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PYAR KO HO JAANE DO(One Shot OS)

Once in lifetime someone breaks your heart & if you still feel to hold that person with every broken piece, that amazing pain is called…TRUE LOVE…..

First of all, a big waali jaadu ki jhappi to Aafiya, Anu, Vrushti,
Dhruvi, Priyanshi, Swetha, Kajal, Anuradha, Ishi, Rishu, Dhruti, Rushi, Tania, Sanyukta, Divya, Niyaa, Amnaa, Ishku, Ruwani, Reni, Sana, Niyati, Abhilasha, Tumpamoni, Mitali for liking my previous OS. Thank u soooooooo much for liking it & commenting on it…I would even thank to my friends who had liked my previous OS….So, as Vrushti, Priyanshi, Tania, Tumpamoni, Mitali demanded for a romantic OS….so here I’m with an attempt of it, even though I’m a big “Dumbo” in writing anything romantic….hope u all would like reading this….& friends, I also will reveal a secret about this OS at the end of this story….so without wasting any more of your precious time, let’s get started…

“Yes I’m married now. I am married to the most successful young businessman tycoon of India Mr.Kabir Kapoor. Now I am no more Sanchi Mishra, I have become Mrs.Sanchi Kabir Kapoor”, Sanchi thought when she stood beside Kabir after he applied the vermilion through her hairline. We got blessings from our parents and departed in the car towards Kapoor mansion.
The journey was a silent one as I was looking out whereas he was busy in his works. After we reached the Kapoor mansion, Kabir’s mom hugged me and kissed me on the forehead.
I went to his room and sat on the bed covering my face by the ghunghat. I was very nervous. He came inside which made a shiver run down my spine.

But what he said completely shook my world. He said” Look here, I am not at all interested in this marriage. This marriage is just a deal. I have married you just to develop my business. I don’t believe in this marriage. I travel in my path and you travel in your path. We are just poles apart.” He said & started to work.

Tears welled up in my eyes. I couldn’t control. I silently sobbed lying on the bed. I had heard that he’s a cold & ruthless person. But I don’t know why, but I feel, he’s a child at heart. I don’t know why I slept sobbing silently.

I got up the next day & sat thinking about my life, life was not at all easy for me, it wasn’t sweet to me, never, never ever. From the beginning, my life has been a hell. My parents were so busy in business, they didn’t even care for me, they had no time for me. During my school days, I used to have very less number of friends, among them, one of my friends was Isha…but I wasn’t so close to her even. I used to interact with her, but never ever showed her the emptiness of my life. This was bcz, I didn’t want to show how broken this Sanchi Mishra was from within, I also can’t bear if anyone sympathises me…& of course, this was the reason, why I literally broke someone’s heart, when he tried to get close to me, but I don’t want to even think about that, or rather, about him. Actually, I wanted to apologize to him, but I didn’t get any opportunity…

Anyways, my life & circumstances had turned me into an egomaniac & arrogant person…& now I’m a model…a super model…& yeah, I chose this profession with a hope of getting atleast some time from my parents & I got it…but only as a model, never as a daughter…I’m someone who’s a vulnerable person from within…in short, a tender heart person with a strong front…But deep down my heart, I had a wish, a wish to be loved, a wish to be pampered, a wish to have a loving partner, who as a friend would always be there for me, to whom, I can talk when I feel lonely…Sometimes when I say, I’m okay, I want him to look at me in my eyes, hug me tight & say, ”I know…you’re not !!!”

Life doesn’t always give us what we want…I expected my married life to be good, but couldn’t get it…Now almost 4 months have passed since our marriage, I have even started developing feelings for Kabir, but I can’t express this to him…I can’t bear any more heart breaks…We used to act as a lovey-dovey couple in front of the outside world, in front of everyone, but in reality, we were not.

