:- sry bhaijaan….

ayaan turns around and…..

ayaan thinks: mashaallah…..kya hoor hai kya noor hai…..
(still thinking in mind)
well isi baat per aik shair arz kiya hai….
ayaan:- arz kiya hai….irshad….irshad…

na idhar ki na udhar ki, na sagar ki na meena ki…..
attitude to nirupa roy ka hai par jeans katrina ki…..

the bus arrives at skool and every1 get down and go to their respective classes….but zoya was confused abt her skool reception…..so she asked tanveer…

zoya:- tanveer kya tum mujhe reception tak chor doo gi plz….

tanveer:- of course zoya….come i will show you and haan in the break me, nikhat and nuzhat…..we will show you the skool….and evrything…and teachers as well…but what do you want…..

zoya:- tysm tanveer…i need to submit my documents….the transfer and character certificate….i got it from last skool…..its imp…..srry tanveer…plz tell me where is bookshop….i need to buy my books

tanveer:-….its there as well u will see accounts dept…beside there is label of bookshop…..i hope this much guidance will help you alot…

asad:- allah hafiz ammi…..main sary doc submit karwa doonga…and books bhi le loon ga…..khuda hafiz……

as zoya entered….asad entered frm opp side….they both clashed and the paper fell frm their hands and were scattered all around….zoya and asad both bent down to help each other..and were picking their papers when suddenly…their hands were touched……and they shared an eyelock…..

asad thinks:- i don’t knw her but still i don’t mind being her frnd……she is so beautiful…

zoya thinks:- he is so cute….he is helping me…..yesterday that champoo had banged into me but he ignored and went…..champoo kahin ka but ye to mairi help kar raha hai….so nice and humble person….

zoya and asad:- i am sorry…main dekh kar nahi chal raha/rahi…..tha/thi….

zoya:- assalam-o-alaikum….maira naam zoya hai…

asad:- walaikum-o-sakam….aur maira naam asad hai….aur mujhe app may koi intrest nahi hai…..

asad ignores and walks away….

zoya:- allah miya…..wats wrng with him…..mujhe ignore kiya iss ny….mujh jaisi patakha ko…..mujhe bhi is sy baat karny ki koi zaroorat nhai hai…lakin kitna cute hai woh…..she goes to reception and gives her docs….she is done with all accounts work….and she goes to her class smilingly and remembering her eyelock…suddenly she remembers asad ignorned her…says badtameez larka….

precap:- asya fight in bus…..and plz gve ideas..

hope u liked the epi….if there is any silent reader plz break ur silence and tell me abt the epi….
thnx

Credit to: Patakha Princess

14 comments

  1. Sanjana ( sanju)

    Awww!!!??such a wonnderfulll episode…zoyaan fight!!??superr!!?n asya 1st meet wuz soo cutee?i enjoyed it??

    • patakha princess

      thnx sooo much…….actually they posted the epi soo late…….but thnx fr the cmnt…it means alot….

  2. sonam

    yeah ….it’s a mindblowing fabulous and an unique story of course……………………………as u started from childhood so make sure at the begining they r in deeply hatred with each other ……………………..u can start the luv part from their college days ………………………….an idea 4 next episode ………….asad was seriously angry as zoya scolded ayan which started their quarrel ………baat bato mein pata chala ki asad aur ayan bhai hain……………..btw i didn’t read ur first episode………………………….but plz continue writing and feeling nice to hav an asya fan like me………..my good wishes r wit u pataka princess

    • patakha princess

      thnx…..nd thank you fr the suggestion it mnz alot to meh…….hope u have liked the shayari by zoya and ayaan as well….

    • patakha princess

      hi sonam…..actuaally in the first epi….the precap i hav stated tht there will be love triangle……between AsYaAn…(Asad….Zoya…nd Ayaan)……but it will be fr sum time…..

  3. joycelyn

    i didn’t enjoy it because almost the whole episode is written in hindi
    can you please write it in english or try for once to translate it
    i’ll be very glad if you’ll consider my comment

    • patakha princess

      okaay….but i have already submitted the epi 3 in hindi…..so i am srry i will try to explain the scenes in english as well……thnk you for letting me know……

  4. The storyline is nice. But I’ve no idea what you wrote because it’s all in Hindi.Please do write it in English. Good luck on your next episode Hun and please do read my ff and comment some ideas~Nusz

  5. fan

    its such a cool FF but please can u translate the FF in english please im not a u know but im a fan of Asya mom is indo daddy is hind but daddy never thaught me that language cause hes never around when im needed him thats why but my blood has it please please please not hind and yes thumps up for ure FF its cool go for it and always make it long love yaa guyzzz

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