Pyaar dosti hai a shraman ff part 8 (ek duje ke vaaste)

Hello guys!
Maria here…..
Thank u so much fr cmmnting on prev prt…m so happy wid ur cmmnts…..big hug frm my side to all….. ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

N guys plzz wish me best of luck n do pray fr me cause my test are going to start within next days……

Well here is part 8…
Hope u lyk this also….!

Preciously: it WS revealed that shr loved sumo frm childhood……

———PART 8———-
NEXT DAY…..

—sumo cms downstairs all ready n kartik also gets ready they all leave fr Priya mansion—–

Priya welcomes them bt is surprised to c kartik there….
(Priya n sumo hug eaChOther tightly……)
S: hy mom…!! ๐Ÿ˜€
Pri: hy my sweeto…..!! Missed u very much …..
S: me tooo……….
P: cm let’s sit inside…..
—-They all chit chat fr a long tym n finally it’s dinner tym…..—–
They all sit on table……
K sees a pic of priya’s n man….he is hust keep staring at that pic n is not happy…
Priya’s cms n sees this…..
P: wo he WS my old boss…
K: ooh acha….(he is relieved)
Preeti slowly says to sumo…..: or daddy says that he don’t care…
—-both sis giggles—-
S: chup karke khana Kha…. ๐Ÿ˜€
—sumo WS abt to eat when she gets Khush call—–
She picks up….

S: hello Bol….
K in tensed voice: sumo ??!!
S concerned : wat happend Khush??
K: yr shr…..he…..
Kartik: wat happend sumo??
S: wat happened to him??
K: he fainted….!!!
—–sumo gets shock—-
Priya: sumo?
K: yr we all cm here to meet him n he suddenly fainted wat to do…we called doc….nir aunty is also nt here m very sacred…..
S: m coming…

—-sumo widout wasted a sec get up n strts to go—–
P: wat happend di ?? Where r u going….
S: shr fainted……I have to go……
K: we will cm wid u…..
S: no u guys carry on……

—she goes—-
Preeti thinks it’s a plan…..(n smiles)

Sumo reaches shr home……
S: Khush!!
A: doc came….
Meanwhile doc came out side frm room along with adi n rohit…..
S: doc how is he…?? Is he fyn??
D: he is okyy now bt he has 105 fever…..
—-all gets shocked—-
S: bt doc wat happened to him….
D: I think he take a lot od depression that’s why…..
—–sumo remembers yesterday meeting n all—–
S: will he be Oky ??
D: yes bt he needs to be careful…plz make sure he will nt take any type of depression it might be harmful fr him…..
S: don’t worry doc can I see him??
—doc nods—-
Adi: cm doc I will take u to ur car…..

They leave…..
Sumo goes to shr room….
—n others wait outside—
Ro strts to go bt ayesh stops him….

Preeti calls Khush….
K: hello…
P: wow yr….wat a plan…!! U r genius
K: wai..wait,..wait….wat plan..??
P: lying abt shr health… ๐Ÿ˜€
K: ooy it WS nt a plan shr is really ill behen…. ๐Ÿ˜ฎ
P: wat…!!!!???? ๐Ÿ˜ฎ
K: yes…..n u knw our plan is different I m happy that this happen ATLEAST they will get a little close bt stick to d plan…..!
P: ooohkkkk how is shr now…??
K: he is okyyy sumo is wid him….

—IN ROOM—
Sumo goes to shr…who is sleeping on bed…she checks fever n it’s high…
—she goes outside n takes a cloth n water in bowl—
She cms inside…n sits beside him on bed…..
—-she touches his forhead—
S: I knw….tumne kis cheez ki tension li hai….
(She cresses his face)
She drowns the cloth in bowl then squeeze it then when she was abt to keep d bandage z(gheeli parti) on shr forhead she remembers….d words…
“I don’t want to c ur face…..stay away frm me fr sm days”
S: I said these words to u n now…..c m here…..

—she sighs n keeps d bandage on shr forhead—–
—whole ni8 she do the same thing—

IN MORNING:
Shr wakes up his fever is low now…….
—he gets up bt is weak……….