One fine morning, I was walking through the park when I got the biggest shock of my life, Ria proposing Kabir…Earlier I knew, Ria was a good friend of Kabir & even I thought she was a nice person, but what I saw, I just couldn’t believe it…she was proposing a married man!!!. I just couldn’t bear this & ran from there & settled on a bench at one corner park crying. There was no one around. I started crying. I just had one thought in my mind that God would have been feeling happy in making my life a living hell. What can be worse than to see your husband being proposed by some other girl? I kept on crying…Just then, I felt as if somebody was noticing me. On turning back, I saw a guy staring at me with full lust. I started to run again until I collided with my Kabir, who was My Knight in the Shining Armour. He hugged me, which was a big shock to me, but somewhere I felt happy. Then he released me from his grip & asked me,”Are u okay?”…I wiped my tears & nodded my head & said, ”I’m okay”…By the time I turned back, the guy had already left…

Days passed by…he didn’t speak to me neither did I. Then one day he said, ”I’m going to London for a business trip, I’ll be back after two weeks”. I just nodded my head.
One day, while passing through the corridor, I heard Ria talking to someone on phone, ”This Sanchi is a big problem. Kabir said he would get rid of her after he completes his business trip & returns from London. Then we would live a happy life without the burden of Sanchi. I just wish, this girl could go away from our lives soon, she’s the barrier of our happiness.”…these words made me cry even more…I thought to leave him. Why should I be the barrier for his happiness? I would be happy if Kabir is happy. With these thoughts in my mind, I checked my phone for a flight to New York but found that, the flight was on the day of Kabir’s arrival…So I started for checking out other places, but, no flight was available before that date. So I decided to go to New York on that day. I used to make diary entries, & all my feelings, all my sorrows, I used to write in my diary & even that day, I wrote down my feelings in it.

Finally before Kabir could arrive, I left Kapoor Mansion, with a heavy heart, even though my flight was at late night, I still left early. It was a silent drive for me, my heart felt heavy with the feeling of leaving Kabir alone. Even though he wasn’t so good to me, but he cared for me, when we acted as a loving couple in front of everyone, I felt it was real, I felt it was true. People say that he was cold & arrogant, but he never hurt me with his words. He was a very nice person.

With all these thoughts in my mind, I reached here…..I said looking at the teary eyed passenger sitting beside me…she was in her late fifties.
(Yes friends, Sanchi was saying all this to a lady sitting beside her in the airport…while she was waiting for her flight)

Lady : Then beta, why didn’t u confess your love?
“I know, but at the same time I’m afraid that my confession would bring a big confusion in his life which will make his confessions to never be confessed.”…I said even if I couldn’t understand what I just said. The lady blinked at my words, & I just smiled. Our conversation was interrupted by the flight announcement that the flight had been delayed due to bad weather. I sighed at this.

Suddenly I heard a familiar voice, “Sanchiii!!”. I turned back & was shocked to find Kabir.I went towards him.”Kabir….what r u doing here”,I asked him hesitantly.
Kabir: You left something behind, so I thought to give it to you…
“Which thing?” I asked him looking puzzled

Kabir : Your Love…
His pure words made me feel off guard & I turned to control my tears,” No Kabir, I haven’t left anything like that”, I said without giving him a hint about my emotions.
Kabir : Really? Then u don’t want that? I nodded my head in a negative direction.
But the next second, his actions made me freeze at my place. He hugged me tightly & said, “But I need it now”…I was shocked by his gesture.

Kabir: First u left me heartbroken, I was unable to recover from that pain till now & now, do u think I’ll be able to live if u leave me again?

I couldn’t understand what he was saying. I just gave him a puzzled look. The next moment he showed me his teenage pic & I remembered that he was the guy whose heart I broke by saying no. I had tears in my eyes. “Kabir…so…u were the one…who…”I was stammering…He nodded.”Until now…u remember…?”…He nodded & said,”Not only I remember, but till now I luv too.”

“Even now…but…I…broke…your heart”I said feeling guilty of myself
Kabir: The one who can break has the power to mend it again…Now I was looking into his eyes.
Kabir: You are my first & last love Sanchi & I can’t even imagine about any other girl in my life. U are & will always be my life, I can’t even think about losing u once again. Life without u would be a hell for me & I realized that by ignoring u, I won’t get anything. Even if I didn’t speak to u, still, your presence had kept me sane & when u r not with me, I become insane. These two weeks has made me think of your importance in my life. I even got the punishment for hurting an innocent soul like you bcoz I thought u rejected me, for which my ego didn’t let me confess my love to u. That day, I didn’t understand your situation & thought of taking revenge by marrying u. But now, I realized, that I didn’t marry u for revenge, it was indeed bcoz I love u. My life would become a big zero if u are not with me.
I didn’t realize that u loved me. I really don’t love anyone other than u Sanchi. I really didn’t know that u were heartbroken bcoz that day Ria proposed me, but Sanchi, I rejected it the very next moment.

“But how did u know all this”, I asked him while looking at him in a confused manner…He took out something & showed me…”It was my diary…”…I was smiling.
Next moment Kabir bend down on his knees holding a bunch of red roses, ”Sanchi, thank you for being a part of my life. I just can’t imagine my life without you. All I want is happiness to adorn your life & sadness to get away from your life. All I did was a beautiful mistake of falling in love with Sanchi Mishra…oh, sorry…Sanchi Kabir Kapoor. Will you join me in making the beautiful mistake in your life too?”

I was stunned with his pure & innocent confession from the bottom of his heart. I nodded No, which made him sad. Then I smiled & said “I’m ready to commit the mistake in OUR life.” He smiled & grabbed me in a bone crushing hug.

The lady passenger who was talking with me was really happy & even blessed both of us for having a happy married life. We bid goodbye to the lady & proceeded for our home.
We both entered in the car & drove away to start our new journey…a journey full of hope & strength, a journey with trust & a journey filled with Love…a journey full of everything!!!

THE END

Life would never be a bed of roses to anyone. However, we could make it beautiful by supporting each other during hard times, this will eventually help us in overcoming all the hurdles that come throughout in our path…this is what is called TRUE LOVE…The best Love is that which awakens the soul, that makes us to reach for more, that plants the fire in our hearts & eventually brings peace to our minds.

Guys, now it’s time for the secret revealation….the credit for this OS doesn’t only goes with me…In fact, this story’s idea was given to me by Niyaa….Thank u so much dear for your support in this matter.

So friends, I just hope it was worth reading. I’m really thankful to those who read my story, thanks a lot friends. Plz do share your views regarding this plot through your comments & of course, if you didn’t like it, or found any flaws in this, plz let me know through your comments, so that I could rectify it….& Thanks as well for bearing all my blabbering…haha…
With lots of Love,
Priyanka 

60 Comments
  1. Riru

    Awesome di hope that we get to read one more beautiful story by u soon bye tc luv u

    1. Riyarocks

      awww………thanku soooooooo much Reni dear for commenting……….I’m really glad ki tujhe ye pasand aaya…………luv u a lot sweetu………gud nt……..tc……..

  2. This is so so romantic and superb story yaar……..I love it so so so much………. really yaar it is amazing and outstanding……and kabir’s confession is mind blowing……..love u so much dear………..

    1. Riyarocks

      Anu dear, ur comments always brings a big smile on my face……dear, I’m really lucky to have u as my reader, who has supported me from the beginning of my journey till date…….luv u a lot sweetieeeeee……..gud nt……..tc……..

  3. Ashnita456

    Wowwww wowwww wowwww wat to say sweetie it’s beyond beyond beyond. I was feeling like my heart went to them. Wat to eat sweetie. I’m speeehless. If I say something it will be toooooooo of toooooooo tiny infront of this. A great great grand salute to u. Lots of huggs and kisses to u and luv loads

    1. Riyarocks

      awwwww……..Ashu, getting appreciation from one of ur fav writers…….this really means a lot for me……….sachchii……….kasam se yaar, I’m a jabra fan of ur writings…..I’m on cloud 9 after receiving such cute comments from u………..luv u luv u luv u wo bhi dherrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr saara & a big waala teddy hug for u meri jaan………..& sweety………3 months, tumhare articles ke bina, abhi se sochkar hi mujhe goosebumps aane lage hain, try to come back soon dear…..itne din wo bhi tere bina, nehi raha jayega hamse…..luv u………bye……….tc………..