He goes outside n finds everyone sleeping….he smiles…….
Adi is sleeping on couch, Khush is sleeping on head on adi shoulder….
Rohit is sleeping half on couch half on carpet….
Ayesh is laying on couch sleeping……
Shr pulls blankets on them……..
Shr: sumo……… Wo nai aai…….(he gets sad)

He goes to kitchen….
N finds a cup cover with plate….he removed d plate n finds Kaarha in it…
N also a chit wid that…
“Drink it”
He quickly remembers that it must be sumo who did this…

FLASHBACK:
Shr has low fever n flu…..
S cms wid Kaarha: ye le Kaarha peee le…
Shr: yr how many tyms I told u not to bring this sada hoa Kaarha (he makes faces)
N u never listen…..
S: hahhah n how many tyms I told u not to argue wid me on this n u also never listen…..anyways shut up n drink it….
Shr: no………
S: drink….(she forcefully makes him drink)
Shr: bhindi…!!!
S: hawww u call me bhindi…now c today u will only eat bhindi…
Shr: no..nooo I mean gulab jamun ras gulla…!!!
S: chup..!
(They both laughs)

PRESENT:
—-shr remembers this n smiles—–
Shr: u didn’t stay with me bt glad to knw that u still care abt me…..
(He drinks it)
Then he goes to garden n sits on d chair….
It’s 7:05 am……
He enjoys d weather…..
N reminisces his n sumo’s moments…..

Sumo is on d way back home…..
S: I think I should inform at home…..they must be worried….
—she checks her mob in bag bt can’t find it…..—-
S: ooohoooo where is it….
—she again checks bt can’t find it—
S: ufffff kahan cha…………….
(She suddenly remembers that she forget it in shr room)
—-she stops d car—-
S: OMG…..!!! How can I be so careless….aahhhh
(She sees d tym it’s 7:10)
S: no…no he must be awaken….wat to do……..
(she thinks fr a moment n sighs)

Scene shifted to shr house…..
Sumo gets out her car n enters in d house….
S: plz…plzzz shr na Utha ho…..
(She goes n sees everyone’s sleeping)
S: ufff ye yahan shr ko dekhne aaye hain ya sone??…….anyways…….
(She goes to shr room n finds him missing…….)
(She wonders where is he..??)
—-then she sees hr mob…..picks it up…n strts to go….bt stops near kitchen—–

She goes in kitchen n finds that Karhaaa WS nt there…..she understands…..
SCENE SHIFTS….
—-sumo WS looking at shr….(who is in thoughts) behind d door…..—–
S: he is awaken…….how is he now..?? (She thinks)
—she sees weather it’s dark—-
S: …it will be raining soon……bt wat is this duffer doing here..?? In garden abhi abhi Utha hai itne TEZZ bhukkar se……sakoon se baith nai Sakta kya…???
—-then she luks at the group—-
S: n these….ufffff ye log sone ke liay hi aain hain kya??
(S goes near Khush)
—n tries to wake her up—-

S: Khush…..wake up,…..(slowly)
K: shut up adi…. Sone de…..
S: hain adi….???? Ahhh…..
—–she gets irritated——
She agin luks at shr……
S: or ab is duffer ko kaise samjhaon Mai…….uff….jane do jab ye rest nai kar raha …….is ko fikar nai hai……toh Mai kyun fikar Karun….
—she leaves—-

Shr feels sumo’s presence he luks back bt there WS no one…..he wonders…
Shr: how is it possible….did sumo came….??
—-he goes to check inside—-
Suddenly it’s strts raining………
Shr luks outside: ooh god thank god I came inside warna toh Mai phir se Beemer parh jata……
—he wakes everyone up—–
Shr: oooohhhh bheeeee wake up u all it’s 7:45 want to sleep more…???
K: kya hai yr…….kabhi tu kabhi adi….
Adi while yawning : ooohooooo wat me…?? I WS sleeping yr….hmmm wat a sleep…
Ayesh n rohit also wakes up…….
A: wow it’s raining outside!! ๐Ÿ˜€
R: Han toh???
A: shut up….!
—they all then ask shr abt his health—-
Shr: m okyyy now….toh breakfast Karen???

All sit on breakfast table……
Adi is non-stop eating…..
K: ufff adi u r such a bhukkar…..
Shr smiles: sumo Bhi yahi keh……………..(he stops)
—-ayesha notices this—–
Rohit pats on shr shoulder…..
Chill bro……nothing will happen……
Shr: yes yr….infact m happy that (he remembers kaadha scene)…ATLEAST she care a little bit……
——Khush stops eating n luks at shr——
K: little bit..????? ……..A lot…!!!!!! ๐Ÿ˜€
—shr looks on—-

——SCREEN FREEZES ON SHR FACE——-

Precap: stuck at farm house….shr gets closer to sumo n tell her that he don’t love her anymore…..he wants his FRND back not his love…..

So guys how WS d ep…??
WS it good or I just bored u ??

Sorry if so……..
Well thank u so much fr read it…

Ques: wat u think shr is saying truth?? Will sumo believe him?? Forgive him??