  4. Yaar its just superb, awesome, fantastic
    I’m going short of word to express
    But i must say zabardast hai ekdum

    1. Riyarocks

      thanku thanku thanku sooooooooooooooo much Rishu dear for commenting……..I’m on cloud9 after reading ur comments……ur comments brought a big smile on my face………jaanti hoon, monday hai, so hectic toh hoga hi, but phir bhi, have a nice day…..haha……………luv u a lot sweetieeeeeee……….bye……..tc……….

  5. Kya kahen kya naa kahen ye kaisi mushkil haaye! Koi toh batade isska hal toh mere sissys!!! Ke haal hamara behal hai aur man mai kis shabdoon se tarif kare ye sawal hai! Dil ko toh bhaya aapka ye khayal hai! Ye wala os toh bemisaal hai!!! Amazing yaar.loved it from the bottom of my heart….love u….gn..tc..a big wala teddy hug..

    1. Riyarocks

      ek min, is it u Vrushti?…..wow yaar…..tumhare iss shayari ne seedhe mere dil ko choo gaya……..haye!, kya kahein, bolne laayak choda hi nehi tumne………tareef karoon kya uski jisne tumhare jaisa reader banaya……….I’m really glad ki tumhe ye os pasand aaya……….luv u a lot sweetieeeeeee & lots & lots of hugs & kisses for u………..have a nice day……….bye………tc………..

  6. ArpitaKrish

    I literally want to say among all the ff and OS this one is most close to my heart…You described so well….Its not necessary that you get what you want….I know kitna bura lgta hain jab aap kisi se beinteha pyaar krte ho but confess ni kar pate……kash tere OS ki trh real life mein bhi hota…….honestly tere OS ko pdhte waqt mere aankho mein aasu aa gye😢kuch reasons ki wjh se……I just cried…..Love you so much you both you & niyaa

    1. Riyarocks

      oye Shrishti, zyaada senti mat ho………u know what, agar tumhe koi cheez kisi waqt nehi milti, toh I believe ki destny ne uss se bhi achhi kuch tumhare liye sochke rakha hoga…..achha sochegi, tabhi toh aage sab achha kar payegi………bohut bhashan dediya……I hope itne lecture se tu samajh gayi hogi, agar nehi to insta pe teri class lagwa denge hum sab……..haha………luv u my sweety pie, wo bhi bohut zyada…….have a Marvelous Monday………..bye……..tc………

  7. Firstly jaadu ki jappi to u to….n i wanna say tht i m thankful of u n niyaa for dis OS……n priyu…..write next oS/ff soon….i m waiting…..at last gn,sd,tc n luvv u

    1. Riyarocks

      abhi ek aur chahiye…………he bhagwaan, kuch toh rehem karo iss choti si, nanhi si &…………..ek number ki………. badmash bachchhi pe…….haha…….acha laga ki tujhe ye pasand aa gaya, warna main toh senti hoke ro hi deti……..ok ok, I know, bohut paka rahi hoon tujhe apni bakwaas se………but yaar…….bas yehi kahoongi, luv u a lot Shona………have a nice(& interesting bhi) day ;)………..bye………tc………

  8. Aafiya

    Awesome.. Superb.. Fabulous.. Beautiful. Nice..
    And kabirs confession was marvelous… Take care.. Bye…

    1. Riyarocks

      thanku soooooooooooooooo much Aafiya dear for commenting………I’m really glad to know that I could somehow manage to portray romantic scenes after reading ur cute comments……..luv u a lot sweetieeeeee……..have a nice day……..bye……tc………

  9. RuCh23

    So soo sooo loving 😍😍😍 I just don’t know what to say, it’s that much great.and who says you can’t write romantic stories? Your just best at it. Lots of highs and kisses 😘😘😘

    1. Riyarocks

      Ruwani……..hamesha tere comments padhte hi chehre par ek alag hi glow chala aata hai…..jaise ki koi 100W waali bulb ki glow……haha……..tu khud itni amazing writer hai, tere saamne toh main kuch bhi nehi……….u r a versatile writer……..chahe koi situation ho, tum usse khidkitod bana hi deti ho………luv u a lot Shona……..have a nice day……….bye………tc………

  10. Dhruti

    prinku i also want to give you a bone crush hug to you and niyaa……………how can you write this kind of beautiful story and niyaa you too…………………………………i love this story core of my heart………………………….really it was fab story……………….and at last how beautifully kabir proposed sanchi……..kash………esa kuch show me bhi ho ok leave it this…………………yaar bahot khushi ho rahi thi ye padh ke(just like how kabir say : bahot dard ho raha he style)…………………
    keep writing like this you both…………..love you a lot both …………………..post next story soon………………see you soon…………………..

    1. Riyarocks

      ahhh……….main toh marr gayi, itna tight hug koi deta hai kya?……..haha……..just kidding ;)…….yaar, tere comments padhke mere chehre pe ek badi waali smile aa gayi……maa soch rahi hai, ki mein paagal ho gayi hoon………haha……..& yaar, kuch toh taras khaa mujhpe……..ek aur story…….meri watt lagwake hi chodegi tu shayad…..haha……….luv u bohut bohut bohut zyaada & ek badi waali….jaadu ki jhappi yaar….haha…….have a nice day……….bye………tc………

  11. Its something very different….. Soooo amazing!…. Loved it

    1. Riyarocks

      thanku so much Amnaa dear for commenting……..I’m really really really glad to know that u liked this plot……..thnx for being a regular reader & commentor from the beginning of my journey till date……..luv u a lot sweetieeee………have a nice day……….bye………tc………

  12. Awesome one dear I just love your writing…
    I have a request plz write a sanveer OS nxt time baki it’s ur wish to write or not..

    1. Riyarocks

      thanku so so much Ishi dear for liking this story…….& dear, about sanveer, already I wrote one os…..& u had also read & commented on it…bhool gayi kya?….& yaar, plz don’t request, we r frnds na, why to maintain any sort of formality?……luv u a lot sweetieeee………have a nice day……….bye………tc………

      1. Nhi nhi I remember it just skipped from my mind
        ND nxt time I won’t request u I will directly order you 😜 OK??

    2. Riyarocks

      chalega nehi…….doudega ;)……..haha………luv u Shona……..:):)

  13. awesome
    how emotional it is
    just connected to it dear
    mind blowing

    1. Riyarocks

      awww………& ur comments, it touched my heart……..I’m really glad to know that u liked this plot……..actually, I’m not at all good in writing romantic scenes na thats why, I had a thought whether u would like it or not…..but now I’m relieved after reading ur comments……….luv u a lot sweetieeee………have a nice day……….bye………tc………

  14. Urvi_shah

    Very nice, amazing os riya di😘😘

    1. Riyarocks

      thanku urvi dear for commenting……I’m really glad that u liked this story……..luv u a lot sweetu……have a nice day……….bye………tc………

  15. Niyaaa

    Hey priyu… tera ye os padh k mere to mann me ladoo bhutta..😍😍😍😍 seriously tu kya cheez h samajh nahi aata mujhe kaise her emotion ko catch krti h explain krti h… satnding ovation to banti h boss🙌🙌🙌.. nd mne tujhe insta pe msg kiya nd yahan ab padh rhi hun dono net baba ki meherbani kal shaam se hi range nhi thi ab aai 😢😢😢 ok bye baki ki baatein insta pe hongi.. Lovvv u sisy.. nd sukriya tere style mein thank u bolne ka tarika😀😀😀 mujhe itni ijjat di.. haha.. bye 😘😘😘😘

    1. Riyarocks

      oye……..mann mein ladoo footaa…….toh ab de mera dairymilk shots ;P……..haha………& yaar, iss net baba ki baat hi mat kar….kal priyanshi se baat kar rahi thi, beech mein net baba ne dhoka de dia….doosri taraf wo gusse se laal peeli ho rahi thi ki main reply nehi kar rahi…..uff…..ek taraf RS ne & doosri taraf net baba ne dimaag ka dahi kar diya hai………oh ho…..ye sab yahaan kyun discuss kar rahi hoon…..insta pe continue karenge….haha…..& yaar, teri tareef ki kyunki tu ye deserve karti hai, & yaar, itna appreciate karogi, toh kahin main khushi ke maare, rocket ke upar baithke kahin furrr na hojaoon…….haha………luv u meri jaan…….have a nice day……….bye………tc………