Plz cmmnt guys I really need it……n silent readers (don’t stay silent)

Till then…by by…!!!!
Love u all…!

39 comments

  1. Anonymous

    Nice episode ๐Ÿ‘ Really liked it. I’ve been a silent reader before so thought to comment now finally.. ๐Ÿ˜€ You’re an amazing writer tbh. I’ve read all of your os and ffs. They were amazing ๐Ÿ‘Œ I really wait for your episodes. Keep writing. Waiting for the next episode anxiously!! ๐Ÿ™‚

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hello anonymous..!
      How r u..?…. ๐Ÿ™‚
      Awww m sooo soo happy that u commented my dear…! Really it means a lot to me…!
      N thank u sooooo much fr reading n loving my ff n OS…..thanks a lot yr…….
      U r soooo sweet…..
      Lots of luv …
      Maria ๐Ÿ™‚

  2. MissAaira

    โคโคโคโคAmazinggg i juz luved it
    Hmmmm actually i wish sumo say dat she luvs himm
    Anywzz plsss continue soooooooonn wen r u going to update nextt??

    • Marie

      |Author

      Thanks a lot aaira…!! Missed ur cmmnts on prev ep……
      Hahha kabhi na kabhi ye Bhi ho hi jai ga…! ๐Ÿ˜€
      I will update ASAP….bt can’t tell ri8 now…cause m nt sure..

  3. Neeti

    |Registered Member

    Kitto accha epi tha.loved it so much. Bt itne dino k bad post kya phir b ittu sa nt fair and Sumo believe kare na kare bt i think Shravu is lying. And can i call you maro di if you dont mind.sry zyada likh dia. Post asap love from- Neeto

    • Marie

      |Author

      Awww thank u soooo sooo much sweeto..!! Haww itto sa yr ye likhti likhti mere hathon ka kaam ho Gaya tha… ๐Ÿ˜€
      Hahaha thanks a tone fr ur ans my dear….
      Yes yes ofcourse…u can call me dat…pyaar se Jo Bhi bulao ๐Ÿ™‚
      Aahah ok I will try to post ASAP..
      Love u too!!
      Frm
      Maria.

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hahahaha thank u sooooo much fr such a sweet n lovely cmmnt yr……haha khatam toh Karna hai na tabhi to nxt likho gi…..
      Anyways how r u ????? I mean how Is ur Heath ??

  4. Ariana

    |Registered Member

    K so i noticed this whole ff r8 now nd read all epis so far at once. so……..kinta acha!!!!! Speechless!!!! Post the next part asap and this is bade di’s order. Love u

    • Marie

      |Author

      Awww thank u soooooooo much di..!!! U r soooo sweet M so happy ri8 now….
      Haha ok ok ap ka order sa lakhon pr di ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚
      Love u toooooooooo

  5. Sumo

    |Registered Member

    it was mast …. d full care mode on sumo .. she is so stubborn.. n wat a lovable Shravan love him ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜

  6. Ruchi

    |Registered Member

    Hey Maria!!
    How r u dear?
    epi was superbโ€ฆ
    Nd i dnt think shravan really mean those wordsโ€ฆ Bcoz he love his sumoโ€ฆ
    lots of love
    Ruchiโ€ฆ ๐Ÿ™‚

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hy Ruchi di….
      M nt fyn….
      How r u…??
      Thank u sooo so much fr cmmnting
      N thanks a tone fr ur ans di…!
      Love u tooooooo
      Frm…
      Maria.. ๐Ÿ™‚

      • Ruchi

        hey Maria
        m also OK OK…
        and y u r not gud???
        is everything okay??
        Missed u all so much
        Lots of luv
        Ruchi

      • Marie

        |Author

        Hey Ruchi di…..
        Actually m infected wid a virus but m a little but Oky now….. ๐Ÿ™‚
        M tooo missing u sooo much di…!!!
        Study hard…! ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚
        Love u sooo much ๐Ÿ™‚
        Frm ur sis…!
        Maria…

  7. Fatimagulesarfraz

    |Registered Member

    Fab ep .. can’t wait for the next part ..
    Plzzzz plzzzz post soon
    Nd han ur question .. I think sharavan is lying nd sumo will believe him ..
    Btw how r u ?? All fine ??
    Stay healthy ..!!!