      1. Niyaaa

        Tu ruk rocket ko m udne nhi dungi tu udd gayi to dusri prinku nhi milne wali hmein.. so dharti pe rah Aram se udne ki jarurat nhi wrna dhakka de dungi rocket se😜😜😜ok ab insta pe milenge tera os pdhke mera din to pehle hi ban gya.. okbye

    2. Riyarocks

      haye!! mujhe lag gayi……..tune mujhe dhakka kyun dia? & yaar, koi nehi……main nehi, toh koi aur sahi……..arey mere jaise kai namooney mil jayenge tujhe………but haan, fikar mat kar, abhi ke liye, main hoon, tum sab ke dimaag ki o my mata karne ke liye, itni asaani se tum sab chain se nehi reh sakte, mere hote hue……hehe haha……(ravan waali hasi imagine karle)…….. ;P;)

      1. Niyaaa

        Tujhe sach m lagta h tere jaisi koi milegi.. 😱😱😱😱 u r a single piece jo bhagwan ne hmme diya… i mean hamse milvvaya..😎😎.. tujhe kaise chodenge

    3. Riyarocks

      awww…….emotional kardia tune yaar………ab tu hi pass kar ek aur tissue box kyunki mera waala toh khatam ho gaya……..teri iss comment ko padhke………luv u Shona…….

  16. Laajwaab, I m sorry I m short of words to priase how beautiful u write dear.

    1. Riyarocks

      sachchii!!!!…….awww……..so much appreciation…….mujhe toh aisa lag raha hai jaise ki main hawaaon mein udd rahi hoon……..thanku sooooooo much for liking it dear……..luv u a lot sweetieeeeee…….have a nice day……….bye………tc………

  17. Wow,,dear amazing os.. By ur os tumpa shocks nd riya rocks.. Lv u..

    1. Riyarocks

      awww…….finally……..mission “Romantic OS” achieved…..oye, don’t get shocked…….I’m saying this after getting ur appreciation for my writing……….thanku sooooooooooo much for liking it………luv u a lot sweetieeeeeeeee……..& a big teddy hug for u……..bye……..tc……….

  18. Priyanshipp

    Kya kahu yaar. ..tu to bolne layak hi nhi chodti. Acha chl bolti hoon. Mai khidkitod or darwazatod articles likhti hoon na. Tune hi to kaha tha.
    Agar mai khidkitod or darwazatod os likhti hoon to tu muhallatod os likhti h. Kya karu Ghar to niyaa ne pehle hi mujhe todwa diya isiliye tere se muhalla todwa rhi hoon. 😂😂😂😂kuch zyada ho gya kya. …
    Yaar tu to har baar mujhe shock kar deti h itne awesome ideas kaha se aate h.
    Mai aa rhi hoon tere paas ideas lene. Yaad rakhna nhi dogi to mai duss lungi 🐍🐍🐍. Naagin hoon mai.
    Awesome fabulous fantastic superb mindblowing mastmindblowing …….etc (end of thinking capacity )😂😂😂😂 jo bhi bolu kam padega tere iss dhamakedar os ke liye. Haar baar new unique ideas ke saath aati h tu cahe sanveer ho yaa kaanchi . Aise hi likhte reh meri jaan. Luv u sweetie nd take care. 😙😙😙

    1. Riyarocks

      tu ruk, main ek been leke aayi……arey tu nagin hai na, tujhe control karna padega, warna toh tu mujhe terrorist banake hi chodegi…….khidkitod….darwazaatod se seedhe muhallatod…….haye haye!….pata nehi iss se aage aur kya kya tudwayegi ;P;)………haha……..ek kaam karte hain, apne group ka naam change kar dete hain…….bak bak gang se, anaconda group ya godzilla group ya phir jurrasic world ;P…..nehi samjhi?…..arey, tu nagin, niyaa zombie & main brahmrakshas……..itne saare characters ka group normal kaise hosakta hai?…….haha……..& yaar, tere innovative ideas ke saamne toh ye kuch bhi nehi…..chahe romantic waala ho, chahe diwali ka diwaala types comedy waala ho, ya phir chahe halloween night ka concept………amazing hai tu & tera dimaag bhi………..ek badi waali jaadu ki jhappi & luv u dherrrrrrrrrrrr saara……….bye…….tc………..