  8. sona

    It was good..โ˜บ
    Vaisey..mujhey nahi lagta..ki shravan such mey..apney pyar ko bhul payega..๐Ÿ˜„
    Sumo..kya..react karegi..ye situation..hi badi ajeeb hai..abh vo so no..chahkar..pehli..jitna normal nahi reh payengey..na
    ๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜œ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜
    Let’s..see..wt she will do..and
    All the best..for u exams dear.,๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚โ˜บโ˜บ

    • Marie

      |Author

      Thank u so so much sona di…!! ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚
      Hahha thanks a lot fr ur ans…..
      N thanks a tone fr ur wishes…
      Love u ๐Ÿ™‚
      Frm
      Maria……(choti sis of urs) ๐Ÿ˜‰

  9. Nandini aka Nandu

    Hi maria di! How are u keeping? Well, get well really soooonnn. All and all the best for ur exams and wish me for mine too cuz mere bhi tests start hone waale hai. Lots of love. Keep writing dear di! Sorry couldnt comment early! And i think ki our one and only shravan ji is lieing for sure but i even think ki sumo wont trust him. Actually it can be either of the things. So, atleast am toatally confused as well as excited. Please post soon and regain ur health as soon as possible!(P.S.-this is order from ur chhoti sis) lots of love.. maybe maine kuch zyaada likh diya. (Sentimal u know) lol bye get wel soon

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hello my dear…!!!!
      Not gud ๐Ÿ™ bt ur how r u all fyn??? ๐Ÿ™‚
      Awww yr thank u soooo sooo much fr Ur sweet wishes ur u r toooo sweet..!
      N y not best of luck fr ur tests my sweeto I will pray fr u…! ๐Ÿ˜€
      No prob fr nt cmmnting erly….hahahaha ji thank u so much fr ur and it will b reveal soon ๐Ÿ™‚
      Whether he is lying or nt….sumo believes him or not.hahah I will try to post ASAP my dear….
      Thank u so much again fr ur best wishes..!
      Awww meri sis ka orders sa lakhon pr ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚
      Hahaha thank u so much yr..!
      Love u so much..!
      Take care!
      By…. ๐Ÿ™‚

      • Nandini aka Nandu

        Mai toa bilkul theek hun. Bas bas itni tareef mat karo, diabetes na ho jaaye aapko. I dnt remember who, but pehle bhi somene comlemented me that am too sweet.(now am blushing!). Well thank u as well my dear behena. Hope u get well really fast. Lotsof love again(and agar is baar ye love kuch zyaaada sweet gai so u can opt for sme khatta-meetha flavour). Byee…

  10. Meera

    Really awesome episode yaar. .
    Your writing skill is superb.
    I really liked the flash back scene especially the way you presented it.
    Keep it up……
    Do continue soon. ..

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hello meera…!
      Thank u so so much fr cmmnting my dear….
      M so glad that u lyked it ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚ :
      Thanks a tone…
      I will post nxt soon…

  11. Affaa

    |Registered Member

    Marie kutti…
    What happened to everyone haa ufaq lovely Angel missing them badly…I think all are in bzy in their studies….but missing them..
    So sorry for being late….
    Ok now coming to episode outstanding…hats off to you yaar amazing…I proved to say you’re my sis yaar….
    Please post next episode ASAP I can’t wait for next episode…

    How are you???When is your exam?? Do well for it…All the best dea…love you sooo much take care…

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hy my fav di….!!!
      How r u …??
      M not fyn….m sick ๐Ÿ™
      Ooh UFaq API is busy wid her study n angel di told us that she will cm back in October…
      Me tooo missing them sooo badly!!
      No..no…no. Don’t say sorry plzz
      Hahah thank u sooo sooo much fr such a lovely cmmnt di..!
      I will try to post nxt chappy ASAP …!
      My exams will be strt d day after tommorow…
      Thank u sooo much fr ur sweet wishes di…
      Me tooooo love u sooo much se Bhi ziada !
      By
      Take care…!

  12. Khushi

    Superb mind blowing blockbuster Aur Kya kahun Ekdum mast tha sorry for the late comment…..I just loved it I can’t tell u this was so sweet I was like awww sumo cared for shravan……wow yr u r an amazing writer pure class I loved it from the bottom of my heart and up to the brim….love u Maria…..and yes all the best dear and I know u will get soo good marks love u a lot se bhi zaida
    Ur khush

    • Marie

      |Author

      Hello my dear…!!
      How r u??
      Missed u so much…
      Aray no prob fr being late…. ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚
      Thank u
      Thank u
      Thank u
      Soooo sooo much yr tu bht ziada tareeef karti hai yr…..m blushing…..
      Aww love u tooooooooooooo.!!!!!
      Thank u so much fr ur best wishes….
      Aww thank u dear…!!
      Love u most most n most se Bhi. Ziada….
      Take care my dear…!!
      Ur sis
      Maria..!

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