  19. Negisanyukta

    Don’t know what to say………Diii !! I m totally blank by ur writtings.
    Loved it to the core.😘😘😘😘😘
    I must say this os is not one of my favourite os…….bcoz it’s my favourite os.😇😇😇😇
    And don’t dare to call my favourite author and elder dii a dumbo.She is a brilliant author.
    Samajh gye na😈😈😈😈😈
    The way u described Kabeer’s confession….
    really appreciatable.
    Kaash bhagwan ..aapka thoda sa talent iss ladki ke bheje mein bhej dete.😭😭😭😭
    Keep writting dii.
    Eagerly waiting for a bolti band os…..romantic.
    Love u dii.

    1. Riyarocks

      haye!!!!……..tere tareef sunke toh mere pair zameen pe nahi lag rahe, aisa lag raha hai jaise main hawaaon mein udd rahi hoon…….& yaar, ek aur OS!!!!………tu toh meri watt lagwake hi chodegi………kuch toh rehem kar teri iss dii par…….durgeshwari ji……..haha………but yaar, I’m really glad ki tujhe ye romantic waala os pasand aa gaya…….sachii……….ab teri baari hai, tu apne os kab post karegi? kanchi waali hai ya sanveer waali…..confusion clear kardena iss baar……samjhi naa?….ab chal……ek badi waali teddy hug from ur dii & luv u dherrrrrrrrrr saara meri sweety pie 😉

  20. This is masterpiece dear Riya
    Took me to another world of true love n world of kanchi so beautifully crafted Good work keep it up
    Love u

    1. Riyarocks

      aww……Rushi dear, ur comments alwz brings a big smile on my face….exactly like the one, I’ve while reading ur amazing plot……u r one of my fav writers & getting appreciation from u………really, means a lot for me………thank u sooooooooo much for reading & liking this story…….luv u dherrrrrrrr saara & a big teddy hug for u……….bye……….tc……….

  21. Shining

    It is fabulous dear I have no words to describe it. It just rocked.

    1. Riyarocks

      thanku sooooooooo much Sayani dear for reading & liking this story……..I’m on cloud 9 after reading ur comments………luv u a lot sweetieeeeee & a big teddy hug for u………bye………tc……..

  22. Shivaniiii

    Omg. Soooo beautiful. Tumne to mere words pe taala laga dia dear.

    1. Riyarocks

      shivani yaar……..thanku thanku thanku so so much for liking this……..& yaar, tere jaisi khidkitod writer ke saamne main kuch bhi nehi……..yaar tere os ek dum kamaal ke hote hain……& yaar, tu apni plot kab shuru karegi…My dead wife waali? tere exams khatam nehi hue kya?…..btw, thanks for ur appreciation……..luv u dherrrrrrrrrr saara & a big waala teddy hug for u my sweety pie……….bye…….tc…….

  23. Anuradha123

    Main sabse last aaye maaf karna… Yaar school gayee thi aur tu dekhne ka time hi nahi mila. Just abhi aaye aur tu khol kar tere beautiful os ko padhte hi Mann aur dimag dono fresh ho gaya… Awesome yaar.. Tu itni creative hai ki mujhe apne aap par proud mehsus ho raha hai… At last lots of love to you dear…

    1. Riyarocks

      nehi yaar……..koi nehi……….mujhe pata tha pehle se hi reason, but iske baare mein pm par baat karenge………& yaar, mujhe bohut bohut bohut zyaada achha laga jaankar ki tujhe ye romantic waala os pasand aa gaya………ab finally jaan mein jaan aa gayi, tere comments padhke……….ab jaake thoda rest karle, itne dinon ke baad school gayi thi na, baad mein pm par baat karenge………ek badi waali jaadu ki jhappi for u & luv u dherrrrrrrrrrr saara………..bye……….tc……….

  24. Anee

    Hey Mita…sorry nahi kahungi tujhe se phir pata chala ke tu mujh se naaraz home beth gayi aur yeh main bear kr paungi…,seedha os ki baat krte hain….aisa kr tu mujhe kuch words send kr through DM Yaa phir insta pe baat karle there is plot ki praise ke liye means no words for this and off course for u……luvv u so much.

    1. Riyarocks

      haha……..Anee yaar………tu agar meri itni tareef karegi, kahin ek din news mein ye khabar na aa jaye ki ek ladki, jo kabhi TU mein writer hua karti thi, Anee ke comments padhke, khushi ke maare paagal hokar mental asylum mein bharti hogayi…….haha………I know bohut boora PJ tha…….but kya karoon, teri iss cute comment ne toh pehle hi meri bolti band kardi, ab dimaag mein kuch aa toh nehi raha isse padhke, ab bolun bhi toh kya bolun………..haha………..ek badi waali jaadu ki jhappi for u & luv u dherrrrrrrrrrr saara………..bye……….tc……….

  25. Khamoshi

    Priyanka dear.. u made me speechless..skrry for late comment. Coming back to episode..it was like i am reading a well written nov where the equation of every emotion is well balanced.. Romantic OS doesn’t mean a lovey dovey stuff.. the real romance is understanding and trust between persons. And u proved the true love yaar.. from start till the end. I juat loved each and every words of ur OS.. dil jeet liya tumne.

    1. Riyarocks

      Mitu……….tu pehle kaan pakad……10 sit ups kar & saath mein bol……….”Main aage se kabhi bhi meri kisi frnd ko na thanku aur na hi sorry kahungi”……..haha………..ab chal……..iss punishment ko hamesha ke liye yaad rakhna………samajh gayi toh theek, warna………….haha………ok ok meri jawani janeman, ab kuch tere comments ke baare mein bolti hoon……..tere comments padhke………haye!……..dil ko kitna sukoon mila, main tujhe bataa hi nehi sakti………..ek alag hi glow aa jaata hai chehre pe har baar tere comments padhne ke baad……….& yaar, teri khidkitod writings ke saamne ye kuch bhi nehi………..phir bhi, I’m glad ki tujhe ye pasand aa gaya……haha………ek badi waali jaadu ki jhappi for u & luv u dherrrrrrrrrrr saara………..bye……….tc……….

  26. Awesome super riyu

    1. Riyarocks

      finally Divya……..tune comment kiya……..actually I thought that u might not have liked this plot, so didn’t comment, but yaar, now I’m relieved………u r one of my frnds who have supported me right from the beginning of my journey…….I’m really thankful to TU ki mujhe itne amazing frnds se milwaya yahaan par………..luv u a lot sweetieeee………& a big teddy hug for u………bye……..tc……….

  27. Abhilasha

    Omg😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😍😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💞💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗💗👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💘💘
    Riyu u just nailed it!!!! So lovely yaar! Mtlb standing ovation with a big round ofvplause for u!!! I loved it sooo much!!! The way u express the word ……I just loved it!!!!! Love uh!!! Lots of hugs and kisses to u!!! Tussi chaa gye !!!! Sanu to tauddi kahani naal pyar ho gya si!!

    1. Riyarocks

      sat sri akaal ji……….abhi dear……..itne cute comments………padhke ankhon mein aansoo aa gaye yaar………tujhse itna zyaada appreciation milna, aisa laga ki maine writing ki duniya/exam ko distinction ke saath pass kardia………..haha………tu sirf meri hi nehi, TU mein kai aur writers ki bhi inspiration hai……..thanku sooooooooooo much dear, iss OS ko like karne ke liye………..ek badi waali jaadu ki jhappi for u Shona & luv u dherrrrrrrrrrr saara………..bye……….tc……….

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